Comments received on poems by Baylee
Her Surface
FredPeyer said:
Nicole, I love this one. What you see isn\'t necessarily what you get!
September 6th, 2017 11:31
FredPeyer said:
Nicole, I love this one. What you see isn\'t necessarily what you get!
September 6th, 2017 11:31
Her Surface
Louis Gibbs said:
A wise take on first impressions, Nicole. Well done poem! I enjoyed.
September 6th, 2017 09:27
Louis Gibbs said:
A wise take on first impressions, Nicole. Well done poem! I enjoyed.
September 6th, 2017 09:27
Unknown
FredPeyer said:
Nicole, the cure is NOT to worry! How often do we worry for nothing! You captured that so beautifully in your well penned short poem.
Great writing, great subject!
September 5th, 2017 12:13
FredPeyer said:
Nicole, the cure is NOT to worry! How often do we worry for nothing! You captured that so beautifully in your well penned short poem.
Great writing, great subject!
September 5th, 2017 12:13
Unknown
Poetic Dan said:
I second that but the unknown is the cure just keep on exploring till you think no more... Well maybe just a little less than before
September 5th, 2017 09:03
Poetic Dan said:
I second that but the unknown is the cure just keep on exploring till you think no more... Well maybe just a little less than before
September 5th, 2017 09:03
This Sea
FredPeyer said:
Yes, there are those nights, and we must hang on to them! Very well written, Nicole!
September 4th, 2017 14:03
FredPeyer said:
Yes, there are those nights, and we must hang on to them! Very well written, Nicole!
September 4th, 2017 14:03
The Weak
myself and me said:
\"Sleep
is for the weak\"
That is what I need now, sleep and I am weak, so weak.
Nicely penned.
September 1st, 2017 19:19
myself and me said:
\"Sleep
is for the weak\"
That is what I need now, sleep and I am weak, so weak.
Nicely penned.
September 1st, 2017 19:19
The Weak
FredPeyer said:
Nice, Nicole!
There seem to be two possible meanings:
a) Your love is for the weak
b) Your love IS weak
But no matter what, I do like your poem a lot. You are becoming a master of the shorties!
September 1st, 2017 14:59
FredPeyer said:
Nice, Nicole!
There seem to be two possible meanings:
a) Your love is for the weak
b) Your love IS weak
But no matter what, I do like your poem a lot. You are becoming a master of the shorties!
September 1st, 2017 14:59
Lack of Words
FredPeyer said:
Ingenious, Nicole!!!!!
Must have written hundreds of these no word poems!
August 31st, 2017 03:33
FredPeyer said:
Ingenious, Nicole!!!!!
Must have written hundreds of these no word poems!
August 31st, 2017 03:33
Apparitions
FredPeyer said:
\'The faded forms of our bodies\'
I like the way your write. Each stanza hints at something more.
Great poem Nicole!
August 29th, 2017 21:10
FredPeyer said:
\'The faded forms of our bodies\'
I like the way your write. Each stanza hints at something more.
Great poem Nicole!
August 29th, 2017 21:10
Otherwise
FredPeyer said:
I do like your poem, actually, I like it a lot. And you are right on the dot.
There is the magician magic, but there is also the magic moment, the magic of a relationship, the magic of a certain place, the magic of love. And they are NOT a trick!
August 29th, 2017 01:51
FredPeyer said:
I do like your poem, actually, I like it a lot. And you are right on the dot.
There is the magician magic, but there is also the magic moment, the magic of a relationship, the magic of a certain place, the magic of love. And they are NOT a trick!
August 29th, 2017 01:51
Bursting
FredPeyer said:
Nicole, this is beautiful! Breathing memories, and hope in my blood.....just incredible.
What can I say, when you\'re good, you\'re good!!!!!!!!!!!
August 28th, 2017 12:21
FredPeyer said:
Nicole, this is beautiful! Breathing memories, and hope in my blood.....just incredible.
What can I say, when you\'re good, you\'re good!!!!!!!!!!!
August 28th, 2017 12:21
Jaded
dusk arising said:
Such a shame those eyes are jaded sweet poet. Your work has such flowing beauty and tells of devoted love together with a sad ending. Every male reader will wish he could whisk you away to a more deserving life of love. Beautiful and truly clever emotive writing.
August 24th, 2017 11:38
dusk arising said:
Such a shame those eyes are jaded sweet poet. Your work has such flowing beauty and tells of devoted love together with a sad ending. Every male reader will wish he could whisk you away to a more deserving life of love. Beautiful and truly clever emotive writing.
August 24th, 2017 11:38
Jaded
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem, Nicole.
But there is a danger if you, as you write so eloquently, \'nestle\' yourself into one person\'s eyes! Maybe there is somebody with less jaded eyes! ;-)
August 24th, 2017 03:29
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful poem, Nicole.
But there is a danger if you, as you write so eloquently, \'nestle\' yourself into one person\'s eyes! Maybe there is somebody with less jaded eyes! ;-)
August 24th, 2017 03:29
Nonsense
dusk arising said:
Yes goodbyes are too final. Even if it is to see someone in your dreams again.
August 23rd, 2017 00:29
dusk arising said:
Yes goodbyes are too final. Even if it is to see someone in your dreams again.
August 23rd, 2017 00:29
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