Comments received on poems by Baylee
Perspective
FredPeyer said:
And there you go again, Nicole, with another incredible four-liner!
Love your writing.
August 21st, 2017 16:31
FredPeyer said:
And there you go again, Nicole, with another incredible four-liner!
Love your writing.
August 21st, 2017 16:31
Not For
FredPeyer said:
Nicole you are getting better and better! And I think that if you believe these things, it was not only love for the wrong person, but maybe it was not love at all!
August 21st, 2017 15:56
FredPeyer said:
Nicole you are getting better and better! And I think that if you believe these things, it was not only love for the wrong person, but maybe it was not love at all!
August 21st, 2017 15:56
Past
burning-embers said:
Aaaaah somebody magic crossed your path. What a lovely way to write about their presence. Quite beautiful.
August 19th, 2017 21:57
burning-embers said:
Aaaaah somebody magic crossed your path. What a lovely way to write about their presence. Quite beautiful.
August 19th, 2017 21:57
It\'s Time
FredPeyer said:
Nicole you wrote this one with authority! There is a problem, think about it, make a decision! Love the last stanza! Well penned.
August 17th, 2017 00:17
FredPeyer said:
Nicole you wrote this one with authority! There is a problem, think about it, make a decision! Love the last stanza! Well penned.
August 17th, 2017 00:17
It\'s Time
burning-embers said:
When it is time, bite the bullett. It\'s NEVER an ending, it is a new beginning. Begin to feel freedom. Begin to move in your own space. Begin to realise your comfortable pace. Begin to know yourself. Begin to assess the things you value in your life. Beginnings are exciting.... smile!
August 16th, 2017 23:47
burning-embers said:
When it is time, bite the bullett. It\'s NEVER an ending, it is a new beginning. Begin to feel freedom. Begin to move in your own space. Begin to realise your comfortable pace. Begin to know yourself. Begin to assess the things you value in your life. Beginnings are exciting.... smile!
August 16th, 2017 23:47
Venom
burning-embers said:
Time changes us and situations. Time makes us wiser. You\'\'ll never be what you were yesterday. If you looked back from yesterday then it would be the you of yesterday. Be gentle with yourself. We all have made some awful mistakes... i seem to be still making them.
August 16th, 2017 14:15
burning-embers said:
Time changes us and situations. Time makes us wiser. You\'\'ll never be what you were yesterday. If you looked back from yesterday then it would be the you of yesterday. Be gentle with yourself. We all have made some awful mistakes... i seem to be still making them.
August 16th, 2017 14:15
Venom
FredPeyer said:
Good writing, Baylee!
You might be disgusted, but you don\'t have to be. We all make mistakes, none of us is good all the time. The important thing is to recognize what was wrong and to make it right. And that you did!
August 16th, 2017 01:08
FredPeyer said:
Good writing, Baylee!
You might be disgusted, but you don\'t have to be. We all make mistakes, none of us is good all the time. The important thing is to recognize what was wrong and to make it right. And that you did!
August 16th, 2017 01:08
Venom
Nicholas Browning said:
Most likely you would. The past never looks that great to its owner.
August 16th, 2017 00:03
Nicholas Browning said:
Most likely you would. The past never looks that great to its owner.
August 16th, 2017 00:03
Green Waters
FredPeyer said:
Nicole, this is beautiful! I like both the writing and the metaphors.
August 11th, 2017 11:45
FredPeyer said:
Nicole, this is beautiful! I like both the writing and the metaphors.
August 11th, 2017 11:45
Green Waters
Nicholas Browning said:
The analogy of eye color to that of water, nicely played.
August 11th, 2017 03:23
Nicholas Browning said:
The analogy of eye color to that of water, nicely played.
August 11th, 2017 03:23
Sutured
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Many \"sutured hearts\" out there in today\'s culture Nicole. Fortunately, most will heal but what a price to pay! Check out the Cor Project (Christopher West). Keep writing my friend.
August 8th, 2017 22:56
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Many \"sutured hearts\" out there in today\'s culture Nicole. Fortunately, most will heal but what a price to pay! Check out the Cor Project (Christopher West). Keep writing my friend.
August 8th, 2017 22:56
Smothering
Louis Gibbs said:
A lovely poem with attention to shape ... well done, Nicole!
August 8th, 2017 08:41
Louis Gibbs said:
A lovely poem with attention to shape ... well done, Nicole!
August 8th, 2017 08:41
Smothering
Brycycle said:
Loved the words you have used in this poem :D
Great write :))
August 8th, 2017 04:11
Brycycle said:
Loved the words you have used in this poem :D
Great write :))
August 8th, 2017 04:11
Right
FredPeyer said:
This is a great, well written poem, Nicole. With only a few well chosen words you get the reader to think, to get involved in your writing. Deja vue, maybe we met in a previous life?
August 6th, 2017 15:00
FredPeyer said:
This is a great, well written poem, Nicole. With only a few well chosen words you get the reader to think, to get involved in your writing. Deja vue, maybe we met in a previous life?
August 6th, 2017 15:00
Right
Louis Gibbs said:
Or perhaps what you describe is a relationship becoming natural, comfortable? Congratulations if so! Nice poem, Baylee.
August 6th, 2017 10:44
Louis Gibbs said:
Or perhaps what you describe is a relationship becoming natural, comfortable? Congratulations if so! Nice poem, Baylee.
August 6th, 2017 10:44
Fade
FredPeyer said:
I do love this one Nicole. Change is a constant in our lives and you expressed that admirably.
August 4th, 2017 00:40
FredPeyer said:
I do love this one Nicole. Change is a constant in our lives and you expressed that admirably.
August 4th, 2017 00:40
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