Comments received on poems by Baylee



Flourish
Louis Gibbs said:

Another of my favorite short poems! Well written, Baylee.

June 23rd, 2017 11:33

Flourish
ron parrish aka wordman said:

write it down,watch it grow,to a beautiful poem will unfold

June 23rd, 2017 11:22

Follow the Sun
Poetic Dan said:

That I can relate!
If you check my post tomorrow I hope you\'ll understand ;)

Nice write

June 18th, 2017 18:03

Thought
swingline said:

Feathers of the right wing don\'t work on the left wing . They can always be connected but never the same .

June 18th, 2017 10:24

Even Between
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

June 17th, 2017 00:40

Instead
Baylee said:

Thank you all

June 16th, 2017 21:05

Even Between
Baylee said:

Thank you everyone

June 16th, 2017 20:56

Even Between
Louis Gibbs said:

A lovely, expressive, impactful short poem, Baylee. Kudos!

June 16th, 2017 11:07

Even Between
swingline said:

Like the seed of a fruit tree you crack open only to destroy the life inside .

June 16th, 2017 10:58

Together
Baylee said:

Thank you all

June 16th, 2017 10:31

Together
swingline said:

Well penned .

June 16th, 2017 02:19

Follow the Sun
Goldfinch60 said:

But the sun will always raise on your life so the next day is always there to look forward to as it brings light into your life.

June 15th, 2017 00:30

Follow the Sun
Baylee said:

Thank you everyone

June 14th, 2017 23:12

Follow the Sun
Louis Gibbs said:

A well-versed description of depression, Baylee! At least you remain aware of the brighter side.

June 14th, 2017 14:03

Follow the Sun
swingline said:

I\'m more of a night person also , but I like stars . Daytime gets cumbersome and begins to wear on . Sunset brings relief .

June 14th, 2017 13:19

Haunt
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write so full of love and then sorrow.

June 14th, 2017 00:09

Haunt
swingline said:

I don\'t know which is worse , a physical haunting , such as his Ghost , or the mental haunting , of an absence

June 13th, 2017 19:50

Haunt
Jeff said:

I really liked this....i know the pain and torture that goes with loss...everything around you is a reminder...very well written and i thank you for sharing such a beautiful piece

June 13th, 2017 14:46

Haunt
P.H.Rose said:

Really very good Baylee
Very good write...
Enjoyed it very much...

June 13th, 2017 13:47

Instead
kevin browne said:

\'Instead\' was created for the chance of change and opportunity that mattered. b rilliantly performed poem. great work Baylee x

June 12th, 2017 21:51

Instead
The Invisible said:

Yes, I love it. Great job :)

June 12th, 2017 21:45

Every Atom
Baylee said:

Thank you

June 11th, 2017 19:18

Every Atom
swingline said:

There are many questions about love . Most go unanswered . That\'s part of the beauty of love though . If you hadn\'t loved so big you wouldn\'t hurt this much .

June 11th, 2017 14:25

Every Atom
Augustus said:

Like the freckle line, and the whole poem. Nicely done.

June 11th, 2017 13:49

Last
Goldfinch60 said:

I hope not. Emotive write.

June 10th, 2017 00:25

Last
Louis Gibbs said:

Lovely couplet, Baylee!

June 9th, 2017 13:48

Inflicted
Baylee said:

Thank you everyone..

June 9th, 2017 09:12

Inflicted
Sammertheone said:

Strong, suffocating, pain, and hurting for affection. My hearts full of hope for you my dear. Stay strong and know. Good bye is a small leap from hello.

May 31st, 2017 21:23

Inflicted
hidden.shine said:

Powerful

May 31st, 2017 20:59

Inflicted
Augustus said:

Love? Prelude to \"leave\". Scathing words are abusive. Decision time. Hugs.

May 31st, 2017 20:56

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