Comments received on poems by Baylee
Aegean
FredPeyer said:
Great second stanza! \'The colors of my brokeness\' ...beautiful choice of words!
Great writing, Nicole!
Happy Holidays!
December 21st, 2017 21:43
FredPeyer said:
Great second stanza! \'The colors of my brokeness\' ...beautiful choice of words!
Great writing, Nicole!
Happy Holidays!
December 21st, 2017 21:43
Don\'t Speak
FredPeyer said:
An incredible poem with an unexpected, yet truthful ending.
Well done, Nicole!
December 16th, 2017 03:49
FredPeyer said:
An incredible poem with an unexpected, yet truthful ending.
Well done, Nicole!
December 16th, 2017 03:49
Paralyzing Tides
FredPeyer said:
Wow, Nicole, this poem really touched me. Well written too. Learned a new word (crepuscule) and especially like the last two stanzas.
December 5th, 2017 12:53
FredPeyer said:
Wow, Nicole, this poem really touched me. Well written too. Learned a new word (crepuscule) and especially like the last two stanzas.
December 5th, 2017 12:53
Lightlessness
FredPeyer said:
Nicole, it is not only the \'lightlessness\' that draws one in, it is your whole poem! Unexpected, but perfect ending! I like it a lot!
December 3rd, 2017 23:07
FredPeyer said:
Nicole, it is not only the \'lightlessness\' that draws one in, it is your whole poem! Unexpected, but perfect ending! I like it a lot!
December 3rd, 2017 23:07
Defying Gravity
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, may your souls be together for eternity.
November 23rd, 2017 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, may your souls be together for eternity.
November 23rd, 2017 01:34
Defying Gravity
FredPeyer said:
This is so beautifully written, Nicole, it nearly feels like an out of body experience!
November 22nd, 2017 13:30
FredPeyer said:
This is so beautifully written, Nicole, it nearly feels like an out of body experience!
November 22nd, 2017 13:30
Shadows
FredPeyer said:
Very imaginative writing, Baylee! Comparing the absence of you with dawn without the sun is a great line. And I do like the last two lines a lot.
November 11th, 2017 19:04
FredPeyer said:
Very imaginative writing, Baylee! Comparing the absence of you with dawn without the sun is a great line. And I do like the last two lines a lot.
November 11th, 2017 19:04
Obsolete
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful writing, Nicole! Want to read it again and again, so made it a favorite.
November 9th, 2017 13:47
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful writing, Nicole! Want to read it again and again, so made it a favorite.
November 9th, 2017 13:47
Geniuses
FredPeyer said:
Einstein himself once said: The difference between genius and stupidity is that genius has its limits!
Well, I don\'t think this site is made up of only dimwitted and moronic pseudo poets, but society outside of our circle and non-interested in poetry, might see us that way. Especially since there is no money in it.
November 8th, 2017 13:42
FredPeyer said:
Einstein himself once said: The difference between genius and stupidity is that genius has its limits!
Well, I don\'t think this site is made up of only dimwitted and moronic pseudo poets, but society outside of our circle and non-interested in poetry, might see us that way. Especially since there is no money in it.
November 8th, 2017 13:42
Truth
SorrowfullyHappy said:
I would rather be told the truth even if it is hard to hear and that is what this poem it truth
great write
November 1st, 2017 13:53
SorrowfullyHappy said:
I would rather be told the truth even if it is hard to hear and that is what this poem it truth
great write
November 1st, 2017 13:53
Truth
FredPeyer said:
Another great poem to make one think by the famous Nicole!!!
The real question here is whether or not the premise of the first two lines is correct. You may think that truth is a demon, and then the rest of the poem follows. BUT if truth is NOT a demon, what then?
I just love the way you write. This poem for example kind of reminds me of a Rubik\'s Cube. You can turn it any which way with different results. Genius!
November 1st, 2017 11:37
FredPeyer said:
Another great poem to make one think by the famous Nicole!!!
The real question here is whether or not the premise of the first two lines is correct. You may think that truth is a demon, and then the rest of the poem follows. BUT if truth is NOT a demon, what then?
I just love the way you write. This poem for example kind of reminds me of a Rubik\'s Cube. You can turn it any which way with different results. Genius!
November 1st, 2017 11:37
Define
FredPeyer said:
So many heavy questions! I think no matter how old we get, the answers to these questions will elude us.
I love the flow and structure of your poem as well. Had to make this a fav, so I can read it again and think.
October 31st, 2017 12:32
FredPeyer said:
So many heavy questions! I think no matter how old we get, the answers to these questions will elude us.
I love the flow and structure of your poem as well. Had to make this a fav, so I can read it again and think.
October 31st, 2017 12:32
Taken Away
FredPeyer said:
It would be a shame, indeed, Nicole! No more great writings, no more waiting for the next day to see what she would come up with!
October 31st, 2017 12:14
FredPeyer said:
It would be a shame, indeed, Nicole! No more great writings, no more waiting for the next day to see what she would come up with!
October 31st, 2017 12:14
Give In
FredPeyer said:
A fine description of a writer\'s life!
Love the last stanza!
October 29th, 2017 01:21
FredPeyer said:
A fine description of a writer\'s life!
Love the last stanza!
October 29th, 2017 01:21
Forget Me
FredPeyer said:
As do most of your poems, this one too made me think, Nicole. Your writing is excellent and you have a way to stop one in its tracks, a different way of looking at situations. Just hope you won\'t \'slip away\' from this site! :-)
October 27th, 2017 12:08
FredPeyer said:
As do most of your poems, this one too made me think, Nicole. Your writing is excellent and you have a way to stop one in its tracks, a different way of looking at situations. Just hope you won\'t \'slip away\' from this site! :-)
October 27th, 2017 12:08
Existence
FredPeyer said:
Well written, Nicole, but I DO expect that from you by now!
Really like the line: Is life a lullaby or a scream. I guess it is both, with periods of calm and periods of storms.
October 26th, 2017 11:07
FredPeyer said:
Well written, Nicole, but I DO expect that from you by now!
Really like the line: Is life a lullaby or a scream. I guess it is both, with periods of calm and periods of storms.
October 26th, 2017 11:07
Began
FredPeyer said:
Great writing, Nicole! You drew me in right away. A whole love story in a few lines.
October 24th, 2017 15:57
FredPeyer said:
Great writing, Nicole! You drew me in right away. A whole love story in a few lines.
October 24th, 2017 15:57
Serpentine
FredPeyer said:
Had to look up that word in the first line, Nicole. It fits perfect!
Some addictions are simply beautiful! Your fine writing makes me hope that he will fall under the same spell!
October 16th, 2017 10:53
FredPeyer said:
Had to look up that word in the first line, Nicole. It fits perfect!
Some addictions are simply beautiful! Your fine writing makes me hope that he will fall under the same spell!
October 16th, 2017 10:53
Serpentine
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Beautifully written.. I am hopelessly addicted to my fiancé too...it\'s not hopeless Hun, try to look at it as HOPEFUL...IT WORKS XXXOOO
October 15th, 2017 21:52
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Beautifully written.. I am hopelessly addicted to my fiancé too...it\'s not hopeless Hun, try to look at it as HOPEFUL...IT WORKS XXXOOO
October 15th, 2017 21:52
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