Comments received on poems by Baylee
Anoesis
FredPeyer said:
Nicole you got a winner here! Beautiful poem. Had to look up the meaning of anoesis though.
August 2nd, 2017 01:09
FredPeyer said:
Nicole you got a winner here! Beautiful poem. Had to look up the meaning of anoesis though.
August 2nd, 2017 01:09
Rarity
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Rare indeed yet I\'m certain we are all called, every last one of us, to have the heart of a child...to love one another as a child does.
July 31st, 2017 21:15
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Rare indeed yet I\'m certain we are all called, every last one of us, to have the heart of a child...to love one another as a child does.
July 31st, 2017 21:15
Before You
FredPeyer said:
You write so well Nicole. And you do what a writer is supposed to do, namely get the reader involved and thinking.
As for your last stanza: ...but you would never know if he realized it, wouldn\'t you.
July 31st, 2017 12:06
FredPeyer said:
You write so well Nicole. And you do what a writer is supposed to do, namely get the reader involved and thinking.
As for your last stanza: ...but you would never know if he realized it, wouldn\'t you.
July 31st, 2017 12:06
Before You
Edthepoet said:
I wouldn\'t say this piece glorifies suicide, it seems to be an act of trying to regain some kind of control in a moment of desperation. Your write has raised opposing opinions on its subject matter and there is definitely always room for that in poetry. It can\'t all be pretty imagery and rhythmical rhymes.
July 31st, 2017 10:25
Edthepoet said:
I wouldn\'t say this piece glorifies suicide, it seems to be an act of trying to regain some kind of control in a moment of desperation. Your write has raised opposing opinions on its subject matter and there is definitely always room for that in poetry. It can\'t all be pretty imagery and rhythmical rhymes.
July 31st, 2017 10:25
Before You
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Baylee you have the power to lift people up with your words. Glorifying suicide is not empowering nor is it artful - I simply can\'t support it. Let\'s help our suffering society overcome this demonic urge; let\'s point them first of all to NAMI...
July 30th, 2017 22:53
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Baylee you have the power to lift people up with your words. Glorifying suicide is not empowering nor is it artful - I simply can\'t support it. Let\'s help our suffering society overcome this demonic urge; let\'s point them first of all to NAMI...
July 30th, 2017 22:53
Before You
Baylee said:
Just a side note for everyone: I am not suicidal. This poem came from my imagination
July 30th, 2017 20:44
Baylee said:
Just a side note for everyone: I am not suicidal. This poem came from my imagination
July 30th, 2017 20:44
Drowning
burning-embers said:
Sometimes riding it out in silence IS te answer in itself.Wisdom there !
July 29th, 2017 18:50
burning-embers said:
Sometimes riding it out in silence IS te answer in itself.Wisdom there !
July 29th, 2017 18:50
Drowning
FredPeyer said:
Very well written Nicole, sometimes silence is best, even if it feels like drowning.
July 29th, 2017 14:49
FredPeyer said:
Very well written Nicole, sometimes silence is best, even if it feels like drowning.
July 29th, 2017 14:49
Another
FredPeyer said:
Well written and food for thought. Love your use of the word \'choate\'.
July 23rd, 2017 14:56
FredPeyer said:
Well written and food for thought. Love your use of the word \'choate\'.
July 23rd, 2017 14:56
Another
charlesbarrett said:
Great write. Very thought provoking. I’ll be reflecting on this one for a while. Thanks for sharing.
July 23rd, 2017 08:59
charlesbarrett said:
Great write. Very thought provoking. I’ll be reflecting on this one for a while. Thanks for sharing.
July 23rd, 2017 08:59
Caged
FredPeyer said:
I like your short poem Nicole. Yes words do have hearts and we need let them fly free.
July 21st, 2017 15:08
FredPeyer said:
I like your short poem Nicole. Yes words do have hearts and we need let them fly free.
July 21st, 2017 15:08
Caged
Louis Gibbs said:
Words have hearts and souls both, don\'t they. A fine short poem, Nicole!
July 21st, 2017 13:53
Louis Gibbs said:
Words have hearts and souls both, don\'t they. A fine short poem, Nicole!
July 21st, 2017 13:53
Fantasy
FredPeyer said:
Nicole, the first stanza is a question we all like to ask our partners. The second one I guess depends on you! :-)
I do like the poem. Short and full of meaning.
July 20th, 2017 03:54
FredPeyer said:
Nicole, the first stanza is a question we all like to ask our partners. The second one I guess depends on you! :-)
I do like the poem. Short and full of meaning.
July 20th, 2017 03:54
Sooner
Louis Gibbs said:
Your splendid poem displays much wisdom, especially from one so young. Congratulations, Baylee!
July 18th, 2017 13:42
Louis Gibbs said:
Your splendid poem displays much wisdom, especially from one so young. Congratulations, Baylee!
July 18th, 2017 13:42
Sooner
FredPeyer said:
Nicole, this is soooo good! Sometimes it does take a while before we realize the obvious. But once we do we will look at what is happening in a new light and hopefully understand and accept.
July 18th, 2017 11:07
FredPeyer said:
Nicole, this is soooo good! Sometimes it does take a while before we realize the obvious. But once we do we will look at what is happening in a new light and hopefully understand and accept.
July 18th, 2017 11:07
Nightmarish
FredPeyer said:
I think I did not have a nightmare since I was a kid, but I do have strange dreams sometimes.
Well written with food for thought.
July 16th, 2017 02:50
FredPeyer said:
I think I did not have a nightmare since I was a kid, but I do have strange dreams sometimes.
Well written with food for thought.
July 16th, 2017 02:50
Illusion
burning-embers said:
Another of your power pieces. My minds eye sees this mans photo pinned inside your wardrobe and your verse boldly written across it.
Good writing.
July 15th, 2017 06:18
burning-embers said:
Another of your power pieces. My minds eye sees this mans photo pinned inside your wardrobe and your verse boldly written across it.
Good writing.
July 15th, 2017 06:18
Illusion
Nicholas Browning said:
A facade is a powerful tool indeed. If they don\'t want you to see it, you never will. Short and to the point, never a bad thing. Keep it up.
July 15th, 2017 01:35
Nicholas Browning said:
A facade is a powerful tool indeed. If they don\'t want you to see it, you never will. Short and to the point, never a bad thing. Keep it up.
July 15th, 2017 01:35
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