Comments received on poems by Baylee
Illusion
Frank Prem said:
Nicely put together Baylee. This does its job well, I think.
July 14th, 2017 22:10
Frank Prem said:
Nicely put together Baylee. This does its job well, I think.
July 14th, 2017 22:10
His Canvas
FredPeyer said:
Another very well written poem Nicole, I especially like how you use the painting and canvas metaphor to depict hurt, sadness, and finally love, going from the dark colors to bright colors. Somehow I can imagine the whole transformation. Well done.
July 13th, 2017 18:13
FredPeyer said:
Another very well written poem Nicole, I especially like how you use the painting and canvas metaphor to depict hurt, sadness, and finally love, going from the dark colors to bright colors. Somehow I can imagine the whole transformation. Well done.
July 13th, 2017 18:13
His Canvas
kevin browne said:
well you have painted a very clear inspiration for the thought of love and you managed to carry it across very well.
July 13th, 2017 17:57
kevin browne said:
well you have painted a very clear inspiration for the thought of love and you managed to carry it across very well.
July 13th, 2017 17:57
His Canvas
burning-embers said:
You are a real poet. Thats a very fine piece. May i suggest you remove the word \'of\' from line two. Its just the way i read it. Beautiful sentiment in this work.
July 13th, 2017 17:26
burning-embers said:
You are a real poet. Thats a very fine piece. May i suggest you remove the word \'of\' from line two. Its just the way i read it. Beautiful sentiment in this work.
July 13th, 2017 17:26
His Canvas
MissileOfUncertainty said:
This is beautiful! I\'m so happy for the girl ^~^
July 13th, 2017 15:19
MissileOfUncertainty said:
This is beautiful! I\'m so happy for the girl ^~^
July 13th, 2017 15:19
His Canvas
Nicholas Browning said:
I like it. Saving someone from their constant suffering is a way to prove your affection. Nicely done.
July 13th, 2017 15:04
Nicholas Browning said:
I like it. Saving someone from their constant suffering is a way to prove your affection. Nicely done.
July 13th, 2017 15:04
Outgrown
FredPeyer said:
Baylee, this little 4-liner is exquisite. The last line though could be misunderstood. Are you pregnant?
Just kidding! :-)
July 12th, 2017 21:41
FredPeyer said:
Baylee, this little 4-liner is exquisite. The last line though could be misunderstood. Are you pregnant?
Just kidding! :-)
July 12th, 2017 21:41
Outgrown
burning-embers said:
Nice punchy stuff. Succinct verse usually is more powerful. You do it well.
July 12th, 2017 18:56
burning-embers said:
Nice punchy stuff. Succinct verse usually is more powerful. You do it well.
July 12th, 2017 18:56
Our Love was the Forest
malubotelho said:
Sooner than you think your forest will have flourished again. It is so beautiful to be young and have your heart available waiting for another love. Thanks for sharing your feelings.
July 11th, 2017 21:07
malubotelho said:
Sooner than you think your forest will have flourished again. It is so beautiful to be young and have your heart available waiting for another love. Thanks for sharing your feelings.
July 11th, 2017 21:07
Our Love was the Forest
FredPeyer said:
Baylee, using the forest as a metaphor for your love is very beautifull and fitting. As your forest/love grows it becomes stronger protecting from rain, wind, and even too much sunshine. It is sad when the forest/love burns down, but from and nourished by the ashes a new, maybe even much more beautiful forest/love will start to grow.
You wrote a very wonderful poem. Thank you.
July 11th, 2017 18:33
FredPeyer said:
Baylee, using the forest as a metaphor for your love is very beautifull and fitting. As your forest/love grows it becomes stronger protecting from rain, wind, and even too much sunshine. It is sad when the forest/love burns down, but from and nourished by the ashes a new, maybe even much more beautiful forest/love will start to grow.
You wrote a very wonderful poem. Thank you.
July 11th, 2017 18:33
Our Love was the Forest
Nicholas Browning said:
\"Forest\" is one of my favorite words. This work is pretty dang good. Thanks for this, happy writing!
July 11th, 2017 17:02
Nicholas Browning said:
\"Forest\" is one of my favorite words. This work is pretty dang good. Thanks for this, happy writing!
July 11th, 2017 17:02
Remains
Baylee said:
Thank you all very much. I appreciate all of your love and support
July 10th, 2017 21:15
Baylee said:
Thank you all very much. I appreciate all of your love and support
July 10th, 2017 21:15
Remains
FredPeyer said:
Incredible writing Nicole. While it is true that some of the greatest works of art in writing, sculpture, or painting have materialized out of the pain of the artist, personally I don\'t think that pain is a pre-requisite for great art.
You ARE an artist, pain or no pain!
July 10th, 2017 12:11
FredPeyer said:
Incredible writing Nicole. While it is true that some of the greatest works of art in writing, sculpture, or painting have materialized out of the pain of the artist, personally I don\'t think that pain is a pre-requisite for great art.
You ARE an artist, pain or no pain!
July 10th, 2017 12:11
Remains
Nicholas Browning said:
Pain is the greatest teacher any one will ever know.
July 10th, 2017 10:55
Nicholas Browning said:
Pain is the greatest teacher any one will ever know.
July 10th, 2017 10:55
Remains
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, I was trying to say something like this to someone the day. As always I used to many words, I\'ll now show them this.
Thank you, and from my record, words never stop just transforms into more
July 10th, 2017 08:54
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, I was trying to say something like this to someone the day. As always I used to many words, I\'ll now show them this.
Thank you, and from my record, words never stop just transforms into more
July 10th, 2017 08:54
Flowerless Thorn
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. May you find your thornless flower soon.
July 10th, 2017 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. May you find your thornless flower soon.
July 10th, 2017 00:51
Flowerless Thorn
Nicholas Browning said:
We don\'t grant love, we just wait for someone to accept it.
Good write.
July 9th, 2017 16:35
Nicholas Browning said:
We don\'t grant love, we just wait for someone to accept it.
Good write.
July 9th, 2017 16:35
Flowerless Thorn
burning-embers said:
Oh that i could give you lessons, but i would fall in love with your beautiful mind. The flower is there to attract the bee but later its petals will fall. Choose that time observe the plant and be a wise Bee by the fall.
July 9th, 2017 16:08
burning-embers said:
Oh that i could give you lessons, but i would fall in love with your beautiful mind. The flower is there to attract the bee but later its petals will fall. Choose that time observe the plant and be a wise Bee by the fall.
July 9th, 2017 16:08
Flowerless Thorn
malubotelho said:
Falling in love is as beautiful as it is dangerous. Would be much better if we could just love without falling or being foolish.
July 9th, 2017 15:52
malubotelho said:
Falling in love is as beautiful as it is dangerous. Would be much better if we could just love without falling or being foolish.
July 9th, 2017 15:52
Flowerless Thorn
FredPeyer said:
Indeed, why pick the \"flowerless thorn\"? Baylee I really like this poem, especially the part where you ask why love cannot be a \"paradise for the wise\". Is it maybe because we lose our heads when we fall in love?
July 9th, 2017 15:38
FredPeyer said:
Indeed, why pick the \"flowerless thorn\"? Baylee I really like this poem, especially the part where you ask why love cannot be a \"paradise for the wise\". Is it maybe because we lose our heads when we fall in love?
July 9th, 2017 15:38
Flowerless Thorn
Louis Gibbs said:
Your poem, a well expressed quest for true love. I enjoyed it, thanks for posting, and may you find that which we all seek, Baylee!
July 9th, 2017 14:40
Louis Gibbs said:
Your poem, a well expressed quest for true love. I enjoyed it, thanks for posting, and may you find that which we all seek, Baylee!
July 9th, 2017 14:40
Worthy
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m a great lover of shorties and this at the top of the genre.
July 9th, 2017 00:08
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m a great lover of shorties and this at the top of the genre.
July 9th, 2017 00:08
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