Comments received on poems by Baylee
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FredPeyer said:
Nicole, I am awed by your writing. Beautiful language, great style, good flow.
October 12th, 2017 17:48
FredPeyer said:
Nicole, I am awed by your writing. Beautiful language, great style, good flow.
October 12th, 2017 17:48
All I Could See
FredPeyer said:
.....just like your poetic ability, Nicole!
You keep on surprising me with these shorties to the point where I start wondering what you will come up next!
October 11th, 2017 13:21
FredPeyer said:
.....just like your poetic ability, Nicole!
You keep on surprising me with these shorties to the point where I start wondering what you will come up next!
October 11th, 2017 13:21
Effulgent
FredPeyer said:
Why would you? This radiant new sunrise is a new beginning and does not need any baggage from the past.
You write beautifully, Nicole!
October 9th, 2017 12:54
FredPeyer said:
Why would you? This radiant new sunrise is a new beginning and does not need any baggage from the past.
You write beautifully, Nicole!
October 9th, 2017 12:54
Disregarded
Simple-Man87 said:
That was painful. I\'ve been in a similar situation and you expressed it very well. Thank you for sharing. You\'re very talented.
October 6th, 2017 13:42
Simple-Man87 said:
That was painful. I\'ve been in a similar situation and you expressed it very well. Thank you for sharing. You\'re very talented.
October 6th, 2017 13:42
Disregarded
FredPeyer said:
It is rare to find such an incredible description of broken love. You do have a very special way with words, Nicole.
October 6th, 2017 12:53
FredPeyer said:
It is rare to find such an incredible description of broken love. You do have a very special way with words, Nicole.
October 6th, 2017 12:53
Equal
FredPeyer said:
I don\'t know if you saw the poem \'Mortality\' I posted yesterday. The second stanza goes as follows:
Life and mortality
Siamese twins of destiny
Joined at the navel
Our beginning and end
I think it is great that we both thought about something so similar. But you are saying it better than I did, related to love, not death.
I do like your poem a lot and all you say is true.
October 5th, 2017 23:53
FredPeyer said:
I don\'t know if you saw the poem \'Mortality\' I posted yesterday. The second stanza goes as follows:
Life and mortality
Siamese twins of destiny
Joined at the navel
Our beginning and end
I think it is great that we both thought about something so similar. But you are saying it better than I did, related to love, not death.
I do like your poem a lot and all you say is true.
October 5th, 2017 23:53
Bound
FredPeyer said:
And if you keep on writing like this, Nicole, I shall forever read and enjoy them!
October 4th, 2017 10:19
FredPeyer said:
And if you keep on writing like this, Nicole, I shall forever read and enjoy them!
October 4th, 2017 10:19
Moments
FredPeyer said:
I could just repeat your poem here to tell you how I feel about your writing and your poem!
October 3rd, 2017 11:38
FredPeyer said:
I could just repeat your poem here to tell you how I feel about your writing and your poem!
October 3rd, 2017 11:38
Aubade
Baylee said:
Thank you everyone; yes, an aubade is a song for a woman sung at dawn. Thought the contrast of \"inanimate\" and \"aubade\" would be an interesting combination of opposites.
October 2nd, 2017 14:19
Baylee said:
Thank you everyone; yes, an aubade is a song for a woman sung at dawn. Thought the contrast of \"inanimate\" and \"aubade\" would be an interesting combination of opposites.
October 2nd, 2017 14:19
Aubade
FredPeyer said:
Whoever you wrote this for, Nicole, is a very lucky man to have you on his side!
Beautifully written!
October 2nd, 2017 13:50
FredPeyer said:
Whoever you wrote this for, Nicole, is a very lucky man to have you on his side!
Beautifully written!
October 2nd, 2017 13:50
Aubade
Louis Gibbs said:
Could not find \'aubade\' in my dictionary, but like the poem anyway, Nichole!
October 2nd, 2017 12:27
Louis Gibbs said:
Could not find \'aubade\' in my dictionary, but like the poem anyway, Nichole!
October 2nd, 2017 12:27
Colorless
FredPeyer said:
Nicole, you penned a beautiful if dark and sad poem, very artistically describing the pain of somebody who did get hurt badly.
\'the aperture within my chest\' seems to be the hole left where somebody ripped out your heart!
You ARE a good writer!
September 29th, 2017 11:24
FredPeyer said:
Nicole, you penned a beautiful if dark and sad poem, very artistically describing the pain of somebody who did get hurt badly.
\'the aperture within my chest\' seems to be the hole left where somebody ripped out your heart!
You ARE a good writer!
September 29th, 2017 11:24
On the Brink
FredPeyer said:
Nicole, I love this description of a sunset, it is beautiful. Your second stanza is right on. We never die, at least not in spirit, and since we never die, we will live forever!
September 28th, 2017 14:23
FredPeyer said:
Nicole, I love this description of a sunset, it is beautiful. Your second stanza is right on. We never die, at least not in spirit, and since we never die, we will live forever!
September 28th, 2017 14:23
Empyrean
FredPeyer said:
My wonder is how you can write so beautifully!
From now on I am going to banish all my problems to that black empyrean! (Have to confess that I had to look up the word!)
AND I do have to make this a favorite!
September 27th, 2017 12:12
FredPeyer said:
My wonder is how you can write so beautifully!
From now on I am going to banish all my problems to that black empyrean! (Have to confess that I had to look up the word!)
AND I do have to make this a favorite!
September 27th, 2017 12:12
Overdue
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written, but sad. Breaking up has never been easy. I usually do not advertise my work, but in this case my answer to you is in my poem \'Empathy\'.
September 26th, 2017 12:00
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written, but sad. Breaking up has never been easy. I usually do not advertise my work, but in this case my answer to you is in my poem \'Empathy\'.
September 26th, 2017 12:00
Muse
FredPeyer said:
And now, Nicole, you are officially a philosopher!
Love that bounding from star to star and floating scene. But maybe we bounce from word to word and float along sentences.
And finally, in your writing you can manifest anything you want to believe. Great poem again!
September 21st, 2017 14:03
FredPeyer said:
And now, Nicole, you are officially a philosopher!
Love that bounding from star to star and floating scene. But maybe we bounce from word to word and float along sentences.
And finally, in your writing you can manifest anything you want to believe. Great poem again!
September 21st, 2017 14:03
Burn the Stars
FredPeyer said:
How old are you, Nicole? NO, don\'t answer!!! All I want to say with this is that your poem carries a lot of weight, wisdom and beauty of expression, something usually expected from somebody older.
Great writing! Have to save it as a favorite!
September 20th, 2017 13:22
FredPeyer said:
How old are you, Nicole? NO, don\'t answer!!! All I want to say with this is that your poem carries a lot of weight, wisdom and beauty of expression, something usually expected from somebody older.
Great writing! Have to save it as a favorite!
September 20th, 2017 13:22
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