Comments received on poems by Baylee



Victim of Art
Crystal Hope said:

an incredible write. awesome job!

August 13th, 2018 12:12

Moon-Eyed
HangingbyaHalo said:

This is brilliant love.


May 30th, 2018 12:16

Pendulum
SLR said:

This is so pretty and heart warming.

May 17th, 2018 18:15

Pendulum
Goldfinch60 said:

That love will never die.

May 17th, 2018 08:06

Allow Me
Lorna said:

Defying society is a brave way to live ........ and then you are free!

May 15th, 2018 13:40

Ariose
yellowrose said:

this is really lovely :-) i love the flow and feel to this poem ..

March 26th, 2018 14:36

Ossuary
Baylee said:

Thank you much guys

February 28th, 2018 11:07

Ossuary
Laura said:

Baylee,
This write is truly amazing...although sad!
It deserves more than one read! A definite save into my favorites!

~Laura~


February 28th, 2018 10:01

Ossuary
Lorna said:

Beautiful use of words! Lovely!

February 28th, 2018 08:30

Destined
Baylee said:

Thank you everyone : )

February 16th, 2018 07:39

Destined
FredPeyer said:

And fly on your own you must, Nicole! This is a great poem, so well written. You put it into the category \'fantasy\', but I don\'t see it as fantasy. I see it as a fundamental truth that youth needs to break free, to forge their own way, to experience life on their own terms, and you expressed that beautifully. There is a revolutionary in each one of us. Well done!

February 14th, 2018 13:18

Destined
Lorna said:

Beautiful and lonely..........

February 14th, 2018 08:37

Hush
FredPeyer said:

Beautiful description of a winter day, Nicole! Makes me want to run out there and make snow-angels!

January 31st, 2018 12:19

Hush
Baylee said:

Thank you guys

January 31st, 2018 09:47

Hush
Lorna said:

A very loud mute! Nice.

January 31st, 2018 08:54

Hush
TrystanBehm said:

Love the imagery here. It is magical the mute that befalls the earth during a snowfall - especially at nighttime.

Great write!

January 31st, 2018 08:33

As I Did
FredPeyer said:

So sad, Nicole, but with some beautiful word choices, \'my riven wings drag behind me\', \'take the dawn from my sight\'. But the saddest part is the last stanza. You do know how to convey feelings!

January 26th, 2018 11:17

Uprooted
Baylee said:

Thank you guys : )

January 26th, 2018 07:53

Uprooted
yellowrose said:

i love how you started this poem , with the idea of being uprooted and unearthed , makes me think of something which was stuck in one place, achingly wanting to leave its normal home and i love how you ended this with reference to the baby bird.. very nice

January 26th, 2018 07:51

Fool
Baylee said:

Thank you everyone

January 26th, 2018 07:44

Fool
SorrowfullyHappy said:

the one I want would be a fool to go for me


January 25th, 2018 16:44

Fool
FredPeyer said:

You tell em, girl! Very cleverly written with a great message! And yes, he would be a fool!!!

January 25th, 2018 14:28

Fool
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

January 25th, 2018 08:00

Take Wing
Baylee said:

Thank you guys

January 25th, 2018 07:48

Take Wing
FredPeyer said:

Great opening, you pull the reader in and never let go! Very well written, Nicole!

January 23rd, 2018 16:51

Take Wing
yellowrose said:

this is a very dark piece of writing but so well expressed .. i can see the fear in this piece

January 23rd, 2018 10:05

Uprooted
FredPeyer said:

Perfectly worded, Nicole! Go spread your wings. The worst that can happen is that you fall on your head, but believe me it will be worth it! Nobody can develop their potential by sitting on their bum!

January 21st, 2018 14:30

Thirteen Stories of the End
Baylee said:

Thank you guys : )

January 11th, 2018 07:39

Thirteen Stories of the End
FredPeyer said:

That was a marathon reading, Nicole! Must have taken you forever to write.
If I would have been your teacher in this AP English class, this would have been an A+ for sure!

January 10th, 2018 12:24

Thirteen Stories of the End
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 9th, 2018 10:50

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