Comments received on poems by Baylee
Allow Me
Lorna said:
Defying society is a brave way to live ........ and then you are free!
May 15th, 2018 13:40
Lorna said:
Defying society is a brave way to live ........ and then you are free!
May 15th, 2018 13:40
Ariose
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
this is really lovely :-) i love the flow and feel to this poem ..
March 26th, 2018 14:36
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
this is really lovely :-) i love the flow and feel to this poem ..
March 26th, 2018 14:36
Ossuary
Laura🌻 said:
Baylee,
This write is truly amazing...although sad!
It deserves more than one read! A definite save into my favorites!
~Laura~
February 28th, 2018 10:01
Laura🌻 said:
Baylee,
This write is truly amazing...although sad!
It deserves more than one read! A definite save into my favorites!
~Laura~
February 28th, 2018 10:01
Destined
FredPeyer said:
And fly on your own you must, Nicole! This is a great poem, so well written. You put it into the category \'fantasy\', but I don\'t see it as fantasy. I see it as a fundamental truth that youth needs to break free, to forge their own way, to experience life on their own terms, and you expressed that beautifully. There is a revolutionary in each one of us. Well done!
February 14th, 2018 13:18
FredPeyer said:
And fly on your own you must, Nicole! This is a great poem, so well written. You put it into the category \'fantasy\', but I don\'t see it as fantasy. I see it as a fundamental truth that youth needs to break free, to forge their own way, to experience life on their own terms, and you expressed that beautifully. There is a revolutionary in each one of us. Well done!
February 14th, 2018 13:18
Hush
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful description of a winter day, Nicole! Makes me want to run out there and make snow-angels!
January 31st, 2018 12:19
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful description of a winter day, Nicole! Makes me want to run out there and make snow-angels!
January 31st, 2018 12:19
Hush
TrystanBehm said:
Love the imagery here. It is magical the mute that befalls the earth during a snowfall - especially at nighttime.
Great write!
January 31st, 2018 08:33
TrystanBehm said:
Love the imagery here. It is magical the mute that befalls the earth during a snowfall - especially at nighttime.
Great write!
January 31st, 2018 08:33
As I Did
FredPeyer said:
So sad, Nicole, but with some beautiful word choices, \'my riven wings drag behind me\', \'take the dawn from my sight\'. But the saddest part is the last stanza. You do know how to convey feelings!
January 26th, 2018 11:17
FredPeyer said:
So sad, Nicole, but with some beautiful word choices, \'my riven wings drag behind me\', \'take the dawn from my sight\'. But the saddest part is the last stanza. You do know how to convey feelings!
January 26th, 2018 11:17
Uprooted
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i love how you started this poem , with the idea of being uprooted and unearthed , makes me think of something which was stuck in one place, achingly wanting to leave its normal home and i love how you ended this with reference to the baby bird.. very nice
January 26th, 2018 07:51
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i love how you started this poem , with the idea of being uprooted and unearthed , makes me think of something which was stuck in one place, achingly wanting to leave its normal home and i love how you ended this with reference to the baby bird.. very nice
January 26th, 2018 07:51
Fool
FredPeyer said:
You tell em, girl! Very cleverly written with a great message! And yes, he would be a fool!!!
January 25th, 2018 14:28
FredPeyer said:
You tell em, girl! Very cleverly written with a great message! And yes, he would be a fool!!!
January 25th, 2018 14:28
Take Wing
FredPeyer said:
Great opening, you pull the reader in and never let go! Very well written, Nicole!
January 23rd, 2018 16:51
FredPeyer said:
Great opening, you pull the reader in and never let go! Very well written, Nicole!
January 23rd, 2018 16:51
Take Wing
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
this is a very dark piece of writing but so well expressed .. i can see the fear in this piece
January 23rd, 2018 10:05
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
this is a very dark piece of writing but so well expressed .. i can see the fear in this piece
January 23rd, 2018 10:05
Uprooted
FredPeyer said:
Perfectly worded, Nicole! Go spread your wings. The worst that can happen is that you fall on your head, but believe me it will be worth it! Nobody can develop their potential by sitting on their bum!
January 21st, 2018 14:30
FredPeyer said:
Perfectly worded, Nicole! Go spread your wings. The worst that can happen is that you fall on your head, but believe me it will be worth it! Nobody can develop their potential by sitting on their bum!
January 21st, 2018 14:30
Thirteen Stories of the End
FredPeyer said:
That was a marathon reading, Nicole! Must have taken you forever to write.
If I would have been your teacher in this AP English class, this would have been an A+ for sure!
January 10th, 2018 12:24
FredPeyer said:
That was a marathon reading, Nicole! Must have taken you forever to write.
If I would have been your teacher in this AP English class, this would have been an A+ for sure!
January 10th, 2018 12:24
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