Comments received on poems by Baylee



Scathing
Baylee said:

Thank you everyone!

May 31st, 2017 18:29

Scathing
Augustus said:

I really like this, great meter, and alliteration, out loud it reads effortlessly, with a little bit of surprise at the end.

May 29th, 2017 21:33

Scathing
swingline said:

Takes us into the moment with consequences .

May 29th, 2017 09:17

Scathing
Louis Gibbs said:

Wow! Powerful, beautiful piece, Baylee. The punch at the end really makes it! That is what I strive to incorporate into mine. I look forward to more of your work.

May 29th, 2017 08:20

Scathing
Frank Prem said:

I too think there is good punch in this piece. Well writ, Baylee.

May 29th, 2017 01:27

Scathing
Michael Edwards said:

less is more and this simple work packs a powerful punch.

May 29th, 2017 00:26

Scathing
SSCR said:

This is really empowering, I know what this feels like and your words really allow others to understand the experience. Really nice job!

May 29th, 2017 00:20

This is Love
MaxWritesPoems said:

Great work, well done

May 19th, 2017 12:39

Weep
Baylee said:

Thank you all

May 11th, 2017 14:10

Weep
Goldfinch60 said:

Goodthoughtful write.

May 11th, 2017 07:56

Follow Me
swingline said:

Going the wrong direction .

May 5th, 2017 18:49

Follow Me
Garry said:

Very good read. Short and vivid.

May 5th, 2017 14:58

Lives of Paper
Tony36 said:

Great write

May 4th, 2017 07:06

Wonder
Hopey_xx said:

Beautiful poem!

May 2nd, 2017 15:51

Hollowed
Lizzy Renee said:

Wow, I love this poem! :)

April 28th, 2017 09:13

Hollowed
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

April 28th, 2017 07:12

Shards of Rain
Tony36 said:

Great write

April 27th, 2017 10:28

Shards of Rain
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and good thinking.

April 27th, 2017 08:06

And of the Broken Heart
Baylee said:

Thank you guys :)

April 26th, 2017 06:45

And of the Broken Heart
RebeccaRose.x said:

This is brilliant!

April 25th, 2017 15:46

And of the Broken Heart
SorrowfullyHappy said:

beautiful write

April 25th, 2017 12:36

This River
Baylee said:

Thank you everyone

April 24th, 2017 13:07

This River
Tony36 said:

Great write

April 24th, 2017 10:59

This River
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

April 24th, 2017 08:00

Damage
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write with good imagery.

April 23rd, 2017 00:46

Damage
ElenaGrace said:

I really love the imagery. Great job

April 22nd, 2017 12:26

Elucidate
Brycycle said:

Love it.

April 22nd, 2017 09:40

Elucidate
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

April 22nd, 2017 00:52

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