Comments received on poems by WL Schuett
Sleepy Dreams Fade
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful writing, WL. What comes to my mind with the poem and the painting is a summer morning in the Mediterranean, or maybe South of France. I think it is the painting that prompted the location choice.
I really do like this poem!
September 6th, 2017 19:38
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful writing, WL. What comes to my mind with the poem and the painting is a summer morning in the Mediterranean, or maybe South of France. I think it is the painting that prompted the location choice.
I really do like this poem!
September 6th, 2017 19:38
Vows of Peace
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, the last stanza is so meaningful.
Yet another wonderful painting.
September 6th, 2017 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, the last stanza is so meaningful.
Yet another wonderful painting.
September 6th, 2017 01:00
Vows of Peace
Michael Edwards said:
Beautifully written and another super painting.
September 6th, 2017 00:06
Michael Edwards said:
Beautifully written and another super painting.
September 6th, 2017 00:06
Vows of Peace
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem! I too was mesmerized by the \"forget about the stars above....\" line about the grains of sand. Well, it\'s all done really well. Great job!!
September 5th, 2017 23:06
Christina8 said:
Wonderful poem! I too was mesmerized by the \"forget about the stars above....\" line about the grains of sand. Well, it\'s all done really well. Great job!!
September 5th, 2017 23:06
Vows of Peace
FredPeyer said:
WL, I am very impressed by both the painting and the poem. Love \'to the forest of sensibilities where vaulted rainbows leak\'!
Beautiful!
September 5th, 2017 21:27
FredPeyer said:
WL, I am very impressed by both the painting and the poem. Love \'to the forest of sensibilities where vaulted rainbows leak\'!
Beautiful!
September 5th, 2017 21:27
Vows of Peace
myself and me said:
The vows of peace is buried under the hot sand;
The vows of peace is beneath the anger wave;
The vows of peace is hidden inside the dead wood;
The vows of peace is shining above the dark sky.
The vows of peace will never cease.
Beautiful poem with beautiful painting.
September 5th, 2017 20:00
myself and me said:
The vows of peace is buried under the hot sand;
The vows of peace is beneath the anger wave;
The vows of peace is hidden inside the dead wood;
The vows of peace is shining above the dark sky.
The vows of peace will never cease.
Beautiful poem with beautiful painting.
September 5th, 2017 20:00
Vows of Peace
Accidental Poet said:
This is some masterful writing WL. Whoever taught you your craft of paint and pen, they can be very proud of you and your work. ; )
September 5th, 2017 19:23
Accidental Poet said:
This is some masterful writing WL. Whoever taught you your craft of paint and pen, they can be very proud of you and your work. ; )
September 5th, 2017 19:23
Poverty of the Soul
WL Schuett said:
I am an optimistic man just because I look for something in between doesn\'t mean I don\'t have hope , charity and love ... love your comments thanks
September 5th, 2017 13:26
WL Schuett said:
I am an optimistic man just because I look for something in between doesn\'t mean I don\'t have hope , charity and love ... love your comments thanks
September 5th, 2017 13:26
Poverty of the Soul
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and so very true. There is no compromise, I believe but will not force my opinions on others as belief or non-belief lies within each one of us and it cannot be changed by others.
September 5th, 2017 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and so very true. There is no compromise, I believe but will not force my opinions on others as belief or non-belief lies within each one of us and it cannot be changed by others.
September 5th, 2017 01:30
Poverty of the Soul
Michael Edwards said:
The light switches on but which side of the divide does it fall - it depends on which side of the divide you settle I guess. Love this write which makes simple statements without being judgemental apart from the comment that ultimately there is nothing in between which is spot on.
September 4th, 2017 23:20
Michael Edwards said:
The light switches on but which side of the divide does it fall - it depends on which side of the divide you settle I guess. Love this write which makes simple statements without being judgemental apart from the comment that ultimately there is nothing in between which is spot on.
September 4th, 2017 23:20
Poverty of the Soul
Preciosa Martin said:
Life is an endless whys...and you are right, there will always be a window, keep on looking for those opened windows - nice poem
September 4th, 2017 22:59
Preciosa Martin said:
Life is an endless whys...and you are right, there will always be a window, keep on looking for those opened windows - nice poem
September 4th, 2017 22:59
Poverty of the Soul
Seek said:
It may be argued that the doubt you express in the first stanza constitutes some form of middle ground, where one oscillates between belief and non-belief. But you are absolutely right that in the end there is no true middle ground. Above all, how can one NOT take a stand on matters of the soul? Thoroughly enjoyed the piece.
September 4th, 2017 19:44
Seek said:
It may be argued that the doubt you express in the first stanza constitutes some form of middle ground, where one oscillates between belief and non-belief. But you are absolutely right that in the end there is no true middle ground. Above all, how can one NOT take a stand on matters of the soul? Thoroughly enjoyed the piece.
September 4th, 2017 19:44
Poverty of the Soul
poetboy123 said:
The title drew me in and I was not disappointed at all.
September 4th, 2017 18:54
poetboy123 said:
The title drew me in and I was not disappointed at all.
September 4th, 2017 18:54
Poverty of the Soul
myself and me said:
\"as for faith or unbelief
there is nothing in between \"
But it is in between, I stuck.
The guitar is in its best silence to listen your mind.
A poem with deep thoughts, a paint took mind to a far far land.
September 4th, 2017 18:41
myself and me said:
\"as for faith or unbelief
there is nothing in between \"
But it is in between, I stuck.
The guitar is in its best silence to listen your mind.
A poem with deep thoughts, a paint took mind to a far far land.
September 4th, 2017 18:41
Poverty of the Soul
FredPeyer said:
WL, great poem! And you are SO right! You either believe, or you don\'t. There is no middle ground. The light is either on or off. Very nicely written!
September 4th, 2017 18:26
FredPeyer said:
WL, great poem! And you are SO right! You either believe, or you don\'t. There is no middle ground. The light is either on or off. Very nicely written!
September 4th, 2017 18:26
The Tempest
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a wonderful wrote and like Michael the idea of a broken rainbow is quite meaningful to me.
The painting is glorious.
September 3rd, 2017 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a wonderful wrote and like Michael the idea of a broken rainbow is quite meaningful to me.
The painting is glorious.
September 3rd, 2017 00:57
The Tempest
malubotelho said:
Great writing. Very descriptive and fluid. Again a beautiful painting.
September 2nd, 2017 21:09
malubotelho said:
Great writing. Very descriptive and fluid. Again a beautiful painting.
September 2nd, 2017 21:09
The Tempest
FredPeyer said:
What language! Great choice of words, full of imagination. I love it!
September 2nd, 2017 19:32
FredPeyer said:
What language! Great choice of words, full of imagination. I love it!
September 2nd, 2017 19:32
The Tempest
myself and me said:
I am stroke by the paint. The deep mystery and powerful color, the lightening crack the sky, hit my heart.
\"despair is braver than what it\'s worth
a violent storm of vibrant sorrow
shot through by fates long bow \"
So powerful writing.
September 2nd, 2017 13:57
myself and me said:
I am stroke by the paint. The deep mystery and powerful color, the lightening crack the sky, hit my heart.
\"despair is braver than what it\'s worth
a violent storm of vibrant sorrow
shot through by fates long bow \"
So powerful writing.
September 2nd, 2017 13:57
The Tempest
Christina8 said:
I love the cadence and the rhyme scheme of this poem. Very descriptive. A wonderful write!
September 2nd, 2017 12:13
Christina8 said:
I love the cadence and the rhyme scheme of this poem. Very descriptive. A wonderful write!
September 2nd, 2017 12:13
The Tempest
Michael Edwards said:
Some great use of the language - love: Broken Rainbow for example = super write Bill and great painting.
September 2nd, 2017 10:47
Michael Edwards said:
Some great use of the language - love: Broken Rainbow for example = super write Bill and great painting.
September 2nd, 2017 10:47
Heart of Mercy
BlueDays said:
I am really enjoying your work, both written and painted and the way you match the two together is perfect. Just lovely.
September 1st, 2017 12:08
BlueDays said:
I am really enjoying your work, both written and painted and the way you match the two together is perfect. Just lovely.
September 1st, 2017 12:08
Fireflies In A Jar
BlueDays said:
this made me feel all warm and tingly thinking about summer nights, river walks, camping and climbing trees.
i love being outside in the summer, there is so much beauty and freedom to be found
September 1st, 2017 11:59
BlueDays said:
this made me feel all warm and tingly thinking about summer nights, river walks, camping and climbing trees.
i love being outside in the summer, there is so much beauty and freedom to be found
September 1st, 2017 11:59
Fireflies In A Jar
myself and me said:
You paint such a wonderful countryside summer time memories in this poem and wrote a peaceful poem in your paint.
September 1st, 2017 11:31
myself and me said:
You paint such a wonderful countryside summer time memories in this poem and wrote a peaceful poem in your paint.
September 1st, 2017 11:31
Fireflies In A Jar
malubotelho said:
Beautiful warm poem full of memories kept. Awesome painting. Great job.
September 1st, 2017 09:32
malubotelho said:
Beautiful warm poem full of memories kept. Awesome painting. Great job.
September 1st, 2017 09:32
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