Comments received on poems by Heather T
stronghold
HChristian74 said:
An inspirational piece that sent me to writing. As I read \"Stronghold,\" the word-flow had begun. In my humble opinion, when a writer\'s work sparks the creativity in another writer, the former is crafting art. Succinct. Powerful. Engaging. Excellent.
~HC
October 16th, 2017 16:00
HChristian74 said:
An inspirational piece that sent me to writing. As I read \"Stronghold,\" the word-flow had begun. In my humble opinion, when a writer\'s work sparks the creativity in another writer, the former is crafting art. Succinct. Powerful. Engaging. Excellent.
~HC
October 16th, 2017 16:00
stronghold
Fay Slimm. said:
Ooooh you have been missed dear clever wordsmith - this verse is amazingly filled with exciting imagery - and like other readers I admire every word. Try to \"hop in\" more often. xxxx
October 16th, 2017 06:44
Fay Slimm. said:
Ooooh you have been missed dear clever wordsmith - this verse is amazingly filled with exciting imagery - and like other readers I admire every word. Try to \"hop in\" more often. xxxx
October 16th, 2017 06:44
stronghold
FredPeyer said:
After reading this I remembered why we missed you so much! Incredible writing! Glad you are back!
October 16th, 2017 04:59
FredPeyer said:
After reading this I remembered why we missed you so much! Incredible writing! Glad you are back!
October 16th, 2017 04:59
bare of branches
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
What an amazing write Heather! I love the picture posted as well which brought a total new meaning to the words you used! Thanks for sharing some of your deepest thoughts Heather!!!
October 1st, 2017 08:47
Edward Charles McDevitt said:
What an amazing write Heather! I love the picture posted as well which brought a total new meaning to the words you used! Thanks for sharing some of your deepest thoughts Heather!!!
October 1st, 2017 08:47
bare of branches
Alf W said:
I love the imagery here too Heather, and it took me into the depths of your poem.. well done!
September 2nd, 2017 11:06
Alf W said:
I love the imagery here too Heather, and it took me into the depths of your poem.. well done!
September 2nd, 2017 11:06
bare of branches
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write. Unfortunately by scattering her dress around means that I will have to pick up the rags from my garden.
September 2nd, 2017 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write. Unfortunately by scattering her dress around means that I will have to pick up the rags from my garden.
September 2nd, 2017 00:57
bare of branches
Michael Edwards said:
Stunning - and to think I almost missed it - a real treat to read Heather.
September 2nd, 2017 00:17
Michael Edwards said:
Stunning - and to think I almost missed it - a real treat to read Heather.
September 2nd, 2017 00:17
bare of branches
dusk arising said:
I grow verdant with envy of your wonderful woodland wizardry here. Beautiful.
September 1st, 2017 20:26
dusk arising said:
I grow verdant with envy of your wonderful woodland wizardry here. Beautiful.
September 1st, 2017 20:26
bare of branches
Fay Slimm. said:
Missed your incredible writing dear Heather but this re-entry more than makes up for your short time of absence. Great choice of image around which to scribe as only you can - - glorious imagery in every line.
September 1st, 2017 13:56
Fay Slimm. said:
Missed your incredible writing dear Heather but this re-entry more than makes up for your short time of absence. Great choice of image around which to scribe as only you can - - glorious imagery in every line.
September 1st, 2017 13:56
bare of branches
sue.evans said:
Wow I bow to the use of such beautiful language!
September 1st, 2017 13:04
sue.evans said:
Wow I bow to the use of such beautiful language!
September 1st, 2017 13:04
bare of branches
FredPeyer said:
Finally! You are back with a beauty!
Missed your fine writing, your incredible word choices, your imagination! Now this one has it all!
September 1st, 2017 12:51
FredPeyer said:
Finally! You are back with a beauty!
Missed your fine writing, your incredible word choices, your imagination! Now this one has it all!
September 1st, 2017 12:51
bare of branches
WL Schuett said:
Full of imagery beautiful dark and deep , cool poem well done
September 1st, 2017 11:21
WL Schuett said:
Full of imagery beautiful dark and deep , cool poem well done
September 1st, 2017 11:21
counting sighs
WL Schuett said:
After the explanation I looked at the poem from a different point of view , something\'s take a long time to get through especially a tragedy like this
August 17th, 2017 08:49
WL Schuett said:
After the explanation I looked at the poem from a different point of view , something\'s take a long time to get through especially a tragedy like this
August 17th, 2017 08:49
foolish heart
Nicholas Browning said:
Well dear lord, you think you know a person. First of all, let me say, that who I have told and shown to be myself is really who I am. Geez, you\'d think that with all these dating apps, people like us could write and share our philosophy in peace. I\'m ashamed to say that I too gave him the benefit of the doubt. Nothing he ever said made any sense to me. His story always had a hole in the plot. Well, that hole apparently turned into his own grave. I didn\'t know the man for long, not nearly as long as you, or the others. You went through so much more than the new additions to the site did. I feel especially bad for the women we have on the site. You guys are the real heroes. Heather, thank you for your service. This \"Rant\" as you call it is poetry in my eyes. You did well. I got here late, VERY late, but still, I\'m glad to know what actually transpired. It makes me sick that I just shamelessly laughed it off when you all were dealing with it on such a larger scale. I\'ll do my best to be a better member of this community from this point on. Thank you, very much. For your time, your suffering, and the loss that you felt by hearing what sob stories he had to tell. You have my gratitude, and my empathy. Let\'s all move past this and enjoy our writing.
August 17th, 2017 01:03
Nicholas Browning said:
Well dear lord, you think you know a person. First of all, let me say, that who I have told and shown to be myself is really who I am. Geez, you\'d think that with all these dating apps, people like us could write and share our philosophy in peace. I\'m ashamed to say that I too gave him the benefit of the doubt. Nothing he ever said made any sense to me. His story always had a hole in the plot. Well, that hole apparently turned into his own grave. I didn\'t know the man for long, not nearly as long as you, or the others. You went through so much more than the new additions to the site did. I feel especially bad for the women we have on the site. You guys are the real heroes. Heather, thank you for your service. This \"Rant\" as you call it is poetry in my eyes. You did well. I got here late, VERY late, but still, I\'m glad to know what actually transpired. It makes me sick that I just shamelessly laughed it off when you all were dealing with it on such a larger scale. I\'ll do my best to be a better member of this community from this point on. Thank you, very much. For your time, your suffering, and the loss that you felt by hearing what sob stories he had to tell. You have my gratitude, and my empathy. Let\'s all move past this and enjoy our writing.
August 17th, 2017 01:03
counting sighs
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Heather, you have come through it though. It will not be forgotten but you have obviously moved on and are probably stronger because of it.
August 17th, 2017 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Heather, you have come through it though. It will not be forgotten but you have obviously moved on and are probably stronger because of it.
August 17th, 2017 00:50
counting sighs
MaddieJ said:
What a beautful interpretation of your struggle. You have such a good attitude about it though! Great to see that amongst the loss and pain. I too try and keep my spirits up and count my blessings among hard times. Good write!
August 17th, 2017 00:00
MaddieJ said:
What a beautful interpretation of your struggle. You have such a good attitude about it though! Great to see that amongst the loss and pain. I too try and keep my spirits up and count my blessings among hard times. Good write!
August 17th, 2017 00:00
counting sighs
whisperingquill said:
Huuuuuugs 😌😌😌😌😌🌹
Courageous lioness
August 16th, 2017 21:48
whisperingquill said:
Huuuuuugs 😌😌😌😌😌🌹
Courageous lioness
August 16th, 2017 21:48
counting sighs
burning-embers said:
Pain and futility of remaining alive after such loss scream from your young hand here. Honoured to have an insight into part of what has led you to your excellence of expression and ability to reach into your readers soul. I too have a box or folder someplace with early words. But i dont think they compare with your excellence.
August 16th, 2017 19:47
burning-embers said:
Pain and futility of remaining alive after such loss scream from your young hand here. Honoured to have an insight into part of what has led you to your excellence of expression and ability to reach into your readers soul. I too have a box or folder someplace with early words. But i dont think they compare with your excellence.
August 16th, 2017 19:47
counting sighs
Accidental Poet said:
Condolence hugs to you Heather for such a tragic loss just 6 months before marrying. But as you replied to someone else here, it helped you to grow and learn how to process such events in life. Written straight from your heart. Sad, but superb poem.
August 16th, 2017 19:32
Accidental Poet said:
Condolence hugs to you Heather for such a tragic loss just 6 months before marrying. But as you replied to someone else here, it helped you to grow and learn how to process such events in life. Written straight from your heart. Sad, but superb poem.
August 16th, 2017 19:32
counting sighs
sue.evans said:
You have worn your heart on your sleeve in this poem - so tragic. It always surprises me how words whether shared it just written to put in a box can help the healing process.
August 16th, 2017 17:03
sue.evans said:
You have worn your heart on your sleeve in this poem - so tragic. It always surprises me how words whether shared it just written to put in a box can help the healing process.
August 16th, 2017 17:03
counting sighs
Sinead358 said:
Forgot to breath reading this. Touched me to tears. Thank you for sharing.
August 16th, 2017 15:39
Sinead358 said:
Forgot to breath reading this. Touched me to tears. Thank you for sharing.
August 16th, 2017 15:39
counting sighs
Michael Edwards said:
So sorry to hear this - and such a haunting write and must concur with others regarding the last two lines.
August 16th, 2017 14:06
Michael Edwards said:
So sorry to hear this - and such a haunting write and must concur with others regarding the last two lines.
August 16th, 2017 14:06
counting sighs
FredPeyer said:
You were already an accomplished poet at 18 years of age, Heather!
Obviously it is a very sad poem, following a very sad incident (more like a nightmare). In my opinion, the last two lines express the pain and hurt perfectly.
As far as drinking and driving is concerned, I did my fair share of that when I was young and stupid, but thankfully wised up before anything happened.
August 16th, 2017 13:08
FredPeyer said:
You were already an accomplished poet at 18 years of age, Heather!
Obviously it is a very sad poem, following a very sad incident (more like a nightmare). In my opinion, the last two lines express the pain and hurt perfectly.
As far as drinking and driving is concerned, I did my fair share of that when I was young and stupid, but thankfully wised up before anything happened.
August 16th, 2017 13:08
counting sighs
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful, poignant piece, Heather. Very well presented. I simply love the last two lines1
August 16th, 2017 13:03
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful, poignant piece, Heather. Very well presented. I simply love the last two lines1
August 16th, 2017 13:03
pretty
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, it is what is within people that really enhances relationships.
August 16th, 2017 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, it is what is within people that really enhances relationships.
August 16th, 2017 01:05
pretty
Accidental Poet said:
Heather, your outwardly beauty is just the beginning, and your man will know this to be true. Wonderfully beautiful poem.
August 15th, 2017 20:50
Accidental Poet said:
Heather, your outwardly beauty is just the beginning, and your man will know this to be true. Wonderfully beautiful poem.
August 15th, 2017 20:50
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