Comments received on poems by Heather T
wild horses
whisperingquill said:
Damn it Candle stole my favorite stanza
(Shakes fist like old man) lol
If this is an old write it shimmers like tomorrow\'s sunrise
Nice one really really nice
August 7th, 2017 20:14
whisperingquill said:
Damn it Candle stole my favorite stanza
(Shakes fist like old man) lol
If this is an old write it shimmers like tomorrow\'s sunrise
Nice one really really nice
August 7th, 2017 20:14
wild horses
Fay Slimm. said:
Gentle erotica slides from your pen like nectared silk in this piece of romantic wizardry Heather - loved every stanza and the one-line repetition added more force to the wild feel of the verse. So pleased to have caught this gorgeous offering my friend.
August 7th, 2017 14:00
Fay Slimm. said:
Gentle erotica slides from your pen like nectared silk in this piece of romantic wizardry Heather - loved every stanza and the one-line repetition added more force to the wild feel of the verse. So pleased to have caught this gorgeous offering my friend.
August 7th, 2017 14:00
wild horses
Louis Gibbs said:
\"knew when we were hungry we would always have the night\" ... beautiful and sensual! Love it! Welcome back, Heather.
August 7th, 2017 12:26
Louis Gibbs said:
\"knew when we were hungry we would always have the night\" ... beautiful and sensual! Love it! Welcome back, Heather.
August 7th, 2017 12:26
mortal
malubotelho said:
Heather, I\'m late with my readings but had to say that you are one of my favorites writes and I need to ask you if you have published a book yet. Your work is too good to be read for free. We should be paying you. I thank you for sharing but let me know if you have any work published so I could get it.
August 3rd, 2017 13:31
malubotelho said:
Heather, I\'m late with my readings but had to say that you are one of my favorites writes and I need to ask you if you have published a book yet. Your work is too good to be read for free. We should be paying you. I thank you for sharing but let me know if you have any work published so I could get it.
August 3rd, 2017 13:31
gehenna burning
Fay Slimm. said:
Gifted beyond words your slant-eyed look at the world raises the bar every time -- another burst of metaphoric stars again Heather. Great work.
August 2nd, 2017 16:21
Fay Slimm. said:
Gifted beyond words your slant-eyed look at the world raises the bar every time -- another burst of metaphoric stars again Heather. Great work.
August 2nd, 2017 16:21
gehenna burning
whisperingquill said:
👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
Yeah hell yeah crank that up pulsing even Belial is cowering to this
you have dropped promethian thunderbolts
Excellent
August 2nd, 2017 15:03
whisperingquill said:
👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
Yeah hell yeah crank that up pulsing even Belial is cowering to this
you have dropped promethian thunderbolts
Excellent
August 2nd, 2017 15:03
foolish heart
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow!!! I am so sorry to hear this. I am saddened and disgusted by it. I, too, bought all of the pain and the sadness and encouraged him to keep writing and tried to console him. I think many of us on here did, and to hear that it was all a ruse and that he\'s a fraud leaves me feeling emotionally violated. I can only imagine how it has left you being that you let him in much more than I did. Wow! I am left stunned...horrified even. Thank you so much for sharing this with the community. It was extremely brave of you and...IT NEEDED TO BE HEARD. While I believe the majority of people really are sincere, it is a shame that others exploit the kindness and compassion of others for their own twisted designs. He\'s desperate, no doubt about that, but the kind of help he needs is not the kind any of us can give. Again, I thank you and I look forward to reading more of your work.
August 2nd, 2017 14:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow!!! I am so sorry to hear this. I am saddened and disgusted by it. I, too, bought all of the pain and the sadness and encouraged him to keep writing and tried to console him. I think many of us on here did, and to hear that it was all a ruse and that he\'s a fraud leaves me feeling emotionally violated. I can only imagine how it has left you being that you let him in much more than I did. Wow! I am left stunned...horrified even. Thank you so much for sharing this with the community. It was extremely brave of you and...IT NEEDED TO BE HEARD. While I believe the majority of people really are sincere, it is a shame that others exploit the kindness and compassion of others for their own twisted designs. He\'s desperate, no doubt about that, but the kind of help he needs is not the kind any of us can give. Again, I thank you and I look forward to reading more of your work.
August 2nd, 2017 14:56
gehenna burning
Simple-Man87 said:
Very well written. Dark, deep, lyrical.
\"and the slithered serpents tease my seams\"
Incredible line. Very well done.
August 2nd, 2017 14:45
Simple-Man87 said:
Very well written. Dark, deep, lyrical.
\"and the slithered serpents tease my seams\"
Incredible line. Very well done.
August 2nd, 2017 14:45
angel smoke
whisperingquill said:
Yeah that \"temples of deep August\" line that\'s a sealer a coup de grace wrapped in a feather . Booming write sweet Heather. 🌹
August 2nd, 2017 01:55
whisperingquill said:
Yeah that \"temples of deep August\" line that\'s a sealer a coup de grace wrapped in a feather . Booming write sweet Heather. 🌹
August 2nd, 2017 01:55
linger
Fay Slimm. said:
Glad I did not miss this little gem - another piece of amazing word-usage Heather.
August 1st, 2017 22:36
Fay Slimm. said:
Glad I did not miss this little gem - another piece of amazing word-usage Heather.
August 1st, 2017 22:36
angel smoke
Fay Slimm. said:
Breath-taking poetry - your talent for word is second to none Heather.
August 1st, 2017 22:26
Fay Slimm. said:
Breath-taking poetry - your talent for word is second to none Heather.
August 1st, 2017 22:26
angel smoke
kevin browne said:
okay, how does your soul burn? it\'s a provoking thought you captured as indeed all the way through. I wished had it gone on for longer. lovely writing.
August 1st, 2017 21:40
kevin browne said:
okay, how does your soul burn? it\'s a provoking thought you captured as indeed all the way through. I wished had it gone on for longer. lovely writing.
August 1st, 2017 21:40
angel smoke
FredPeyer said:
Very beautiful scenery, great wording like \"temples of deep August\", or \"forgiveness was a song\". Heather, you definitely know how to write!
August 1st, 2017 20:18
FredPeyer said:
Very beautiful scenery, great wording like \"temples of deep August\", or \"forgiveness was a song\". Heather, you definitely know how to write!
August 1st, 2017 20:18
foolish heart
burning-embers said:
Shocked. i was totally taken in too and very sympathetic to his sob story. Full marks Heather on this exposure. As an older man, and on this site for only just over one month, i feel embarrassed that any of the lady poets who\'s work i have commented upon, could be thinking i am potentially another in his ilk. Sick men like that in our society have allsorts of knock on repercussions. It never occurred to me such underhand things could be going on. Shocked and disturbed.
August 1st, 2017 12:38
burning-embers said:
Shocked. i was totally taken in too and very sympathetic to his sob story. Full marks Heather on this exposure. As an older man, and on this site for only just over one month, i feel embarrassed that any of the lady poets who\'s work i have commented upon, could be thinking i am potentially another in his ilk. Sick men like that in our society have allsorts of knock on repercussions. It never occurred to me such underhand things could be going on. Shocked and disturbed.
August 1st, 2017 12:38
five candles
Mellowman said:
Heather, unbelievable spontaneity! Gorgeous writing!
August 1st, 2017 11:13
Mellowman said:
Heather, unbelievable spontaneity! Gorgeous writing!
August 1st, 2017 11:13
five candles
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write, so glad your miracle happened.
August 1st, 2017 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write, so glad your miracle happened.
August 1st, 2017 01:00
five candles
FredPeyer said:
\'I wept to wet her wings\', yes we parents do that, and then we weep again when they take flight. Every moment with a little on is to be cherished. Beautifully written Heather!
July 31st, 2017 14:04
FredPeyer said:
\'I wept to wet her wings\', yes we parents do that, and then we weep again when they take flight. Every moment with a little on is to be cherished. Beautifully written Heather!
July 31st, 2017 14:04
foolish heart
Fay Slimm. said:
I am speechless with shock after reading your outing of this person dear Heather - I was taken in wholly as were so many here - - better not just forgotten that we have been taken for an intended ride but to learn once again that a soft heart is sometimes abused - -
so sorry for you and for your friend - and bravo to have written the circumstances clearly for all to see - - please do keep up your writing as your talent is special
July 31st, 2017 13:50
Fay Slimm. said:
I am speechless with shock after reading your outing of this person dear Heather - I was taken in wholly as were so many here - - better not just forgotten that we have been taken for an intended ride but to learn once again that a soft heart is sometimes abused - -
so sorry for you and for your friend - and bravo to have written the circumstances clearly for all to see - - please do keep up your writing as your talent is special
July 31st, 2017 13:50
five candles
Fay Slimm. said:
No need for me to be giving you lessons dear Heather - this spontaneous verse reeks of vision and talent within every line. A pleasure to read your work my dear friend. A Favourte for me is this one.
July 31st, 2017 13:24
Fay Slimm. said:
No need for me to be giving you lessons dear Heather - this spontaneous verse reeks of vision and talent within every line. A pleasure to read your work my dear friend. A Favourte for me is this one.
July 31st, 2017 13:24
foolish heart
WriteBeLight said:
Hey Heather T. I haven\'t been on the site for awhile. Busy summer. I am proud of your courage. Sorry you had to deal with such a creep!
July 31st, 2017 13:18
WriteBeLight said:
Hey Heather T. I haven\'t been on the site for awhile. Busy summer. I am proud of your courage. Sorry you had to deal with such a creep!
July 31st, 2017 13:18
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