Comments received on poems by Heather T
song of the hollow house
Louis Gibbs said:
I really like the echoe-verses interspersed between phrases in your fine poem, Heather. Clever, and well done!
July 18th, 2017 13:56
Louis Gibbs said:
I really like the echoe-verses interspersed between phrases in your fine poem, Heather. Clever, and well done!
July 18th, 2017 13:56
mourning light
malubotelho said:
Each day I come here and read the poems I always wonder if people are getting better and better with they writing. This one is fantastic. Loved it from the start to the end. Thanks for sharing
July 16th, 2017 17:15
malubotelho said:
Each day I come here and read the poems I always wonder if people are getting better and better with they writing. This one is fantastic. Loved it from the start to the end. Thanks for sharing
July 16th, 2017 17:15
sticks, stones, and the futility of fingers
Lex said:
I very much enjoyed reading this! It\'s a very deep, engaging write
July 15th, 2017 21:21
Lex said:
I very much enjoyed reading this! It\'s a very deep, engaging write
July 15th, 2017 21:21
mourning light
kevin browne said:
I will lay down in front of your poetry alter any waking hour you put it there. keep it going Heather T.
July 15th, 2017 20:52
kevin browne said:
I will lay down in front of your poetry alter any waking hour you put it there. keep it going Heather T.
July 15th, 2017 20:52
mourning light
daisychain said:
Heather, you have a wonderful way with words. It\'s beautiful.
July 15th, 2017 16:25
daisychain said:
Heather, you have a wonderful way with words. It\'s beautiful.
July 15th, 2017 16:25
mourning light
burning-embers said:
Wow. Image after image after image, but i\'m having trouble joining them together. Whats it all about?
July 15th, 2017 14:46
burning-embers said:
Wow. Image after image after image, but i\'m having trouble joining them together. Whats it all about?
July 15th, 2017 14:46
mourning light
FredPeyer said:
Heather, Fay just said it all already! An incredible poem. Your mind is something else! While the whole poem is exquisite, the line I like the most, a line that called out to me, is: \"We danced our oaths in the rain\". Thank you!
July 15th, 2017 14:02
FredPeyer said:
Heather, Fay just said it all already! An incredible poem. Your mind is something else! While the whole poem is exquisite, the line I like the most, a line that called out to me, is: \"We danced our oaths in the rain\". Thank you!
July 15th, 2017 14:02
mourning light
Its Raskolnikov said:
like how you showed a bit of light with a touch of dark. It really adds to the understanding of what love is.
July 15th, 2017 13:59
Its Raskolnikov said:
like how you showed a bit of light with a touch of dark. It really adds to the understanding of what love is.
July 15th, 2017 13:59
mourning light
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - this thrills to the bone with its stunning imagery and tells its past story with such panache -this verse has to be one of your best Heather.
July 15th, 2017 13:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - this thrills to the bone with its stunning imagery and tells its past story with such panache -this verse has to be one of your best Heather.
July 15th, 2017 13:58
hatter mad
ShannonXx said:
Loved this! All your poems are so descriptive which I love
July 14th, 2017 07:25
ShannonXx said:
Loved this! All your poems are so descriptive which I love
July 14th, 2017 07:25
hatter mad
Frank Prem said:
Well goofed Heather. Nice tight rhythm to follow.
Bravo.
July 13th, 2017 23:48
Frank Prem said:
Well goofed Heather. Nice tight rhythm to follow.
Bravo.
July 13th, 2017 23:48
hatter mad
Michael Edwards said:
Well goofyfied - gave me a good smile at 5.30am so here\'s to a good day!!
July 13th, 2017 23:45
Michael Edwards said:
Well goofyfied - gave me a good smile at 5.30am so here\'s to a good day!!
July 13th, 2017 23:45
hatter mad
Nicholas Browning said:
Sinister, wicked, and a tad bit of humor. Wonderful stuff.
July 13th, 2017 18:58
Nicholas Browning said:
Sinister, wicked, and a tad bit of humor. Wonderful stuff.
July 13th, 2017 18:58
hatter mad
burning-embers said:
OK when is the screen play coming out? Its gonna be some event but i wanna sit with the dogs in the trees cos they\'ve the best seats. Bat twinklingly good fun.
July 13th, 2017 18:26
burning-embers said:
OK when is the screen play coming out? Its gonna be some event but i wanna sit with the dogs in the trees cos they\'ve the best seats. Bat twinklingly good fun.
July 13th, 2017 18:26
hatter mad
FredPeyer said:
Tell me Heather, did you have a little nip \"hiccup\" while writing this? Love the poem, nip or no nip, it is not easy to even come close to the esteemed Mr. Carroll, nee Dodgson, but I would venture to say you may have done it!
July 13th, 2017 18:19
FredPeyer said:
Tell me Heather, did you have a little nip \"hiccup\" while writing this? Love the poem, nip or no nip, it is not easy to even come close to the esteemed Mr. Carroll, nee Dodgson, but I would venture to say you may have done it!
July 13th, 2017 18:19
hatter mad
kevin browne said:
always a spark full event when sitting down to embrace your writings. this is a great one Heather T and I think you\'re not hatter mad. thanks for allowing us to read it.
July 13th, 2017 17:50
kevin browne said:
always a spark full event when sitting down to embrace your writings. this is a great one Heather T and I think you\'re not hatter mad. thanks for allowing us to read it.
July 13th, 2017 17:50
hatter mad
P.H.Rose said:
Love this heather
I like this kind of
Poem....
Not laid out, makes you
Think... well I had to anyway
July 13th, 2017 17:40
P.H.Rose said:
Love this heather
I like this kind of
Poem....
Not laid out, makes you
Think... well I had to anyway
July 13th, 2017 17:40
letter burning
Nicholas Browning said:
This to me seems like an unpleasant memory. It\'s difficult sharing things like these, isn\'t it. It\'s lovely nonetheless.
July 13th, 2017 15:20
Nicholas Browning said:
This to me seems like an unpleasant memory. It\'s difficult sharing things like these, isn\'t it. It\'s lovely nonetheless.
July 13th, 2017 15:20
daughter
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
This is a very amazing poem!!! (If you will please tell her that for me.) You must be very proud of your daughter. Thank you for sharing this! :)
July 13th, 2017 07:29
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
This is a very amazing poem!!! (If you will please tell her that for me.) You must be very proud of your daughter. Thank you for sharing this! :)
July 13th, 2017 07:29
of edgeless storms
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
I loved the imagery and poetic depth, as well as the story! It was an adventure to read. It made me think of the words of Rumi,
\"Poetry can be dangerous, especially beautiful poetry, because it gives the illusion of having had the experience without actually going through it.\" Amazing write, your poem is! Tyfs!
July 13th, 2017 07:17
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
I loved the imagery and poetic depth, as well as the story! It was an adventure to read. It made me think of the words of Rumi,
\"Poetry can be dangerous, especially beautiful poetry, because it gives the illusion of having had the experience without actually going through it.\" Amazing write, your poem is! Tyfs!
July 13th, 2017 07:17
letter burning
burning-embers said:
Passion, anguish, pain and fear cry out from your writing. Beautifully written.
July 12th, 2017 21:59
burning-embers said:
Passion, anguish, pain and fear cry out from your writing. Beautifully written.
July 12th, 2017 21:59
letter burning
FredPeyer said:
Heather, compared to your writing, my poems look like kindergarden scribbles. Angry or not this is a beautiful poem. \"and stitched together ashes in my sin\" just floored me. As you said in your comment: oh Gosh, oh Gosh! Applies perfectly to your poem.
July 12th, 2017 21:47
FredPeyer said:
Heather, compared to your writing, my poems look like kindergarden scribbles. Angry or not this is a beautiful poem. \"and stitched together ashes in my sin\" just floored me. As you said in your comment: oh Gosh, oh Gosh! Applies perfectly to your poem.
July 12th, 2017 21:47
letter burning
kevin browne said:
you speak beautifully here Heather T. appears your a deep well also. fantastic writing skills and thanks for sharing.
July 12th, 2017 20:43
kevin browne said:
you speak beautifully here Heather T. appears your a deep well also. fantastic writing skills and thanks for sharing.
July 12th, 2017 20:43
daughter
Michael Edwards said:
Supreme writing - this is so special - a great piece of work.
July 11th, 2017 23:19
Michael Edwards said:
Supreme writing - this is so special - a great piece of work.
July 11th, 2017 23:19
daughter
AmandaJade said:
Your works are always my favorite to read...true talent!!
July 11th, 2017 22:33
AmandaJade said:
Your works are always my favorite to read...true talent!!
July 11th, 2017 22:33
daughter
FredPeyer said:
Heather, the way I understand it this is your poem you wrote as a response to your daughter\'s poem, right?
It is beautiful, a poem only a gifted poet and loving mother could write. Thank you for sharing.
July 11th, 2017 20:38
FredPeyer said:
Heather, the way I understand it this is your poem you wrote as a response to your daughter\'s poem, right?
It is beautiful, a poem only a gifted poet and loving mother could write. Thank you for sharing.
July 11th, 2017 20:38
daughter
malubotelho said:
Very deep poem. Awesome writing. Thanks for sharing.
July 11th, 2017 19:50
malubotelho said:
Very deep poem. Awesome writing. Thanks for sharing.
July 11th, 2017 19:50
daughter
Nicholas Browning said:
This is beautiful. Pain is invisible if you don\'t know where to look. The last line fits perfectly, and it\'s nice all around. Thank you for this, may you and your daughter be well.
July 11th, 2017 19:30
Nicholas Browning said:
This is beautiful. Pain is invisible if you don\'t know where to look. The last line fits perfectly, and it\'s nice all around. Thank you for this, may you and your daughter be well.
July 11th, 2017 19:30
reflection
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
Interesting write. It had lots of emotion in it and imagery to follow. Easy to delve. Beautiful write!
July 10th, 2017 07:10
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
Interesting write. It had lots of emotion in it and imagery to follow. Easy to delve. Beautiful write!
July 10th, 2017 07:10
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