Comments received on poems by Heather T
foolish heart
orchidee said:
In a Psalm somewhere is: \'Fearfulness has surprised the hypocrite\'. It happened on another site - another person, but without the religious side to it.
July 31st, 2017 13:04
orchidee said:
In a Psalm somewhere is: \'Fearfulness has surprised the hypocrite\'. It happened on another site - another person, but without the religious side to it.
July 31st, 2017 13:04
foolish heart
Edthepoet said:
Well done for calling him out on all of his B/S. What a knobhead.
July 31st, 2017 12:50
Edthepoet said:
Well done for calling him out on all of his B/S. What a knobhead.
July 31st, 2017 12:50
mortal
FredPeyer said:
I absolutely had to make this one a favorite! Waxen ships, spectral moons, moth-eaten dreams..... your mind is awesome!
July 31st, 2017 11:49
FredPeyer said:
I absolutely had to make this one a favorite! Waxen ships, spectral moons, moth-eaten dreams..... your mind is awesome!
July 31st, 2017 11:49
mortal
Fay Slimm. said:
First class writing Heather - metre and line length flow with potent metaphor and end with a great one-line surprise - a linguistic delight this reminder of time and mortality.
July 30th, 2017 16:45
Fay Slimm. said:
First class writing Heather - metre and line length flow with potent metaphor and end with a great one-line surprise - a linguistic delight this reminder of time and mortality.
July 30th, 2017 16:45
mortal
Louis Gibbs said:
You do know how to close out a poem, Heather1 Beautifully done, thanks.
July 30th, 2017 14:58
Louis Gibbs said:
You do know how to close out a poem, Heather1 Beautifully done, thanks.
July 30th, 2017 14:58
mortal
Michael Edwards said:
So beautiful written with such a great meter to it - my kind of poem.
July 30th, 2017 14:12
Michael Edwards said:
So beautiful written with such a great meter to it - my kind of poem.
July 30th, 2017 14:12
mortal
whisperingquill said:
This is so full of imagery and the flow is a wave of gluttony pulling me in and trancing me too the very end as it curls around my soul and let\'s me merge within the fiber of this unique and elegant piece. Marvelous job 🌹
July 30th, 2017 12:58
whisperingquill said:
This is so full of imagery and the flow is a wave of gluttony pulling me in and trancing me too the very end as it curls around my soul and let\'s me merge within the fiber of this unique and elegant piece. Marvelous job 🌹
July 30th, 2017 12:58
mortal
Poetic Dan said:
I must second that response, I\'m not sure where you took my mind but that ending but a shiver down my spine.
Great work
July 30th, 2017 12:47
Poetic Dan said:
I must second that response, I\'m not sure where you took my mind but that ending but a shiver down my spine.
Great work
July 30th, 2017 12:47
foolish heart
Hopey_xx said:
I\'m very sorry for what happened to you. I\'m as shocked, as we all are. We just need to stand tall together on this site and take care of one another as you said. Thank you for sharing this.
July 30th, 2017 11:52
Hopey_xx said:
I\'m very sorry for what happened to you. I\'m as shocked, as we all are. We just need to stand tall together on this site and take care of one another as you said. Thank you for sharing this.
July 30th, 2017 11:52
foolish heart
poetboy123 said:
I\'m utterly shocked. It took a lot of courage to share this and even more to do what you did for him. Thank you so much. This just makes me question if anything he said was true. I apologize that you had to go through that.
July 29th, 2017 23:38
poetboy123 said:
I\'m utterly shocked. It took a lot of courage to share this and even more to do what you did for him. Thank you so much. This just makes me question if anything he said was true. I apologize that you had to go through that.
July 29th, 2017 23:38
foolish heart
malubotelho said:
I\'m so sorry Heather, for what happened. Really sorry.
July 29th, 2017 17:17
malubotelho said:
I\'m so sorry Heather, for what happened. Really sorry.
July 29th, 2017 17:17
foolish heart
malubotelho said:
All I can say is that I\'ve got very confused and could not believe in the beginning that was the same person you were talking about. I\'ve been busy with three birthday party this week for family members and was not coming here much. As for the pitbull story I even say I carry a device to keep the dogs alway. I\'m thorn. He was the first person to welcome me with comments. It is just sad, very sad. I could never tell it would happens here. I\'m passed.
July 29th, 2017 17:15
malubotelho said:
All I can say is that I\'ve got very confused and could not believe in the beginning that was the same person you were talking about. I\'ve been busy with three birthday party this week for family members and was not coming here much. As for the pitbull story I even say I carry a device to keep the dogs alway. I\'m thorn. He was the first person to welcome me with comments. It is just sad, very sad. I could never tell it would happens here. I\'m passed.
July 29th, 2017 17:15
foolish heart
Poetic Dan said:
I\'ve now got up from sleeping on this, I wrote so much down last night, as if I was 15 again. I can\'t believe one person would do this, there is a bigger lesson for me I\'m struggling to see it, all I can think of I should of said it the moment I saw it all that time ago.
The hardest thought to let go of last night, was that I felt like I backed him up!
Thank you again for letting this all out
July 29th, 2017 02:58
Poetic Dan said:
I\'ve now got up from sleeping on this, I wrote so much down last night, as if I was 15 again. I can\'t believe one person would do this, there is a bigger lesson for me I\'m struggling to see it, all I can think of I should of said it the moment I saw it all that time ago.
The hardest thought to let go of last night, was that I felt like I backed him up!
Thank you again for letting this all out
July 29th, 2017 02:58
foolish heart
Goldfinch60 said:
Like Michael I have only just read this and I too have been taken in by him. This is a very brave and strong write and has shown the truth to many of us. I admire your courage and wish you all the best and look forward to more of your poetry.
July 29th, 2017 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Like Michael I have only just read this and I too have been taken in by him. This is a very brave and strong write and has shown the truth to many of us. I admire your courage and wish you all the best and look forward to more of your poetry.
July 29th, 2017 01:04
foolish heart
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve only just read this and, as a man, I feel betrayed. Everything I could say has been said above. Stand strong Heather and please please don\'t let it stop you posting your wonderful poetry.
July 28th, 2017 22:57
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve only just read this and, as a man, I feel betrayed. Everything I could say has been said above. Stand strong Heather and please please don\'t let it stop you posting your wonderful poetry.
July 28th, 2017 22:57
foolish heart
Heather T said:
Not that it matters any more or less, but I asked if there was an obituary. I can still view my fiance\'s online. He assured me there wasn\'t one because she didn\'t want any of that stuff. He had a picture in his gallery that said it was the announcement that went out at her death. He made it himself. I saw him tell Malu that he could show anyone the obit. Best of luck finding it.
July 28th, 2017 22:02
Heather T said:
Not that it matters any more or less, but I asked if there was an obituary. I can still view my fiance\'s online. He assured me there wasn\'t one because she didn\'t want any of that stuff. He had a picture in his gallery that said it was the announcement that went out at her death. He made it himself. I saw him tell Malu that he could show anyone the obit. Best of luck finding it.
July 28th, 2017 22:02
foolish heart
Louis Gibbs said:
What a sad commentary on a disturbed individual who took me in as well, though I did wonder about his unending pity party. I became aware of the accusations, but withheld judgment until confirmation like this. Condolences to all the compassionate ladies who were the victims of his illness. Shame on the man who deceived us all for so long! Thank you so much, Heather, for this brave poem.
July 28th, 2017 20:26
Louis Gibbs said:
What a sad commentary on a disturbed individual who took me in as well, though I did wonder about his unending pity party. I became aware of the accusations, but withheld judgment until confirmation like this. Condolences to all the compassionate ladies who were the victims of his illness. Shame on the man who deceived us all for so long! Thank you so much, Heather, for this brave poem.
July 28th, 2017 20:26
foolish heart
Poetic Dan said:
Dam it! My gut told me this from day one!
But I said I was doing it again, being judgemental seeing my stepfather in everyone and thing.
Thank you for helping with this lesson of trusting that feeling, and trying to not go back to that place where I trust no one\'s words but I\'m still a bit in shock too, as I shed tears for this pain and then helped in some way.
So many emotions at once I don\'t know where to start! Most that it sets a bad example for people to know who to trust.
Thank you so much for your open heart felt words.
They mean alot!
July 28th, 2017 17:37
Poetic Dan said:
Dam it! My gut told me this from day one!
But I said I was doing it again, being judgemental seeing my stepfather in everyone and thing.
Thank you for helping with this lesson of trusting that feeling, and trying to not go back to that place where I trust no one\'s words but I\'m still a bit in shock too, as I shed tears for this pain and then helped in some way.
So many emotions at once I don\'t know where to start! Most that it sets a bad example for people to know who to trust.
Thank you so much for your open heart felt words.
They mean alot!
July 28th, 2017 17:37
foolish heart
FredPeyer said:
Heather,
I admire your strength, courage, and honesty!
I know you did not want to bring all this into the open, but I am glad you did.
The purpose of this site is for writers to share their work, not for old guys to harass women or try to pick up girls. It is wrong, may even border on the criminal and gives us other old guys a bad name!
Heather, I for one am with you and with anybody else (heard of a few) on this site who have been harassed. Enough is enough. No more harassment, no more lies, no more inappropriate language to ladies and girls, no more cowboys.
July 28th, 2017 17:08
FredPeyer said:
Heather,
I admire your strength, courage, and honesty!
I know you did not want to bring all this into the open, but I am glad you did.
The purpose of this site is for writers to share their work, not for old guys to harass women or try to pick up girls. It is wrong, may even border on the criminal and gives us other old guys a bad name!
Heather, I for one am with you and with anybody else (heard of a few) on this site who have been harassed. Enough is enough. No more harassment, no more lies, no more inappropriate language to ladies and girls, no more cowboys.
July 28th, 2017 17:08
linger
kevin browne said:
now this heated my mind up whereby it got too hot but it\'s very very beautifully thought out and written. can\'t get enough of it actually but I hope the life of love progresses in good fashion. love to love.
July 26th, 2017 18:45
kevin browne said:
now this heated my mind up whereby it got too hot but it\'s very very beautifully thought out and written. can\'t get enough of it actually but I hope the life of love progresses in good fashion. love to love.
July 26th, 2017 18:45
linger
charlesbarrett said:
Bravo. The imagery in this piece is amazing. I particularly liked “uttering gooseflesh”. You paint such vivid pictures with words. Nice work, as always. Thanks for sharing.
July 26th, 2017 17:55
charlesbarrett said:
Bravo. The imagery in this piece is amazing. I particularly liked “uttering gooseflesh”. You paint such vivid pictures with words. Nice work, as always. Thanks for sharing.
July 26th, 2017 17:55
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