Comments received on poems by Heather T
reflection
whisperingquill said:
Wow,
\"and I was never as lost again
as the day the lake stood between us
and not one piece of marbled sky
could be found in her mirror
crying\"
Wow that is a phenomenal closing strong fluid beautiful you are riding a cosmic wind with this wonderful poetess 🌹
July 9th, 2017 23:49
whisperingquill said:
Wow,
\"and I was never as lost again
as the day the lake stood between us
and not one piece of marbled sky
could be found in her mirror
crying\"
Wow that is a phenomenal closing strong fluid beautiful you are riding a cosmic wind with this wonderful poetess 🌹
July 9th, 2017 23:49
reflection
Augustus said:
I can imagine your love trickling away lost without compass. Hugs.
July 9th, 2017 22:53
Augustus said:
I can imagine your love trickling away lost without compass. Hugs.
July 9th, 2017 22:53
reflection
Nicholas Browning said:
Excuse me, but \"Marbled sky\" is a term I\'ve never seen before. It\'s great. This is why I love poetry.
Once again, great job Heather.
July 9th, 2017 16:28
Nicholas Browning said:
Excuse me, but \"Marbled sky\" is a term I\'ve never seen before. It\'s great. This is why I love poetry.
Once again, great job Heather.
July 9th, 2017 16:28
reflection
FredPeyer said:
Thank you heather for another very fine piece of writing! \"...as the day the lake stood between us...\" is such a powerful image.
What say, maybe we should all learn to swim?
July 9th, 2017 15:32
FredPeyer said:
Thank you heather for another very fine piece of writing! \"...as the day the lake stood between us...\" is such a powerful image.
What say, maybe we should all learn to swim?
July 9th, 2017 15:32
reflection
Michael Edwards said:
Sheer poetry - I look forward to all your postings and you never disappoint.
July 9th, 2017 15:07
Michael Edwards said:
Sheer poetry - I look forward to all your postings and you never disappoint.
July 9th, 2017 15:07
reflection
kevin browne said:
good poetry with lasting images of innocence in your work Heather T. I love that to ponder over so thank you x
July 9th, 2017 14:53
kevin browne said:
good poetry with lasting images of innocence in your work Heather T. I love that to ponder over so thank you x
July 9th, 2017 14:53
reflection
ShannonXx said:
This is beautifully written! Can really feel the emotion in this
July 9th, 2017 14:51
ShannonXx said:
This is beautifully written! Can really feel the emotion in this
July 9th, 2017 14:51
reflection
Louis Gibbs said:
A bit bewildering yet satisfying ... a characteristic of much great poetry. I must say I enjoyed it, but am at a loss as to why. Thanks for posting this fine piece, Heather!
July 9th, 2017 13:35
Louis Gibbs said:
A bit bewildering yet satisfying ... a characteristic of much great poetry. I must say I enjoyed it, but am at a loss as to why. Thanks for posting this fine piece, Heather!
July 9th, 2017 13:35
reflection
burning-embers said:
Pure poetry. Fairies, unicorns, mystery, ladies of the lake. Makes me feel my work is clumsy reading yours here.
July 9th, 2017 13:09
burning-embers said:
Pure poetry. Fairies, unicorns, mystery, ladies of the lake. Makes me feel my work is clumsy reading yours here.
July 9th, 2017 13:09
holy broken
Renzi said:
H T. I\'ve said it before and i\'ll say it again but your writing really does get my imagination wandering gloriously. You should write a whole book. 💓🙌
July 9th, 2017 04:21
Renzi said:
H T. I\'ve said it before and i\'ll say it again but your writing really does get my imagination wandering gloriously. You should write a whole book. 💓🙌
July 9th, 2017 04:21
of edgeless storms
Augustus said:
\"Grow gills\", \"wretched oxygen\", pretty cool \"playing around\"
July 8th, 2017 18:01
Augustus said:
\"Grow gills\", \"wretched oxygen\", pretty cool \"playing around\"
July 8th, 2017 18:01
of edgeless storms
Augustus said:
\"Grow gills\", \"wretched oxygen\", pretty cool \"playing around\"
July 8th, 2017 18:00
Augustus said:
\"Grow gills\", \"wretched oxygen\", pretty cool \"playing around\"
July 8th, 2017 18:00
of edgeless storms
Nicholas Browning said:
Now you listen to me, and you listen good! This is marvelous! The repetition, the repeated use of certain words. \"You and I\" adds such a wonderful touch to each line that sits beside it. You\'ve outdone yourself, bravo!
July 8th, 2017 17:59
Nicholas Browning said:
Now you listen to me, and you listen good! This is marvelous! The repetition, the repeated use of certain words. \"You and I\" adds such a wonderful touch to each line that sits beside it. You\'ve outdone yourself, bravo!
July 8th, 2017 17:59
of edgeless storms
FredPeyer said:
If this is \"playing around a bit..\" I cannot wait to see what will happen when you get serious!
Love the right/left combination, love the poem, and as usual, your writing is superb.
July 8th, 2017 13:37
FredPeyer said:
If this is \"playing around a bit..\" I cannot wait to see what will happen when you get serious!
Love the right/left combination, love the poem, and as usual, your writing is superb.
July 8th, 2017 13:37
holy broken
FredPeyer said:
Exquisite writing, again, conjuring up all these incredible images. Thank you for sharing.
July 7th, 2017 20:10
FredPeyer said:
Exquisite writing, again, conjuring up all these incredible images. Thank you for sharing.
July 7th, 2017 20:10
upon a page
ShannonXx said:
This is a beautiful poem! You are a really great writer, keep writing!
July 6th, 2017 11:35
ShannonXx said:
This is a beautiful poem! You are a really great writer, keep writing!
July 6th, 2017 11:35
upon a page
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
\"Poets know the gods they serve.\" \"When we are gone, let it be said, upon this page, our poets bled.\" I enjoyed this poem. These were my favorite lines, but the whole poem was a pleasure to read. Tyfs!
July 4th, 2017 09:55
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
\"Poets know the gods they serve.\" \"When we are gone, let it be said, upon this page, our poets bled.\" I enjoyed this poem. These were my favorite lines, but the whole poem was a pleasure to read. Tyfs!
July 4th, 2017 09:55
upon a page
FredPeyer said:
I know I have a big mouth, but for once words are beyond me. The first stanza is incredible; not to take anything away from the rest. Where did the \"tatooed birds\" come from? And the last stanza I am going to print out separately and hang over my desk, with or without your permission!
July 3rd, 2017 17:35
FredPeyer said:
I know I have a big mouth, but for once words are beyond me. The first stanza is incredible; not to take anything away from the rest. Where did the \"tatooed birds\" come from? And the last stanza I am going to print out separately and hang over my desk, with or without your permission!
July 3rd, 2017 17:35
upon a page
Fay Slimm. said:
Top drawer writing Heather -- a stunning read with an inspiring finalé
July 3rd, 2017 16:06
Fay Slimm. said:
Top drawer writing Heather -- a stunning read with an inspiring finalé
July 3rd, 2017 16:06
upon a page
Louis Gibbs said:
What a work of sheer beauty! The ending is powerful and profound. Thank you for this one.
July 3rd, 2017 15:59
Louis Gibbs said:
What a work of sheer beauty! The ending is powerful and profound. Thank you for this one.
July 3rd, 2017 15:59
tears of men
Renzi said:
Ahhhh Heather you write masterpieces girl, masterpieces i\'m telling you. Blown away again. Thankyou.
July 3rd, 2017 05:35
Renzi said:
Ahhhh Heather you write masterpieces girl, masterpieces i\'m telling you. Blown away again. Thankyou.
July 3rd, 2017 05:35
tears of men
kevin browne said:
thank you for this little entry straight in at no 1. great poem x
July 2nd, 2017 17:29
kevin browne said:
thank you for this little entry straight in at no 1. great poem x
July 2nd, 2017 17:29
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