Comments received on poems by Nicholas Browning
Ghost of Atlantis
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I know I often say that, and it can sound a bit bland at times. I admit I get lost in cryptic-type poems or phrases.
I don\'t mean \'lost\' in \'carried away\' but rather \'not always following the thread\'. Yet as here, poets have taken your poem as what it may appear to be to them in their own imaginations.
July 15th, 2017 02:10
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I know I often say that, and it can sound a bit bland at times. I admit I get lost in cryptic-type poems or phrases.
I don\'t mean \'lost\' in \'carried away\' but rather \'not always following the thread\'. Yet as here, poets have taken your poem as what it may appear to be to them in their own imaginations.
July 15th, 2017 02:10
Ghost of Atlantis
Frank Prem said:
Agree with a previous responder:
Within the nothing;
Only I.
Some very powerful thoughts and phrases, Nicholas.
July 14th, 2017 22:07
Frank Prem said:
Agree with a previous responder:
Within the nothing;
Only I.
Some very powerful thoughts and phrases, Nicholas.
July 14th, 2017 22:07
Ghost of Atlantis
Heather T said:
I don\'t know if it\'s your intention, but abandonment pours off of this like an echo. I understand why you were happy to shed the emotion.
July 14th, 2017 21:07
Heather T said:
I don\'t know if it\'s your intention, but abandonment pours off of this like an echo. I understand why you were happy to shed the emotion.
July 14th, 2017 21:07
Ghost of Atlantis
kevin browne said:
I think you saved yourself writing this one Nicholas Browning. what a poem full of just beautifully placed words. a genius is at work here I see. It makes my week when someones nails a poem like this. high standards need to be maintained so the anticipation for your next one heaves some pressure your way.
July 14th, 2017 20:53
kevin browne said:
I think you saved yourself writing this one Nicholas Browning. what a poem full of just beautifully placed words. a genius is at work here I see. It makes my week when someones nails a poem like this. high standards need to be maintained so the anticipation for your next one heaves some pressure your way.
July 14th, 2017 20:53
Ghost of Atlantis
Adri said:
That was so romantic, sad, and fulfilling. Great poem! I could read it over and over and never get tired of it! 🦋
July 14th, 2017 18:30
Adri said:
That was so romantic, sad, and fulfilling. Great poem! I could read it over and over and never get tired of it! 🦋
July 14th, 2017 18:30
Ghost of Atlantis
Poetic Dan said:
I know we can read things differently depending on our own energy, today that took me to a place I needed to be. Thank you for expressing your self so amazingly, and that you relate to my work.
Thanks for helping me pick the next one I\'ll post too
July 14th, 2017 18:02
Poetic Dan said:
I know we can read things differently depending on our own energy, today that took me to a place I needed to be. Thank you for expressing your self so amazingly, and that you relate to my work.
Thanks for helping me pick the next one I\'ll post too
July 14th, 2017 18:02
Ghost of Atlantis
moonwriting said:
A good read, kept me interested the whole way through.
July 14th, 2017 17:04
moonwriting said:
A good read, kept me interested the whole way through.
July 14th, 2017 17:04
Ghost of Atlantis
FredPeyer said:
Nicholas, for me your poem conjured up a lonely man in a lifeboat drifting across the vast sea with no direction and no hope.
Maybe it is just my over-active imagination!
Beautiful poem, I did enjoy reading it.
July 14th, 2017 15:08
FredPeyer said:
Nicholas, for me your poem conjured up a lonely man in a lifeboat drifting across the vast sea with no direction and no hope.
Maybe it is just my over-active imagination!
Beautiful poem, I did enjoy reading it.
July 14th, 2017 15:08
Lamplight
Michael Edwards said:
Easy to read absorbing and a darn good yarn = a superb piece of work - which I nearly missed.
July 13th, 2017 15:09
Michael Edwards said:
Easy to read absorbing and a darn good yarn = a superb piece of work - which I nearly missed.
July 13th, 2017 15:09
Lamplight
Adri said:
There aren\'t enough words to describe your talent!!! Your poem left me amazed and entranced. The wording and story just kept evolving beautifully. Keep up the fantastic work, oh wise one!!! 👏😉 I just began writing poems and now I feel like an infant next to you at double your age!!! Lmao!🤣
July 12th, 2017 23:33
Adri said:
There aren\'t enough words to describe your talent!!! Your poem left me amazed and entranced. The wording and story just kept evolving beautifully. Keep up the fantastic work, oh wise one!!! 👏😉 I just began writing poems and now I feel like an infant next to you at double your age!!! Lmao!🤣
July 12th, 2017 23:33
Lamplight
Heather T said:
I agree with Fred. There\'s so much here it could easily be fleshed out. It played out like a movie in my minds eye.
July 12th, 2017 23:06
Heather T said:
I agree with Fred. There\'s so much here it could easily be fleshed out. It played out like a movie in my minds eye.
July 12th, 2017 23:06
Lamplight
FredPeyer said:
Nicholas, this oeuvre of yours is impressive! So well written. I think you could even turn it into a novel and/or a movie right up there with \"Gone with the Wind\". Really enjoyed it.
July 12th, 2017 22:26
FredPeyer said:
Nicholas, this oeuvre of yours is impressive! So well written. I think you could even turn it into a novel and/or a movie right up there with \"Gone with the Wind\". Really enjoyed it.
July 12th, 2017 22:26
Lamplight
malubotelho said:
It is such a great writing I was amazed you could write this so easy. Well, it was not easy. It is very well written and easy to understand. Beautifully put together. I have to thank you for your dedication. Well done.
July 12th, 2017 21:36
malubotelho said:
It is such a great writing I was amazed you could write this so easy. Well, it was not easy. It is very well written and easy to understand. Beautifully put together. I have to thank you for your dedication. Well done.
July 12th, 2017 21:36
Counting Sheep
malubotelho said:
Hi Nicholas, great write. Night is a good time for me to write and I could see myself doing what you did. Great inspiration. Instead of count sheeps I whatch my sleep. It is like tricking myself saying; I don\'t want to sleep and concentrate on being awake. It makes me tired and sleep faster. I prefer you awake and writing though. Thanks
July 11th, 2017 20:47
malubotelho said:
Hi Nicholas, great write. Night is a good time for me to write and I could see myself doing what you did. Great inspiration. Instead of count sheeps I whatch my sleep. It is like tricking myself saying; I don\'t want to sleep and concentrate on being awake. It makes me tired and sleep faster. I prefer you awake and writing though. Thanks
July 11th, 2017 20:47
Counting Sheep
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I am the eternal insomniac I fear, and so I very much related! Great write! Best way to make use of being awake whilst the world lies in slumber! :)
July 11th, 2017 19:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I am the eternal insomniac I fear, and so I very much related! Great write! Best way to make use of being awake whilst the world lies in slumber! :)
July 11th, 2017 19:56
Counting Sheep
Fay Slimm. said:
Ooooh - I can relate to this when counting sheep fails and words take centre stage - A fine poetic example of maklng the best of sleepless hours Nicholas -
July 11th, 2017 16:26
Fay Slimm. said:
Ooooh - I can relate to this when counting sheep fails and words take centre stage - A fine poetic example of maklng the best of sleepless hours Nicholas -
July 11th, 2017 16:26
Glisten
Samreen Chowdhury said:
This is beautiful I love it, an amazing write x
July 11th, 2017 14:19
Samreen Chowdhury said:
This is beautiful I love it, an amazing write x
July 11th, 2017 14:19
Glisten
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, writing is so powerful and therapeutic in it conception and completion.
July 11th, 2017 00:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, writing is so powerful and therapeutic in it conception and completion.
July 11th, 2017 00:12
Glisten
Augustus said:
Relaxing, waiting for the muse, and she sneaked up on you anyway. Nicely done.
July 10th, 2017 19:51
Augustus said:
Relaxing, waiting for the muse, and she sneaked up on you anyway. Nicely done.
July 10th, 2017 19:51
Glisten
Louis Gibbs said:
My muses consist of numerous personalities as well, I am convinced, and I cherish them all. I appreciate your poem, Nicholas!
July 10th, 2017 13:51
Louis Gibbs said:
My muses consist of numerous personalities as well, I am convinced, and I cherish them all. I appreciate your poem, Nicholas!
July 10th, 2017 13:51
Glisten
FredPeyer said:
And I will reminisce about your poem for a while!
Beautifully written and thought provoking. It shows that you take writing seriously and that you have the skill.
July 10th, 2017 12:59
FredPeyer said:
And I will reminisce about your poem for a while!
Beautifully written and thought provoking. It shows that you take writing seriously and that you have the skill.
July 10th, 2017 12:59
Glisten
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
This is a delightful read! The rhymes and the word choices made the readers eyes glisten and lips smirk. This is inspiringly composed! Tyfs!
July 10th, 2017 12:22
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
This is a delightful read! The rhymes and the word choices made the readers eyes glisten and lips smirk. This is inspiringly composed! Tyfs!
July 10th, 2017 12:22
Glisten
orchidee said:
Ohh, if it\'s too complicated we (well, me anyway) won\'t understand it! A fine write N.
July 10th, 2017 11:49
orchidee said:
Ohh, if it\'s too complicated we (well, me anyway) won\'t understand it! A fine write N.
July 10th, 2017 11:49
Brilliant Blue
Fay Slimm. said:
Colour is such a gift as is this interesting tribute to nature\'s variety of its presentation. An enjoyable read - - well written.
July 10th, 2017 01:31
Fay Slimm. said:
Colour is such a gift as is this interesting tribute to nature\'s variety of its presentation. An enjoyable read - - well written.
July 10th, 2017 01:31
To feel
MaddieJ said:
A wise person told me that to feel isn\'t a crime... I loved the reminder. I have always worn my heart on my sleeves and that has made me seld conscious about feeling too much. This was a reminder that feeling is good. It shows your depth! Good wite!
July 10th, 2017 00:28
MaddieJ said:
A wise person told me that to feel isn\'t a crime... I loved the reminder. I have always worn my heart on my sleeves and that has made me seld conscious about feeling too much. This was a reminder that feeling is good. It shows your depth! Good wite!
July 10th, 2017 00:28
To feel
Poetic Dan said:
Nice job, definitely felt this one. Simple but powerfully affective, like Ripples it will do more than you think ;)
July 9th, 2017 18:27
Poetic Dan said:
Nice job, definitely felt this one. Simple but powerfully affective, like Ripples it will do more than you think ;)
July 9th, 2017 18:27
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