Comments received on poems by w c
My Uncle Was A Neanderthal
lasergraph said:
We are indeed a sum of our past. Great write
December 12th, 2017 09:29
lasergraph said:
We are indeed a sum of our past. Great write
December 12th, 2017 09:29
My Uncle Was A Neanderthal
orchidee said:
Good write wc. I\'m millions of years old, so I say, so I was around then, yep! heehee.
December 12th, 2017 02:58
orchidee said:
Good write wc. I\'m millions of years old, so I say, so I was around then, yep! heehee.
December 12th, 2017 02:58
On Cloudy Days
Synesthesia said:
Nice - I like how the structure cycles, sun-cloud-
Not sure about the line-
The sun comes out again
- rhyme sounds a bit forced
Ending - upon us 👏
December 11th, 2017 04:36
Synesthesia said:
Nice - I like how the structure cycles, sun-cloud-
Not sure about the line-
The sun comes out again
- rhyme sounds a bit forced
Ending - upon us 👏
December 11th, 2017 04:36
A Bird\'s Long Passage
peeter pewter said:
That\'s a really nice piece. Sounds like a lullaby. Nice, simple imagery.
December 10th, 2017 14:47
peeter pewter said:
That\'s a really nice piece. Sounds like a lullaby. Nice, simple imagery.
December 10th, 2017 14:47
Little Bird
orchidee said:
Ahh lovely write wc. Some \'little birds\' (even me!) can be awful gossips. We may feel like shooting those sort of little birds! Oohh!
December 9th, 2017 12:27
orchidee said:
Ahh lovely write wc. Some \'little birds\' (even me!) can be awful gossips. We may feel like shooting those sort of little birds! Oohh!
December 9th, 2017 12:27
Little Bird
w c said:
Thanks Fay. I\'m happy you enjoyed the poem! I really appreciate your comment.
December 9th, 2017 10:56
w c said:
Thanks Fay. I\'m happy you enjoyed the poem! I really appreciate your comment.
December 9th, 2017 10:56
Little Bird
Fay Slimm. said:
A hesrtwarming picture you pen here W.C. with feeding the birds and one who is friendly enough to trust human presence. A lovely read and thank you for sharing it.
December 9th, 2017 10:51
Fay Slimm. said:
A hesrtwarming picture you pen here W.C. with feeding the birds and one who is friendly enough to trust human presence. A lovely read and thank you for sharing it.
December 9th, 2017 10:51
Morning Things
orchidee said:
Eloquent and descriptive write wc. Then I came along and ruined it by singing \'Morning has broken\'..... People thought it was an early-morning cat-fight! lol.
December 6th, 2017 02:45
orchidee said:
Eloquent and descriptive write wc. Then I came along and ruined it by singing \'Morning has broken\'..... People thought it was an early-morning cat-fight! lol.
December 6th, 2017 02:45
Folk Song
orchidee said:
A fine write wc. You got that pipe? Don\'t light it up though. Smoking\'s bad for us!
December 5th, 2017 02:48
orchidee said:
A fine write wc. You got that pipe? Don\'t light it up though. Smoking\'s bad for us!
December 5th, 2017 02:48
Dinosaur Rodeo
MaddieJ said:
This would make an awesome children\'s book. Cool idea!
December 3rd, 2017 16:07
MaddieJ said:
This would make an awesome children\'s book. Cool idea!
December 3rd, 2017 16:07
Preyed Upon
orchidee said:
Erm, a sort of \"(bigger) dog eat (smaller) dog\" there wc!
November 30th, 2017 14:51
orchidee said:
Erm, a sort of \"(bigger) dog eat (smaller) dog\" there wc!
November 30th, 2017 14:51
Preyed Upon
FredPeyer said:
It is called the \'food-chain\', and you wrote it well! Nice rhyming too!
November 30th, 2017 13:52
FredPeyer said:
It is called the \'food-chain\', and you wrote it well! Nice rhyming too!
November 30th, 2017 13:52
Faith In Grace
Esther J. Doucet said:
My day had been blessed by your words!
November 29th, 2017 14:19
Esther J. Doucet said:
My day had been blessed by your words!
November 29th, 2017 14:19
What Have You Got?
orchidee said:
A fine write again wc. So hardly \'dumb\' animals. Each has their sound and noise, and all communicate in life.
November 26th, 2017 03:06
orchidee said:
A fine write again wc. So hardly \'dumb\' animals. Each has their sound and noise, and all communicate in life.
November 26th, 2017 03:06
Mountain Lion
Fay Slimm. said:
An absorbing description of the powerful mountain lion and his wild life -- and all in wonderful rhyme - -thank you for sharing W.C.
November 23rd, 2017 11:56
Fay Slimm. said:
An absorbing description of the powerful mountain lion and his wild life -- and all in wonderful rhyme - -thank you for sharing W.C.
November 23rd, 2017 11:56
County Line Bar
Louis Gibbs said:
Where did you say this bar was? Good write WC!
November 22nd, 2017 17:33
Louis Gibbs said:
Where did you say this bar was? Good write WC!
November 22nd, 2017 17:33
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