Comments received on poems by skyebellasario
Prince Charming
Christina8 said:
Very good message, skye!! It\'s an empowering write! An excellent poem!
October 27th, 2017 16:47
Christina8 said:
Very good message, skye!! It\'s an empowering write! An excellent poem!
October 27th, 2017 16:47
Bigger Things
Accidental Poet said:
May you always find inspiration by your dreams challenging you. Great poem sky ; )
October 22nd, 2017 20:41
Accidental Poet said:
May you always find inspiration by your dreams challenging you. Great poem sky ; )
October 22nd, 2017 20:41
Happily Ever After
Christina8 said:
Oh this pours over with emotion! What a heart string tugger. Great heartfelt write, Skye!
October 21st, 2017 16:58
Christina8 said:
Oh this pours over with emotion! What a heart string tugger. Great heartfelt write, Skye!
October 21st, 2017 16:58
It
Accidental Poet said:
Awesome write sky. I too perceive this as losing a loved one, possibly to Cancer or Alzheimer\'s disease? So sorry if so. Lost my adoptive mom to Alzheimer\'s.
October 18th, 2017 18:57
Accidental Poet said:
Awesome write sky. I too perceive this as losing a loved one, possibly to Cancer or Alzheimer\'s disease? So sorry if so. Lost my adoptive mom to Alzheimer\'s.
October 18th, 2017 18:57
It
Simple-Man87 said:
This reminded me of my step mom and her son. A relationship that started out so well, but his \"IT\" was drugs and gangs.
I interpreted this as losing a loved one. Please correct me if I\'m wrong. Very well written.
October 18th, 2017 18:48
Simple-Man87 said:
This reminded me of my step mom and her son. A relationship that started out so well, but his \"IT\" was drugs and gangs.
I interpreted this as losing a loved one. Please correct me if I\'m wrong. Very well written.
October 18th, 2017 18:48
It
Christina8 said:
it\'s a great poem with such a mystery behind \"it\" but so powerful. So sad, especially at the end. Great write, Skye!
October 18th, 2017 16:52
Christina8 said:
it\'s a great poem with such a mystery behind \"it\" but so powerful. So sad, especially at the end. Great write, Skye!
October 18th, 2017 16:52
It
Louis Gibbs said:
A mysterious and powerful one in its ambiguity. I love it, Skye!
October 18th, 2017 16:23
Louis Gibbs said:
A mysterious and powerful one in its ambiguity. I love it, Skye!
October 18th, 2017 16:23
Being Broken
Accidental Poet said:
There is, I believe, a little bit of this heartache in all of us at one time or another sky. Very well written. ; )
October 15th, 2017 19:35
Accidental Poet said:
There is, I believe, a little bit of this heartache in all of us at one time or another sky. Very well written. ; )
October 15th, 2017 19:35
Someday
Accidental Poet said:
I love the stories those old photographs tell. I had to laugh when I read about your kids asking \"Who are they?\" All the memories that come racing back to mind. I hope all your old friends phone numbers still work. Great write sky. ; )
October 12th, 2017 18:22
Accidental Poet said:
I love the stories those old photographs tell. I had to laugh when I read about your kids asking \"Who are they?\" All the memories that come racing back to mind. I hope all your old friends phone numbers still work. Great write sky. ; )
October 12th, 2017 18:22
Friends Can Break Your Heart
Accidental Poet said:
I too have seen friends fall by the wayside. It\'s sad, but as they say,
\"As one door closes, another door opens\"
So look for that new door to open. Quite possible that new door was the door you opened in coming here to MPS. You are among friends here, friends who like you, write poetry. ; )
October 9th, 2017 19:50
Accidental Poet said:
I too have seen friends fall by the wayside. It\'s sad, but as they say,
\"As one door closes, another door opens\"
So look for that new door to open. Quite possible that new door was the door you opened in coming here to MPS. You are among friends here, friends who like you, write poetry. ; )
October 9th, 2017 19:50
Grandad
Accidental Poet said:
Your grand-dad is always with you in your heart. He even sees this write and you\'ve made him proud. ; )
October 7th, 2017 16:59
Accidental Poet said:
Your grand-dad is always with you in your heart. He even sees this write and you\'ve made him proud. ; )
October 7th, 2017 16:59
Grandad
FredPeyer said:
Skye, being a grand-dad myself, your beautiful and tender poem speaks to me. Can only hope that my grand-kids will think of me the way you do about your grand-dad.
Thank you for a very uplifting and joyful poem!
October 7th, 2017 16:18
FredPeyer said:
Skye, being a grand-dad myself, your beautiful and tender poem speaks to me. Can only hope that my grand-kids will think of me the way you do about your grand-dad.
Thank you for a very uplifting and joyful poem!
October 7th, 2017 16:18
Our Youth
germanamericanchurch said:
That sweet glow of vital youth and psychedelics, can\'t forget that:)
First amendment rights
October 6th, 2017 22:55
germanamericanchurch said:
That sweet glow of vital youth and psychedelics, can\'t forget that:)
First amendment rights
October 6th, 2017 22:55
Sky Dive
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like a blast, Sky! Have a great time on your birthday. Enjoyed your poem,
October 4th, 2017 21:45
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like a blast, Sky! Have a great time on your birthday. Enjoyed your poem,
October 4th, 2017 21:45
Sky Dive
Accidental Poet said:
That would be fun. If only I could get past the feeling of falling. ; )
October 4th, 2017 18:23
Accidental Poet said:
That would be fun. If only I could get past the feeling of falling. ; )
October 4th, 2017 18:23
The Sun and The Serpent
chinaaliciarivera said:
Interesting. Keep it up. 💗 💕 ❤
October 4th, 2017 15:51
chinaaliciarivera said:
Interesting. Keep it up. 💗 💕 ❤
October 4th, 2017 15:51
Your Scent
Accidental Poet said:
So sorry for the love you lost. A very heartfelt write. Thanks for sharing
October 1st, 2017 18:49
Accidental Poet said:
So sorry for the love you lost. A very heartfelt write. Thanks for sharing
October 1st, 2017 18:49
Fly My Little Bird
Accidental Poet said:
Standing ovation sky. Clapping loudly for this great write. I love the last 3 lines. ; )
September 30th, 2017 19:43
Accidental Poet said:
Standing ovation sky. Clapping loudly for this great write. I love the last 3 lines. ; )
September 30th, 2017 19:43
My Darkness
WL Schuett said:
Very thoughtful I like the sadness but I liked the hopefulness at the end better , nice poem... keep writing
September 29th, 2017 18:20
WL Schuett said:
Very thoughtful I like the sadness but I liked the hopefulness at the end better , nice poem... keep writing
September 29th, 2017 18:20
My Darkness
UnspokenVoice92 said:
Dangling in your own mind.. in my opinion it’s the hardest battle you’ll ever face.. and yet In short moments the most peaceful one.
September 29th, 2017 14:26
UnspokenVoice92 said:
Dangling in your own mind.. in my opinion it’s the hardest battle you’ll ever face.. and yet In short moments the most peaceful one.
September 29th, 2017 14:26
Our Broken Fairytale
Christina8 said:
This is a great poem. I think we all hit the \"submit\" button thinking it is not our best. This has everything in it that one would expect with a breakup story but MORE--because you\'re such a good writer, you conveyed why you had to break up so well. Very good!
September 28th, 2017 20:28
Christina8 said:
This is a great poem. I think we all hit the \"submit\" button thinking it is not our best. This has everything in it that one would expect with a breakup story but MORE--because you\'re such a good writer, you conveyed why you had to break up so well. Very good!
September 28th, 2017 20:28
I Wish
chinaaliciarivera said:
I like this. This is Beautiful. Good thoughts and good poem. 😊❤💕
September 26th, 2017 12:24
chinaaliciarivera said:
I like this. This is Beautiful. Good thoughts and good poem. 😊❤💕
September 26th, 2017 12:24
I Wish
Christina8 said:
Very good write! I think we all feel that way when we fall in love, about the 7 billion people, and you only want \"the one\". Great job!
September 26th, 2017 11:48
Christina8 said:
Very good write! I think we all feel that way when we fall in love, about the 7 billion people, and you only want \"the one\". Great job!
September 26th, 2017 11:48
Stars
Azura Nightsong said:
Beautiful poem. I myself find myself lost in the stars each night, through its harder now that i live in a town with a streetlight shining through my window.
September 25th, 2017 13:33
Azura Nightsong said:
Beautiful poem. I myself find myself lost in the stars each night, through its harder now that i live in a town with a streetlight shining through my window.
September 25th, 2017 13:33
Restless
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI SKYEBELLE ~ Thanks for being my MPS FRIEND and thanks for your second POEM ~ Again well written with a challenging theme. While we are still Young (under 20 ?) we are still studying (as you are) going to UNI is a chance to escape but currently (because of increasing cost) many UK students choose to study at their Local Uni and live at Home~ a great opportunity for 18 year olds to spread their wings is lost. When you are qualified and Job Seeking ~ theoretically you can go anywhere in the World but alas what is POSSIBLE is not always PRACTICAL ! Love your Poem because it echoes the aspirations of many of the TEENS & TWENTIES in the College where I work. Every BLESSING in your desire to FLY AWAY ................. Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
September 19th, 2017 17:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI SKYEBELLE ~ Thanks for being my MPS FRIEND and thanks for your second POEM ~ Again well written with a challenging theme. While we are still Young (under 20 ?) we are still studying (as you are) going to UNI is a chance to escape but currently (because of increasing cost) many UK students choose to study at their Local Uni and live at Home~ a great opportunity for 18 year olds to spread their wings is lost. When you are qualified and Job Seeking ~ theoretically you can go anywhere in the World but alas what is POSSIBLE is not always PRACTICAL ! Love your Poem because it echoes the aspirations of many of the TEENS & TWENTIES in the College where I work. Every BLESSING in your desire to FLY AWAY ................. Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
September 19th, 2017 17:02
Glass and Paper
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SKYEBELL ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ Elegant in its Structure and interesting in its Subject ! Well written and spaced in modern free verse ! It has rhythm and is smooth to read and recite ! I have been IN & OUT of love for the past 17 years (since I was 17) so i can testify that my Heart has been wounded and bruised but NEVER BROKEN or TORN APART ! And YES I have been empowered and made a Better Man by each of my lady Friends including ANGELA (29) my current GF ! Please check my Poems ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
September 18th, 2017 18:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SKYEBELL ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ Elegant in its Structure and interesting in its Subject ! Well written and spaced in modern free verse ! It has rhythm and is smooth to read and recite ! I have been IN & OUT of love for the past 17 years (since I was 17) so i can testify that my Heart has been wounded and bruised but NEVER BROKEN or TORN APART ! And YES I have been empowered and made a Better Man by each of my lady Friends including ANGELA (29) my current GF ! Please check my Poems ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
September 18th, 2017 18:42
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