Comments received on poems by skyebellasario
My Darkness
UnspokenVoice92 said:
Dangling in your own mind.. in my opinion it’s the hardest battle you’ll ever face.. and yet In short moments the most peaceful one.
September 29th, 2017 14:26
UnspokenVoice92 said:
Dangling in your own mind.. in my opinion it’s the hardest battle you’ll ever face.. and yet In short moments the most peaceful one.
September 29th, 2017 14:26
Our Broken Fairytale
Christina8 said:
This is a great poem. I think we all hit the \"submit\" button thinking it is not our best. This has everything in it that one would expect with a breakup story but MORE--because you\'re such a good writer, you conveyed why you had to break up so well. Very good!
September 28th, 2017 20:28
Christina8 said:
This is a great poem. I think we all hit the \"submit\" button thinking it is not our best. This has everything in it that one would expect with a breakup story but MORE--because you\'re such a good writer, you conveyed why you had to break up so well. Very good!
September 28th, 2017 20:28
I Wish
chinaaliciarivera said:
I like this. This is Beautiful. Good thoughts and good poem. 😊❤💕
September 26th, 2017 12:24
chinaaliciarivera said:
I like this. This is Beautiful. Good thoughts and good poem. 😊❤💕
September 26th, 2017 12:24
I Wish
Christina8 said:
Very good write! I think we all feel that way when we fall in love, about the 7 billion people, and you only want \"the one\". Great job!
September 26th, 2017 11:48
Christina8 said:
Very good write! I think we all feel that way when we fall in love, about the 7 billion people, and you only want \"the one\". Great job!
September 26th, 2017 11:48
Stars
Azura Nightsong said:
Beautiful poem. I myself find myself lost in the stars each night, through its harder now that i live in a town with a streetlight shining through my window.
September 25th, 2017 13:33
Azura Nightsong said:
Beautiful poem. I myself find myself lost in the stars each night, through its harder now that i live in a town with a streetlight shining through my window.
September 25th, 2017 13:33
Restless
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI SKYEBELLE ~ Thanks for being my MPS FRIEND and thanks for your second POEM ~ Again well written with a challenging theme. While we are still Young (under 20 ?) we are still studying (as you are) going to UNI is a chance to escape but currently (because of increasing cost) many UK students choose to study at their Local Uni and live at Home~ a great opportunity for 18 year olds to spread their wings is lost. When you are qualified and Job Seeking ~ theoretically you can go anywhere in the World but alas what is POSSIBLE is not always PRACTICAL ! Love your Poem because it echoes the aspirations of many of the TEENS & TWENTIES in the College where I work. Every BLESSING in your desire to FLY AWAY ................. Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
September 19th, 2017 17:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI SKYEBELLE ~ Thanks for being my MPS FRIEND and thanks for your second POEM ~ Again well written with a challenging theme. While we are still Young (under 20 ?) we are still studying (as you are) going to UNI is a chance to escape but currently (because of increasing cost) many UK students choose to study at their Local Uni and live at Home~ a great opportunity for 18 year olds to spread their wings is lost. When you are qualified and Job Seeking ~ theoretically you can go anywhere in the World but alas what is POSSIBLE is not always PRACTICAL ! Love your Poem because it echoes the aspirations of many of the TEENS & TWENTIES in the College where I work. Every BLESSING in your desire to FLY AWAY ................. Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
September 19th, 2017 17:02
Glass and Paper
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SKYEBELL ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ Elegant in its Structure and interesting in its Subject ! Well written and spaced in modern free verse ! It has rhythm and is smooth to read and recite ! I have been IN & OUT of love for the past 17 years (since I was 17) so i can testify that my Heart has been wounded and bruised but NEVER BROKEN or TORN APART ! And YES I have been empowered and made a Better Man by each of my lady Friends including ANGELA (29) my current GF ! Please check my Poems ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
September 18th, 2017 18:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SKYEBELL ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ Elegant in its Structure and interesting in its Subject ! Well written and spaced in modern free verse ! It has rhythm and is smooth to read and recite ! I have been IN & OUT of love for the past 17 years (since I was 17) so i can testify that my Heart has been wounded and bruised but NEVER BROKEN or TORN APART ! And YES I have been empowered and made a Better Man by each of my lady Friends including ANGELA (29) my current GF ! Please check my Poems ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
September 18th, 2017 18:42
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