Comments received on poems by skyebellasario
Lost
FredPeyer said:
Skye, I really like this poem. So well written, great last line!
Do travel as much as you can and try to see the world through the eyes of the people you meet. Keep an open mind, and as Santi already said, write your impressions down, preferably while you travel.
November 11th, 2017 01:05
FredPeyer said:
Skye, I really like this poem. So well written, great last line!
Do travel as much as you can and try to see the world through the eyes of the people you meet. Keep an open mind, and as Santi already said, write your impressions down, preferably while you travel.
November 11th, 2017 01:05
Lost
Christina8 said:
Yes, I get what you are saying. What a great poem, Skye! I once had the travel bug. I hope one day you get to see magnificent things!
November 10th, 2017 17:56
Christina8 said:
Yes, I get what you are saying. What a great poem, Skye! I once had the travel bug. I hope one day you get to see magnificent things!
November 10th, 2017 17:56
My Six Year Old Self
FredPeyer said:
Skye, this is a beautiful and thought provoking poem. As a grandfather now I do have the privilege to once in a while see the world through young kids eyes (whenever we visit the grandchildren). And that reminds ME to look differently at the world again, at least to a degree. One cannot erase all these years of experiencing both the bad and the good.
November 8th, 2017 16:20
FredPeyer said:
Skye, this is a beautiful and thought provoking poem. As a grandfather now I do have the privilege to once in a while see the world through young kids eyes (whenever we visit the grandchildren). And that reminds ME to look differently at the world again, at least to a degree. One cannot erase all these years of experiencing both the bad and the good.
November 8th, 2017 16:20
Footprints
Christina8 said:
You write such good poems, skye! So reflective and just wonderful. Great job, love the last stanza!
November 7th, 2017 19:00
Christina8 said:
You write such good poems, skye! So reflective and just wonderful. Great job, love the last stanza!
November 7th, 2017 19:00
Footprints
FredPeyer said:
And all I can wish is that you keep on writing such beautiful poetry, Skye! And that no storm will ever wash them away.
November 7th, 2017 18:49
FredPeyer said:
And all I can wish is that you keep on writing such beautiful poetry, Skye! And that no storm will ever wash them away.
November 7th, 2017 18:49
Rain
FredPeyer said:
Skye, I hope you don\'t mind me saying this, but I think you \'outdid\' yourself with this poem. It is really, really good!
November 4th, 2017 20:18
FredPeyer said:
Skye, I hope you don\'t mind me saying this, but I think you \'outdid\' yourself with this poem. It is really, really good!
November 4th, 2017 20:18
Rain
Christina8 said:
Wow, I love this skye! He didn\'t break you. You are whole and strong without him. Lovely poem!
November 4th, 2017 18:37
Christina8 said:
Wow, I love this skye! He didn\'t break you. You are whole and strong without him. Lovely poem!
November 4th, 2017 18:37
City Lights
DeviLove said:
You made the city sound so captivating and beautiful in this poem! Now i want to go see the city lol. Well done!
November 3rd, 2017 10:33
DeviLove said:
You made the city sound so captivating and beautiful in this poem! Now i want to go see the city lol. Well done!
November 3rd, 2017 10:33
City Lights
MaddieJ said:
I was just sitting out on my balcony looking at the city lights from the view... Thinking these exact thoughts!!! Thanks for writing this! Great poem!
November 2nd, 2017 21:31
MaddieJ said:
I was just sitting out on my balcony looking at the city lights from the view... Thinking these exact thoughts!!! Thanks for writing this! Great poem!
November 2nd, 2017 21:31
City Lights
Christina8 said:
Very nice poem about the scintillating city lights. Very well written, Skye!
November 2nd, 2017 20:14
Christina8 said:
Very nice poem about the scintillating city lights. Very well written, Skye!
November 2nd, 2017 20:14
City Lights
FredPeyer said:
Most poets use the image of stars, but your city lights are so refreshingly original. I really do like your poem. Kudos!
November 2nd, 2017 19:03
FredPeyer said:
Most poets use the image of stars, but your city lights are so refreshingly original. I really do like your poem. Kudos!
November 2nd, 2017 19:03
Remedy
FredPeyer said:
Well written, Skye! Sometimes it takes a guy some time, but eventually he will come around and realize that women really are our remedy!
October 30th, 2017 20:06
FredPeyer said:
Well written, Skye! Sometimes it takes a guy some time, but eventually he will come around and realize that women really are our remedy!
October 30th, 2017 20:06
Remedy
Christina8 said:
Very well done, Skye! Wonderful last stanza. This is great!
October 30th, 2017 18:25
Christina8 said:
Very well done, Skye! Wonderful last stanza. This is great!
October 30th, 2017 18:25
Prince Charming
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, with a strong and true message for all the girls and ladies out there! Skye, you write very well, I am sure this poem will be a great help for many who falsely think that they have to be rescued by a white knight (or prince charming).
October 27th, 2017 17:58
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, with a strong and true message for all the girls and ladies out there! Skye, you write very well, I am sure this poem will be a great help for many who falsely think that they have to be rescued by a white knight (or prince charming).
October 27th, 2017 17:58
Prince Charming
Christina8 said:
Very good message, skye!! It\'s an empowering write! An excellent poem!
October 27th, 2017 16:47
Christina8 said:
Very good message, skye!! It\'s an empowering write! An excellent poem!
October 27th, 2017 16:47
Happily Ever After
Christina8 said:
Oh this pours over with emotion! What a heart string tugger. Great heartfelt write, Skye!
October 21st, 2017 16:58
Christina8 said:
Oh this pours over with emotion! What a heart string tugger. Great heartfelt write, Skye!
October 21st, 2017 16:58
It
Simple-Man87 said:
This reminded me of my step mom and her son. A relationship that started out so well, but his \"IT\" was drugs and gangs.
I interpreted this as losing a loved one. Please correct me if I\'m wrong. Very well written.
October 18th, 2017 18:48
Simple-Man87 said:
This reminded me of my step mom and her son. A relationship that started out so well, but his \"IT\" was drugs and gangs.
I interpreted this as losing a loved one. Please correct me if I\'m wrong. Very well written.
October 18th, 2017 18:48
It
Christina8 said:
it\'s a great poem with such a mystery behind \"it\" but so powerful. So sad, especially at the end. Great write, Skye!
October 18th, 2017 16:52
Christina8 said:
it\'s a great poem with such a mystery behind \"it\" but so powerful. So sad, especially at the end. Great write, Skye!
October 18th, 2017 16:52
It
Louis Gibbs said:
A mysterious and powerful one in its ambiguity. I love it, Skye!
October 18th, 2017 16:23
Louis Gibbs said:
A mysterious and powerful one in its ambiguity. I love it, Skye!
October 18th, 2017 16:23
Grandad
FredPeyer said:
Skye, being a grand-dad myself, your beautiful and tender poem speaks to me. Can only hope that my grand-kids will think of me the way you do about your grand-dad.
Thank you for a very uplifting and joyful poem!
October 7th, 2017 16:18
FredPeyer said:
Skye, being a grand-dad myself, your beautiful and tender poem speaks to me. Can only hope that my grand-kids will think of me the way you do about your grand-dad.
Thank you for a very uplifting and joyful poem!
October 7th, 2017 16:18
Our Youth
germanamericanchurch said:
That sweet glow of vital youth and psychedelics, can\'t forget that:)
First amendment rights
October 6th, 2017 22:55
germanamericanchurch said:
That sweet glow of vital youth and psychedelics, can\'t forget that:)
First amendment rights
October 6th, 2017 22:55
Sky Dive
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like a blast, Sky! Have a great time on your birthday. Enjoyed your poem,
October 4th, 2017 21:45
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like a blast, Sky! Have a great time on your birthday. Enjoyed your poem,
October 4th, 2017 21:45
The Sun and The Serpent
chinaaliciarivera said:
Interesting. Keep it up. 💗 💕 ❤
October 4th, 2017 15:51
chinaaliciarivera said:
Interesting. Keep it up. 💗 💕 ❤
October 4th, 2017 15:51
My Darkness
WL Schuett said:
Very thoughtful I like the sadness but I liked the hopefulness at the end better , nice poem... keep writing
September 29th, 2017 18:20
WL Schuett said:
Very thoughtful I like the sadness but I liked the hopefulness at the end better , nice poem... keep writing
September 29th, 2017 18:20
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