Comments received on poems by Natalie Heisey
Dark void
sorenbarrett said:
This poem deserves more reads. Well rhymed and thoughtfully written and recognized it has a message that should be heard. Nicely done
July 29th, 2024 09:32
sorenbarrett said:
This poem deserves more reads. Well rhymed and thoughtfully written and recognized it has a message that should be heard. Nicely done
July 29th, 2024 09:32
Nature healing
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful poetry. Lovely internal rhyme and rhythm. I have lived by the River Thames most of my life. That river flows through my veins. I resonated with your stanzas. Such a spiritual write. Thank you. Have a lovely weekend.
July 12th, 2024 13:24
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful poetry. Lovely internal rhyme and rhythm. I have lived by the River Thames most of my life. That river flows through my veins. I resonated with your stanzas. Such a spiritual write. Thank you. Have a lovely weekend.
July 12th, 2024 13:24
Protecting you
peto said:
Ouch Natalie
Although heart breaking this reads brilliantly
Very tuneful song like quality
Thoroughly enjoyed the read
June 27th, 2024 18:19
peto said:
Ouch Natalie
Although heart breaking this reads brilliantly
Very tuneful song like quality
Thoroughly enjoyed the read
June 27th, 2024 18:19
Moving forward
mvvenkataraman said:
Full of confidence and positive vibrations !
April 28th, 2024 09:14
mvvenkataraman said:
Full of confidence and positive vibrations !
April 28th, 2024 09:14
Rivers of the mind
Cassie58 said:
The river courses through my veins. It is my life blood. I appreciate the metaphor you have used here.
December 6th, 2023 02:25
Cassie58 said:
The river courses through my veins. It is my life blood. I appreciate the metaphor you have used here.
December 6th, 2023 02:25
Rivers of the mind
Cassie58 said:
The river courses through my veins. It is my life blood. I appreciate the metaphor you have used here.
December 2nd, 2023 04:32
Cassie58 said:
The river courses through my veins. It is my life blood. I appreciate the metaphor you have used here.
December 2nd, 2023 04:32
True love exist
David Wakeling said:
This was a very positive view of life.well done
November 14th, 2023 02:31
David Wakeling said:
This was a very positive view of life.well done
November 14th, 2023 02:31
Nature
Pop64 said:
Though much of nature is sculpted by nature\'s wrath, it yet remains part of the nature that we can take in and breathe out. This is a beautiful reminder of the need to take the time to smell the roses.
September 28th, 2023 08:08
Pop64 said:
Though much of nature is sculpted by nature\'s wrath, it yet remains part of the nature that we can take in and breathe out. This is a beautiful reminder of the need to take the time to smell the roses.
September 28th, 2023 08:08
New leaf
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"New leaf” by Natalie Heisey
The suffering comes through in this intense poem. The poetess pleads for her sufferings to be brought to an end. We will note the words “tears,” “endless nights,” “heartache,” “heart bleed.” There is a plea to save the love from ending. Words of hope for the future : “new seed,” new leaf,” “mend,” “start fresh.” Finally, we see the stage where the poetess sees that perhaps all is over : “it is time to let go.”
“For a heart that breaks us is not meant to grow” A philosophical ending for the poem, a realization that it is futile to hold on to something that will not work out.
Soman Ragavan. 7 September, 2023. //
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September 7th, 2023 00:21
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"New leaf” by Natalie Heisey
The suffering comes through in this intense poem. The poetess pleads for her sufferings to be brought to an end. We will note the words “tears,” “endless nights,” “heartache,” “heart bleed.” There is a plea to save the love from ending. Words of hope for the future : “new seed,” new leaf,” “mend,” “start fresh.” Finally, we see the stage where the poetess sees that perhaps all is over : “it is time to let go.”
“For a heart that breaks us is not meant to grow” A philosophical ending for the poem, a realization that it is futile to hold on to something that will not work out.
Soman Ragavan. 7 September, 2023. //
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September 7th, 2023 00:21
Shackles & chains
David Wakeling said:
This is quite powerful.A call to arms..well done
September 5th, 2023 17:00
David Wakeling said:
This is quite powerful.A call to arms..well done
September 5th, 2023 17:00
Whispering of our hearts
Pop64 said:
such beautiful and vivid imagery in this well rhyming piece. Lovely
August 24th, 2023 11:27
Pop64 said:
such beautiful and vivid imagery in this well rhyming piece. Lovely
August 24th, 2023 11:27
I cry behind my shades
Bobby O said:
Bravery is my first takeaway and then empathy that prompted a reread helped the emotional journey you shared seep in and speak. You did a good job with this project evidenced by its power to make me think and imagine the importance of that safe haven you enter as the car door clicks. Nice write good read
August 20th, 2023 22:20
Bobby O said:
Bravery is my first takeaway and then empathy that prompted a reread helped the emotional journey you shared seep in and speak. You did a good job with this project evidenced by its power to make me think and imagine the importance of that safe haven you enter as the car door clicks. Nice write good read
August 20th, 2023 22:20
I cry behind my shades
tracers95 said:
Beautiful and very well said!!! I can relate!!
August 20th, 2023 19:07
tracers95 said:
Beautiful and very well said!!! I can relate!!
August 20th, 2023 19:07
My journey
Bobby O said:
The price. Whether hidden or shouted if it reigns down w impudence in unjust form it should be tempered by those w pure agenda and that tree shaken until fair and well intention ride in their stead.
August 14th, 2023 10:35
Bobby O said:
The price. Whether hidden or shouted if it reigns down w impudence in unjust form it should be tempered by those w pure agenda and that tree shaken until fair and well intention ride in their stead.
August 14th, 2023 10:35
Rock bottom
L. B. Mek said:
humility is a a laudable trait
but
like all things, temperance is a must
so place yourself where you feel best
and live the life you want
but still, be the pebble
flowing in your river of fate
be open, to all of possibility
do not build a dam in your heart
and block what goodness
you\'ve been destined to receive
(but what do i know
just sharing my 2 cents
for what it\'s worth)
thanks for sharing
July 24th, 2023 04:02
L. B. Mek said:
humility is a a laudable trait
but
like all things, temperance is a must
so place yourself where you feel best
and live the life you want
but still, be the pebble
flowing in your river of fate
be open, to all of possibility
do not build a dam in your heart
and block what goodness
you\'ve been destined to receive
(but what do i know
just sharing my 2 cents
for what it\'s worth)
thanks for sharing
July 24th, 2023 04:02
Thank you
Natalie Heisey said:
This poem is dedicated to my boyfriend/ best friend zack ! Will not mention his last name. Private reasons.
July 20th, 2023 14:04
Natalie Heisey said:
This poem is dedicated to my boyfriend/ best friend zack ! Will not mention his last name. Private reasons.
July 20th, 2023 14:04
Nature
L. B. Mek said:
well, I too am in awe of Gaia\'s majestic sublime
but, peaceful
is a little too rose tinted a view
I think
Nature\'s, rath
is how mountains and continents
are sculpted
lol
(a lovely read, sorry if you found my my response a little negative
I meant no disrespect)
thanks for sharing
July 14th, 2023 04:55
L. B. Mek said:
well, I too am in awe of Gaia\'s majestic sublime
but, peaceful
is a little too rose tinted a view
I think
Nature\'s, rath
is how mountains and continents
are sculpted
lol
(a lovely read, sorry if you found my my response a little negative
I meant no disrespect)
thanks for sharing
July 14th, 2023 04:55
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