Comments received on poems by Natalie Heisey
Drowning
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful write about the struggles of the mind, beating yourself up all the time about things from the past, you can feel the desperate cry out for help in the read, sad and touching write
March 7th, 2025 13:39
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful write about the struggles of the mind, beating yourself up all the time about things from the past, you can feel the desperate cry out for help in the read, sad and touching write
March 7th, 2025 13:39
Drowning
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of desperation and cry for help that no one is attending to. A lovely write
March 7th, 2025 10:10
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of desperation and cry for help that no one is attending to. A lovely write
March 7th, 2025 10:10
You\'ve got my heart
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely dedication and thank you to someone special, very nicely written
February 14th, 2025 16:32
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely dedication and thank you to someone special, very nicely written
February 14th, 2025 16:32
Eachos of us
Poetic Licence said:
A strong piece, not letting the pain and hurt stop you moving forward, nicely written
February 4th, 2025 06:09
Poetic Licence said:
A strong piece, not letting the pain and hurt stop you moving forward, nicely written
February 4th, 2025 06:09
Eachos of us
sorenbarrett said:
Although hurt won\'t give up and will fight on is the theme of this poem. It feels powerful. Lovely
February 4th, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
Although hurt won\'t give up and will fight on is the theme of this poem. It feels powerful. Lovely
February 4th, 2025 04:57
Universe cries
Poetic Licence said:
A touching piece of someone feeling and struggling to cope with a lot of pain and hurt, and looking like they are doing it in silence, maybe they should talk, well written
January 24th, 2025 03:07
Poetic Licence said:
A touching piece of someone feeling and struggling to cope with a lot of pain and hurt, and looking like they are doing it in silence, maybe they should talk, well written
January 24th, 2025 03:07
Burdens
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
i assiduously accept thee as an online potential friend, and eagerly await the elegiac correspondence of course predicated on your reciprocal inquisition to allow, enable, and promote an unfettered magically reastoca;lly palpable.
adieu from matthew scott harris
situated within southeastern montgomery county, pennsylvania, united states.
postscript: i did immensely enjoy reading your poem.
September 24th, 2024 17:24
poet2rhyme4tommorrow said:
i assiduously accept thee as an online potential friend, and eagerly await the elegiac correspondence of course predicated on your reciprocal inquisition to allow, enable, and promote an unfettered magically reastoca;lly palpable.
adieu from matthew scott harris
situated within southeastern montgomery county, pennsylvania, united states.
postscript: i did immensely enjoy reading your poem.
September 24th, 2024 17:24
Harsh truths
Bobby O said:
Perfectly put forth without ego and with an honest path defined
September 20th, 2024 23:43
Bobby O said:
Perfectly put forth without ego and with an honest path defined
September 20th, 2024 23:43
In this moment
Cassie58 said:
Lyrics to a song. That is what I could hear as I read your words. Nice flow and rhyme. Much enjoyed Natalie. Love hurts. Have a good weekend.
September 14th, 2024 12:56
Cassie58 said:
Lyrics to a song. That is what I could hear as I read your words. Nice flow and rhyme. Much enjoyed Natalie. Love hurts. Have a good weekend.
September 14th, 2024 12:56
Rage reclaimed
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Loved it and read it a few times. Each time I felt the spirit of rebellion and resilience. Moreover, I am a bit retisence towards obtuse imagery as they obfuscate the message one wants to convey. The presentation of your poem seemed like straight from the heart. I enjoyed the beauty of the rawness. Advanced apologies if my interpretation is off.
September 9th, 2024 00:45
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Loved it and read it a few times. Each time I felt the spirit of rebellion and resilience. Moreover, I am a bit retisence towards obtuse imagery as they obfuscate the message one wants to convey. The presentation of your poem seemed like straight from the heart. I enjoyed the beauty of the rawness. Advanced apologies if my interpretation is off.
September 9th, 2024 00:45
Rage reclaimed
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written with excellent rhyme and meter
August 17th, 2024 18:06
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written with excellent rhyme and meter
August 17th, 2024 18:06
Temporary love
Cassie58 said:
The repetition works well here. Could be the lyrics for a song. A strong write of romance gone wrong and then of lessons learned and moving on.
August 14th, 2024 19:06
Cassie58 said:
The repetition works well here. Could be the lyrics for a song. A strong write of romance gone wrong and then of lessons learned and moving on.
August 14th, 2024 19:06
Temporary love
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message. Love a misunderstood word too general to apply in all cases. Powerfully written. True love is not temporary.
August 14th, 2024 11:31
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message. Love a misunderstood word too general to apply in all cases. Powerfully written. True love is not temporary.
August 14th, 2024 11:31
Letting you in
Cassie58 said:
A leopard doesn’t change its spots. A poem that has strength and healing in its lines. Once bitten …. Well penned. Happy Tuesday.
August 13th, 2024 12:47
Cassie58 said:
A leopard doesn’t change its spots. A poem that has strength and healing in its lines. Once bitten …. Well penned. Happy Tuesday.
August 13th, 2024 12:47
Letting you in
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds of pain beat the percussion to this poem. The harmony is dissonant and I hear the screams of heavy metal.
August 13th, 2024 08:36
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds of pain beat the percussion to this poem. The harmony is dissonant and I hear the screams of heavy metal.
August 13th, 2024 08:36
Betrayal by you
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel the anger in this write. It breaths and beats until the final line.
August 8th, 2024 07:19
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel the anger in this write. It breaths and beats until the final line.
August 8th, 2024 07:19
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