Comments received on poems by Natalie Heisey
Magic
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Interesting and nicely expressed poem 🙂
July 4th, 2023 01:26
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Interesting and nicely expressed poem 🙂
July 4th, 2023 01:26
I\'ll find my way
Bobby O said:
That’s a real nice piece. Phrasing succinct and joyful end. I’m a fan.
June 12th, 2023 21:57
Bobby O said:
That’s a real nice piece. Phrasing succinct and joyful end. I’m a fan.
June 12th, 2023 21:57
Bravery
mvvenkataraman said:
In the eighth line, it is \"were\"
In the 16th line, it is \"lose\"
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Your poem is a feast to read,
It is a wonderful free verse indeed,
You have aptly defined bravery,
Remarkable reply to someone,
Who tries to bully you in some way,
Please carry on to write like this
And augment the courage of others,
A remarkable poem with no rhyme
To prove rhyming is never a must!
January 3rd, 2023 12:53
mvvenkataraman said:
In the eighth line, it is \"were\"
In the 16th line, it is \"lose\"
-
Your poem is a feast to read,
It is a wonderful free verse indeed,
You have aptly defined bravery,
Remarkable reply to someone,
Who tries to bully you in some way,
Please carry on to write like this
And augment the courage of others,
A remarkable poem with no rhyme
To prove rhyming is never a must!
January 3rd, 2023 12:53
Emotional
M. J. Smith said:
And for me, it\'s 1991 again. After the messy break up, I don\'t know who or what I am. That which has so long defined my life is gone. I climb on a bicycle and spend the next year on the road. Well, I was young and foolish. But I relate to this. aren\'t we all messed up to some degree with the way things are now?
March 25th, 2022 16:29
M. J. Smith said:
And for me, it\'s 1991 again. After the messy break up, I don\'t know who or what I am. That which has so long defined my life is gone. I climb on a bicycle and spend the next year on the road. Well, I was young and foolish. But I relate to this. aren\'t we all messed up to some degree with the way things are now?
March 25th, 2022 16:29
Demons unleashed
Ivy Madara said:
When you say \"Time for me to shine in the clouds\" do you mean it\'s time to get closer to the subjects \'heaven\' and dare to fight back? or is it time for you to finally have the peace and freedom of the clouds?
March 10th, 2022 00:17
Ivy Madara said:
When you say \"Time for me to shine in the clouds\" do you mean it\'s time to get closer to the subjects \'heaven\' and dare to fight back? or is it time for you to finally have the peace and freedom of the clouds?
March 10th, 2022 00:17
Players game
Rocky Lagou said:
Amen, what a mantra to self and an uplifting message. We have to learn our own worth and not allow ourselves to be deceived. Good job! ✨
March 2nd, 2022 13:33
Rocky Lagou said:
Amen, what a mantra to self and an uplifting message. We have to learn our own worth and not allow ourselves to be deceived. Good job! ✨
March 2nd, 2022 13:33
your not right for me
dusk arising said:
Reading between the lines it must have hurt lots to write this. It\'s very powerful and sad.
You deserve better.
Well written and quite moving.
March 17th, 2020 23:55
dusk arising said:
Reading between the lines it must have hurt lots to write this. It\'s very powerful and sad.
You deserve better.
Well written and quite moving.
March 17th, 2020 23:55
give me one good reason
ron parrish aka wordman said:
give and take,it takes two
October 30th, 2019 20:13
ron parrish aka wordman said:
give and take,it takes two
October 30th, 2019 20:13
ungrateful
Natalie Heisey said:
Everything I write is my,life its what I live in an I have gained a lot of strength to leave but its complicated i dont want to loose my home I bought thru my accident sellement so I need a room mate to help me,keep what I have till I save up to get by on my own
October 24th, 2017 11:15
Natalie Heisey said:
Everything I write is my,life its what I live in an I have gained a lot of strength to leave but its complicated i dont want to loose my home I bought thru my accident sellement so I need a room mate to help me,keep what I have till I save up to get by on my own
October 24th, 2017 11:15
ungrateful
WL Schuett said:
Lots of emotions if this is your life make it happen... you seem to have the strength and conviction, you wrote the letter that’s the first step . Will you take more ?
October 22nd, 2017 07:29
WL Schuett said:
Lots of emotions if this is your life make it happen... you seem to have the strength and conviction, you wrote the letter that’s the first step . Will you take more ?
October 22nd, 2017 07:29
ungrateful
Christina8 said:
Wow, this is a good write and it\'s gonna take some real strength to get through this, but you will and you can! Great last line!
October 21st, 2017 19:25
Christina8 said:
Wow, this is a good write and it\'s gonna take some real strength to get through this, but you will and you can! Great last line!
October 21st, 2017 19:25
love & hate
WL Schuett said:
A whole lot of inner turmoil brought forth in verse , hope you find your peace
October 20th, 2017 22:27
WL Schuett said:
A whole lot of inner turmoil brought forth in verse , hope you find your peace
October 20th, 2017 22:27
Darken dens
WL Schuett said:
Nat this is very emotional I can feel what you\'re writing and that\'s a gift . I would like to see you use spell check and take a little more time with your grammar, it will make your poems more readable and make you a better poet !
October 15th, 2017 09:11
WL Schuett said:
Nat this is very emotional I can feel what you\'re writing and that\'s a gift . I would like to see you use spell check and take a little more time with your grammar, it will make your poems more readable and make you a better poet !
October 15th, 2017 09:11
Haunted
Natalie Heisey said:
Its suppose to be written not witting sorry bout that everyone,my phone messes up my spelleing all the time
September 28th, 2017 15:03
Natalie Heisey said:
Its suppose to be written not witting sorry bout that everyone,my phone messes up my spelleing all the time
September 28th, 2017 15:03
Rose peddle
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME NAT ~ Thanks for your first POEM an elegant write but a sad sad tale ! It happens to all of us ~ in LIFE & LOVE ~ one way and another ~ so we can emphasise as SUNFLOWERS has already indicated. ROSES always speak of LOVE but it is sad when the peddles fall and crumble. Things and relationships we once considered PERMANENT ~ become TRANSIENT and fade and die ! MEN always say \"Better to have loved & lost than never to have loved at all\" but it seems harder for Ladies. Thanks for sharing & caring ~ YOURS BRIAN (UK)
September 27th, 2017 09:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME NAT ~ Thanks for your first POEM an elegant write but a sad sad tale ! It happens to all of us ~ in LIFE & LOVE ~ one way and another ~ so we can emphasise as SUNFLOWERS has already indicated. ROSES always speak of LOVE but it is sad when the peddles fall and crumble. Things and relationships we once considered PERMANENT ~ become TRANSIENT and fade and die ! MEN always say \"Better to have loved & lost than never to have loved at all\" but it seems harder for Ladies. Thanks for sharing & caring ~ YOURS BRIAN (UK)
September 27th, 2017 09:59
Rose peddle
Sunflowers Bloom said:
I really, really reeeaallyy liked this poem. I felt it. so deep and so pure, honest. It kind of shaked me and I also feel its because I can relate some kind of way. true soul speaking. I loved it
September 27th, 2017 09:23
Sunflowers Bloom said:
I really, really reeeaallyy liked this poem. I felt it. so deep and so pure, honest. It kind of shaked me and I also feel its because I can relate some kind of way. true soul speaking. I loved it
September 27th, 2017 09:23
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