Comments received on poems by Natalie Heisey
your not right for me
dusk arising said:
Reading between the lines it must have hurt lots to write this. It\'s very powerful and sad.
You deserve better.
Well written and quite moving.
March 17th, 2020 23:55
dusk arising said:
Reading between the lines it must have hurt lots to write this. It\'s very powerful and sad.
You deserve better.
Well written and quite moving.
March 17th, 2020 23:55
give me one good reason
ron parrish aka wordman said:
give and take,it takes two
October 30th, 2019 20:13
ron parrish aka wordman said:
give and take,it takes two
October 30th, 2019 20:13
ungrateful
Natalie Heisey said:
Everything I write is my,life its what I live in an I have gained a lot of strength to leave but its complicated i dont want to loose my home I bought thru my accident sellement so I need a room mate to help me,keep what I have till I save up to get by on my own
October 24th, 2017 11:15
Natalie Heisey said:
Everything I write is my,life its what I live in an I have gained a lot of strength to leave but its complicated i dont want to loose my home I bought thru my accident sellement so I need a room mate to help me,keep what I have till I save up to get by on my own
October 24th, 2017 11:15
ungrateful
WL Schuett said:
Lots of emotions if this is your life make it happen... you seem to have the strength and conviction, you wrote the letter that’s the first step . Will you take more ?
October 22nd, 2017 07:29
WL Schuett said:
Lots of emotions if this is your life make it happen... you seem to have the strength and conviction, you wrote the letter that’s the first step . Will you take more ?
October 22nd, 2017 07:29
ungrateful
Christina8 said:
Wow, this is a good write and it\'s gonna take some real strength to get through this, but you will and you can! Great last line!
October 21st, 2017 19:25
Christina8 said:
Wow, this is a good write and it\'s gonna take some real strength to get through this, but you will and you can! Great last line!
October 21st, 2017 19:25
love & hate
WL Schuett said:
A whole lot of inner turmoil brought forth in verse , hope you find your peace
October 20th, 2017 22:27
WL Schuett said:
A whole lot of inner turmoil brought forth in verse , hope you find your peace
October 20th, 2017 22:27
Darken dens
WL Schuett said:
Nat this is very emotional I can feel what you\'re writing and that\'s a gift . I would like to see you use spell check and take a little more time with your grammar, it will make your poems more readable and make you a better poet !
October 15th, 2017 09:11
WL Schuett said:
Nat this is very emotional I can feel what you\'re writing and that\'s a gift . I would like to see you use spell check and take a little more time with your grammar, it will make your poems more readable and make you a better poet !
October 15th, 2017 09:11
Haunted
Natalie Heisey said:
Its suppose to be written not witting sorry bout that everyone,my phone messes up my spelleing all the time
September 28th, 2017 15:03
Natalie Heisey said:
Its suppose to be written not witting sorry bout that everyone,my phone messes up my spelleing all the time
September 28th, 2017 15:03
Rose peddle
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME NAT ~ Thanks for your first POEM an elegant write but a sad sad tale ! It happens to all of us ~ in LIFE & LOVE ~ one way and another ~ so we can emphasise as SUNFLOWERS has already indicated. ROSES always speak of LOVE but it is sad when the peddles fall and crumble. Things and relationships we once considered PERMANENT ~ become TRANSIENT and fade and die ! MEN always say \"Better to have loved & lost than never to have loved at all\" but it seems harder for Ladies. Thanks for sharing & caring ~ YOURS BRIAN (UK)
September 27th, 2017 09:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME NAT ~ Thanks for your first POEM an elegant write but a sad sad tale ! It happens to all of us ~ in LIFE & LOVE ~ one way and another ~ so we can emphasise as SUNFLOWERS has already indicated. ROSES always speak of LOVE but it is sad when the peddles fall and crumble. Things and relationships we once considered PERMANENT ~ become TRANSIENT and fade and die ! MEN always say \"Better to have loved & lost than never to have loved at all\" but it seems harder for Ladies. Thanks for sharing & caring ~ YOURS BRIAN (UK)
September 27th, 2017 09:59
Rose peddle
Sunflowers Bloom said:
I really, really reeeaallyy liked this poem. I felt it. so deep and so pure, honest. It kind of shaked me and I also feel its because I can relate some kind of way. true soul speaking. I loved it
September 27th, 2017 09:23
Sunflowers Bloom said:
I really, really reeeaallyy liked this poem. I felt it. so deep and so pure, honest. It kind of shaked me and I also feel its because I can relate some kind of way. true soul speaking. I loved it
September 27th, 2017 09:23
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