Comments received on poems by Natalie Heisey
You\'re time is up
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the song with chorus and all. There is plenty of anger and looking for revenge. Well written
September 23rd, 2026 20:18
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the song with chorus and all. There is plenty of anger and looking for revenge. Well written
September 23rd, 2026 20:18
Your silence
sorenbarrett said:
The good and bad parts of a person that won\'t communicate. Nicely written
September 21st, 2026 20:13
sorenbarrett said:
The good and bad parts of a person that won\'t communicate. Nicely written
September 21st, 2026 20:13
Standing in the ash
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of betrayal and pain fill this piece. Nicely done
September 20th, 2026 15:22
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings of betrayal and pain fill this piece. Nicely done
September 20th, 2026 15:22
Prison in my own mind
Fränz Müller said:
We often wall ourselves off from others in prisons we build with our own two hands. Well done.
September 16th, 2026 19:52
Fränz Müller said:
We often wall ourselves off from others in prisons we build with our own two hands. Well done.
September 16th, 2026 19:52
Prison in my own mind
sorenbarrett said:
A great write that seems a song. Nicely done
September 16th, 2026 19:39
sorenbarrett said:
A great write that seems a song. Nicely done
September 16th, 2026 19:39
Demons playground
sorenbarrett said:
This one gives no hope and is dark in nature. The rhyme draws one along and gives the poem power and force. Nicely done
September 15th, 2026 04:24
sorenbarrett said:
This one gives no hope and is dark in nature. The rhyme draws one along and gives the poem power and force. Nicely done
September 15th, 2026 04:24
Win or loose
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a song in poetic form with good rhyme and meter. Nicely composed
September 13th, 2026 07:40
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a song in poetic form with good rhyme and meter. Nicely composed
September 13th, 2026 07:40
Pull the trigger
sorenbarrett said:
So well rhymed in flowing form it gets a fave from me with a great stand taken. Well done
September 11th, 2026 16:21
sorenbarrett said:
So well rhymed in flowing form it gets a fave from me with a great stand taken. Well done
September 11th, 2026 16:21
Pull the trigger
Paul Bell said:
There comes a time when you just have to go.
Drink is a cruel friend, unfortunetly it becomes the only friend you have when people walk away.
September 11th, 2026 13:42
Paul Bell said:
There comes a time when you just have to go.
Drink is a cruel friend, unfortunetly it becomes the only friend you have when people walk away.
September 11th, 2026 13:42
I\'m anchored by you
sorenbarrett said:
This a lovely poetic song very well written with chorus
September 10th, 2026 21:01
sorenbarrett said:
This a lovely poetic song very well written with chorus
September 10th, 2026 21:01
More to me than you
Fränz Müller said:
I love the rhythm and the message in this one!
September 2nd, 2026 16:50
Fränz Müller said:
I love the rhythm and the message in this one!
September 2nd, 2026 16:50
More to me than you
Paul Bell said:
The takers take, the givers give more.
Seems to me you\'ve finally woke up and realised this. Kudos to you.
September 2nd, 2026 07:21
Paul Bell said:
The takers take, the givers give more.
Seems to me you\'ve finally woke up and realised this. Kudos to you.
September 2nd, 2026 07:21
More to me than you
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of giving too much to others and not enough to oneself. The line if you don\'t love me at my lowest is a powerful one.
September 1st, 2026 14:57
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of giving too much to others and not enough to oneself. The line if you don\'t love me at my lowest is a powerful one.
September 1st, 2026 14:57
Cold & hidden sun
sorenbarrett said:
A powerfully positive write. Nicely written
August 22nd, 2026 11:55
sorenbarrett said:
A powerfully positive write. Nicely written
August 22nd, 2026 11:55
Washing my sins
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of redemption and salvation nicely written in rhyme. Well done.
August 18th, 2026 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of redemption and salvation nicely written in rhyme. Well done.
August 18th, 2026 03:54
I am rare
sorenbarrett said:
An offer of loyalty and service in this poem nicely written with internal rhyme.
August 5th, 2026 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
An offer of loyalty and service in this poem nicely written with internal rhyme.
August 5th, 2026 03:50
The wildfire heart
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a hard life and what remains. Nicely worded with rhyme and near rhyme well done
July 24th, 2026 15:40
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a hard life and what remains. Nicely worded with rhyme and near rhyme well done
July 24th, 2026 15:40
Deceit & Death
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write on deceit and treachery well planed and orchestrated that is seen as betrayal. Well written
July 5th, 2026 11:50
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write on deceit and treachery well planed and orchestrated that is seen as betrayal. Well written
July 5th, 2026 11:50
Heavy heart
2781 said:
He loves those that love him to a thousand generations x
June 29th, 2026 07:03
2781 said:
He loves those that love him to a thousand generations x
June 29th, 2026 07:03
Heavy heart
sorenbarrett said:
Life can be a storm and with it one can fill one\'s sails or become shipwrecked the choice sometimes ours and sometimes not. A lovely write
June 29th, 2026 06:53
sorenbarrett said:
Life can be a storm and with it one can fill one\'s sails or become shipwrecked the choice sometimes ours and sometimes not. A lovely write
June 29th, 2026 06:53
Had it all ?
peto said:
Magical
Loved the chorus
And the rhyme is magnificent
A superb write
June 23rd, 2026 21:40
peto said:
Magical
Loved the chorus
And the rhyme is magnificent
A superb write
June 23rd, 2026 21:40
Had it all ?
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of defiance and as noted in the poem itself a war cry. This poem of assertion cries out of injustice that needs to be righted. Well written where its power can be felt in its words.
June 23rd, 2026 06:57
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of defiance and as noted in the poem itself a war cry. This poem of assertion cries out of injustice that needs to be righted. Well written where its power can be felt in its words.
June 23rd, 2026 06:57
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