Comments received on poems by Natalie Heisey
Lonely night 🌙
sorenbarrett said:
The poem speaks well of being used and feeling used then leaving the relationship after realization
December 28th, 2025 09:33
sorenbarrett said:
The poem speaks well of being used and feeling used then leaving the relationship after realization
December 28th, 2025 09:33
Train wreck
sorenbarrett said:
This poem utilizes the repetition of the term Trainwreck to emphasize the message of the poem, very nicely constructed. It makes its point well.
December 10th, 2025 13:37
sorenbarrett said:
This poem utilizes the repetition of the term Trainwreck to emphasize the message of the poem, very nicely constructed. It makes its point well.
December 10th, 2025 13:37
Sunrise
Soman Ragavan said:
You rightly have that \"will live, will struggle\" mindset. Way to go ! Happy birthday on 15 October. You are Libra, like me...
October 16th, 2025 05:35
Soman Ragavan said:
You rightly have that \"will live, will struggle\" mindset. Way to go ! Happy birthday on 15 October. You are Libra, like me...
October 16th, 2025 05:35
Sunrise
sorenbarrett said:
Bright and positive this poem extols the virtues of love, not just romantic love, but that for fellow man and all around us. A wonderful write.
October 15th, 2025 10:13
sorenbarrett said:
Bright and positive this poem extols the virtues of love, not just romantic love, but that for fellow man and all around us. A wonderful write.
October 15th, 2025 10:13
wasn\'t enough
sorenbarrett said:
The chorus sounds strong in this poem that could be a song. Nicely done
October 7th, 2025 08:42
sorenbarrett said:
The chorus sounds strong in this poem that could be a song. Nicely done
October 7th, 2025 08:42
Ghosting you
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Especially loved the line \"This ain\'t redemption, just a fading yesterday.\".
September 20th, 2025 10:05
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Especially loved the line \"This ain\'t redemption, just a fading yesterday.\".
September 20th, 2025 10:05
Secrets reside
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of ghosts haunting a place. There is a sense of anxiety and sadness in this poem. Nicely written
September 18th, 2025 11:02
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of ghosts haunting a place. There is a sense of anxiety and sadness in this poem. Nicely written
September 18th, 2025 11:02
Ghosting you
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Visual and Visceral imagery and relentless rhythm make the anger feel immediate and unstoppable. Nicely written.
September 18th, 2025 08:06
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Visual and Visceral imagery and relentless rhythm make the anger feel immediate and unstoppable. Nicely written.
September 18th, 2025 08:06
Ghosting you
sorenbarrett said:
A poem or song of being hurt and retribution. Nicely done
September 18th, 2025 03:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem or song of being hurt and retribution. Nicely done
September 18th, 2025 03:42
Truth lives on
Doggerel Dave said:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Charlie_Kirk
All that makes sense and is good to you?
September 12th, 2025 06:01
Doggerel Dave said:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Charlie_Kirk
All that makes sense and is good to you?
September 12th, 2025 06:01
Truth lives on
sorenbarrett said:
A tribute to a man that stood for things that others could not abide and sadly assassinated as many before him. A powerful write
September 11th, 2025 13:35
sorenbarrett said:
A tribute to a man that stood for things that others could not abide and sadly assassinated as many before him. A powerful write
September 11th, 2025 13:35
Loyalty\'s promise
sorenbarrett said:
A broken world indeed and nicely written
September 1st, 2025 13:21
sorenbarrett said:
A broken world indeed and nicely written
September 1st, 2025 13:21
Cant save pain
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of demons imprisoning their mind and pushing them towards Insanity, but written like a song, nicely done
August 17th, 2025 17:19
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of demons imprisoning their mind and pushing them towards Insanity, but written like a song, nicely done
August 17th, 2025 17:19
Cant save pain
sorenbarrett said:
The format of this poem is like a song. I feel the madness. Lovely
August 17th, 2025 16:55
sorenbarrett said:
The format of this poem is like a song. I feel the madness. Lovely
August 17th, 2025 16:55
Good vibes
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely expressed write of moving on through difficulties, finding hope and the strength to live the life they want and deserve, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 23:29
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely expressed write of moving on through difficulties, finding hope and the strength to live the life they want and deserve, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 23:29
Good vibes
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem of dualities and hope. Very nicely written. Loved it
July 23rd, 2025 18:10
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem of dualities and hope. Very nicely written. Loved it
July 23rd, 2025 18:10
This world
sorenbarrett said:
A voice calling for peace in a violent and hateful world. I hear you and echo the call. Nicely done
July 12th, 2025 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
A voice calling for peace in a violent and hateful world. I hear you and echo the call. Nicely done
July 12th, 2025 04:47
broken peace
sorenbarrett said:
Vacillating emotional intensity between need for intimacy and fear of engulfment captivates this poem and shouts out into a void for acknowledgement and help that never comes. Never comfortable either too close of too far away. Terrifying. Well written
June 21st, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Vacillating emotional intensity between need for intimacy and fear of engulfment captivates this poem and shouts out into a void for acknowledgement and help that never comes. Never comfortable either too close of too far away. Terrifying. Well written
June 21st, 2025 04:18
Fake/truth
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that leaves me with feelings of anger and resolve that will not bend. Nicely done
June 7th, 2025 13:06
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that leaves me with feelings of anger and resolve that will not bend. Nicely done
June 7th, 2025 13:06
Flicker of light
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric this poem speaks to the difficulty of finding hope and the continual search for it. Nicely imaged and worded it has an anxious feel to it. Lovely
June 3rd, 2025 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric this poem speaks to the difficulty of finding hope and the continual search for it. Nicely imaged and worded it has an anxious feel to it. Lovely
June 3rd, 2025 03:44
Honor
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful tribute in most poetic form. Good rhyme and easy flow made this poem nice to read. An enjoyable read.
May 25th, 2025 11:34
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful tribute in most poetic form. Good rhyme and easy flow made this poem nice to read. An enjoyable read.
May 25th, 2025 11:34
Honor
Poetic Licence said:
Just a beautiful piece of writing and dedication to those who sacrifice so much, we should also remember those who returned and faced different and difficult battles, wonderful write
May 25th, 2025 11:32
Poetic Licence said:
Just a beautiful piece of writing and dedication to those who sacrifice so much, we should also remember those who returned and faced different and difficult battles, wonderful write
May 25th, 2025 11:32
SHAMAN\'S ❤️
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write describing the tale of a shaman, has a really nice flow to the writing, enjoyed the read
May 20th, 2025 02:19
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write describing the tale of a shaman, has a really nice flow to the writing, enjoyed the read
May 20th, 2025 02:19
SHAMAN\'S ❤️
sorenbarrett said:
Such lovely flow in this poem with great rhyme with a good tale of a Shaman. Very nice
May 19th, 2025 15:47
sorenbarrett said:
Such lovely flow in this poem with great rhyme with a good tale of a Shaman. Very nice
May 19th, 2025 15:47
CrAvE
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries with it a feeling of oppressive sheltering and the urge to break free and be oneself. Nicely written it could well be a song with the chorus .
April 17th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries with it a feeling of oppressive sheltering and the urge to break free and be oneself. Nicely written it could well be a song with the chorus .
April 17th, 2025 04:26
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