Comments received on poems by Natalie Heisey
Burdens
rew4er2nail said:
i assiduously accept thee as an online potential friend, and eagerly await the elegiac correspondence of course predicated on your reciprocal inquisition to allow, enable, and promote an unfettered magically reastoca;lly palpable.
adieu from matthew scott harris
situated within southeastern montgomery county, pennsylvania, united states.
postscript: i did immensely enjoy reading your poem.
September 24th, 2024 17:24
rew4er2nail said:
i assiduously accept thee as an online potential friend, and eagerly await the elegiac correspondence of course predicated on your reciprocal inquisition to allow, enable, and promote an unfettered magically reastoca;lly palpable.
adieu from matthew scott harris
situated within southeastern montgomery county, pennsylvania, united states.
postscript: i did immensely enjoy reading your poem.
September 24th, 2024 17:24
Harsh truths
Bobby O said:
Perfectly put forth without ego and with an honest path defined
September 20th, 2024 23:43
Bobby O said:
Perfectly put forth without ego and with an honest path defined
September 20th, 2024 23:43
In this moment
Cassie58 said:
Lyrics to a song. That is what I could hear as I read your words. Nice flow and rhyme. Much enjoyed Natalie. Love hurts. Have a good weekend.
September 14th, 2024 12:56
Cassie58 said:
Lyrics to a song. That is what I could hear as I read your words. Nice flow and rhyme. Much enjoyed Natalie. Love hurts. Have a good weekend.
September 14th, 2024 12:56
Rage reclaimed
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Loved it and read it a few times. Each time I felt the spirit of rebellion and resilience. Moreover, I am a bit retisence towards obtuse imagery as they obfuscate the message one wants to convey. The presentation of your poem seemed like straight from the heart. I enjoyed the beauty of the rawness. Advanced apologies if my interpretation is off.
September 9th, 2024 00:45
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Loved it and read it a few times. Each time I felt the spirit of rebellion and resilience. Moreover, I am a bit retisence towards obtuse imagery as they obfuscate the message one wants to convey. The presentation of your poem seemed like straight from the heart. I enjoyed the beauty of the rawness. Advanced apologies if my interpretation is off.
September 9th, 2024 00:45
Rage reclaimed
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written with excellent rhyme and meter
August 17th, 2024 18:06
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written with excellent rhyme and meter
August 17th, 2024 18:06
Temporary love
Cassie58 said:
The repetition works well here. Could be the lyrics for a song. A strong write of romance gone wrong and then of lessons learned and moving on.
August 14th, 2024 19:06
Cassie58 said:
The repetition works well here. Could be the lyrics for a song. A strong write of romance gone wrong and then of lessons learned and moving on.
August 14th, 2024 19:06
Temporary love
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message. Love a misunderstood word too general to apply in all cases. Powerfully written. True love is not temporary.
August 14th, 2024 11:31
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message. Love a misunderstood word too general to apply in all cases. Powerfully written. True love is not temporary.
August 14th, 2024 11:31
Letting you in
Cassie58 said:
A leopard doesn’t change its spots. A poem that has strength and healing in its lines. Once bitten …. Well penned. Happy Tuesday.
August 13th, 2024 12:47
Cassie58 said:
A leopard doesn’t change its spots. A poem that has strength and healing in its lines. Once bitten …. Well penned. Happy Tuesday.
August 13th, 2024 12:47
Letting you in
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds of pain beat the percussion to this poem. The harmony is dissonant and I hear the screams of heavy metal.
August 13th, 2024 08:36
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds of pain beat the percussion to this poem. The harmony is dissonant and I hear the screams of heavy metal.
August 13th, 2024 08:36
Betrayal by you
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel the anger in this write. It breaths and beats until the final line.
August 8th, 2024 07:19
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel the anger in this write. It breaths and beats until the final line.
August 8th, 2024 07:19
Betrayal by you
Doggerel Dave said:
Got to realise not everyone in the world is perfect.... and perhaps try to redefine what loving someone really is.
August 8th, 2024 06:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Got to realise not everyone in the world is perfect.... and perhaps try to redefine what loving someone really is.
August 8th, 2024 06:17
Blood & sweat
sorenbarrett said:
A battle cry or war cry this sounds out loud and clear. Nicely done
August 7th, 2024 08:46
sorenbarrett said:
A battle cry or war cry this sounds out loud and clear. Nicely done
August 7th, 2024 08:46
Blood & sweat
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Wow, what a fighting spirit! I am a fighter and respect those with the courage to fight against all odds. Keep writing and providing inspiration
August 7th, 2024 08:13
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Wow, what a fighting spirit! I am a fighter and respect those with the courage to fight against all odds. Keep writing and providing inspiration
August 7th, 2024 08:13
We rise again
sorenbarrett said:
A call to fight onward. Animating and a pleasure to read. Very nice.
August 6th, 2024 17:02
sorenbarrett said:
A call to fight onward. Animating and a pleasure to read. Very nice.
August 6th, 2024 17:02
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