Comments received on poems by Natalie Heisey
Nature
Pop64 said:
Though much of nature is sculpted by nature\'s wrath, it yet remains part of the nature that we can take in and breathe out. This is a beautiful reminder of the need to take the time to smell the roses.
September 28th, 2023 08:08
Pop64 said:
Though much of nature is sculpted by nature\'s wrath, it yet remains part of the nature that we can take in and breathe out. This is a beautiful reminder of the need to take the time to smell the roses.
September 28th, 2023 08:08
New leaf
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"New leaf” by Natalie Heisey
The suffering comes through in this intense poem. The poetess pleads for her sufferings to be brought to an end. We will note the words “tears,” “endless nights,” “heartache,” “heart bleed.” There is a plea to save the love from ending. Words of hope for the future : “new seed,” new leaf,” “mend,” “start fresh.” Finally, we see the stage where the poetess sees that perhaps all is over : “it is time to let go.”
“For a heart that breaks us is not meant to grow” A philosophical ending for the poem, a realization that it is futile to hold on to something that will not work out.
Soman Ragavan. 7 September, 2023. //
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September 7th, 2023 00:21
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"New leaf” by Natalie Heisey
The suffering comes through in this intense poem. The poetess pleads for her sufferings to be brought to an end. We will note the words “tears,” “endless nights,” “heartache,” “heart bleed.” There is a plea to save the love from ending. Words of hope for the future : “new seed,” new leaf,” “mend,” “start fresh.” Finally, we see the stage where the poetess sees that perhaps all is over : “it is time to let go.”
“For a heart that breaks us is not meant to grow” A philosophical ending for the poem, a realization that it is futile to hold on to something that will not work out.
Soman Ragavan. 7 September, 2023. //
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September 7th, 2023 00:21
Shackles & chains
David Wakeling said:
This is quite powerful.A call to arms..well done
September 5th, 2023 17:00
David Wakeling said:
This is quite powerful.A call to arms..well done
September 5th, 2023 17:00
Whispering of our hearts
Pop64 said:
such beautiful and vivid imagery in this well rhyming piece. Lovely
August 24th, 2023 11:27
Pop64 said:
such beautiful and vivid imagery in this well rhyming piece. Lovely
August 24th, 2023 11:27
I cry behind my shades
Bobby O said:
Bravery is my first takeaway and then empathy that prompted a reread helped the emotional journey you shared seep in and speak. You did a good job with this project evidenced by its power to make me think and imagine the importance of that safe haven you enter as the car door clicks. Nice write good read
August 20th, 2023 22:20
Bobby O said:
Bravery is my first takeaway and then empathy that prompted a reread helped the emotional journey you shared seep in and speak. You did a good job with this project evidenced by its power to make me think and imagine the importance of that safe haven you enter as the car door clicks. Nice write good read
August 20th, 2023 22:20
I cry behind my shades
tracers95 said:
Beautiful and very well said!!! I can relate!!
August 20th, 2023 19:07
tracers95 said:
Beautiful and very well said!!! I can relate!!
August 20th, 2023 19:07
My journey
Bobby O said:
The price. Whether hidden or shouted if it reigns down w impudence in unjust form it should be tempered by those w pure agenda and that tree shaken until fair and well intention ride in their stead.
August 14th, 2023 10:35
Bobby O said:
The price. Whether hidden or shouted if it reigns down w impudence in unjust form it should be tempered by those w pure agenda and that tree shaken until fair and well intention ride in their stead.
August 14th, 2023 10:35
Rock bottom
L. B. Mek said:
humility is a a laudable trait
but
like all things, temperance is a must
so place yourself where you feel best
and live the life you want
but still, be the pebble
flowing in your river of fate
be open, to all of possibility
do not build a dam in your heart
and block what goodness
you\'ve been destined to receive
(but what do i know
just sharing my 2 cents
for what it\'s worth)
thanks for sharing
July 24th, 2023 04:02
L. B. Mek said:
humility is a a laudable trait
but
like all things, temperance is a must
so place yourself where you feel best
and live the life you want
but still, be the pebble
flowing in your river of fate
be open, to all of possibility
do not build a dam in your heart
and block what goodness
you\'ve been destined to receive
(but what do i know
just sharing my 2 cents
for what it\'s worth)
thanks for sharing
July 24th, 2023 04:02
Thank you
Natalie Heisey said:
This poem is dedicated to my boyfriend/ best friend zack ! Will not mention his last name. Private reasons.
July 20th, 2023 14:04
Natalie Heisey said:
This poem is dedicated to my boyfriend/ best friend zack ! Will not mention his last name. Private reasons.
July 20th, 2023 14:04
Nature
L. B. Mek said:
well, I too am in awe of Gaia\'s majestic sublime
but, peaceful
is a little too rose tinted a view
I think
Nature\'s, rath
is how mountains and continents
are sculpted
lol
(a lovely read, sorry if you found my my response a little negative
I meant no disrespect)
thanks for sharing
July 14th, 2023 04:55
L. B. Mek said:
well, I too am in awe of Gaia\'s majestic sublime
but, peaceful
is a little too rose tinted a view
I think
Nature\'s, rath
is how mountains and continents
are sculpted
lol
(a lovely read, sorry if you found my my response a little negative
I meant no disrespect)
thanks for sharing
July 14th, 2023 04:55
tell me something
Caring dove said:
Interesting and nicely expressed poem .. sometimes we are too much in our ‘ ego ‘
July 12th, 2023 00:41
Caring dove said:
Interesting and nicely expressed poem .. sometimes we are too much in our ‘ ego ‘
July 12th, 2023 00:41
Sunshine happiness
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing ))
Sunshine happiness is the way to go
Love this line
Really nice poem liked reading
July 12th, 2023 00:38
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing ))
Sunshine happiness is the way to go
Love this line
Really nice poem liked reading
July 12th, 2023 00:38
Butterfly
Caring dove said:
Lovely poem like the ending line .. the butterfly sounds strong ))
July 12th, 2023 00:27
Caring dove said:
Lovely poem like the ending line .. the butterfly sounds strong ))
July 12th, 2023 00:27
Drunken tears
Garth Rakumakoe said:
The plight of the challenged human spirit, faced with regressive obstacles cloaked as coping mechanisms can ever so often present to our fallible selves as insurmountable... Pieces like these are boot strap hopes and rays of light much needed by many out there... Peace, healing and blessings your way, dear writer.
July 11th, 2023 09:22
Garth Rakumakoe said:
The plight of the challenged human spirit, faced with regressive obstacles cloaked as coping mechanisms can ever so often present to our fallible selves as insurmountable... Pieces like these are boot strap hopes and rays of light much needed by many out there... Peace, healing and blessings your way, dear writer.
July 11th, 2023 09:22
Victory song!
sonal monhyung said:
Enjoy the way you are going .you will find your day one time .
July 10th, 2023 04:54
sonal monhyung said:
Enjoy the way you are going .you will find your day one time .
July 10th, 2023 04:54
Victory song!
L. B. Mek said:
more to power you, stay strong!
thanks for sharing
July 10th, 2023 04:25
L. B. Mek said:
more to power you, stay strong!
thanks for sharing
July 10th, 2023 04:25
Victory song!
peto said:
A lot of fear mentioned here
But ends very positive
I\'ll join in the chorus
Keep singing and you will be running never mind standing on your own 2 feet
Enjoyed
July 9th, 2023 18:32
peto said:
A lot of fear mentioned here
But ends very positive
I\'ll join in the chorus
Keep singing and you will be running never mind standing on your own 2 feet
Enjoyed
July 9th, 2023 18:32
My life
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"My life” by Nathalie Heisey
One often sees on this site stories of how people suffer in silence, trying to cope with a difficult life. It is sad to cry in silence. So many people around, but nobody seems to care. Even our mind turns against us, and it is a thing one can hardly fight against. Even struggling to stay sane is an uphill battle. So, do keep writing on this site; people will sympathize with you. Best wishes and take care. Do not give up hope. Soman Ragavan. 6 July, 2023. //
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July 6th, 2023 07:15
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"My life” by Nathalie Heisey
One often sees on this site stories of how people suffer in silence, trying to cope with a difficult life. It is sad to cry in silence. So many people around, but nobody seems to care. Even our mind turns against us, and it is a thing one can hardly fight against. Even struggling to stay sane is an uphill battle. So, do keep writing on this site; people will sympathize with you. Best wishes and take care. Do not give up hope. Soman Ragavan. 6 July, 2023. //
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July 6th, 2023 07:15
My love
peto said:
Long may it continue
Positive happy write
Enjoyed the rhyme also
July 5th, 2023 14:35
peto said:
Long may it continue
Positive happy write
Enjoyed the rhyme also
July 5th, 2023 14:35
I\'ll find my way
Bobby O said:
That’s a real nice piece. Phrasing succinct and joyful end. I’m a fan.
June 12th, 2023 21:57
Bobby O said:
That’s a real nice piece. Phrasing succinct and joyful end. I’m a fan.
June 12th, 2023 21:57
Bravery
mvvenkataraman said:
In the eighth line, it is \"were\"
In the 16th line, it is \"lose\"
-
Your poem is a feast to read,
It is a wonderful free verse indeed,
You have aptly defined bravery,
Remarkable reply to someone,
Who tries to bully you in some way,
Please carry on to write like this
And augment the courage of others,
A remarkable poem with no rhyme
To prove rhyming is never a must!
January 3rd, 2023 12:53
mvvenkataraman said:
In the eighth line, it is \"were\"
In the 16th line, it is \"lose\"
-
Your poem is a feast to read,
It is a wonderful free verse indeed,
You have aptly defined bravery,
Remarkable reply to someone,
Who tries to bully you in some way,
Please carry on to write like this
And augment the courage of others,
A remarkable poem with no rhyme
To prove rhyming is never a must!
January 3rd, 2023 12:53
Emotional
M. J. Smith said:
And for me, it\'s 1991 again. After the messy break up, I don\'t know who or what I am. That which has so long defined my life is gone. I climb on a bicycle and spend the next year on the road. Well, I was young and foolish. But I relate to this. aren\'t we all messed up to some degree with the way things are now?
March 25th, 2022 16:29
M. J. Smith said:
And for me, it\'s 1991 again. After the messy break up, I don\'t know who or what I am. That which has so long defined my life is gone. I climb on a bicycle and spend the next year on the road. Well, I was young and foolish. But I relate to this. aren\'t we all messed up to some degree with the way things are now?
March 25th, 2022 16:29
Demons unleashed
Ivy Madara said:
When you say \"Time for me to shine in the clouds\" do you mean it\'s time to get closer to the subjects \'heaven\' and dare to fight back? or is it time for you to finally have the peace and freedom of the clouds?
March 10th, 2022 00:17
Ivy Madara said:
When you say \"Time for me to shine in the clouds\" do you mean it\'s time to get closer to the subjects \'heaven\' and dare to fight back? or is it time for you to finally have the peace and freedom of the clouds?
March 10th, 2022 00:17
Players game
Rocky Lagou said:
Amen, what a mantra to self and an uplifting message. We have to learn our own worth and not allow ourselves to be deceived. Good job! ✨
March 2nd, 2022 13:33
Rocky Lagou said:
Amen, what a mantra to self and an uplifting message. We have to learn our own worth and not allow ourselves to be deceived. Good job! ✨
March 2nd, 2022 13:33
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