Comments received on poems by Lauraš»
ELIJAH ~ (An Acrostic)
ZIGGY said:
hi there I was never able for this style it used to fry my head lol, a VERY SWEET piece really liked the ending lines \'\'Embodiment of a
Love so
Young\'\',,,,,,zigs
March 11th, 2018 13:49
ZIGGY said:
hi there I was never able for this style it used to fry my head lol, a VERY SWEET piece really liked the ending lines \'\'Embodiment of a
Love so
Young\'\',,,,,,zigs
March 11th, 2018 13:49
ELIJAH ~ (An Acrostic)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRAZIE LAURA ~ AMICA MIA ~ Per una Poema molto fragrante ! LITTLE GIFT is a very beautiful and gifted Lady and a wonderful Mother. Thanks for your Tribute ! Tu e Una Angela ! Baci e Abbracci BRIAN XOX Please check my POEM ~ Grazie B.
March 11th, 2018 11:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRAZIE LAURA ~ AMICA MIA ~ Per una Poema molto fragrante ! LITTLE GIFT is a very beautiful and gifted Lady and a wonderful Mother. Thanks for your Tribute ! Tu e Una Angela ! Baci e Abbracci BRIAN XOX Please check my POEM ~ Grazie B.
March 11th, 2018 11:47
DAVID T.
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Love these lines....
\"Dangling in the
Abyss of a memory\"
March 10th, 2018 23:47
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Love these lines....
\"Dangling in the
Abyss of a memory\"
March 10th, 2018 23:47
A DESERVING MOM
rrodriguez said:
Laura, I admire your dedication to your mom. Your poem really expresses your dedication. Well written with a lovely flow.
February 25th, 2018 18:26
rrodriguez said:
Laura, I admire your dedication to your mom. Your poem really expresses your dedication. Well written with a lovely flow.
February 25th, 2018 18:26
FORGIVE and FORGET
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
hi laura, great piece of writing! its very hard to forgive sometimes . we will never ever forget the pain someone has caused us , in our life. forgiving is very hard....especially when someone has hurt you so much . i like how you mentioned looking into yourself, finding the child part and then looking ahead at a time in the future when you may be able to truly forgive.. a well expressed enjoyable piece of writing x
February 21st, 2018 04:38
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
hi laura, great piece of writing! its very hard to forgive sometimes . we will never ever forget the pain someone has caused us , in our life. forgiving is very hard....especially when someone has hurt you so much . i like how you mentioned looking into yourself, finding the child part and then looking ahead at a time in the future when you may be able to truly forgive.. a well expressed enjoyable piece of writing x
February 21st, 2018 04:38
VITRIOL
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
hi laura, sometimes we get so wound up with peoples ways , and people can certainly frustrate and upset us. i like how you ask questions , questioning why the need for their behaviour. why is a good question , and there never seems to be a good enough answer , these people just seem to be this way , for some reason
i love these ending lines, you make a very good point
You are you and I am me.
You have your opinion and I have mine.
Letās be human enough who will agree to disagree!
great piece of writing laura ..!
February 21st, 2018 04:14
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
hi laura, sometimes we get so wound up with peoples ways , and people can certainly frustrate and upset us. i like how you ask questions , questioning why the need for their behaviour. why is a good question , and there never seems to be a good enough answer , these people just seem to be this way , for some reason
i love these ending lines, you make a very good point
You are you and I am me.
You have your opinion and I have mine.
Letās be human enough who will agree to disagree!
great piece of writing laura ..!
February 21st, 2018 04:14
VITRIOL
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Nice āacrostic likeā āVITRIOLā interspersed throughout your your write. Good work Laura.
February 19th, 2018 23:39
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Nice āacrostic likeā āVITRIOLā interspersed throughout your your write. Good work Laura.
February 19th, 2018 23:39
VITRIOL
ZIGGY said:
hi there ok then so this is directed to a certain person which is something I have done on another site which is ok by me as you do it with poetic ways not another my fav lines are these for me \'\'There is no need to be Ā InjuriousĀ andĀ Obnoxious!
Indulging in malicious gossip isĀ Loathsome\'\', good words you pin together there to make your point ,,,zigs
February 17th, 2018 17:18
ZIGGY said:
hi there ok then so this is directed to a certain person which is something I have done on another site which is ok by me as you do it with poetic ways not another my fav lines are these for me \'\'There is no need to be Ā InjuriousĀ andĀ Obnoxious!
Indulging in malicious gossip isĀ Loathsome\'\', good words you pin together there to make your point ,,,zigs
February 17th, 2018 17:18
VITRIOL
FineB said:
Thank you Laura.
What a wonderful poem and you have certainly touched upon one of the downfall\'s of man.
Keep writing
FineB
February 17th, 2018 08:09
FineB said:
Thank you Laura.
What a wonderful poem and you have certainly touched upon one of the downfall\'s of man.
Keep writing
FineB
February 17th, 2018 08:09
VITRIOL
ron parrish aka wordman said:
no room for a!! holes on a poetry site
February 11th, 2018 20:50
ron parrish aka wordman said:
no room for a!! holes on a poetry site
February 11th, 2018 20:50
VITRIOL
Lauraš» said:
Your visit my dear
šLauren š is very much appreciated! Iām so glad you love the write. Many thanks for complimenting and saving it into your favorites!
I donāt write a lot...but when I do, it is because Iām stoked to do so!
~Laura~
February 11th, 2018 17:29
Lauraš» said:
Your visit my dear
šLauren š is very much appreciated! Iām so glad you love the write. Many thanks for complimenting and saving it into your favorites!
I donāt write a lot...but when I do, it is because Iām stoked to do so!
~Laura~
February 11th, 2018 17:29
VITRIOL
Accidental Poet said:
You\'ve addressed an issue with your honest feelings and a solution. Agree to disagree is always a good outcome. Great write.
February 6th, 2018 05:14
Accidental Poet said:
You\'ve addressed an issue with your honest feelings and a solution. Agree to disagree is always a good outcome. Great write.
February 6th, 2018 05:14
VITRIOL
FredPeyer said:
You said it, Laura. Don\'t know if this is aimed at anyone in particular, but no matter, we should all agree to disagree!
February 5th, 2018 01:27
FredPeyer said:
You said it, Laura. Don\'t know if this is aimed at anyone in particular, but no matter, we should all agree to disagree!
February 5th, 2018 01:27
OBSEQUIES
Lauraš» said:
Fred,
I appreciate your read
and comments! Thank you!
On a lighter note, believe me, you wouldnāt want to beTHAT WORM!!! Thereās much more that meets the eye in that writing!
~Laura~
January 31st, 2018 09:21
Lauraš» said:
Fred,
I appreciate your read
and comments! Thank you!
On a lighter note, believe me, you wouldnāt want to beTHAT WORM!!! Thereās much more that meets the eye in that writing!
~Laura~
January 31st, 2018 09:21
OBSEQUIES
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, Laura!
\'I am your bait\' made me thing that hopefully she is not fishing, otherwise I would be a worm!
January 31st, 2018 01:54
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, Laura!
\'I am your bait\' made me thing that hopefully she is not fishing, otherwise I would be a worm!
January 31st, 2018 01:54
OBSEQUIES
Lauraš» said:
Lawless,
Your read and your comments are very much appreciated!! Thank you for the save as your favorite!
The pain is subsidizing!
~Laura~
January 30th, 2018 19:50
Lauraš» said:
Lawless,
Your read and your comments are very much appreciated!! Thank you for the save as your favorite!
The pain is subsidizing!
~Laura~
January 30th, 2018 19:50
OBSEQUIES
Lauraš» said:
Alex,
Thank you for the read,
the comment, and the
save as a favorite!
~Laura~
January 30th, 2018 16:05
Lauraš» said:
Alex,
Thank you for the read,
the comment, and the
save as a favorite!
~Laura~
January 30th, 2018 16:05
OBSEQUIES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRAZIE LAURA ~ UNA BELLA POEMA
D\'AMORE FRUSTRADO ? I can understand why it was painful to write ! The ANGST of unavailable LOVE is the worst of all ANGSTS Baci e Abbracci e Amore per Tu SOLO ~ BRIAN XOXOX
January 30th, 2018 14:52
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRAZIE LAURA ~ UNA BELLA POEMA
D\'AMORE FRUSTRADO ? I can understand why it was painful to write ! The ANGST of unavailable LOVE is the worst of all ANGSTS Baci e Abbracci e Amore per Tu SOLO ~ BRIAN XOXOX
January 30th, 2018 14:52
OBSEQUIES
Lauraš» said:
Thank you for the read
and comment, Michael!
It took me a while to write
this one. Very painful
and difficult...but I needed to!
~Laura~
January 30th, 2018 13:40
Lauraš» said:
Thank you for the read
and comment, Michael!
It took me a while to write
this one. Very painful
and difficult...but I needed to!
~Laura~
January 30th, 2018 13:40
DAVID T.
FineB said:
Thank you Laura.
What a beautiful poem.
Vivid.
Keep writing
FineB
January 20th, 2018 15:47
FineB said:
Thank you Laura.
What a beautiful poem.
Vivid.
Keep writing
FineB
January 20th, 2018 15:47
DAVID T.
Poetic Dan said:
The more you let in to that heart the more it will grow. Beautiful words my friend
January 18th, 2018 13:53
Poetic Dan said:
The more you let in to that heart the more it will grow. Beautiful words my friend
January 18th, 2018 13:53
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