Comments received on poems by Laura🌻



OBSEQUIES
Laura🌻 said:

Fred,
I appreciate your read
and comments! Thank you!
On a lighter note, believe me, you wouldn’t want to beTHAT WORM!!! There’s much more that meets the eye in that writing!

~Laura~


January 31st, 2018 09:21

OBSEQUIES
FredPeyer said:

Very well written, Laura!
\'I am your bait\' made me thing that hopefully she is not fishing, otherwise I would be a worm!

January 31st, 2018 01:54

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Laura🌻 said:

Lawless,
Your read and your comments are very much appreciated!! Thank you for the save as your favorite!
The pain is subsidizing!

~Laura~

January 30th, 2018 19:50

OBSEQUIES
Laura🌻 said:

Alex,
Thank you for the read,
the comment, and the
save as a favorite!
~Laura~

January 30th, 2018 16:05

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AlexHoy said:

Very good write Laura.

January 30th, 2018 15:57

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

GRAZIE LAURA ~ UNA BELLA POEMA
D\'AMORE FRUSTRADO ? I can understand why it was painful to write ! The ANGST of unavailable LOVE is the worst of all ANGSTS Baci e Abbracci e Amore per Tu SOLO ~ BRIAN XOXOX

January 30th, 2018 14:52

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Laura🌻 said:

Thank you for the read
and comment, Michael!
It took me a while to write
this one. Very painful
and difficult...but I needed to!


~Laura~

January 30th, 2018 13:40

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Michael Edwards said:

Great read Laura

January 30th, 2018 12:57

DAVID T.
FineB said:

Thank you Laura.

What a beautiful poem.

Vivid.

Keep writing
FineB

January 20th, 2018 15:47

DAVID T.
Poetic Dan said:

The more you let in to that heart the more it will grow. Beautiful words my friend

January 18th, 2018 13:53

DAVID T.
FredPeyer said:

This is what poetry is all about. To even express pain with beauty and artistry!

January 4th, 2018 16:17

DAVID T.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

GRAZIE LAURA ~ MIA AMIICA BELLA ! Mi piacerie I ACROSTICI ! This poem is so sad & so poignant ~ I can feel the pain of LOVE ! I\'m a bit older than you SWEETHEART and I can assure you that such DOLOR D\'AMORE ~ never lasts eternalemente ! BRIAN CON Amore ~ Abbraci e Bacci XOXOX

January 4th, 2018 15:35

DAVID T.
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

January 4th, 2018 09:33

DAVID T.
kevin browne said:

hurting lingers in love forever for sure. a great expression, Laura. keep your chin up and your pen flowing.

January 4th, 2018 08:43

REMEMBERING
Laura🌻 said:

Yes, I did!
Thank you for the
read and kind words!
I sincerely appreciate
your visit!

~Laura~

December 22nd, 2017 07:30

IDEAS
Laura🌻 said:

Good morning, poelove!
A pleasure to meet you!
Thank you for your visit!
Very appreciative for your
read and comments!

~Laura~


December 22nd, 2017 07:24

REMEMBERING
poelove said:

beautiful grief cherished in this lovely poem. I trust that you found a level of comfort in writing this.

December 22nd, 2017 07:12

IDEAS
poelove said:

loved what you\'ve accomplished here/ outside the box-envisagings was key

December 22nd, 2017 06:56

A DESERVING MOM
Laura🌻 said:

So hard not having parents, Joe! My heartfelt sympathies to you! I appreciate your read and for saving it as your favorite! Thank you!
~Laura~

December 17th, 2017 14:39

FORGIVE and FORGET
Laura🌻 said:

Welcome to MPS!
Yes, the forgetting is most difficult! Thank you for the read and compliment!
~Laura~

December 16th, 2017 18:16

FORGIVE and FORGET
Laura🌻 said:

Cin cin my friend!

December 13th, 2017 07:07

IDEAS
Laura🌻 said:

Thank you Ron for visiting , reading, and commenting!
~Laura~

December 12th, 2017 21:05

IDEAS
ron parrish aka wordman said:

words of wisdom in a great form

December 12th, 2017 19:09

FORGIVE and FORGET
Poetic Dan said:

Wow I felt these words so deep
Forgiveness as a marvellous destination
Everytime I think I\'m full there
I\'m tested with my inner childhood fear
To now seeing the sad truth is
I find it easier to talk to my abusive stepdad, than I do the ghost that was once my mother.
This was a hard read for first thing in the morning but I thank you for sharing and helping me as you help your self.
May we find the strength to keep up the climb.

December 11th, 2017 04:09

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Laura🌻 said:

Thank you Michael!!
Very appreciative for your read and comments! It was a painful and difficult write...but I felt the urge to share with my fellow writers of MPS!
~Laura~

December 10th, 2017 10:16

FORGIVE and FORGET
Michael Edwards said:

Only just found this - a super piece of work expressing great feelings. Always plan for tomorrow and yesterday becomes but a memory (one of my one liners).

December 10th, 2017 10:01

FORGIVE and FORGET
ron parrish aka wordman said:

touching write,sometimes we just can`t find it in our hearts to totally forgive

December 9th, 2017 00:50

FORGIVE and FORGET
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

CAIO LAURA CARA MIIA ~ Reading between the lines LAURA one can only imagine the pain & humiliation~ you suffered ! It is impossible to FORGET (and why should you) BUT ~ You can FORGIVE. We had a NAZI CONCENTRATION Camp survivor in our Town ~ Her Mantra was \"I MUST never FORGET ~ but ~ because I am a JEW ~ I MUST forgive.\" I trust you writing found this CAHARTIC ~ Thinking of You ~ Bacci con Amore ~ BRIAN XOXOX

December 8th, 2017 19:10

FORGIVE and FORGET
Fay Slimm. said:

A powerful read dear Laura which outlines the true reasons for cultivating both - to forgive is I believe half-way and more to the love in forgetting. - - - a deep subject and thank you for sharing your thoughts and feelings.

December 8th, 2017 11:43

FORGIVE and FORGET
FineB said:

A very poignant poem!

One must Forgive and Forget!

It is difficult when someone has been mean and unkind to you beyond belief.

That was a wonderful poem Laura.

Keep writing
FineB

December 8th, 2017 11:18



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