Comments received on poems by Lauraš»
THE PICNIC
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sounds like a special time for both of you
April 2nd, 2018 21:56
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sounds like a special time for both of you
April 2nd, 2018 21:56
THE PICNIC
Michael Edwards said:
What a great tradition and so touching that you continue it - great write.
April 2nd, 2018 15:28
Michael Edwards said:
What a great tradition and so touching that you continue it - great write.
April 2nd, 2018 15:28
THE PICNIC
Lorna said:
And we\'re off and away into the hills of Italy.. wonderful food.......OMG am I hungry now..... Your dad sound lovely.
April 2nd, 2018 12:20
Lorna said:
And we\'re off and away into the hills of Italy.. wonderful food.......OMG am I hungry now..... Your dad sound lovely.
April 2nd, 2018 12:20
ELIJAH ~ (An Acrostic)
ron parrish aka wordman said:
and it is perfect,loved it
March 30th, 2018 23:34
ron parrish aka wordman said:
and it is perfect,loved it
March 30th, 2018 23:34
ELIJAH ~ (An Acrostic)
rrodriguez said:
Elijah is my grandson\'s name. Acrostic was stupendous.
March 25th, 2018 19:49
rrodriguez said:
Elijah is my grandson\'s name. Acrostic was stupendous.
March 25th, 2018 19:49
ELIJAH ~ (An Acrostic)
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Spot on Laura; a fine family poem.
March 23rd, 2018 22:52
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Spot on Laura; a fine family poem.
March 23rd, 2018 22:52
REMEMBERING
Lauraš» said:
There you go, Lorna!
Maybe we are!! š
Thank you for your
visit and commenting!
I hope the snowstorm
wonāt be too harsh for
you! Take good care!
~Laura~
March 21st, 2018 07:22
Lauraš» said:
There you go, Lorna!
Maybe we are!! š
Thank you for your
visit and commenting!
I hope the snowstorm
wonāt be too harsh for
you! Take good care!
~Laura~
March 21st, 2018 07:22
REMEMBERING
Lorna said:
Laura - I just found this one..... sitting waiting for a snowstorm today with not much to do.......... and it\'s beautiful. Odd too because my Dad had planted a willow tree at one of the homes we lived in when I was young...... it\'s still there a full grown and older tree now! Maybe we are ancestorily related!
March 21st, 2018 06:33
Lorna said:
Laura - I just found this one..... sitting waiting for a snowstorm today with not much to do.......... and it\'s beautiful. Odd too because my Dad had planted a willow tree at one of the homes we lived in when I was young...... it\'s still there a full grown and older tree now! Maybe we are ancestorily related!
March 21st, 2018 06:33
FORGIVE and FORGET
marquisha said:
The war I have been and still battling today!
My life have been a bad chemical reaction that my parents birthed, with no instructions to put out! Hate and revenge adds more to my flames!
Great poem Laura! Nice read!
March 11th, 2018 18:16
marquisha said:
The war I have been and still battling today!
My life have been a bad chemical reaction that my parents birthed, with no instructions to put out! Hate and revenge adds more to my flames!
Great poem Laura! Nice read!
March 11th, 2018 18:16
ELIJAH ~ (An Acrostic)
ZIGGY said:
hi there I was never able for this style it used to fry my head lol, a VERY SWEET piece really liked the ending lines \'\'Embodiment of a
Love so
Young\'\',,,,,,zigs
March 11th, 2018 13:49
ZIGGY said:
hi there I was never able for this style it used to fry my head lol, a VERY SWEET piece really liked the ending lines \'\'Embodiment of a
Love so
Young\'\',,,,,,zigs
March 11th, 2018 13:49
ELIJAH ~ (An Acrostic)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRAZIE LAURA ~ AMICA MIA ~ Per una Poema molto fragrante ! LITTLE GIFT is a very beautiful and gifted Lady and a wonderful Mother. Thanks for your Tribute ! Tu e Una Angela ! Baci e Abbracci BRIAN XOX Please check my POEM ~ Grazie B.
March 11th, 2018 11:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GRAZIE LAURA ~ AMICA MIA ~ Per una Poema molto fragrante ! LITTLE GIFT is a very beautiful and gifted Lady and a wonderful Mother. Thanks for your Tribute ! Tu e Una Angela ! Baci e Abbracci BRIAN XOX Please check my POEM ~ Grazie B.
March 11th, 2018 11:47
DAVID T.
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Love these lines....
\"Dangling in the
Abyss of a memory\"
March 10th, 2018 23:47
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Love these lines....
\"Dangling in the
Abyss of a memory\"
March 10th, 2018 23:47
A DESERVING MOM
rrodriguez said:
Laura, I admire your dedication to your mom. Your poem really expresses your dedication. Well written with a lovely flow.
February 25th, 2018 18:26
rrodriguez said:
Laura, I admire your dedication to your mom. Your poem really expresses your dedication. Well written with a lovely flow.
February 25th, 2018 18:26
FORGIVE and FORGET
Caring dove said:
hi laura, great piece of writing! its very hard to forgive sometimes . we will never ever forget the pain someone has caused us , in our life. forgiving is very hard....especially when someone has hurt you so much . i like how you mentioned looking into yourself, finding the child part and then looking ahead at a time in the future when you may be able to truly forgive.. a well expressed enjoyable piece of writing x
February 21st, 2018 04:38
Caring dove said:
hi laura, great piece of writing! its very hard to forgive sometimes . we will never ever forget the pain someone has caused us , in our life. forgiving is very hard....especially when someone has hurt you so much . i like how you mentioned looking into yourself, finding the child part and then looking ahead at a time in the future when you may be able to truly forgive.. a well expressed enjoyable piece of writing x
February 21st, 2018 04:38
VITRIOL
Caring dove said:
hi laura, sometimes we get so wound up with peoples ways , and people can certainly frustrate and upset us. i like how you ask questions , questioning why the need for their behaviour. why is a good question , and there never seems to be a good enough answer , these people just seem to be this way , for some reason
i love these ending lines, you make a very good point
You are you and I am me.
You have your opinion and I have mine.
Letās be human enough who will agree to disagree!
great piece of writing laura ..!
February 21st, 2018 04:14
Caring dove said:
hi laura, sometimes we get so wound up with peoples ways , and people can certainly frustrate and upset us. i like how you ask questions , questioning why the need for their behaviour. why is a good question , and there never seems to be a good enough answer , these people just seem to be this way , for some reason
i love these ending lines, you make a very good point
You are you and I am me.
You have your opinion and I have mine.
Letās be human enough who will agree to disagree!
great piece of writing laura ..!
February 21st, 2018 04:14
VITRIOL
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Nice āacrostic likeā āVITRIOLā interspersed throughout your your write. Good work Laura.
February 19th, 2018 23:39
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Nice āacrostic likeā āVITRIOLā interspersed throughout your your write. Good work Laura.
February 19th, 2018 23:39
VITRIOL
ZIGGY said:
hi there ok then so this is directed to a certain person which is something I have done on another site which is ok by me as you do it with poetic ways not another my fav lines are these for me \'\'There is no need to be Ā InjuriousĀ andĀ Obnoxious!
Indulging in malicious gossip isĀ Loathsome\'\', good words you pin together there to make your point ,,,zigs
February 17th, 2018 17:18
ZIGGY said:
hi there ok then so this is directed to a certain person which is something I have done on another site which is ok by me as you do it with poetic ways not another my fav lines are these for me \'\'There is no need to be Ā InjuriousĀ andĀ Obnoxious!
Indulging in malicious gossip isĀ Loathsome\'\', good words you pin together there to make your point ,,,zigs
February 17th, 2018 17:18
VITRIOL
FineB said:
Thank you Laura.
What a wonderful poem and you have certainly touched upon one of the downfall\'s of man.
Keep writing
FineB
February 17th, 2018 08:09
FineB said:
Thank you Laura.
What a wonderful poem and you have certainly touched upon one of the downfall\'s of man.
Keep writing
FineB
February 17th, 2018 08:09
VITRIOL
ron parrish aka wordman said:
no room for a!! holes on a poetry site
February 11th, 2018 20:50
ron parrish aka wordman said:
no room for a!! holes on a poetry site
February 11th, 2018 20:50
VITRIOL
Lauraš» said:
Your visit my dear
šLauren š is very much appreciated! Iām so glad you love the write. Many thanks for complimenting and saving it into your favorites!
I donāt write a lot...but when I do, it is because Iām stoked to do so!
~Laura~
February 11th, 2018 17:29
Lauraš» said:
Your visit my dear
šLauren š is very much appreciated! Iām so glad you love the write. Many thanks for complimenting and saving it into your favorites!
I donāt write a lot...but when I do, it is because Iām stoked to do so!
~Laura~
February 11th, 2018 17:29
VITRIOL
FredPeyer said:
You said it, Laura. Don\'t know if this is aimed at anyone in particular, but no matter, we should all agree to disagree!
February 5th, 2018 01:27
FredPeyer said:
You said it, Laura. Don\'t know if this is aimed at anyone in particular, but no matter, we should all agree to disagree!
February 5th, 2018 01:27
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