Comments received on poems by Laura🌻



CHARLIE & IZZY~two acrostics
Accidental Poet said:

Nothing like two beautiful children to melt your heart. Nice work Laura.

April 22nd, 2018 08:20

CHARLIE & IZZY~two acrostics
onepauly said:

nicely done!

April 22nd, 2018 07:42

CHARLIE & IZZY~two acrostics
Lorna said:

At last! You\'re writing for us! Now these two adorable children can spend the day with all of us! Have a great Sunday meal Laura!

April 22nd, 2018 06:06

CHARLIE & IZZY~two acrostics
orchidee said:

A fine write Laura.

April 22nd, 2018 01:59

CHARLIE & IZZY~two acrostics
Goldfinch60 said:

Children are so special, We are expecting a new grandchild next month, that will make six of them, they are all wonderful as all children should be.
Good write and tribute to two special children.

April 22nd, 2018 00:55

CHARLIE & IZZY~two acrostics
Michael Edwards said:

My daughter has a 6 year old and she has a close friend who has a little girl of the same age. The two tots are also very close and very fond of each other. we are continually getting photos of the pair of them together and they are so cute they would melt anyone\'s heart. So this charming poem really resonates with me. .

April 21st, 2018 23:47

Blessings
ron parrish aka wordman said:

sweet sentiments

April 18th, 2018 23:15

INSPIRATION
Lorna said:

Ahhhh Laura - lots of fun! I have to tell you I did see a painting (long time ago) at the Guggenheim Museum (NYC) called \"White on White\" - really - just white paint on a white canvas - just imagine the pr job they put out for someone to actually pay for that!!! What a joke. Your inspiration is MUCH better......

April 16th, 2018 06:49

INSPIRATION
orchidee said:

Fine ede-wotsits Laura. Oh, I can\'t say these long words, or new-fangled words. I can just about say \'fangled\'! heehee.

April 16th, 2018 01:46

INSPIRATION
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good Laura, you have got them down to a tee .

April 16th, 2018 00:57

INSPIRATION
Michael Edwards said:

You cracked it Laura - it\'s made my day to see these in the gallery - they are not always as easy as they look but being short they don\'t take the same sustained effort as longer works and they\'re great fun to write - keep writing.

April 16th, 2018 00:37

INSPIRATION
Accidental Poet said:

yes, but even a blank page can be a work of art to a poet or artist. But a beautiful write you have here Laura.

April 15th, 2018 19:56

INSPIRATION
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

CAIO LAURA ~ CARA AMICA MIA ~ WOW two great EDELECTS ~ perfection in both structure & subjects. Punny Painters & Krazy Kids ! NICE ONE ! Baci e Abbracci ~ BRIAN Tuo Amico tutti ! XOX Per favore visite mi Poeme ~ Grazie B !

April 15th, 2018 18:16

INSPIRATION
ron parrish aka wordman said:

sometimes it`s hard to come by with all the distractions in life

April 15th, 2018 17:50

ELIJAH ~ (An Acrostic)
ron parrish aka wordman said:

sweet sentiments

April 10th, 2018 21:57

THE PICNIC
ron parrish aka wordman said:

and an italian picnic was one to remember

April 10th, 2018 21:56

THE PICNIC
Goldfinch60 said:

Viva indeed Laura. This is a great idea, what a wonderful man your Dad must have been.

April 3rd, 2018 00:21

THE PICNIC
ron parrish aka wordman said:

sounds like a special time for both of you

April 2nd, 2018 21:56

THE PICNIC
Michael Edwards said:

What a great tradition and so touching that you continue it - great write.

April 2nd, 2018 15:28

THE PICNIC
Lorna said:

And we\'re off and away into the hills of Italy.. wonderful food.......OMG am I hungry now..... Your dad sound lovely.

April 2nd, 2018 12:20

THE PICNIC
Accidental Poet said:

Your Dad, a true family man. Nothing says Spring like a picnic. Excellent Laura.

April 2nd, 2018 11:40

THE PICNIC
orchidee said:

A lovely write Laura.

April 2nd, 2018 10:55

ELIJAH ~ (An Acrostic)
ron parrish aka wordman said:

and it is perfect,loved it

March 30th, 2018 23:34

ELIJAH ~ (An Acrostic)
rrodriguez said:

Elijah is my grandson\'s name. Acrostic was stupendous.

March 25th, 2018 19:49

ELIJAH ~ (An Acrostic)
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Spot on Laura; a fine family poem.


March 23rd, 2018 22:52

REMEMBERING
Laura🌻 said:

There you go, Lorna!
Maybe we are!! 😊

Thank you for your
visit and commenting!

I hope the snowstorm
won’t be too harsh for
you! Take good care!

~Laura~

March 21st, 2018 07:22

REMEMBERING
Lorna said:

Laura - I just found this one..... sitting waiting for a snowstorm today with not much to do.......... and it\'s beautiful. Odd too because my Dad had planted a willow tree at one of the homes we lived in when I was young...... it\'s still there a full grown and older tree now! Maybe we are ancestorily related!

March 21st, 2018 06:33

ELIJAH ~ (An Acrostic)
Lorna said:

You made us love Eli Laura! Adorable!

March 12th, 2018 07:24

ELIJAH ~ (An Acrostic)
Accidental Poet said:

A beautiful dedication Laura.

March 11th, 2018 19:01

FORGIVE and FORGET
marquisha said:

The war I have been and still battling today!
My life have been a bad chemical reaction that my parents birthed, with no instructions to put out! Hate and revenge adds more to my flames!

Great poem Laura! Nice read!

March 11th, 2018 18:16



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