Comments received on poems by Laura🌻
INSPIRATION
Neville said:
if you dont object,
I elect to say
I suspect you may
have achieved your
objective....... Neville
May 31st, 2019 06:49
Neville said:
if you dont object,
I elect to say
I suspect you may
have achieved your
objective....... Neville
May 31st, 2019 06:49
FAST and FURIOUS (Haiku #1)
Suresh said:
The wrath of nature which frequented every so often, has become a daily occurrence with immense help from man.
You voiced Mother Natures thoughts, so well
May 12th, 2019 12:16
Suresh said:
The wrath of nature which frequented every so often, has become a daily occurrence with immense help from man.
You voiced Mother Natures thoughts, so well
May 12th, 2019 12:16
OBSEQUIES
Suresh said:
My immediate thought was of a male bee, willing to sacrifice himself for the one to be with the Queen bee.
And then I read your replies and the reason for this poem
May 11th, 2019 15:19
Suresh said:
My immediate thought was of a male bee, willing to sacrifice himself for the one to be with the Queen bee.
And then I read your replies and the reason for this poem
May 11th, 2019 15:19
THE PICNIC
Suresh said:
A happy memory then and forever.
Picnics - they bring out the true aroma of simplicity,
May 10th, 2019 13:14
Suresh said:
A happy memory then and forever.
Picnics - they bring out the true aroma of simplicity,
May 10th, 2019 13:14
THE PICNIC
Suresh said:
A happy memory then and forever.
Picnics - they bring out the true aroma of simplicity,
May 10th, 2019 13:13
Suresh said:
A happy memory then and forever.
Picnics - they bring out the true aroma of simplicity,
May 10th, 2019 13:13
FRIENDSHIP
Laura🌻 said:
J.L.,
Glad you checked it out!
I appreciate it! Thank you!
Hope all’s well with you!
All the best...
~Laura~
May 9th, 2019 21:20
Laura🌻 said:
J.L.,
Glad you checked it out!
I appreciate it! Thank you!
Hope all’s well with you!
All the best...
~Laura~
May 9th, 2019 21:20
FORGIVE and FORGET
Suresh said:
To forget - it\'s a momentary lapse in recalling. Once recorded it can never be erased, so all one can do is try to file it in the recesses of one mind, which is virtually impossible to do if it\'s is perpetually in your presence.
In the absence of this this, forgive if only to find peace with oneself.
We are all victims of not being able to forget, making even forgiving that much harder.
May 9th, 2019 17:30
Suresh said:
To forget - it\'s a momentary lapse in recalling. Once recorded it can never be erased, so all one can do is try to file it in the recesses of one mind, which is virtually impossible to do if it\'s is perpetually in your presence.
In the absence of this this, forgive if only to find peace with oneself.
We are all victims of not being able to forget, making even forgiving that much harder.
May 9th, 2019 17:30
FRIENDSHIP
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Do write some more since u write superbly in poetic rhyming I like. Thumbs up.
Plz Pleez do comment my newest poem too.
May 4th, 2019 11:20
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Do write some more since u write superbly in poetic rhyming I like. Thumbs up.
Plz Pleez do comment my newest poem too.
May 4th, 2019 11:20
FRIENDSHIP
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Do write some more since u write superbly in poetic rhyming I like. Thumbs up.
Plz Pleez do comment my newest poem too.
May 4th, 2019 11:19
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Do write some more since u write superbly in poetic rhyming I like. Thumbs up.
Plz Pleez do comment my newest poem too.
May 4th, 2019 11:19
Veritas (Senryu #1)
Suresh said:
Before one tells a lie to another
They have already told it to themselves
I shall follow you
April 28th, 2019 14:12
Suresh said:
Before one tells a lie to another
They have already told it to themselves
I shall follow you
April 28th, 2019 14:12
TAPS~24 notes
Fay Slimm. said:
An amazing tribute to those who now gone left behind a reason to \"sustain those who remain.\" - This has to be among my favourites dear Laura.
April 11th, 2019 05:32
Fay Slimm. said:
An amazing tribute to those who now gone left behind a reason to \"sustain those who remain.\" - This has to be among my favourites dear Laura.
April 11th, 2019 05:32
TAPS~24 notes
Neville said:
Excellent.. quite unique and clearly needed to be written and posted... much enjoyed despite the tragedies that inspired you... Neville
April 11th, 2019 05:16
Neville said:
Excellent.. quite unique and clearly needed to be written and posted... much enjoyed despite the tragedies that inspired you... Neville
April 11th, 2019 05:16
THINK
Suresh said:
Past is gone, you no longer can be
Why waste present for future to be
Live in the present, and live to be free
Of past and future, I totally agree
April 7th, 2019 12:39
Suresh said:
Past is gone, you no longer can be
Why waste present for future to be
Live in the present, and live to be free
Of past and future, I totally agree
April 7th, 2019 12:39
ELIJAH ~ (An Acrostic)
Fay Slimm. said:
What a wonderful tribute and as an acrostic it works so well and it will be treasured dear Laura.
March 23rd, 2019 14:06
Fay Slimm. said:
What a wonderful tribute and as an acrostic it works so well and it will be treasured dear Laura.
March 23rd, 2019 14:06
ELIJAH ~ (An Acrostic)
Neville said:
No room for any misinterpretations here.. perfectly penned, appropriate methinks and true.... Nice one Laura Neville
March 23rd, 2019 11:53
Neville said:
No room for any misinterpretations here.. perfectly penned, appropriate methinks and true.... Nice one Laura Neville
March 23rd, 2019 11:53
FORGIVE and FORGET
Neville said:
painfully powerful and emotionally charged.. not always easy to do but the sting does ease up over time, at least in most cases..... Neville
February 27th, 2019 09:18
Neville said:
painfully powerful and emotionally charged.. not always easy to do but the sting does ease up over time, at least in most cases..... Neville
February 27th, 2019 09:18
ELIJAH ~ (An Acrostic)
Neville said:
Although not an expert, and maybe way too late.. I just wanna say Elijah is one hell of an acrostic
February 14th, 2019 17:52
Neville said:
Although not an expert, and maybe way too late.. I just wanna say Elijah is one hell of an acrostic
February 14th, 2019 17:52
A Special Shout-Out To Dads
Neville said:
I just want to say.. the inherent message contained within.. is more than applicable any day of the year.. at least in my opinion... for they are indeed our future.. N
February 14th, 2019 17:35
Neville said:
I just want to say.. the inherent message contained within.. is more than applicable any day of the year.. at least in my opinion... for they are indeed our future.. N
February 14th, 2019 17:35
THINK
Caleb.A said:
Beautiful piece, there is a lot for us to learn from these wise words.
February 4th, 2019 15:51
Caleb.A said:
Beautiful piece, there is a lot for us to learn from these wise words.
February 4th, 2019 15:51
DAVID T.
Neville said:
ouch... you have such a way with words Laura, these made me wince for real.... Neville
January 30th, 2019 15:37
Neville said:
ouch... you have such a way with words Laura, these made me wince for real.... Neville
January 30th, 2019 15:37
THE PICNIC
Neville said:
absolutely delightful.. not only your poem, but the authors note ... am just going to eat a slice of toast outside in the snow..... N x
January 30th, 2019 12:38
Neville said:
absolutely delightful.. not only your poem, but the authors note ... am just going to eat a slice of toast outside in the snow..... N x
January 30th, 2019 12:38
IDEAS
Neville said:
it seems all the clever comments have already been left by my reviewing predecessors... so I\'m just gonna say it as it is..... profoundly and perceptually sound...bloomin bril x
January 30th, 2019 12:34
Neville said:
it seems all the clever comments have already been left by my reviewing predecessors... so I\'m just gonna say it as it is..... profoundly and perceptually sound...bloomin bril x
January 30th, 2019 12:34
VITRIOL
Neville said:
Go girl.. I got ya back.. some things just have to be said.. dont they just... said well in my book Neville
January 27th, 2019 06:27
Neville said:
Go girl.. I got ya back.. some things just have to be said.. dont they just... said well in my book Neville
January 27th, 2019 06:27
REMEMBERING
Neville said:
these words comprise a truly moving and lasting tribute to a father \'Dad\' who is much loved and clearly missed.... I know such love and the pain you so eloquently describe here Laura... I miss my Dad too...... Neville x
January 26th, 2019 05:46
Neville said:
these words comprise a truly moving and lasting tribute to a father \'Dad\' who is much loved and clearly missed.... I know such love and the pain you so eloquently describe here Laura... I miss my Dad too...... Neville x
January 26th, 2019 05:46
SOME~GOOD~ADVICE
Neville said:
I like it Laura.. why not try a heart, club and spade for a full house... x
January 21st, 2019 04:46
Neville said:
I like it Laura.. why not try a heart, club and spade for a full house... x
January 21st, 2019 04:46
FRIENDSHIP
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Very nice, Laura. Sorry it took me so long to read it.
I met Jim Morrison and Pamela in LA right after he
wrote \'The Lords And The New Creatures.\"
We were surfing off the pier in Huntington Beach.
I still listen to him....
L.A. Woman sometimes wakes me up at night. To me the
three greatest Rock & Roll songs were....
Layla
Stairway to Heaven
Riders On The Storm
Kurt
January 19th, 2019 12:49
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Very nice, Laura. Sorry it took me so long to read it.
I met Jim Morrison and Pamela in LA right after he
wrote \'The Lords And The New Creatures.\"
We were surfing off the pier in Huntington Beach.
I still listen to him....
L.A. Woman sometimes wakes me up at night. To me the
three greatest Rock & Roll songs were....
Layla
Stairway to Heaven
Riders On The Storm
Kurt
January 19th, 2019 12:49
Veritas (Senryu #1)
Neville said:
Seek and ye shall find
find and I shall follow on behind....
AGT\'s Laura..... N
January 19th, 2019 09:11
Neville said:
Seek and ye shall find
find and I shall follow on behind....
AGT\'s Laura..... N
January 19th, 2019 09:11
FRIENDSHIP
Neville said:
What a delightfully kind and considerate gesture dear Laura.. it is most refreshing to hear someone celebrate what for them has been a rewarding year ended and look forward with such optimism to the year ahead... May your 2019 live up to expectations and I wish nothing but Peace, Love and All Good Things to You and Yours.... Neville :)
January 19th, 2019 09:05
Neville said:
What a delightfully kind and considerate gesture dear Laura.. it is most refreshing to hear someone celebrate what for them has been a rewarding year ended and look forward with such optimism to the year ahead... May your 2019 live up to expectations and I wish nothing but Peace, Love and All Good Things to You and Yours.... Neville :)
January 19th, 2019 09:05
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