Comments received on poems by she_was_torture
Barriers
L. B. Mek said:
\'When I do have words, they\'re internal.\'
and that\'s perfectly normal
(imagine it this way
if you were a librarian
this very same traits
you so disdain
would make you a superstar)
lol
forgive me, I\'m not making light
or trying to add to the toxicity
of a world you\'re so disillusioned with;
rather, I just wanted
to drop-in a little perspective..
see, often
its not our good or bad habits
that makes us feel so isolated
it more likely to be
that we\'re so overwhelmed
by our inner monologues
and thought processes, we lack
the opportunity to look up
and around us, to see
everyone else, is dealing
with similarly crippling
fears and insecurities
the only difference
is that their biological lottery ticket
gifts, allows them
more substantial
coping methodologies, where us
some of us have to do it all
on our own
but we must be careful, Not
to confuse
being alone, with being lonely..
if the world isn\'t a good fit for you
then F\'ck it
you just concentrate on the minutia details
that offer you some respite
maybe by concentrating on them
you\'ll path a way to like minded people
and a place in the world, you feel comfortable
being yourself!
(such a wonderfully expressive write
thank you! for choosing to share)
I wish you, the very best!
(please forgive me if you find my words in any way disagreeable
I meant no disrespect)
February 28th, 2022 04:58
L. B. Mek said:
\'When I do have words, they\'re internal.\'
and that\'s perfectly normal
(imagine it this way
if you were a librarian
this very same traits
you so disdain
would make you a superstar)
lol
forgive me, I\'m not making light
or trying to add to the toxicity
of a world you\'re so disillusioned with;
rather, I just wanted
to drop-in a little perspective..
see, often
its not our good or bad habits
that makes us feel so isolated
it more likely to be
that we\'re so overwhelmed
by our inner monologues
and thought processes, we lack
the opportunity to look up
and around us, to see
everyone else, is dealing
with similarly crippling
fears and insecurities
the only difference
is that their biological lottery ticket
gifts, allows them
more substantial
coping methodologies, where us
some of us have to do it all
on our own
but we must be careful, Not
to confuse
being alone, with being lonely..
if the world isn\'t a good fit for you
then F\'ck it
you just concentrate on the minutia details
that offer you some respite
maybe by concentrating on them
you\'ll path a way to like minded people
and a place in the world, you feel comfortable
being yourself!
(such a wonderfully expressive write
thank you! for choosing to share)
I wish you, the very best!
(please forgive me if you find my words in any way disagreeable
I meant no disrespect)
February 28th, 2022 04:58
What Happened?
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful effortless flow, tone and unflinching vulnerability
this is such a relatable read, thanks for sharing dear poet
(just be weary of that overt dramatization, pitfall
but that\'s just my rude opinion, free for you to ignore)
July 16th, 2021 04:18
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful effortless flow, tone and unflinching vulnerability
this is such a relatable read, thanks for sharing dear poet
(just be weary of that overt dramatization, pitfall
but that\'s just my rude opinion, free for you to ignore)
July 16th, 2021 04:18
i don\'t want to lose control
L. B. Mek said:
this is a little raw, admittedly
but still manages to showcase
that potential
for vulnerably brave poetry
you so evidently possess,
thanks for choosing to share
June 7th, 2021 06:34
L. B. Mek said:
this is a little raw, admittedly
but still manages to showcase
that potential
for vulnerably brave poetry
you so evidently possess,
thanks for choosing to share
June 7th, 2021 06:34
\"Girl In Pieces\"
jarcher54 said:
\"Girl in Pieces\" is a haunting book... but it is as much about the will to survive and overcome as it is about the way things fall apart. I do love your line, sometimes I almost wish it was worse...maybe you feel broken and meaningless. But this soliloquy of yours is beautiful, courageous, and loaded with meaning!
April 10th, 2021 02:18
jarcher54 said:
\"Girl in Pieces\" is a haunting book... but it is as much about the will to survive and overcome as it is about the way things fall apart. I do love your line, sometimes I almost wish it was worse...maybe you feel broken and meaningless. But this soliloquy of yours is beautiful, courageous, and loaded with meaning!
April 10th, 2021 02:18
\"Girl In Pieces\"
Caring dove said:
I’m sorry you are feeling this way . I understand this feeling . You expressed yourself well
April 10th, 2021 01:18
Caring dove said:
I’m sorry you are feeling this way . I understand this feeling . You expressed yourself well
April 10th, 2021 01:18
Life Lesson
Thoughts In Time said:
Don’t allow anyone to steal your joy but never stop allowing your light to shine , we live we learn we live we burn but we rise higher and stronger after each fall...all shall be well🌹
October 9th, 2019 11:23
Thoughts In Time said:
Don’t allow anyone to steal your joy but never stop allowing your light to shine , we live we learn we live we burn but we rise higher and stronger after each fall...all shall be well🌹
October 9th, 2019 11:23
Life Lesson
FredPeyer said:
Well written, s-w-t, you aptly describe the roller-coaster that is life, but you seem to be stuck on one of the down rides. Guess what, it will go up again. I like the light metaphor, but my lesson would be a little bit different. Let that light shine on others and you might be surprised by the results.
October 8th, 2019 11:22
FredPeyer said:
Well written, s-w-t, you aptly describe the roller-coaster that is life, but you seem to be stuck on one of the down rides. Guess what, it will go up again. I like the light metaphor, but my lesson would be a little bit different. Let that light shine on others and you might be surprised by the results.
October 8th, 2019 11:22
Summer Haze
dusk arising said:
Ice tea and a bottle of beer, strange combination. Nice lazy day at the pool.
July 31st, 2019 15:56
dusk arising said:
Ice tea and a bottle of beer, strange combination. Nice lazy day at the pool.
July 31st, 2019 15:56
Unnamed Part 2
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Enjoyable poem with words that came directly from your heart.
Thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem.
September 28th, 2018 09:32
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Enjoyable poem with words that came directly from your heart.
Thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem.
September 28th, 2018 09:32
I Think I Love You
lea cobain . said:
i love this! a love you’ve never met could be the strongest and most powerful
September 24th, 2018 00:51
lea cobain . said:
i love this! a love you’ve never met could be the strongest and most powerful
September 24th, 2018 00:51
Unpredictable
A.H. Browning said:
I enjoyed the honesty of your writing. Life is very unpredictable for sure. I have found that even the unstable and undesirable is also “never-lasting”.
Thanks for sharing your writing.
Kindest Regards,
A.H. Browning
September 15th, 2018 21:35
A.H. Browning said:
I enjoyed the honesty of your writing. Life is very unpredictable for sure. I have found that even the unstable and undesirable is also “never-lasting”.
Thanks for sharing your writing.
Kindest Regards,
A.H. Browning
September 15th, 2018 21:35
.....I Don\'t Know.....
Poem Goals said:
This poem is out standing, it\'s as if I were in your shoes and could feel what you were saying, keep it up! Maybe your next poem will be Unpredictable, I wrote a poem called unpredictable, maybe we can compare and contrast?
September 14th, 2018 22:32
Poem Goals said:
This poem is out standing, it\'s as if I were in your shoes and could feel what you were saying, keep it up! Maybe your next poem will be Unpredictable, I wrote a poem called unpredictable, maybe we can compare and contrast?
September 14th, 2018 22:32
Where I\'m From
Lee Renard Caspian said:
Wonderfully expressed. Loved every line
April 13th, 2018 14:25
Lee Renard Caspian said:
Wonderfully expressed. Loved every line
April 13th, 2018 14:25
Where I\'m From
she_was_torture said:
Thank you all so much! I really appreciate hearing how much people enjoy reading my writings!
April 3rd, 2018 15:00
she_was_torture said:
Thank you all so much! I really appreciate hearing how much people enjoy reading my writings!
April 3rd, 2018 15:00
Where I\'m From
Caring dove said:
i really enjoyed reading this :-) a very good piece of writing filled with some very engaging lines..
April 3rd, 2018 14:09
Caring dove said:
i really enjoyed reading this :-) a very good piece of writing filled with some very engaging lines..
April 3rd, 2018 14:09
Where I\'m From
Edthepoet said:
Sounds like we\'re from similar places. This is an outstanding write, a picture well painted.
April 3rd, 2018 08:14
Edthepoet said:
Sounds like we\'re from similar places. This is an outstanding write, a picture well painted.
April 3rd, 2018 08:14
Okay?
Aislinn Wilson said:
Simply beautiful, I can feel it\'s palpable weight on my back
January 18th, 2018 11:11
Aislinn Wilson said:
Simply beautiful, I can feel it\'s palpable weight on my back
January 18th, 2018 11:11
The Darkness
deepthoughts said:
This is really good work, I especially like the last sentence because it is very true. Do you mind checking out a few of my poems and telling me what you think?
December 10th, 2017 22:33
deepthoughts said:
This is really good work, I especially like the last sentence because it is very true. Do you mind checking out a few of my poems and telling me what you think?
December 10th, 2017 22:33
