Comments received on poems by Jay123



As long as your happy.
Saxon Crow said:

Good read and reminds me of my past when i chose to move on. So completely relatable

June 2nd, 2021 12:41

As long as your happy.
dusk arising said:

There is a great deal of wisdom in your words about LIFE today Joe. I get the feeling you are on a huge learning curve and seeing the rights and wrongs in a new light.
Love matures with our years into something a young head cannot conceive. Acceptance and carrying on with our lot is the way..... well.. the way to wisdom really.

Reading you was very thought provoking today. Enjoyable but sad. I hope you are coming through these troubled times with a positive head on. Time does amazing healing tricks for us all.

June 2nd, 2021 04:50

As long as your happy.
Goldfinch60 said:

Very powerful words Joe. Some of us are on this world to ensure that others can become happy.

Andy

June 2nd, 2021 01:05

Letter to ones own
MendedFences27 said:

You\'re right, it\'s cyclical. I believe we\'ve all felt as your poem describes at one time or other, but then, the good stuff happens, usually involving a romance, and everything turns. The world becomes a perfect place, there is joy everywhere, and you and your lover float above all the turmoil. Perhaps a fake smile becomes real.
Enjoyed your poem. I think it expresses a common ailment of mankind, melancholy. Darkness and storm clouds abound, pressure builds to intolerable, and the loneliness plagues every waking hour. But it all changes when you find someone, and if you are lucky it lasts a lifetime.
A very good and interesting poem about this perplexing blight on the souls of men. You\'ve expressed it well and with true emotion. - Phil A..


May 4th, 2019 13:06

Control
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes the good is coming. Every time you get up in the morning you will know that all is well in your world.

April 4th, 2019 00:46

The missing piece.
Fay Slimm. said:

A cleverly worded piece of metaphor with a sound message which is very telling - first rate read.

April 2nd, 2019 04:07

Dreams
Poetic Dan said:

Sadly beautiful, keep writing your way through. Thank you for sharing this part of the \'who\' you are now but for every step is the beginning of our path, just let go and flow as amazingly as your words flowed

July 23rd, 2018 10:53

Dreams
Goldfinch60 said:

Life is so special, in both life and dreams, ensure that you enjoy every moment of each as those moments will not come back. Good write.

July 23rd, 2018 01:21

Dreams
little dove said:

i can relate to the sadness that you can feel when dreaming of better things gets too much
well expressed poem

July 23rd, 2018 00:40

Love
yellowrose said:

\'\' to always catch yourself when you fall \'\' you fell but you kept the memories of her in your mind, which stops you from falling even further? surely if we had loved and for some reason we closed off our mind to them , or tried to .. then that would hurt more , you got me thinking

January 22nd, 2018 04:08

Love
yellowrose said:

some very strong messages in this poem .. i love how you have spoken of her replaying in your mind like a broken record, even tho she is gone from your eyes, she is still there in your mind and she has never truly left you , not in your mind , not in your heart. i love this , such a lovely feel to this piece , you have worded this very nicely , i enjoyed

January 22nd, 2018 04:01

Dear best friend
katherined said:

it takes a big person to be able to detach the hurt someone caused from the wonderful memories you once shared with them. i am all too familiar with learning to do this. well-written.

November 24th, 2017 10:41

The one
Christina8 said:

A beautiful write. Too bad she can\'t see it. It\'s obviously from your heart. Great poem!

October 23rd, 2017 20:22