Comments received on poems by Mottakeenur Rehman
In the Realm of Love
L. B. Mek said:
even devoid of any theological alignment
I found this a most beautiful dedication to love\'s, ideal:
\'Where hearts dance and emotions trace,
Lovers etch their names in passion\'s fire,\'
thanks for sharing dear Poet
May 29th, 2023 02:05
L. B. Mek said:
even devoid of any theological alignment
I found this a most beautiful dedication to love\'s, ideal:
\'Where hearts dance and emotions trace,
Lovers etch their names in passion\'s fire,\'
thanks for sharing dear Poet
May 29th, 2023 02:05
Change is the Way of Life
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Well said and you put it all together in a cohesive impressive way the facts of life and reality, what is ours today is someone else\'s tomorrow. Kudos for this reminding poem!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
May 26th, 2023 09:43
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Well said and you put it all together in a cohesive impressive way the facts of life and reality, what is ours today is someone else\'s tomorrow. Kudos for this reminding poem!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
May 26th, 2023 09:43
Change is the Way of Life
Neville said:
many fear it .. I say embrace it .. for it is indeed, the only constant .. Neville
May 26th, 2023 01:33
Neville said:
many fear it .. I say embrace it .. for it is indeed, the only constant .. Neville
May 26th, 2023 01:33
In the Realm of Love
Neville said:
Heart and soul meltingly good sir .. each stanza perfectly formed and pinned so precisely to the page ..
top notch Mott ..... Neville :)
May 26th, 2023 01:18
Neville said:
Heart and soul meltingly good sir .. each stanza perfectly formed and pinned so precisely to the page ..
top notch Mott ..... Neville :)
May 26th, 2023 01:18
In the Realm of Love
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is there for all of us Mottakeenur and I am lucky enough to have love to the full.
Andy
May 26th, 2023 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is there for all of us Mottakeenur and I am lucky enough to have love to the full.
Andy
May 26th, 2023 01:16
A River-Flowing Freely
Goldfinch60 said:
Flow onto eternity Mottakeenur as My River does.
Andy
May 19th, 2023 02:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Flow onto eternity Mottakeenur as My River does.
Andy
May 19th, 2023 02:59
A River-Flowing Freely
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Dear Neville Sir,
Thank you for your kind words and appreciation. I\'m glad to hear that you found the experience of meandering with the river to be delightful and a welcome escape from your busy day. It\'s always wonderful when nature can provide us with moments of tranquility and respite. I\'m honored that you found my writing beautiful, and I hope it continues to bring you joy.
Wishing you more peaceful moments and enjoyable distractions.
Best regards,
Mottakeenur Rehman
May 18th, 2023 22:55
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Dear Neville Sir,
Thank you for your kind words and appreciation. I\'m glad to hear that you found the experience of meandering with the river to be delightful and a welcome escape from your busy day. It\'s always wonderful when nature can provide us with moments of tranquility and respite. I\'m honored that you found my writing beautiful, and I hope it continues to bring you joy.
Wishing you more peaceful moments and enjoyable distractions.
Best regards,
Mottakeenur Rehman
May 18th, 2023 22:55
A River-Flowing Freely
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Sir you are rhythmic ...And Your comments too..that give me the roam to wander freely like a river..Thank you Sir🙏❤️
May 18th, 2023 22:51
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Sir you are rhythmic ...And Your comments too..that give me the roam to wander freely like a river..Thank you Sir🙏❤️
May 18th, 2023 22:51
A River-Flowing Freely
Neville said:
what a pleasure it was to meander slowly with the current throughout its entire length .. and furthermore, a delightful respite and distraction from an otherwise busy day .. Beautifully penned my friend .. Neville
May 18th, 2023 22:04
Neville said:
what a pleasure it was to meander slowly with the current throughout its entire length .. and furthermore, a delightful respite and distraction from an otherwise busy day .. Beautifully penned my friend .. Neville
May 18th, 2023 22:04
We are Dying Inside ..Just the Company of Someone else Can Keep Us Alive
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Mottakeenur. May that light be forever in your life.
Andy
May 17th, 2023 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Mottakeenur. May that light be forever in your life.
Andy
May 17th, 2023 01:24
We are Dying Inside ..Just the Company of Someone else Can Keep Us Alive
Neville said:
what a lovely idea you have poemed ..
it saddens me and greatly so that so many older folk and other often undervalued, or even devalued groups find themselves alone and out in the cold .. it cost nothing to be kind does it .. Neville
May 16th, 2023 11:05
Neville said:
what a lovely idea you have poemed ..
it saddens me and greatly so that so many older folk and other often undervalued, or even devalued groups find themselves alone and out in the cold .. it cost nothing to be kind does it .. Neville
May 16th, 2023 11:05
We are Dying Inside ..Just the Company of Someone else Can Keep Us Alive
2781 said:
That\'s excellent also.
May 16th, 2023 09:19
2781 said:
That\'s excellent also.
May 16th, 2023 09:19
Equilibrium
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Hey there! Just wanted to drop a quick note to say how much I appreciate your comment on my poem. Seriously, it means a lot to me and your words always give me a boost of inspiration to keep writing. So thanks for being such an awesome friend and supporter!
May 14th, 2023 12:22
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Hey there! Just wanted to drop a quick note to say how much I appreciate your comment on my poem. Seriously, it means a lot to me and your words always give me a boost of inspiration to keep writing. So thanks for being such an awesome friend and supporter!
May 14th, 2023 12:22
Equilibrium
Neville said:
If I had composed this my friend, I would be very proud of my self .. everything about it is near perfect, including the subject matter, the meter, tone, flow, structure, alliteration etc etc and to top it all off, it looks so darned pretty on the page ... Bravo Mott :)
May 14th, 2023 05:54
Neville said:
If I had composed this my friend, I would be very proud of my self .. everything about it is near perfect, including the subject matter, the meter, tone, flow, structure, alliteration etc etc and to top it all off, it looks so darned pretty on the page ... Bravo Mott :)
May 14th, 2023 05:54
Equal Devotion to the Creator
Neville said:
the poem works well on its own .. but your authors note makes it easier to understand and to stand out more ..
May 6th, 2023 05:41
Neville said:
the poem works well on its own .. but your authors note makes it easier to understand and to stand out more ..
May 6th, 2023 05:41
Friendship
Neville said:
You just nailed the true meaning of friendship Mott .. another inspiring education too sir ........ Neville
April 27th, 2023 05:45
Neville said:
You just nailed the true meaning of friendship Mott .. another inspiring education too sir ........ Neville
April 27th, 2023 05:45
Hindustan
Neville said:
Looking beyond .. Beautifully poemed my friend and truly
April 26th, 2023 10:38
Neville said:
Looking beyond .. Beautifully poemed my friend and truly
April 26th, 2023 10:38
Hindustan
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t think you have much choice actually.
Death inevitable; the rest speculation.
Smooth poetry non the less, which I enjoyed.
April 26th, 2023 06:23
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t think you have much choice actually.
Death inevitable; the rest speculation.
Smooth poetry non the less, which I enjoyed.
April 26th, 2023 06:23
Hindustan
Goldfinch60 said:
That life will never end Mottakeenur as memories will never die.
Andy
April 26th, 2023 02:01
Goldfinch60 said:
That life will never end Mottakeenur as memories will never die.
Andy
April 26th, 2023 02:01
Eid Brings Love
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Mottakeenur about a wonderful blissful time.
Andy
April 22nd, 2023 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Mottakeenur about a wonderful blissful time.
Andy
April 22nd, 2023 00:41
Eid Brings Love
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot about my pizza ? The joint woz closed just when I were hungry !!! LOL.
Smooth poem with great message.
April 21st, 2023 21:18
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot about my pizza ? The joint woz closed just when I were hungry !!! LOL.
Smooth poem with great message.
April 21st, 2023 21:18
Eid Brings Love
sasherington said:
Gosh! I had goosebumps. Such a wonderful message. Any inspiration?
April 21st, 2023 19:38
sasherington said:
Gosh! I had goosebumps. Such a wonderful message. Any inspiration?
April 21st, 2023 19:38
Agony Collision Friction and the White Horse
L. B. Mek said:
(but why, must it be? dear Poet
why not
we try flowing, free of friction
manoeuvre \'with\' and \'past\'
our obstacles in life
with \'acceptance\', that in which
we intrust
and wilful, notions of deserved
\'victories\'
surrendered, to acquire that stability
of mellow serenity, in our lives...
there is ever, another way
if we but prevail, long enough
to glean)
April 21st, 2023 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
(but why, must it be? dear Poet
why not
we try flowing, free of friction
manoeuvre \'with\' and \'past\'
our obstacles in life
with \'acceptance\', that in which
we intrust
and wilful, notions of deserved
\'victories\'
surrendered, to acquire that stability
of mellow serenity, in our lives...
there is ever, another way
if we but prevail, long enough
to glean)
April 21st, 2023 04:57
Agony Collision Friction and the White Horse
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Mottakeenur, as I always say you cannot teach experience.
Andy
April 18th, 2023 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Mottakeenur, as I always say you cannot teach experience.
Andy
April 18th, 2023 01:49
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