Comments received on poems by Mottakeenur Rehman
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Neville said:
I\'m with the fella with the crimson hood and the big pointy nose 😎
April 10th, 2023 04:51
Neville said:
I\'m with the fella with the crimson hood and the big pointy nose 😎
April 10th, 2023 04:51
Shortcut
L. B. Mek said:
a great read
so well presented, dear poet
words that force us
to look within and consider
that toll
of ambition and blinkered hope..
(venerability of speed, is what warps
progress
into cyclicality\'s horror stratospheres
modernity\'s, nihilism
as precursor to humanity\'s loss of identity
like those dinosaur\'s
we\'ll soon realise, not much distance
between all conquering
and carcass, remains
it\'s all spilt sands, in but a glimpse
of a universe\'s blink...)
April 10th, 2023 04:34
L. B. Mek said:
a great read
so well presented, dear poet
words that force us
to look within and consider
that toll
of ambition and blinkered hope..
(venerability of speed, is what warps
progress
into cyclicality\'s horror stratospheres
modernity\'s, nihilism
as precursor to humanity\'s loss of identity
like those dinosaur\'s
we\'ll soon realise, not much distance
between all conquering
and carcass, remains
it\'s all spilt sands, in but a glimpse
of a universe\'s blink...)
April 10th, 2023 04:34
Let\'s Pave the Way for a Future Bright
Neville said:
a timeless song of hope .. in a tired and sad old world .. bravo dear poet ..
April 7th, 2023 05:58
Neville said:
a timeless song of hope .. in a tired and sad old world .. bravo dear poet ..
April 7th, 2023 05:58
Let\'s Pave the Way for a Future Bright
L. B. Mek said:
\'togetherness/oneness\'
a dream recognised in every language
a pulsing hope, harboured by every heart!
(a timely message, at any time!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
April 7th, 2023 02:07
L. B. Mek said:
\'togetherness/oneness\'
a dream recognised in every language
a pulsing hope, harboured by every heart!
(a timely message, at any time!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet)
April 7th, 2023 02:07
Let\'s Pave the Way for a Future Bright
Lorna said:
Hopeful but will it ever be.....
April 7th, 2023 01:51
Lorna said:
Hopeful but will it ever be.....
April 7th, 2023 01:51
War is Never Proper
Neville said:
this packs a hefty wallop and the kidney punch with a twist it delivers toward the end takes one\'s breath away ..
ps this is very familiar, did I dream it or have I seen it before somewhere ........... Neville
April 6th, 2023 03:55
Neville said:
this packs a hefty wallop and the kidney punch with a twist it delivers toward the end takes one\'s breath away ..
ps this is very familiar, did I dream it or have I seen it before somewhere ........... Neville
April 6th, 2023 03:55
Passion is My Fashion
Goldfinch60 said:
Love\'s rain is certainly what must bring peace to our world MR, good words.
Andy
April 6th, 2023 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Love\'s rain is certainly what must bring peace to our world MR, good words.
Andy
April 6th, 2023 00:32
Passion is My Fashion
Neville said:
reads just like a dream in the making .. :)
April 5th, 2023 04:15
Neville said:
reads just like a dream in the making .. :)
April 5th, 2023 04:15
Passion is My Fashion
Lorna said:
Love the flow and sentiments of this...........
April 5th, 2023 03:48
Lorna said:
Love the flow and sentiments of this...........
April 5th, 2023 03:48
Martyr
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
I\'m honored that my tribute to India resonated with you, and I hope that you\'ll have the opportunity to visit again soon and explore more of what this amazing country has to offer.
🙂🙏🙏 I\'m so glad to hear that my poem has piqued your interest in India!
April 4th, 2023 04:51
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
I\'m honored that my tribute to India resonated with you, and I hope that you\'ll have the opportunity to visit again soon and explore more of what this amazing country has to offer.
🙂🙏🙏 I\'m so glad to hear that my poem has piqued your interest in India!
April 4th, 2023 04:51
Martyr
Neville said:
Despite having visited twice to date and intending to again, I know far too little about India .. I intend to learn much more and you have whetted my appetite this very mane my friend .. a poignant and very fine tribute poemed indeed .. Neville
April 4th, 2023 04:46
Neville said:
Despite having visited twice to date and intending to again, I know far too little about India .. I intend to learn much more and you have whetted my appetite this very mane my friend .. a poignant and very fine tribute poemed indeed .. Neville
April 4th, 2023 04:46
Seeing into the Eyes of Mother
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Thank you for your thoughtful comment. I appreciate your perspective on judging people based on their actions rather than their vices. It\'s true that we all have our struggles and flaws, but it\'s important to focus on the good that people do and the positive qualities they possess. I\'m glad that you enjoyed my poem, and I hope that it resonated with you in some way.
April 3rd, 2023 11:01
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Thank you for your thoughtful comment. I appreciate your perspective on judging people based on their actions rather than their vices. It\'s true that we all have our struggles and flaws, but it\'s important to focus on the good that people do and the positive qualities they possess. I\'m glad that you enjoyed my poem, and I hope that it resonated with you in some way.
April 3rd, 2023 11:01
An Unconditional Exchange of Zero
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
thank you so much sir🙏
April 3rd, 2023 08:25
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
thank you so much sir🙏
April 3rd, 2023 08:25
An Unconditional Exchange of Zero
L. B. Mek said:
a great message and so well written
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(true love is a rarity
as, true love can only blossom
in heart\'s, true to themselves
first and foremost
we all know this, but it\'s too hard
to point a finger at a mirror
\'persona\' reflection
that feels sorry for itself, and so
we merely
\'act out\' or romance scenes
like we\'ve seen on screens..
true love is rare, indeed
but even half a glass full, of love
is enough for most to treasure
for the rest of their lives...)
April 3rd, 2023 05:38
L. B. Mek said:
a great message and so well written
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(true love is a rarity
as, true love can only blossom
in heart\'s, true to themselves
first and foremost
we all know this, but it\'s too hard
to point a finger at a mirror
\'persona\' reflection
that feels sorry for itself, and so
we merely
\'act out\' or romance scenes
like we\'ve seen on screens..
true love is rare, indeed
but even half a glass full, of love
is enough for most to treasure
for the rest of their lives...)
April 3rd, 2023 05:38
Seeing into the Eyes of Mother
2781 said:
Some of the best men I know are drunks. It\'s not what goes into the man that defiles him It\'s what comes out. Good things are coming out of you, I am pleased to note.
April 3rd, 2023 04:41
2781 said:
Some of the best men I know are drunks. It\'s not what goes into the man that defiles him It\'s what comes out. Good things are coming out of you, I am pleased to note.
April 3rd, 2023 04:41
Thermosphere is Descending
L. B. Mek said:
\'wiping my *T*ears of disaster, tasting its bitter reality.
I vow to be vigilant against dishonest policies,\'
just a great, life affriming write
dear poet, thank you!
April 3rd, 2023 04:15
L. B. Mek said:
\'wiping my *T*ears of disaster, tasting its bitter reality.
I vow to be vigilant against dishonest policies,\'
just a great, life affriming write
dear poet, thank you!
April 3rd, 2023 04:15
Seeing into the Eyes of Mother
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Thank you for your kind words about my poem. Your encouragement and feedback mean a lot to me, and I appreciate the time you took to read and analyze my work. Your belief in my potential as a poet motivates me to continue writing and improving my craft.
I would love to hear more of your thoughts and suggestions on how I can make the minor tweaks to the poem to make it great. Your feedback and guidance will help me grow as a poet and reach my goals.
Thank you again for your support, and I look forward to sharing more of my poetry with you.
Best regards,
Mottakeenur Rehman
April 3rd, 2023 03:24
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Thank you for your kind words about my poem. Your encouragement and feedback mean a lot to me, and I appreciate the time you took to read and analyze my work. Your belief in my potential as a poet motivates me to continue writing and improving my craft.
I would love to hear more of your thoughts and suggestions on how I can make the minor tweaks to the poem to make it great. Your feedback and guidance will help me grow as a poet and reach my goals.
Thank you again for your support, and I look forward to sharing more of my poetry with you.
Best regards,
Mottakeenur Rehman
April 3rd, 2023 03:24
Seeing into the Eyes of Mother
Neville said:
your dream to become a great poet is well within the realms of possibility ..
this particular one already has the hallmark stamped on it .. a few very minor tweaks and bingo my friend you shall be there ... Neville
April 3rd, 2023 03:17
Neville said:
your dream to become a great poet is well within the realms of possibility ..
this particular one already has the hallmark stamped on it .. a few very minor tweaks and bingo my friend you shall be there ... Neville
April 3rd, 2023 03:17
Thermosphere is Descending
Neville said:
an interesting and well crafted poem .. certainly enjoyed the first time round .. furthermore, am sure it will be just as good when I re-visit it later .. Neville
April 2nd, 2023 08:29
Neville said:
an interesting and well crafted poem .. certainly enjoyed the first time round .. furthermore, am sure it will be just as good when I re-visit it later .. Neville
April 2nd, 2023 08:29
An Unconditional Exchange of Zero
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Thank you so much ...your comment is priceless but praiseworthy🙏❤️🙏🙂
April 2nd, 2023 00:22
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Thank you so much ...your comment is priceless but praiseworthy🙏❤️🙏🙂
April 2nd, 2023 00:22
An Unconditional Exchange of Zero
Doggerel Dave said:
Neatly poemed.
Agreed - there is nothing really to write about - that kind of love (there are others) can only be defined by what it is not - which, if I read you correctly, is what you have done here.
April 1st, 2023 23:12
Doggerel Dave said:
Neatly poemed.
Agreed - there is nothing really to write about - that kind of love (there are others) can only be defined by what it is not - which, if I read you correctly, is what you have done here.
April 1st, 2023 23:12
An Unconditional Exchange of Zero
Neville said:
You just nailed it .. that crazy little four letter word love 💙
April 1st, 2023 06:21
Neville said:
You just nailed it .. that crazy little four letter word love 💙
April 1st, 2023 06:21
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