Comments received on poems by Mottakeenur Rehman
Equilibrium
Neville said:
If I had composed this my friend, I would be very proud of my self .. everything about it is near perfect, including the subject matter, the meter, tone, flow, structure, alliteration etc etc and to top it all off, it looks so darned pretty on the page ... Bravo Mott :)
May 14th, 2023 05:54
Neville said:
If I had composed this my friend, I would be very proud of my self .. everything about it is near perfect, including the subject matter, the meter, tone, flow, structure, alliteration etc etc and to top it all off, it looks so darned pretty on the page ... Bravo Mott :)
May 14th, 2023 05:54
Equal Devotion to the Creator
Neville said:
the poem works well on its own .. but your authors note makes it easier to understand and to stand out more ..
May 6th, 2023 05:41
Neville said:
the poem works well on its own .. but your authors note makes it easier to understand and to stand out more ..
May 6th, 2023 05:41
Friendship
Neville said:
You just nailed the true meaning of friendship Mott .. another inspiring education too sir ........ Neville
April 27th, 2023 05:45
Neville said:
You just nailed the true meaning of friendship Mott .. another inspiring education too sir ........ Neville
April 27th, 2023 05:45
Hindustan
Neville said:
Looking beyond .. Beautifully poemed my friend and truly
April 26th, 2023 10:38
Neville said:
Looking beyond .. Beautifully poemed my friend and truly
April 26th, 2023 10:38
Hindustan
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t think you have much choice actually.
Death inevitable; the rest speculation.
Smooth poetry non the less, which I enjoyed.
April 26th, 2023 06:23
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t think you have much choice actually.
Death inevitable; the rest speculation.
Smooth poetry non the less, which I enjoyed.
April 26th, 2023 06:23
Hindustan
Goldfinch60 said:
That life will never end Mottakeenur as memories will never die.
Andy
April 26th, 2023 02:01
Goldfinch60 said:
That life will never end Mottakeenur as memories will never die.
Andy
April 26th, 2023 02:01
Eid Brings Love
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Mottakeenur about a wonderful blissful time.
Andy
April 22nd, 2023 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Mottakeenur about a wonderful blissful time.
Andy
April 22nd, 2023 00:41
Eid Brings Love
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot about my pizza ? The joint woz closed just when I were hungry !!! LOL.
Smooth poem with great message.
April 21st, 2023 21:18
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot about my pizza ? The joint woz closed just when I were hungry !!! LOL.
Smooth poem with great message.
April 21st, 2023 21:18
Eid Brings Love
sasherington said:
Gosh! I had goosebumps. Such a wonderful message. Any inspiration?
April 21st, 2023 19:38
sasherington said:
Gosh! I had goosebumps. Such a wonderful message. Any inspiration?
April 21st, 2023 19:38
Agony Collision Friction and the White Horse
L. B. Mek said:
(but why, must it be? dear Poet
why not
we try flowing, free of friction
manoeuvre \'with\' and \'past\'
our obstacles in life
with \'acceptance\', that in which
we intrust
and wilful, notions of deserved
\'victories\'
surrendered, to acquire that stability
of mellow serenity, in our lives...
there is ever, another way
if we but prevail, long enough
to glean)
April 21st, 2023 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
(but why, must it be? dear Poet
why not
we try flowing, free of friction
manoeuvre \'with\' and \'past\'
our obstacles in life
with \'acceptance\', that in which
we intrust
and wilful, notions of deserved
\'victories\'
surrendered, to acquire that stability
of mellow serenity, in our lives...
there is ever, another way
if we but prevail, long enough
to glean)
April 21st, 2023 04:57
Agony Collision Friction and the White Horse
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Mottakeenur, as I always say you cannot teach experience.
Andy
April 18th, 2023 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Mottakeenur, as I always say you cannot teach experience.
Andy
April 18th, 2023 01:49
Bohag
L. B. Mek said:
so informative, thank you! dear Poet
(but video is not playing for me for some reason)
April 17th, 2023 04:14
L. B. Mek said:
so informative, thank you! dear Poet
(but video is not playing for me for some reason)
April 17th, 2023 04:14
All is Well
Neville said:
I like the cut of your jib my friend .. a beautiful dreamy poem and a very mature way of looking at loss without any associated feeling of anger, resentment or bitterness .. just the way it should be .... Neville
April 14th, 2023 07:12
Neville said:
I like the cut of your jib my friend .. a beautiful dreamy poem and a very mature way of looking at loss without any associated feeling of anger, resentment or bitterness .. just the way it should be .... Neville
April 14th, 2023 07:12
All is Well
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderful wording of accessible wisdom
so true, kind Poet
(although hate and mirages of vengeance
can fuel a life with endless gusto
within those arteries of our pulsing sincerity
we witness that gradual decay of our humanity
rather, it be in our best interest
to forego that charcoal warmth of rage
and find bravery, enough
to seek acceptance and resolve
steadily nurture a new appetite
for our heart\'s, true desire
a new connection, strong enough
to decimate our painful pasts...)
April 14th, 2023 02:28
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderful wording of accessible wisdom
so true, kind Poet
(although hate and mirages of vengeance
can fuel a life with endless gusto
within those arteries of our pulsing sincerity
we witness that gradual decay of our humanity
rather, it be in our best interest
to forego that charcoal warmth of rage
and find bravery, enough
to seek acceptance and resolve
steadily nurture a new appetite
for our heart\'s, true desire
a new connection, strong enough
to decimate our painful pasts...)
April 14th, 2023 02:28
The Magic of the Eyes
L. B. Mek said:
simply beautiful, dear Poet
thank you! such a lovely read
April 14th, 2023 02:19
L. B. Mek said:
simply beautiful, dear Poet
thank you! such a lovely read
April 14th, 2023 02:19
Incredible India
L. B. Mek said:
\'And India has been trying to accomplish her task through social regulation of differences, on the one hand, and the spiritual recognition of unity on the other.\'
by Gurudev, Rabindranath Tagore
\'Nay, do not grieve tho’ life be full of sadness,
Dawn will not veil her splendor for your grief,
Nor spring deny their bright, appointed beauty
To lotus blossom and ashoka leaf.
Nay, do not pine, tho’ life be dark with trouble,
Time will not pause or tarry on his way;
To-day that seems so long, so strange, so bitter,
Will soon be some forgotten yesterday.
Nay, do not weep; new hopes, new dreams, new faces,
The unspent joy of all the unborn years,
Will prove your heart a traitor to its sorrow,
And make your eyes unfaithful to their tears.\'
by that Nightingale, Sarojini Naidu
(within your words, dear Poet
legacy of India\'s great minds
Prevails!)
April 14th, 2023 02:16
L. B. Mek said:
\'And India has been trying to accomplish her task through social regulation of differences, on the one hand, and the spiritual recognition of unity on the other.\'
by Gurudev, Rabindranath Tagore
\'Nay, do not grieve tho’ life be full of sadness,
Dawn will not veil her splendor for your grief,
Nor spring deny their bright, appointed beauty
To lotus blossom and ashoka leaf.
Nay, do not pine, tho’ life be dark with trouble,
Time will not pause or tarry on his way;
To-day that seems so long, so strange, so bitter,
Will soon be some forgotten yesterday.
Nay, do not weep; new hopes, new dreams, new faces,
The unspent joy of all the unborn years,
Will prove your heart a traitor to its sorrow,
And make your eyes unfaithful to their tears.\'
by that Nightingale, Sarojini Naidu
(within your words, dear Poet
legacy of India\'s great minds
Prevails!)
April 14th, 2023 02:16
All is Well
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Mottakeenur that last line is so meaningful.
Andy
April 14th, 2023 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Mottakeenur that last line is so meaningful.
Andy
April 14th, 2023 01:48
You
Neville said:
a most beautifully crafted love poem most fitting for a woman so beautiful and so very much loved ... 🤍
April 14th, 2023 01:04
Neville said:
a most beautifully crafted love poem most fitting for a woman so beautiful and so very much loved ... 🤍
April 14th, 2023 01:04
The Magic of the Eyes
Neville said:
yes, absolutely what a wonderful tribute my friend, Fariha is a very lucky woman ..
April 12th, 2023 07:06
Neville said:
yes, absolutely what a wonderful tribute my friend, Fariha is a very lucky woman ..
April 12th, 2023 07:06
Incredible India
jarcher54 said:
India is a magnificent conundrum. Your hopeful focus on its better side, the land of peace and art and tranquility and rejection of dark medieval ignorance is lovely. But like my country the USA, the currents of religious bigotry, hypernationalism, and conservative rejection of tolerance and inclusion are far too strong to gloss over. Love to all my Indian brothers and sisters. May you follow your path of love to a vision of equality and universal democracy.
April 10th, 2023 22:33
jarcher54 said:
India is a magnificent conundrum. Your hopeful focus on its better side, the land of peace and art and tranquility and rejection of dark medieval ignorance is lovely. But like my country the USA, the currents of religious bigotry, hypernationalism, and conservative rejection of tolerance and inclusion are far too strong to gloss over. Love to all my Indian brothers and sisters. May you follow your path of love to a vision of equality and universal democracy.
April 10th, 2023 22:33
Shortcut
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
I wanted to remove this poem as I didnot get any comment ...but Now I got from a faithful one...That means This piece has something ...Thank you so much!❤️🙏🙏
April 10th, 2023 08:15
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
I wanted to remove this poem as I didnot get any comment ...but Now I got from a faithful one...That means This piece has something ...Thank you so much!❤️🙏🙏
April 10th, 2023 08:15
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