Comments received on poems by ZIGGY



Song
Unsub said:

Zigs,

as always you draw the reader into your piece & absorb them with your world.

I can feel, breathe & even hear this piece.

Nothing beats the real sound of live music. I haven\'t yet even seen a live DVD/Blu-ray that captures the true feeling & sound of actually being there.

Awesome piece my brother in poetic arms.

Unsub.



May 19th, 2020 05:22

Song
Goldfinch60 said:

Time in music is certainly eternal Ziggy, music is the food of life.

Andy

May 19th, 2020 00:29

Cradle of dreams
Maxine Smith said:

Stunning, captivated by every word.

Well done Ziggy.

February 16th, 2020 12:30

Cradle of dreams
Santita said:

The sense of being lost, lacking purpose, and wandering this strange place called Earth washed over me. The unique rhyme-scheme woven within is smooth and never feels forced. Relatable words, that reach the reader, Ziggy.
Glad to see you are still around sharing your talents.

February 3rd, 2020 16:21

He
Unsub said:

Zigs,

fearless write as expected my friend.

As for your spelling which we both know is the worst in the world makes the use of:

Frogive & Froget

totally hilarious in the middle of such a deep emotional poem.

Great work in delivery, style, theme & execution but not spelling!! LOL!

Unsub.

ps. because I rib you about your spelling I always double check my comments to you to avoid embarrasing myself with a typo in it!!

February 1st, 2020 07:24

Cradle of dreams
Unsub said:

Ziggy,

sublime poem & those final two lines show why you are the most exciting & talented poet MPS has to offer.

That all said you are definetly the worst speller on MPS! LOL!

Silloueet = Silhouette

You know you should have spoken to your editor first!

Great work my dearest friend.

Unsub.

February 1st, 2020 07:19

He
Maxine Smith said:

Your welcome.

January 28th, 2020 15:25

He
Maxine Smith said:

Oh wow, painful to read.

How anyone could treat a child as such, one of the most horrific things a person could ever do.

The innocence of a child should be cherished not destroyed.

January 18th, 2020 16:37

Never
Maxine Smith said:

Love the message, the end justifies the means ‘was worth the pain’
Great flow, great work, well done.

January 12th, 2020 13:04

Friend or foe
ZIGGY said:

Hey there luv getting your comments it really gave me a lift so thanks for that, home now after a long long day am a bit jacked lol, read you soon, zigs

January 8th, 2020 16:49

Friend or foe
Unsub said:

Zigs,

as I said in the last posting of yours; poets seem to be more interested in their own work to offer critique or even a simple comment on others work.

This is yet again a prime example of your unuique poetic style & makes you stand out as one of the best poets MPS has to offer.

Great word usage & delivery...as always!

Unsub.

January 8th, 2020 05:58

Never
Unsub said:

Zigs,

yet again one of the greatest poets I have ever known & read has posted a complex & supremely exquisite poem & not one other poet on this \'alleged\' great poetry site forum has thought to express their opinion.

I guess this is why so many of us no longer consider MPS as our primary poetry location.

Unsub.

January 8th, 2020 05:56

Kurt Cobain
LAWLESS said:

Thanks for the blast from the past (no pun intended). Kurt was born ten days after me and influenced me greatly. I never saw him live because I was poor. I wouldn’t even go to shows over $20.

Good to see your words here again. Hopefully we can go back to having a friendly site, excluding Danny Boy and I. Assholism is a difficult illness to cure!

December 28th, 2019 11:50

Kurt Cobain
ZIGGY said:

Cheers bud watched a documentary last night and came up with this, ya I heard your song, Comment left

December 28th, 2019 08:06

Kurt Cobain
Unsub said:

Zigs

Great tribute my friend. Never knew he was your idol! I have everything they released & yet haven’t played for some time. This afternoon I’m setting my stereo as I’m moving my stuff into Carys house today so I will play Nirvana once it’s set up!!

Least you have one idol still alive! That awesome musical artist from Systema Synthetica!!

Have a great New Year my friend!

Unsub.

December 28th, 2019 07:46

Mortality Slain
Unsub said:

Zigs,

yet another masterpiece written in ziggish style, structure & execution.

Can\'t begin to tell you how many awesome lines there are here in this one.

I keep reading this & find new bits i somehow missed the first time around.

This goes straight into favourites!

Welcome back geezer!

Unsub.

December 15th, 2019 14:50

Mortality Slain
ZIGGY said:

O Laura I am so sorry for your loss, I know what you\'re going through I lost both parents 12 days apart

December 15th, 2019 10:36

Mortality Slain
ZIGGY said:

Hi Laura thank you for the welcome what a great comment you got it summed up very well indeed, your really good at explaining a piece of work, kind regards and hope you have a great Xmas 🎄 x

December 15th, 2019 09:43

Mortality Slain
Laura said:

Ziggy,

Wonderful to ‘see’ you, my friend!

During these difficult and uncertain times, your poem, filled with truths and realities, has given us much to ponder upon!
The temptation to delve into that ‘forbidden fruit’ has its consequences. As my parents would say, “Be happy and content with that which you have and don’t envy your neighbor. Imagine not having anything at all.”
Your last line summarizes your poem’s message very well.
“...when in the end,
We’re all mortality slain.”


Regards...

~Laura~

December 15th, 2019 09:26

Human cyst
LAWLESS said:

Pop back soon

December 14th, 2019 22:49

Human cyst
LAWLESS said:

Hello again.

A furious return that paints a bleak picture in the mind. I prefer a more optimistic vision. A reset for our planet, where human population has dwindled. Earth heals itself from our virus. You may have left that possibility open if we can get past our “ignorance and greed”.



September 15th, 2019 21:51

whats at the end of a rainbow
ZIGGY said:

Laura aww thanks for the mention so lovely and what a great read on unsub poem

April 27th, 2019 19:10

whats at the end of a rainbow
ZIGGY said:

Ha ha thanks Laura it gave me a tickle 😂

April 27th, 2019 12:09

whats at the end of a rainbow
Laura said:

Ziggy,

A masterpiece of a poem! I enjoyed the read and its message! Your posting and sharing is very much appreciated! Thank you for obliging!
Also, a thunderous shoutout to Unsub for bringing it to my attention!

~Laura~

April 27th, 2019 12:07

whats at the end of a rainbow
ZIGGY said:

Hi Laura I don\'t know if changing my name to soggy will catch on 😂 hahaha but thanks for the glowing comment much appreciated thanks aka ziggy

April 27th, 2019 11:45

SILENCE
Laura said:

Zigs,

A powerful write!

This is an excruciating painful existence for anyone to bear! You’ve captured the essence of her living hell very well!

My grandmother once told me a story very similar to your write...different means but same ending! It happened in a small town in Italy where she was born! A woman living in a situation very much like the one you’ve described. The means by which she ended his life was by throwing his intoxicated body in a well! That was the last drink and breath that he took! Believe it or not, she was exonerated for her deed!

~Laura~


November 10th, 2018 20:03

SILENCE
Goldfinch60 said:

Very strong emotive write Ziggy.

November 10th, 2018 01:01

CIARAN (REPOSTED FOR MY UNCLE)
Santita said:

What peace it is to be at one with ourselves. Thoughtful, emotive, beautiful ode for your uncle, Ziggy.

September 19th, 2018 14:35

Blessed By Angels Twice
Santita said:

A beautiful, emotive write, Ziggy! The love you have for your children flows out of this piece in great rhyme. Loved it.

September 19th, 2018 14:33

TAINTED
Santita said:

wow this is a dark, image-soaked delight, Ziggy! and your rhymes are spectacular!

September 19th, 2018 14:31

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