Comments received on poems by ZIGGY
Devil or Disciple
orchidee said:
A fine write Z. I myself leave out some punctuation, but not altogether. Some helps, I feel, so that it does-not-get-confusing-and-all-run-into-one!
July 16th, 2018 09:04
orchidee said:
A fine write Z. I myself leave out some punctuation, but not altogether. Some helps, I feel, so that it does-not-get-confusing-and-all-run-into-one!
July 16th, 2018 09:04
Devil or Disciple
Edthepoet said:
Hooked from beginning to end. Great write Ziggy
July 15th, 2018 19:06
Edthepoet said:
Hooked from beginning to end. Great write Ziggy
July 15th, 2018 19:06
Devil or Disciple
Lauraš» said:
Zigs,
An excellent introspective and inspiring write!
Thereās much to think about!
ā...can you see yourself in othersā eyes or are you the reason for their painful tears...ā
āWe are all spirits clothed in flesh born with free will to have or helpā
Powerful words! We are free to choose the path we want to follow!
~Laura~
July 15th, 2018 17:58
Lauraš» said:
Zigs,
An excellent introspective and inspiring write!
Thereās much to think about!
ā...can you see yourself in othersā eyes or are you the reason for their painful tears...ā
āWe are all spirits clothed in flesh born with free will to have or helpā
Powerful words! We are free to choose the path we want to follow!
~Laura~
July 15th, 2018 17:58
A place in time
Lauraš» said:
Zigs,
This exquisite poem and pic have taken me back to when I was sixteen years old. The best memories of the best summer ever!
One observation...
āout stretchedā...should it be one word?
āyou Iā...should it be you and I?
~Laura~
June 30th, 2018 16:56
Lauraš» said:
Zigs,
This exquisite poem and pic have taken me back to when I was sixteen years old. The best memories of the best summer ever!
One observation...
āout stretchedā...should it be one word?
āyou Iā...should it be you and I?
~Laura~
June 30th, 2018 16:56
Blessed By Angels Twice
Lauraš» said:
Zigs,
This poem is exquisite in its entirety! Youāve beautifully expressed the love and pride you have for your children!
As I was enjoying the read, I was envisioning my own two children! Children are a blessing!
~Laura~
P.S.~Is this the poem you said you might post about your two daughters?
June 25th, 2018 16:35
Lauraš» said:
Zigs,
This poem is exquisite in its entirety! Youāve beautifully expressed the love and pride you have for your children!
As I was enjoying the read, I was envisioning my own two children! Children are a blessing!
~Laura~
P.S.~Is this the poem you said you might post about your two daughters?
June 25th, 2018 16:35
Blessed By Angels Twice
Poetic Dan said:
A wonderful read and brilliantly expressed. Thank you for sharing
June 25th, 2018 07:52
Poetic Dan said:
A wonderful read and brilliantly expressed. Thank you for sharing
June 25th, 2018 07:52
FEARFUL
Lauraš» said:
Zigs,
A super write! Iāve read it a few times. Each time I read it, I get a sense of a different fear! There can be many interpretations! It all depends on the reader! They can be totally different than the writerās! In my humble opinion, thatās the beauty of this poem!
The pic alone can be interpreted in many ways! It complements your poem very well!
I interpret it as depicting someone who is in danger and is hiding in the dark cave. He is being protected from the danger by the animals guarding the cave!
It seems a boy wants to hide in the darkest corner he can find to avoid the dangers coming his way!
The last stanza is truly effective to the boyās plight!
~Laura~
June 15th, 2018 22:45
Lauraš» said:
Zigs,
A super write! Iāve read it a few times. Each time I read it, I get a sense of a different fear! There can be many interpretations! It all depends on the reader! They can be totally different than the writerās! In my humble opinion, thatās the beauty of this poem!
The pic alone can be interpreted in many ways! It complements your poem very well!
I interpret it as depicting someone who is in danger and is hiding in the dark cave. He is being protected from the danger by the animals guarding the cave!
It seems a boy wants to hide in the darkest corner he can find to avoid the dangers coming his way!
The last stanza is truly effective to the boyās plight!
~Laura~
June 15th, 2018 22:45
TAINTED
Lauraš» said:
Zigs,
An Outstanding write!
Evil, in all forms, hunts for the purest of the pure! Beware...theyāre on the prowl!
Hold on for dear life against these evils of this world who want to devour us alive!
BEWARE...
If the walls could only talk...
~Laura~
May 28th, 2018 16:13
Lauraš» said:
Zigs,
An Outstanding write!
Evil, in all forms, hunts for the purest of the pure! Beware...theyāre on the prowl!
Hold on for dear life against these evils of this world who want to devour us alive!
BEWARE...
If the walls could only talk...
~Laura~
May 28th, 2018 16:13
IDENTITY
Lauraš» said:
Hi, Zigs!
Glad to see your writing!
A very interesting and intriguing verse!
āWe are but a leaf on a treeā
ā...itās s difficult to find truth, light, and peace...ā
So we are one of many in this universe without the me, my, I, mine...
just āa pin drop in the oceanā...
Part of āone human race without a faceā
You have captured the essence of the earthlings on this planet! Rather bleak...
hence the bar code?
~Laura~
May 25th, 2018 19:27
Lauraš» said:
Hi, Zigs!
Glad to see your writing!
A very interesting and intriguing verse!
āWe are but a leaf on a treeā
ā...itās s difficult to find truth, light, and peace...ā
So we are one of many in this universe without the me, my, I, mine...
just āa pin drop in the oceanā...
Part of āone human race without a faceā
You have captured the essence of the earthlings on this planet! Rather bleak...
hence the bar code?
~Laura~
May 25th, 2018 19:27
MASK
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. We all wear masks in the differing situations in our lives.
April 30th, 2018 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. We all wear masks in the differing situations in our lives.
April 30th, 2018 01:00
SHATTERED
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and you will be come whole when that final piece is assembled.
April 23rd, 2018 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and you will be come whole when that final piece is assembled.
April 23rd, 2018 01:31
SHATTERED
Lauraš» said:
Zigs,
Your writing speaks to many of us! We can find ourselves in a dark place for various reasons! It can be caused by others or can be self-inflicted! Whatever the reason, we shut ourselves down! No matter how fragile and vulnerable we are, we ask for no help! We embrace our darkness and try to be brave enough to help ourselves and not ask anyone for help no matter how long we stay in that darkness! We want to self heal and show ourselves we can do it!
CURA TE IPSUM...
~Laura~
April 22nd, 2018 19:15
Lauraš» said:
Zigs,
Your writing speaks to many of us! We can find ourselves in a dark place for various reasons! It can be caused by others or can be self-inflicted! Whatever the reason, we shut ourselves down! No matter how fragile and vulnerable we are, we ask for no help! We embrace our darkness and try to be brave enough to help ourselves and not ask anyone for help no matter how long we stay in that darkness! We want to self heal and show ourselves we can do it!
CURA TE IPSUM...
~Laura~
April 22nd, 2018 19:15
OLD MAN BRENT
Lauraš» said:
Itās been a while Zigs! Nice to āseeā you!
I enjoyed reading about old man Brent! It seems he lived a worthwhile life with no regrets!
ā...old man Brent his far away stare, smiles...ā
~Laura~
April 14th, 2018 09:34
Lauraš» said:
Itās been a while Zigs! Nice to āseeā you!
I enjoyed reading about old man Brent! It seems he lived a worthwhile life with no regrets!
ā...old man Brent his far away stare, smiles...ā
~Laura~
April 14th, 2018 09:34
LOST
Lauraš» said:
An intriguing piece, Zigs!
Phenomenal imagery!
I read it like a dream...
The dream begins where
one feels helplessness.
As the dream continues,
it gets darker and darker.
Feeling helpless and ready to surrender, one wakes up to that which illuminates...
as I can see in your well chosen visual! A brilliant write! Enjoyed the read!
~Laura~
March 9th, 2018 05:34
Lauraš» said:
An intriguing piece, Zigs!
Phenomenal imagery!
I read it like a dream...
The dream begins where
one feels helplessness.
As the dream continues,
it gets darker and darker.
Feeling helpless and ready to surrender, one wakes up to that which illuminates...
as I can see in your well chosen visual! A brilliant write! Enjoyed the read!
~Laura~
March 9th, 2018 05:34
White Collared
Jeremy Cohen said:
WOW, this is so deep. This is the truth! Love it. Thanks.
March 8th, 2018 15:46
Jeremy Cohen said:
WOW, this is so deep. This is the truth! Love it. Thanks.
March 8th, 2018 15:46
Incubus
Lauraš» said:
Zigs,
Another theme well written
about. Yes, indeed...very
interesting! Looking forward
to your next theme!
~Laura~
March 8th, 2018 02:07
Lauraš» said:
Zigs,
Another theme well written
about. Yes, indeed...very
interesting! Looking forward
to your next theme!
~Laura~
March 8th, 2018 02:07
White Collared
John Prophet said:
Power, is all religions crave. The few telling the many how to live. Evil has sunk its claws/fangs into these terribly flawed concepts.
February 25th, 2018 12:42
John Prophet said:
Power, is all religions crave. The few telling the many how to live. Evil has sunk its claws/fangs into these terribly flawed concepts.
February 25th, 2018 12:42
White Collared
Lauraš» said:
Zigs,
I can understand why
this was a hard one to
write about! An amazing
honest write! Soon, I will
have a long discussion with you about the subject matter...and itās not in their favor! They have a lot to answer to as far as Iām concerned! I live a life with many conflicts my dear friend!
Regards,
~Laura~
February 18th, 2018 18:16
Lauraš» said:
Zigs,
I can understand why
this was a hard one to
write about! An amazing
honest write! Soon, I will
have a long discussion with you about the subject matter...and itās not in their favor! They have a lot to answer to as far as Iām concerned! I live a life with many conflicts my dear friend!
Regards,
~Laura~
February 18th, 2018 18:16
ETERNAL
Lauraš» said:
Zigs,
You did say you like to
write on much different
themes just to change
the mood. Well youāve
accomplished your
goal with this brilliant
write! I feel the connectivity
throughout the poem. I
especially like the third
stanza! Thank you for
posting this exceptional
write!
~Laura~
February 18th, 2018 07:08
Lauraš» said:
Zigs,
You did say you like to
write on much different
themes just to change
the mood. Well youāve
accomplished your
goal with this brilliant
write! I feel the connectivity
throughout the poem. I
especially like the third
stanza! Thank you for
posting this exceptional
write!
~Laura~
February 18th, 2018 07:08
ETERNAL
Goldfinch60 said:
I was there, and always have been, My Spirit has come from infinity and will go onto eternity.
Good thought provoking write.
February 18th, 2018 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
I was there, and always have been, My Spirit has come from infinity and will go onto eternity.
Good thought provoking write.
February 18th, 2018 01:45
Beneath a co-write with CandleWitch final part 3 )
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write but the light will never die it will lighten the dark and heaven on Earth will return.
February 17th, 2018 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write but the light will never die it will lighten the dark and heaven on Earth will return.
February 17th, 2018 01:32
Beneath a co-write with CandleWitch final part 3 )
Lauraš» said:
Zigs & Cat...
Thank you!! Thank you!!
Iām so glad I asked for part 3! An awesome write...better than anticipated! So now I know the tale! So vivid! The ending is brilliant!
I read all three parts!
A superb trilogy!
It should definitely be a t.v. production! I wish I were a producer. I would buy the rights and you would write the script! Your collaboration has worked well!
~Laura~
February 16th, 2018 15:09
Lauraš» said:
Zigs & Cat...
Thank you!! Thank you!!
Iām so glad I asked for part 3! An awesome write...better than anticipated! So now I know the tale! So vivid! The ending is brilliant!
I read all three parts!
A superb trilogy!
It should definitely be a t.v. production! I wish I were a producer. I would buy the rights and you would write the script! Your collaboration has worked well!
~Laura~
February 16th, 2018 15:09
Beneath Part 2 a co-write with CandleWitch
Lauraš» said:
Ziggy and Cat,
Well done!
I Truly enjoyed this part 2 co-write! Totally engaging! The imagery this co-write conjures up is astounding! Would love to see a part 3. Is there a possibility?
~Laura ~
February 10th, 2018 18:06
Lauraš» said:
Ziggy and Cat,
Well done!
I Truly enjoyed this part 2 co-write! Totally engaging! The imagery this co-write conjures up is astounding! Would love to see a part 3. Is there a possibility?
~Laura ~
February 10th, 2018 18:06
THE BETTER PART OF ME (for hood my bud )
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words may fall through you but they land on the page to create good poems like this one.
February 6th, 2018 02:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words may fall through you but they land on the page to create good poems like this one.
February 6th, 2018 02:12
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