Comments received on poems by Dysthymia
Future Past Present
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful, from start to finish it had the same tone and flow, which is rare..
I especially like your blunt style, no romanticising or confusing wordplay, just valuable insight, worded accessible and \'matter of fact\'..
thanks for sharing
September 16th, 2021 03:14
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful, from start to finish it had the same tone and flow, which is rare..
I especially like your blunt style, no romanticising or confusing wordplay, just valuable insight, worded accessible and \'matter of fact\'..
thanks for sharing
September 16th, 2021 03:14
Future Past Present
Goldfinch60 said:
Today is the tomorrow that we worried about yesterday.
Andy
September 16th, 2021 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Today is the tomorrow that we worried about yesterday.
Andy
September 16th, 2021 00:34
lonely
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Dysthymia, I hope you have contact with her soon.
Andy
April 22nd, 2021 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Dysthymia, I hope you have contact with her soon.
Andy
April 22nd, 2021 00:25
lonely
dusk arising said:
Very moving passages from a lonely heart.
Suggestion, find a bench in middle of town and sit. You\'ll be surprised at the cameraderie of others and light conversations strike up easily. Stay light hearted and people will talk with you..... it\'s very soul lifting.
April 21st, 2021 09:35
dusk arising said:
Very moving passages from a lonely heart.
Suggestion, find a bench in middle of town and sit. You\'ll be surprised at the cameraderie of others and light conversations strike up easily. Stay light hearted and people will talk with you..... it\'s very soul lifting.
April 21st, 2021 09:35
Beach.
FredPeyer said:
D, great poem. Being married into a Chinese family I have to say you forgot the \'most important\' reason to go to the beach: FOOD. There is nothing better than the whole family doing a beach bbq pot luck!! Ah, and the boogie boarding, don\'t forget that. Loved your poem.
April 23rd, 2020 11:46
FredPeyer said:
D, great poem. Being married into a Chinese family I have to say you forgot the \'most important\' reason to go to the beach: FOOD. There is nothing better than the whole family doing a beach bbq pot luck!! Ah, and the boogie boarding, don\'t forget that. Loved your poem.
April 23rd, 2020 11:46
Beach.
Fay Slimm. said:
I love the way you weave lots of reasons for visiting beaches into this interesting read. Your final stanza sums up the whys in an encouraging way - for \"every time we leave we go on with our life with a little less negativity \" how postive and how true. Thank you for sharing this with us .
April 23rd, 2020 04:09
Fay Slimm. said:
I love the way you weave lots of reasons for visiting beaches into this interesting read. Your final stanza sums up the whys in an encouraging way - for \"every time we leave we go on with our life with a little less negativity \" how postive and how true. Thank you for sharing this with us .
April 23rd, 2020 04:09
Beach.
dusk arising said:
I think you\'ve covered a lot of ground in a succinct and positive way in your piece today. Always an uplifting visit where the ocean shows us natural forces and gives us such pleasure.
April 23rd, 2020 04:01
dusk arising said:
I think you\'ve covered a lot of ground in a succinct and positive way in your piece today. Always an uplifting visit where the ocean shows us natural forces and gives us such pleasure.
April 23rd, 2020 04:01
I’m okay
orchidee said:
Well, we do say \'I\'m Okay\' as a general reply to some folk. Maybe we don\'t know them that well? And would they listen if we had a long chat with them? I suppose we don\'t tell EVERYONE our personal matters or situations.
Some might even be expecting us to reply:\' Yep, all is Okay\', and be surprised if we said \'Well, actually, no I \'m not Okay!\'
October 23rd, 2019 01:53
orchidee said:
Well, we do say \'I\'m Okay\' as a general reply to some folk. Maybe we don\'t know them that well? And would they listen if we had a long chat with them? I suppose we don\'t tell EVERYONE our personal matters or situations.
Some might even be expecting us to reply:\' Yep, all is Okay\', and be surprised if we said \'Well, actually, no I \'m not Okay!\'
October 23rd, 2019 01:53
Mother
Laura🌻 said:
Dysthymia,
A beautifully written poem that I can relate to! It reminded me of a great book entitled “Love You Forever” by Robert Munsch that I think you’d love to read! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
May 1st, 2019 06:46
Laura🌻 said:
Dysthymia,
A beautifully written poem that I can relate to! It reminded me of a great book entitled “Love You Forever” by Robert Munsch that I think you’d love to read! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
May 1st, 2019 06:46
that one reason.
Nicholas Browning said:
To look back on the past and have a good laugh. Surely a goal worth aspiring for. Nicely said.
March 18th, 2019 00:59
Nicholas Browning said:
To look back on the past and have a good laugh. Surely a goal worth aspiring for. Nicely said.
March 18th, 2019 00:59
that one reason.
Poetic Dan said:
So many saved today, you are definitely right! When I look back, I\'ll know everything was fine!
Thank you endless for this rhyme
March 17th, 2019 10:48
Poetic Dan said:
So many saved today, you are definitely right! When I look back, I\'ll know everything was fine!
Thank you endless for this rhyme
March 17th, 2019 10:48
Life changing.
Christina8 said:
This is an excellent read, I am glad you came out better and stronger for the experience. A very positive write from you. I like that!
October 8th, 2018 12:23
Christina8 said:
This is an excellent read, I am glad you came out better and stronger for the experience. A very positive write from you. I like that!
October 8th, 2018 12:23
Life changing.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Nice explained D sounds a hard period glad you came through
Get stronger every day
October 8th, 2018 09:06
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Nice explained D sounds a hard period glad you came through
Get stronger every day
October 8th, 2018 09:06
Mental break downs
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, as Lawless said you need patience to survive, and by the way your words have been written you have both patience and a strong will to move forward - see you at the top of the hill.
April 30th, 2018 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, as Lawless said you need patience to survive, and by the way your words have been written you have both patience and a strong will to move forward - see you at the top of the hill.
April 30th, 2018 00:43
Mental break downs
Liberty_Shadows said:
i can relate to this poem very much. im glad you wrote it!
April 29th, 2018 16:03
Liberty_Shadows said:
i can relate to this poem very much. im glad you wrote it!
April 29th, 2018 16:03
Mental break downs
Christina8 said:
You are doing a great job! Keep up the good work! This is a great poem, D!
April 29th, 2018 13:25
Christina8 said:
You are doing a great job! Keep up the good work! This is a great poem, D!
April 29th, 2018 13:25
Depression pills update.
orchidee said:
Try cutting down pills gradually maybe? Hopefully you\'ll be okay for a \'longer while\' :) And just don\'t hear me sing - or you\'ll never recover. No -one will! heehee.
April 28th, 2018 10:09
orchidee said:
Try cutting down pills gradually maybe? Hopefully you\'ll be okay for a \'longer while\' :) And just don\'t hear me sing - or you\'ll never recover. No -one will! heehee.
April 28th, 2018 10:09
Depression pills update.
marlenawood said:
You have to feel ur emotions babe u can\'t mask them unless you want to it\'s up to you an I can relate to this much love
April 28th, 2018 05:17
marlenawood said:
You have to feel ur emotions babe u can\'t mask them unless you want to it\'s up to you an I can relate to this much love
April 28th, 2018 05:17
Mental illness.
RiverJordan said:
Don\'t believe all that occurs in your head! find your voice, use your soul to look outside in!
March 24th, 2018 05:22
RiverJordan said:
Don\'t believe all that occurs in your head! find your voice, use your soul to look outside in!
March 24th, 2018 05:22
Mental illness.
Caring dove said:
mental illness can be hard to deal with , i can relate in a way . i can feel the loneliness and pain running throughout this, you expressed this well
March 24th, 2018 03:17
Caring dove said:
mental illness can be hard to deal with , i can relate in a way . i can feel the loneliness and pain running throughout this, you expressed this well
March 24th, 2018 03:17
Kill me to cure me.
Lorna said:
Awwwwwww - such a sad write - very poignant....
March 13th, 2018 05:55
Lorna said:
Awwwwwww - such a sad write - very poignant....
March 13th, 2018 05:55
I am a penny.
Laura🌻 said:
A great write!
One penny at a time...
Day by day...
Nice and slow...
Slowly but surely...
All will be fine!
Glad you’re doing
better!
~Laura~
March 8th, 2018 08:53
Laura🌻 said:
A great write!
One penny at a time...
Day by day...
Nice and slow...
Slowly but surely...
All will be fine!
Glad you’re doing
better!
~Laura~
March 8th, 2018 08:53
Metaphors - Sad
Christina8 said:
Yes I get the last stanza quite a bit. It\'s relatable. Good job on these!
March 1st, 2018 13:14
Christina8 said:
Yes I get the last stanza quite a bit. It\'s relatable. Good job on these!
March 1st, 2018 13:14
Metaphors - Sad
Ecelis20 said:
The ending line is very interesting and it does make sense to me :)
March 1st, 2018 09:59
Ecelis20 said:
The ending line is very interesting and it does make sense to me :)
March 1st, 2018 09:59
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