Comments received on poems by Lorna
Fire and Wood
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Lorna bringing wonderful images.
Andy
October 18th, 2021 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Lorna bringing wonderful images.
Andy
October 18th, 2021 01:54
When It\'s Time to Run
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Lorna, I know my lover is waiting for me and we will be together for eternity.
Andy
October 18th, 2021 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Lorna, I know my lover is waiting for me and we will be together for eternity.
Andy
October 18th, 2021 00:34
When It\'s Time to Run
A.H. Browning said:
The category you selected for this poem was appropriately “love”. What a heart felt and moving write. I also enjoyed the song as well, especially the lyrics, “Yours is the heart I’ll always keep. I’m not gone even if I leave.”
Kindest regards,
A.H.
October 18th, 2021 00:33
A.H. Browning said:
The category you selected for this poem was appropriately “love”. What a heart felt and moving write. I also enjoyed the song as well, especially the lyrics, “Yours is the heart I’ll always keep. I’m not gone even if I leave.”
Kindest regards,
A.H.
October 18th, 2021 00:33
When It\'s Time to Run
Accidental Poet said:
A reunion is there patiently waiting for you Lorna. 🌹👍
October 17th, 2021 16:12
Accidental Poet said:
A reunion is there patiently waiting for you Lorna. 🌹👍
October 17th, 2021 16:12
When It\'s Time to Run
Paul Bell said:
Sad yet such a great write.
Death the tragedy, yet you bring light to it. Got a feeling a horse will be saddled for you, but not for a long time yet.
October 17th, 2021 07:57
Paul Bell said:
Sad yet such a great write.
Death the tragedy, yet you bring light to it. Got a feeling a horse will be saddled for you, but not for a long time yet.
October 17th, 2021 07:57
Unattainable
Doggerel Dave said:
That one thing that I lack is a full comprehension of the idiocy and foolishness which exists in the community like a virus - and for that I think I will howl the moon rather than cry....
September 2nd, 2021 04:24
Doggerel Dave said:
That one thing that I lack is a full comprehension of the idiocy and foolishness which exists in the community like a virus - and for that I think I will howl the moon rather than cry....
September 2nd, 2021 04:24
Unattainable
L. B. Mek said:
let it all go
for as morning arrives, you\'ll soon realise
it\'ll all be dew stains, in no time..
Thanks for sharing, dear poet
September 2nd, 2021 04:15
L. B. Mek said:
let it all go
for as morning arrives, you\'ll soon realise
it\'ll all be dew stains, in no time..
Thanks for sharing, dear poet
September 2nd, 2021 04:15
Unattainable
dusk arising said:
The journey which brings each of us to where we will be is filled with the lessons of yesterday, perculiar to us in person but spreads behind us as in a tapestry of revelation telling us it is the same for all but the few.
Oh to be of those few.
September 2nd, 2021 01:36
dusk arising said:
The journey which brings each of us to where we will be is filled with the lessons of yesterday, perculiar to us in person but spreads behind us as in a tapestry of revelation telling us it is the same for all but the few.
Oh to be of those few.
September 2nd, 2021 01:36
Unattainable
Saxon Crow said:
Ooo like this one Lorna. A lot. Faved.
BTW love the rabbit picture I have something very similar stuck to my car!
September 2nd, 2021 00:47
Saxon Crow said:
Ooo like this one Lorna. A lot. Faved.
BTW love the rabbit picture I have something very similar stuck to my car!
September 2nd, 2021 00:47
Sugar Baby
Neville said:
Make mine a double in a dirty glass .. everything in moderation, except for some things .. maybe .... silly me :)
September 1st, 2021 10:58
Neville said:
Make mine a double in a dirty glass .. everything in moderation, except for some things .. maybe .... silly me :)
September 1st, 2021 10:58
Sugar Baby
Doggerel Dave said:
Great little tune there, Lorna
I\'ll vote for alcohol in very measured amounts any time. There\'s a very narrow window of opportunity there to feel warm and peaceful but not pissed. Sweets? Nah. Insulin dependent diabetes for almost forty years - all good, the discipline keeps me straight.
Fun write. Utilising a long ago but not forgotten episode or two in my youth, I know that word \'thrill\' is dripping with irony.........
September 1st, 2021 02:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Great little tune there, Lorna
I\'ll vote for alcohol in very measured amounts any time. There\'s a very narrow window of opportunity there to feel warm and peaceful but not pissed. Sweets? Nah. Insulin dependent diabetes for almost forty years - all good, the discipline keeps me straight.
Fun write. Utilising a long ago but not forgotten episode or two in my youth, I know that word \'thrill\' is dripping with irony.........
September 1st, 2021 02:38
Too Soon October
Goldfinch60 said:
Autumn will soon be upon us and I shall revel in Nature’s beauty that it brings to me.
Andy
August 31st, 2021 14:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Autumn will soon be upon us and I shall revel in Nature’s beauty that it brings to me.
Andy
August 31st, 2021 14:49
Too Soon October
Fay Slimm. said:
A haunting number together with your shivery autumn lament makes a really captivating posting - thanking you Lorna.
August 31st, 2021 14:04
Fay Slimm. said:
A haunting number together with your shivery autumn lament makes a really captivating posting - thanking you Lorna.
August 31st, 2021 14:04
Too Soon October
orchidee said:
But you has not had September yet! heehee. Good write Lorna.
I\'m getting ahead a bit too - thinking of Harvest time here at end of August!
August 31st, 2021 09:27
orchidee said:
But you has not had September yet! heehee. Good write Lorna.
I\'m getting ahead a bit too - thinking of Harvest time here at end of August!
August 31st, 2021 09:27
Too Soon October
L. B. Mek said:
\'Looking to the rear instead of forward
Not escaping the clamp of past fears
The sweat on the brow
Where are the hands of comfort now\'..
escape, from oneself - rarely: works
best to stand firm, confront and what must be shed
before moving on when a path, is shown..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 31st, 2021 06:28
L. B. Mek said:
\'Looking to the rear instead of forward
Not escaping the clamp of past fears
The sweat on the brow
Where are the hands of comfort now\'..
escape, from oneself - rarely: works
best to stand firm, confront and what must be shed
before moving on when a path, is shown..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 31st, 2021 06:28
Too Soon October
Accidental Poet said:
Yes Lorna, the chills of Autumn will be upon us very soon. And the Summer just a memory. But each season has its own memories to savour. Great write Lorna.
August 31st, 2021 05:22
Accidental Poet said:
Yes Lorna, the chills of Autumn will be upon us very soon. And the Summer just a memory. But each season has its own memories to savour. Great write Lorna.
August 31st, 2021 05:22
August Garden
Goldfinch60 said:
Natures wonder will always be with us Lorna as we know that those Autumn will be back with us in Spring.
Andy
August 31st, 2021 00:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Natures wonder will always be with us Lorna as we know that those Autumn will be back with us in Spring.
Andy
August 31st, 2021 00:04
August Garden
Fay Slimm. said:
You have caught the essence of this time of year with such poetic mastery dear Lorna - I love the slow flow of short line cadence - - a first rate write and this little gem goes into my list of favourites.
August 30th, 2021 15:41
Fay Slimm. said:
You have caught the essence of this time of year with such poetic mastery dear Lorna - I love the slow flow of short line cadence - - a first rate write and this little gem goes into my list of favourites.
August 30th, 2021 15:41
Wanderlust
Neville said:
even the word itself conjures up so many new and as yet to find people, places, sights, sounds, tastes n smells .. feels perfect to me my friend .. so can you imagine a whole page devoted to its namesake ....... feels like a mixture of freedom and heaven all rolled into one ..................... Neville
August 30th, 2021 08:30
Neville said:
even the word itself conjures up so many new and as yet to find people, places, sights, sounds, tastes n smells .. feels perfect to me my friend .. so can you imagine a whole page devoted to its namesake ....... feels like a mixture of freedom and heaven all rolled into one ..................... Neville
August 30th, 2021 08:30
August Garden
Neville said:
an August Garden indecently well captured .............................. super :)
August 30th, 2021 08:21
Neville said:
an August Garden indecently well captured .............................. super :)
August 30th, 2021 08:21
August Garden
dusk arising said:
Natures cycle on mother earth. So good to witness in these days of fear for what we are doing to our planet.
Lovely words.
August 30th, 2021 07:33
dusk arising said:
Natures cycle on mother earth. So good to witness in these days of fear for what we are doing to our planet.
Lovely words.
August 30th, 2021 07:33
Wanderlust
L. B. Mek said:
what a comprehensive portrait
what a sobering dose of reality
what a relatable read of poetic, brevity..
thank you, for choosing to share
August 30th, 2021 04:25
L. B. Mek said:
what a comprehensive portrait
what a sobering dose of reality
what a relatable read of poetic, brevity..
thank you, for choosing to share
August 30th, 2021 04:25
Wanderlust
Doggerel Dave said:
Aren\'t you being just a little too understanding there, Lorna?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZqlR5D0y23s&ab_channel=LeonardCohenVEVO
Sweet write though.
August 29th, 2021 20:29
Doggerel Dave said:
Aren\'t you being just a little too understanding there, Lorna?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZqlR5D0y23s&ab_channel=LeonardCohenVEVO
Sweet write though.
August 29th, 2021 20:29
Wanderlust
Fay Slimm. said:
A cry of appeal to another who cannot be on one place or situation for long is so artfully written here Lorna - really enjoyed the hidden force in this read.
August 29th, 2021 16:21
Fay Slimm. said:
A cry of appeal to another who cannot be on one place or situation for long is so artfully written here Lorna - really enjoyed the hidden force in this read.
August 29th, 2021 16:21
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