Comments received on poems by Lorna
Unattainable
Saxon Crow said:
Ooo like this one Lorna. A lot. Faved.
BTW love the rabbit picture I have something very similar stuck to my car!
September 2nd, 2021 00:47
Saxon Crow said:
Ooo like this one Lorna. A lot. Faved.
BTW love the rabbit picture I have something very similar stuck to my car!
September 2nd, 2021 00:47
Sugar Baby
Neville said:
Make mine a double in a dirty glass .. everything in moderation, except for some things .. maybe .... silly me :)
September 1st, 2021 10:58
Neville said:
Make mine a double in a dirty glass .. everything in moderation, except for some things .. maybe .... silly me :)
September 1st, 2021 10:58
Sugar Baby
Doggerel Dave said:
Great little tune there, Lorna
I\'ll vote for alcohol in very measured amounts any time. There\'s a very narrow window of opportunity there to feel warm and peaceful but not pissed. Sweets? Nah. Insulin dependent diabetes for almost forty years - all good, the discipline keeps me straight.
Fun write. Utilising a long ago but not forgotten episode or two in my youth, I know that word \'thrill\' is dripping with irony.........
September 1st, 2021 02:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Great little tune there, Lorna
I\'ll vote for alcohol in very measured amounts any time. There\'s a very narrow window of opportunity there to feel warm and peaceful but not pissed. Sweets? Nah. Insulin dependent diabetes for almost forty years - all good, the discipline keeps me straight.
Fun write. Utilising a long ago but not forgotten episode or two in my youth, I know that word \'thrill\' is dripping with irony.........
September 1st, 2021 02:38
Too Soon October
Goldfinch60 said:
Autumn will soon be upon us and I shall revel in Nature’s beauty that it brings to me.
Andy
August 31st, 2021 14:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Autumn will soon be upon us and I shall revel in Nature’s beauty that it brings to me.
Andy
August 31st, 2021 14:49
Too Soon October
Fay Slimm. said:
A haunting number together with your shivery autumn lament makes a really captivating posting - thanking you Lorna.
August 31st, 2021 14:04
Fay Slimm. said:
A haunting number together with your shivery autumn lament makes a really captivating posting - thanking you Lorna.
August 31st, 2021 14:04
Too Soon October
orchidee said:
But you has not had September yet! heehee. Good write Lorna.
I\'m getting ahead a bit too - thinking of Harvest time here at end of August!
August 31st, 2021 09:27
orchidee said:
But you has not had September yet! heehee. Good write Lorna.
I\'m getting ahead a bit too - thinking of Harvest time here at end of August!
August 31st, 2021 09:27
Too Soon October
L. B. Mek said:
\'Looking to the rear instead of forward
Not escaping the clamp of past fears
The sweat on the brow
Where are the hands of comfort now\'..
escape, from oneself - rarely: works
best to stand firm, confront and what must be shed
before moving on when a path, is shown..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 31st, 2021 06:28
L. B. Mek said:
\'Looking to the rear instead of forward
Not escaping the clamp of past fears
The sweat on the brow
Where are the hands of comfort now\'..
escape, from oneself - rarely: works
best to stand firm, confront and what must be shed
before moving on when a path, is shown..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 31st, 2021 06:28
August Garden
Goldfinch60 said:
Natures wonder will always be with us Lorna as we know that those Autumn will be back with us in Spring.
Andy
August 31st, 2021 00:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Natures wonder will always be with us Lorna as we know that those Autumn will be back with us in Spring.
Andy
August 31st, 2021 00:04
August Garden
Fay Slimm. said:
You have caught the essence of this time of year with such poetic mastery dear Lorna - I love the slow flow of short line cadence - - a first rate write and this little gem goes into my list of favourites.
August 30th, 2021 15:41
Fay Slimm. said:
You have caught the essence of this time of year with such poetic mastery dear Lorna - I love the slow flow of short line cadence - - a first rate write and this little gem goes into my list of favourites.
August 30th, 2021 15:41
Wanderlust
Neville said:
even the word itself conjures up so many new and as yet to find people, places, sights, sounds, tastes n smells .. feels perfect to me my friend .. so can you imagine a whole page devoted to its namesake ....... feels like a mixture of freedom and heaven all rolled into one ..................... Neville
August 30th, 2021 08:30
Neville said:
even the word itself conjures up so many new and as yet to find people, places, sights, sounds, tastes n smells .. feels perfect to me my friend .. so can you imagine a whole page devoted to its namesake ....... feels like a mixture of freedom and heaven all rolled into one ..................... Neville
August 30th, 2021 08:30
August Garden
Neville said:
an August Garden indecently well captured .............................. super :)
August 30th, 2021 08:21
Neville said:
an August Garden indecently well captured .............................. super :)
August 30th, 2021 08:21
August Garden
dusk arising said:
Natures cycle on mother earth. So good to witness in these days of fear for what we are doing to our planet.
Lovely words.
August 30th, 2021 07:33
dusk arising said:
Natures cycle on mother earth. So good to witness in these days of fear for what we are doing to our planet.
Lovely words.
August 30th, 2021 07:33
Wanderlust
L. B. Mek said:
what a comprehensive portrait
what a sobering dose of reality
what a relatable read of poetic, brevity..
thank you, for choosing to share
August 30th, 2021 04:25
L. B. Mek said:
what a comprehensive portrait
what a sobering dose of reality
what a relatable read of poetic, brevity..
thank you, for choosing to share
August 30th, 2021 04:25
Wanderlust
Doggerel Dave said:
Aren\'t you being just a little too understanding there, Lorna?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZqlR5D0y23s&ab_channel=LeonardCohenVEVO
Sweet write though.
August 29th, 2021 20:29
Doggerel Dave said:
Aren\'t you being just a little too understanding there, Lorna?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZqlR5D0y23s&ab_channel=LeonardCohenVEVO
Sweet write though.
August 29th, 2021 20:29
Wanderlust
Fay Slimm. said:
A cry of appeal to another who cannot be on one place or situation for long is so artfully written here Lorna - really enjoyed the hidden force in this read.
August 29th, 2021 16:21
Fay Slimm. said:
A cry of appeal to another who cannot be on one place or situation for long is so artfully written here Lorna - really enjoyed the hidden force in this read.
August 29th, 2021 16:21
Wanderlust
dusk arising said:
Reminded me of a feeling which comes over me in waves now and again. Parts of me belong all over the place maybe because i have no solid aged roots. But through it all, I am rooted to my surrounds and what is dear to me.
August 29th, 2021 12:59
dusk arising said:
Reminded me of a feeling which comes over me in waves now and again. Parts of me belong all over the place maybe because i have no solid aged roots. But through it all, I am rooted to my surrounds and what is dear to me.
August 29th, 2021 12:59
Wanderlust
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
His departure might have left you bereft, but his ‘wanderlust’ may have been satisfied…and in that I’m sure you’ll find some solace.
A great read of your beautifully penned words.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
August 29th, 2021 11:56
Laura🌻 said:
Lorna,
His departure might have left you bereft, but his ‘wanderlust’ may have been satisfied…and in that I’m sure you’ll find some solace.
A great read of your beautifully penned words.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
August 29th, 2021 11:56
Worry
L. B. Mek said:
\'That you are not lonely for me
As I am for you
That time stretches hands
To us both\'..
a little prayer, leaking from your heart\'s: purpled ink
in the hopes, that special someone will read
reflect and find a way, back into your forgiving arms...
thanks for sharing, such a wonderfully relatable read
August 23rd, 2021 05:44
L. B. Mek said:
\'That you are not lonely for me
As I am for you
That time stretches hands
To us both\'..
a little prayer, leaking from your heart\'s: purpled ink
in the hopes, that special someone will read
reflect and find a way, back into your forgiving arms...
thanks for sharing, such a wonderfully relatable read
August 23rd, 2021 05:44
Worry
Doggerel Dave said:
I never knew you cared, Lorna.....
A polished write that speaks of emptiness and longing.
August 23rd, 2021 04:02
Doggerel Dave said:
I never knew you cared, Lorna.....
A polished write that speaks of emptiness and longing.
August 23rd, 2021 04:02
Worry
Neville said:
it would be impossible not to love this incredibly sad & desperate plea ..
I know I do .. Neville
August 23rd, 2021 02:07
Neville said:
it would be impossible not to love this incredibly sad & desperate plea ..
I know I do .. Neville
August 23rd, 2021 02:07
Garden Art
Caring dove said:
Sometimes I like to take pictures and use them as inspiration for a poem
August 23rd, 2021 01:59
Caring dove said:
Sometimes I like to take pictures and use them as inspiration for a poem
August 23rd, 2021 01:59
Old Clock
Coyote said:
Time moves steadily on and all we can do is live one tick at a time. Great write Lorna.
August 22nd, 2021 16:31
Coyote said:
Time moves steadily on and all we can do is live one tick at a time. Great write Lorna.
August 22nd, 2021 16:31
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