Comments received on poems by TrystanBehm
Voltage
Laura🌻 said:
Trystan,
“Rippling waves of tingling
Coursing through my veins”
While reading these words, I remember clearly the indescribable sensation! You’ve threaded your words so brilliantly that you’ve succeeded to get this reader to easily remember such feelings! Incredible indeed!
I think your heart was the epicenter!
An excellent write! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
November 15th, 2018 08:58
Laura🌻 said:
Trystan,
“Rippling waves of tingling
Coursing through my veins”
While reading these words, I remember clearly the indescribable sensation! You’ve threaded your words so brilliantly that you’ve succeeded to get this reader to easily remember such feelings! Incredible indeed!
I think your heart was the epicenter!
An excellent write! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
November 15th, 2018 08:58
The Void
Goldfinch60 said:
Those feelings come to us many times we need to stop and recognise them as most of them are wonderful.
November 15th, 2018 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Those feelings come to us many times we need to stop and recognise them as most of them are wonderful.
November 15th, 2018 01:49
The Void
Laura🌻 said:
Trystan,
In our lifetime, we all experience and wish to fill that void! The ending of your poem says it best...
“For to feel something and recognize it as undefinable
Is a higher calling than explaining something you can’t feel.”
An excellent and perceptive write! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
November 14th, 2018 08:08
Laura🌻 said:
Trystan,
In our lifetime, we all experience and wish to fill that void! The ending of your poem says it best...
“For to feel something and recognize it as undefinable
Is a higher calling than explaining something you can’t feel.”
An excellent and perceptive write! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
November 14th, 2018 08:08
You?
Heather T said:
That last line lends a lot of power to the rest of your words!
February 14th, 2018 09:09
Heather T said:
That last line lends a lot of power to the rest of your words!
February 14th, 2018 09:09
Bone
Laura🌻 said:
Trystan,
As I was reading your poem, Philip Phillip’s song, Dance With Me, started playing on the radio. After the song finished, I felt a certain calmness...
The same feeling I felt as I finished reading your poem’s last nine words! Powerful!
A great write that I totally enjoyed reading!
~Laura~
February 13th, 2018 10:25
Laura🌻 said:
Trystan,
As I was reading your poem, Philip Phillip’s song, Dance With Me, started playing on the radio. After the song finished, I felt a certain calmness...
The same feeling I felt as I finished reading your poem’s last nine words! Powerful!
A great write that I totally enjoyed reading!
~Laura~
February 13th, 2018 10:25
Clouds
Lorna said:
Great line:
Untouched by the choking, bloody hands of some culture.
It\'s so painful how we can\'t hold on to beautiful moments.
I\'m wondering why you are harking back to the 50\'s?
February 13th, 2018 04:55
Lorna said:
Great line:
Untouched by the choking, bloody hands of some culture.
It\'s so painful how we can\'t hold on to beautiful moments.
I\'m wondering why you are harking back to the 50\'s?
February 13th, 2018 04:55
You?
rrivera138 said:
Processing pain is deeply personal, but those last two lines are universal. Keep up the goodness.
February 9th, 2018 21:08
rrivera138 said:
Processing pain is deeply personal, but those last two lines are universal. Keep up the goodness.
February 9th, 2018 21:08
The King
rrivera138 said:
Crazy how living even a minute of pondering what it means to be alive can feel like it\'s kill or be killed...and in a way, it is. More good stuff. 👍🏼
February 9th, 2018 21:05
rrivera138 said:
Crazy how living even a minute of pondering what it means to be alive can feel like it\'s kill or be killed...and in a way, it is. More good stuff. 👍🏼
February 9th, 2018 21:05
Drive to Nowhere
rrivera138 said:
You\'re one of the best poets I\'ve read on this website so far. Your poems aren\'t exactly easy to read, but through the cracks of your semi-cryptic style is a clear meaning.
February 7th, 2018 01:35
rrivera138 said:
You\'re one of the best poets I\'ve read on this website so far. Your poems aren\'t exactly easy to read, but through the cracks of your semi-cryptic style is a clear meaning.
February 7th, 2018 01:35
You?
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Great beginning and ending.....
\"It’s a warm cold
Who knew your heart could bleed out from a splinter hole?\"
KPB
February 5th, 2018 18:50
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Great beginning and ending.....
\"It’s a warm cold
Who knew your heart could bleed out from a splinter hole?\"
KPB
February 5th, 2018 18:50
Hemlock is it?
Lorna said:
Good image and message..... it\'s a good thing when you can rely on yourself..........
February 3rd, 2018 09:42
Lorna said:
Good image and message..... it\'s a good thing when you can rely on yourself..........
February 3rd, 2018 09:42
The Majestic
Fay Slimm. said:
The lure of the deep is so powerfully presented in these engaging lines Trystan to which I can relate - Living so near the beach that receives tidal fury at times your personification of its appeal made the read very special to me. Thanks for this write which goes into my faves.
February 2nd, 2018 17:25
Fay Slimm. said:
The lure of the deep is so powerfully presented in these engaging lines Trystan to which I can relate - Living so near the beach that receives tidal fury at times your personification of its appeal made the read very special to me. Thanks for this write which goes into my faves.
February 2nd, 2018 17:25
The Majestic
Christina8 said:
This is awesome! I love the way you describe the sand....something I long for.
February 2nd, 2018 13:10
Christina8 said:
This is awesome! I love the way you describe the sand....something I long for.
February 2nd, 2018 13:10
The Majestic
Lorna said:
oooooooo - beautiful. The cautious friendship between the beach and the ocean....... I love it. (Fill in your profile so we know more about you!)
February 2nd, 2018 10:05
Lorna said:
oooooooo - beautiful. The cautious friendship between the beach and the ocean....... I love it. (Fill in your profile so we know more about you!)
February 2nd, 2018 10:05
You are not Unique...
Aislinn Wilson said:
The poem is striking and dark, but I have to wonder how it connects to the title?
January 31st, 2018 08:20
Aislinn Wilson said:
The poem is striking and dark, but I have to wonder how it connects to the title?
January 31st, 2018 08:20
Enigma
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
really good ! i love this ! this line really stands out , for me
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In a field of purple daisies, I want her to see
The man who is not gray but the man who is me\'\'
now , we would all want to focus on our attention on the purple, right, but we cannot ignore the grey as he has a voice which needs to be heard .
we all need to be ourselves and i am not sure being fake or untrue, not sure it gets us anywhere ... no point trying to be someone we are not .. because i think and feel , that it does not get us anywhere .. a great piece of writing , truly enjoyed..
January 30th, 2018 05:52
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
really good ! i love this ! this line really stands out , for me
\'\'
In a field of purple daisies, I want her to see
The man who is not gray but the man who is me\'\'
now , we would all want to focus on our attention on the purple, right, but we cannot ignore the grey as he has a voice which needs to be heard .
we all need to be ourselves and i am not sure being fake or untrue, not sure it gets us anywhere ... no point trying to be someone we are not .. because i think and feel , that it does not get us anywhere .. a great piece of writing , truly enjoyed..
January 30th, 2018 05:52
Nectar
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
interesting ! i like the words used throughout .. :-)
January 30th, 2018 05:44
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
interesting ! i like the words used throughout .. :-)
January 30th, 2018 05:44
Home
dusk arising said:
LOL Excellent.... been there done that.... one of those where the earth stands still and u just go WOW!
I agree with Hood, you captured the moment.
January 28th, 2018 13:08
dusk arising said:
LOL Excellent.... been there done that.... one of those where the earth stands still and u just go WOW!
I agree with Hood, you captured the moment.
January 28th, 2018 13:08
Clarity
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Love this....
\"Being broken allows me to keep good inventory - know where all the pieces are.\"
January 26th, 2018 00:52
Kurt Philip Behm said:
Love this....
\"Being broken allows me to keep good inventory - know where all the pieces are.\"
January 26th, 2018 00:52
Clarity
TrystanBehm said:
Thanks Tony! Just getting started on here, so really appreciate the comments.
January 25th, 2018 09:44
TrystanBehm said:
Thanks Tony! Just getting started on here, so really appreciate the comments.
January 25th, 2018 09:44
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