Comments received on poems by cutelilcardinal
Last Resort
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ! Thanks for sharing FRIEND - a beautifully structured Poem with an elegant SUBJECT that evokes the exacting QUALITIES of your LOVERS now ex-Ladies ? Most of us Girls can empathise. BRIAN had a plethora of EX*s with similar qualities to Your Beaus list !
The Pretty - The Show Girl - Theres always a Georgeous Blonde (Im Brunette) - The Tall (with flawless skin !) - One of My Friends etc etc ! BUT - like You - in the end - I GOT CHOSEN ! Now were ENGAGED to be MARRIED in 2020 ! All the others are ephemeral memories - AMEN
Love - Joy - Peace
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
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October 17th, 2019 16:39
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ! Thanks for sharing FRIEND - a beautifully structured Poem with an elegant SUBJECT that evokes the exacting QUALITIES of your LOVERS now ex-Ladies ? Most of us Girls can empathise. BRIAN had a plethora of EX*s with similar qualities to Your Beaus list !
The Pretty - The Show Girl - Theres always a Georgeous Blonde (Im Brunette) - The Tall (with flawless skin !) - One of My Friends etc etc ! BUT - like You - in the end - I GOT CHOSEN ! Now were ENGAGED to be MARRIED in 2020 ! All the others are ephemeral memories - AMEN
Love - Joy - Peace
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
Please check our POEMS - Thanks !
October 17th, 2019 16:39
Little Miss Harmony
Netashi said:
No one is perfect don\'t strain yourself. Great write about anxiety and insecurities. keep up the great work.
- T
January 29th, 2019 11:48
Netashi said:
No one is perfect don\'t strain yourself. Great write about anxiety and insecurities. keep up the great work.
- T
January 29th, 2019 11:48
Take Me Back
Netashi said:
Great poem yearning of the good old days with a lover. Great write, keep up the splendid work.
-Theta
October 1st, 2018 14:46
Netashi said:
Great poem yearning of the good old days with a lover. Great write, keep up the splendid work.
-Theta
October 1st, 2018 14:46
Words Fail
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I don\'t think words fail you at all C I think you pretty mauch mastered the art
Nice write
September 19th, 2018 15:47
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
I don\'t think words fail you at all C I think you pretty mauch mastered the art
Nice write
September 19th, 2018 15:47
Please Come Home
Netashi said:
Very glum and somber its a good poem in showing how the human heart is like a puzzle missing a piece or a painting missing a specific color the feeling of when we lose a loved one. Very nice keep it up.
-theta
August 23rd, 2018 14:25
Netashi said:
Very glum and somber its a good poem in showing how the human heart is like a puzzle missing a piece or a painting missing a specific color the feeling of when we lose a loved one. Very nice keep it up.
-theta
August 23rd, 2018 14:25
Ode to a Stuffed Rabbit
Lorna said:
I admit to a stuffed bear although I shouldn\'t because I claim way too old for that but he hides behind one of my pillows and if I get the mean blues in the middle of the night he\'s there .... this was the most adorable little poem....... never grow to be ashamed of him!
July 29th, 2018 05:28
Lorna said:
I admit to a stuffed bear although I shouldn\'t because I claim way too old for that but he hides behind one of my pillows and if I get the mean blues in the middle of the night he\'s there .... this was the most adorable little poem....... never grow to be ashamed of him!
July 29th, 2018 05:28
What They Don\'t Know
dusk arising said:
This piece is very very well written. Compelling reading. I really like the way you have withheld and therefore created mystery within.
You have a great talent, this kind of writing is not easy to do and you have done it masterfully.
July 8th, 2018 19:04
dusk arising said:
This piece is very very well written. Compelling reading. I really like the way you have withheld and therefore created mystery within.
You have a great talent, this kind of writing is not easy to do and you have done it masterfully.
July 8th, 2018 19:04
The Voice That Stole My Heart
SLR said:
So pretty. It makes me want to hear them sing too.
May 12th, 2018 13:31
SLR said:
So pretty. It makes me want to hear them sing too.
May 12th, 2018 13:31
Confession Time
SLR said:
If this is an actual issue for you, must bigger towns (and lots of small ones too) have a community theater group where you would be able to act and sing again. If this is your dream, follow it.
May 11th, 2018 22:31
SLR said:
If this is an actual issue for you, must bigger towns (and lots of small ones too) have a community theater group where you would be able to act and sing again. If this is your dream, follow it.
May 11th, 2018 22:31
Reflection
SLR said:
I love this! I do the same thing, I have to remind myself of my assets and try not to focus on the flaws. (It helps when someone you love points out the good stuff!) Besides it\'s more important to be beautiful on the inside! :-)
May 9th, 2018 21:34
SLR said:
I love this! I do the same thing, I have to remind myself of my assets and try not to focus on the flaws. (It helps when someone you love points out the good stuff!) Besides it\'s more important to be beautiful on the inside! :-)
May 9th, 2018 21:34
Fine Doesn\'t Mean Fine
Cinderella_Pixie said:
I absolutely love this thank you for sharing it
May 8th, 2018 00:47
Cinderella_Pixie said:
I absolutely love this thank you for sharing it
May 8th, 2018 00:47
Fine Doesn\'t Mean Fine
.M. said:
oml that\'s amazing, you actual put it into words, I feel you
May 7th, 2018 19:34
.M. said:
oml that\'s amazing, you actual put it into words, I feel you
May 7th, 2018 19:34
Opening Night
Classicmister said:
Been there I know the feeling! Always remember ... Don\'t block other actors,
Speak to the back row, Don\'t gabble,
Concentrate so don\'t miss cue, If you get a cue, don\'t say thank you! But most of all enjoy yourself.
Break a leg!
May 4th, 2018 10:50
Classicmister said:
Been there I know the feeling! Always remember ... Don\'t block other actors,
Speak to the back row, Don\'t gabble,
Concentrate so don\'t miss cue, If you get a cue, don\'t say thank you! But most of all enjoy yourself.
Break a leg!
May 4th, 2018 10:50
You\'re Trying.
Caring dove said:
yes, neglect can impact us in so many ways . not nice to feel neglected or treated like we are almost invisible. the words that stood out for me
I’m sure you still love me.
I’m sure you still care.
I’m sure you don’t hate me.
But the neglect is still there.\'\'
people make mistakes but some of their mistakes affect our lives too much , i know this only too well , having been neglected as a kid , i know my mum cares but it still affected me
April 26th, 2018 13:38
Caring dove said:
yes, neglect can impact us in so many ways . not nice to feel neglected or treated like we are almost invisible. the words that stood out for me
I’m sure you still love me.
I’m sure you still care.
I’m sure you don’t hate me.
But the neglect is still there.\'\'
people make mistakes but some of their mistakes affect our lives too much , i know this only too well , having been neglected as a kid , i know my mum cares but it still affected me
April 26th, 2018 13:38
Walking Contradiction
Patricia LaFazia said:
I really liked your poem. :) keep on writing:)
March 14th, 2018 14:37
Patricia LaFazia said:
I really liked your poem. :) keep on writing:)
March 14th, 2018 14:37
Walking Contradiction
willyweed said:
I like your poem and rhymes, write on!
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March 14th, 2018 10:26
willyweed said:
I like your poem and rhymes, write on!
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March 14th, 2018 10:26
Walking Contradiction
orchidee said:
Ohh I dunno - anyone who has coffee and toffee can\'t be completely contradictory, I say! heehee.
March 14th, 2018 10:08
orchidee said:
Ohh I dunno - anyone who has coffee and toffee can\'t be completely contradictory, I say! heehee.
March 14th, 2018 10:08
I\'m Sorry
A. F. Naturaliy said:
Great poem. Glad I got to hear it read aloud before it was posted here. ^^
Keep writing, friendo.
March 4th, 2018 22:39
A. F. Naturaliy said:
Great poem. Glad I got to hear it read aloud before it was posted here. ^^
Keep writing, friendo.
March 4th, 2018 22:39
Ignore Me, I\'m Fine, Have Fun
edwinknox said:
Very sad poem, but in a good way. Very well written. Unfortunately, I can relate to this feeling a lot.
March 2nd, 2018 14:07
edwinknox said:
Very sad poem, but in a good way. Very well written. Unfortunately, I can relate to this feeling a lot.
March 2nd, 2018 14:07
Flowers For You
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CARDINAL (America\'s cutest Bird !) Thanks for your first poem ! It is beautifully structured ~ 8 balanced quatrains with a consistent rhyming pattern (xaxa xbxb etc) well done. However the contents is very sad ! S1 & S2 Red Roses lovingly given ~ but left to die ! S3 & S4 You remember the Day & pleasant conversations ! S5 & S6 You give the bouquet and all you get is a grunted \"Thank You\" (What is wrong with Friends ?) It was a positive token because 4 months previous they had forgot your special day ~ Birthday ? S7 & S8 26th of February ~ not even a call ~ Tears then ~ Now nothing ! The final stanza ~ made me so so sad ~ Three Months ~ Heart crushed ~ Flowers collecting dust ~ such disrespect ~ such bitterness ~ such thoughtlessness ! Thanks for sharing ~ Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
February 21st, 2018 19:21
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CARDINAL (America\'s cutest Bird !) Thanks for your first poem ! It is beautifully structured ~ 8 balanced quatrains with a consistent rhyming pattern (xaxa xbxb etc) well done. However the contents is very sad ! S1 & S2 Red Roses lovingly given ~ but left to die ! S3 & S4 You remember the Day & pleasant conversations ! S5 & S6 You give the bouquet and all you get is a grunted \"Thank You\" (What is wrong with Friends ?) It was a positive token because 4 months previous they had forgot your special day ~ Birthday ? S7 & S8 26th of February ~ not even a call ~ Tears then ~ Now nothing ! The final stanza ~ made me so so sad ~ Three Months ~ Heart crushed ~ Flowers collecting dust ~ such disrespect ~ such bitterness ~ such thoughtlessness ! Thanks for sharing ~ Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
February 21st, 2018 19:21
Flowers For You
Christina8 said:
Well done! This is a great poem. Well expressed. Love the rhymes.
February 21st, 2018 13:38
Christina8 said:
Well done! This is a great poem. Well expressed. Love the rhymes.
February 21st, 2018 13:38
