Comments received on poems by Daveyboyz



Meeting the muse
Michael Edwards said:

Super write and a great painting

July 4th, 2018 12:34

Meeting the muse
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write and art of a beautiful lady. May the time between meetings become ever shorter.

July 4th, 2018 11:01

Third person
Michael Edwards said:

I have just written a biog for a retailer and they have rewritten it as you say - in the third person. Not that I care as long as they sell my work. I do like the write !!

June 25th, 2018 11:44

Riding the train
onepauly said:

I always get exhausted.

April 20th, 2018 09:08

Riding the train
Michael Edwards said:

Girl spotting - brings back memories of youth - cheers Davey.

April 20th, 2018 00:20

Life
Michael Edwards said:

Rant away - there\'s plenty to rant about in the political arena at the moment. Great dwg and poem.

April 14th, 2018 12:27

Xenophobic
David.A-J said:

...it\'s the story of my life...they\'re all out of step except me.... and maybe you...

April 14th, 2018 02:07

True story
Michael Edwards said:

I used to live there many moons ago but can\'t recall anything as strange as this (other than Mrs Thatcher :) )

April 13th, 2018 03:43

True story
sylviasearcher said:

Meh! They are all over... the ones you need to be more worried about are the ones who aren\'t selling dodgy meat!

Nowt as queer as folk!

April 13th, 2018 03:41

True story
orchidee said:

Sounds shifty to me. \'There\'s nowt so queer as folk\' as it\'s said! Well, sometimes anyway. lol.

April 13th, 2018 02:56

True story
Nicholas Browning said:

This is pretty witty. See what I did there? Gotta be careful man, people out there are STRANGE.

April 13th, 2018 02:56

Transcendence
sylviasearcher said:

Hmmm. Interesting experience.

Do you think there may have been innate it environmental influences in your response?

April 12th, 2018 07:22

Transcendence
blast219 said:

an eye opening poem about psychedelic drugs, totally new to me.

April 12th, 2018 06:39

Transcendence
Daveyboyz said:

Many drugs are dangerous, and pychedelics are no exception but they are medicinal and physically pretty safe... the tribes of the amazon have been taking ayahuaska as a rite of passage into adulthood for thousands of years, the Eygyptions were all off their heads on DMT (extracted from Arcacia leafs) the Hindu\'s art is clearly influenced by such substances as is some cave art and the rampages of the Vikings were undertaken on mushrooms. Why we in the Western world would deny ourselves the enlightenment of experiencing a higher conciousness which can barely be achieved through weeks of fasting and meditation or seclusion in dark rooms out of fear of ourselves is a bit unfortunate in my opinion. LSD strangely enough is not at all addictive despite how great an experience it is, even a horror show experience offers some medicinal therapy. If you are not sure then don\'t get involved but if you are ready, mentaly strong and willing to surrender yourself to the ecperience I believe great virtue can be found in a few specific substances which literally unlock your mind.

Each to their own though...

April 12th, 2018 04:14

Transcendence
orchidee said:

A good write D. I can see what you mean. One said to me \'How do you know you won\'t like it? You\'ve never tried it. Go on, give it a whirl!\' And even on the lines of: \'Oohh let\'s try all new experiences\'. But I said \'No thanks\'. It may unlock parts of our mind we wish were never unlocked. Dangerous I think.

April 12th, 2018 03:23

Transcendence
onepauly said:

my last experience with mescaline, an equal to lsd, was 30 years ago. if I was still using it, I could create an encyclopedia sized book with great poetry, mostly poetry that rhymes. peace be with you

April 12th, 2018 03:02

Transcendence
Nicholas Browning said:

A friend of mine desperately wants to try such things. I\'ll have no part of it mind you. The poem is good though.

April 12th, 2018 02:57

Transcendence
Michael Edwards said:

Well expressed work although not an experience I\'ve shared - also love the painting - touches of our friend Lewis.

April 12th, 2018 02:39

Xenophobic
Daveyboyz said:

Thanks all.

April 11th, 2018 13:56

Xenophobic
Aislinn Wilson said:

Very self aware

April 11th, 2018 07:52

Xenophobic
Michael Edwards said:

I know that problem well - standing still on the left on the escalators and I emphasise with the other grumbles as well .Great stuff Davey.

April 11th, 2018 07:47

Xenophobic
Lorna said:

ha ha! And you all drive on the wrong side of the street! No wonder your visitors get mixed up!

April 11th, 2018 07:26

Aces, places and faces
Michael Edwards said:

I\'ve never gambled in a casino in my life nor ever been inside a betting shop - but I can imagine the scene in the write - nice one Davey

April 10th, 2018 10:38

Cats and Dogs
Fay Slimm said:

An excellent drawing and a finely versed tribute to both cats and dogs. I have only ever owned dogs and my know-how with cats is nil - - - thanks Davey forsharing this honest description of animal behaviour - - it was a delight to read.

April 9th, 2018 03:31

Cats and Dogs
orchidee said:

A fine drawing too there Davey.

April 9th, 2018 03:03

Cats and Dogs
Michael Edwards said:

Fine write and fine drawing but cats - sadly not for me. In fact I posted a poem about them a short while back - with tongue in cheek having a go at cat owners rather than cats.

April 9th, 2018 02:34

Cats and Dogs
sylviasearcher said:

I can feel your love for cats in this.

They always make me nervous!

April 9th, 2018 02:11

Cats and Dogs
orchidee said:

A true write Davey. We love them both! That your drawing there?!

April 9th, 2018 01:43

Day out with a muse
Fay Slimm said:

Oh what a sweet romantic and well written confession of love - - hope the girl stays this time around and congrats on the wonderful drawing Davey.

April 8th, 2018 04:31

Day out with a muse
Michael Edwards said:

And a great write - also you should point out that the pictures are by your own hand and this one\'s a cracker.

April 8th, 2018 01:01

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