Comments received on poems by Dan Williams
Pipe organs of Destiny
sorenbarrett said:
A very powerful poem with a wonderful ending line. “ She hangs on me like wet clothes In the cold “.
November 14th, 2024 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
A very powerful poem with a wonderful ending line. “ She hangs on me like wet clothes In the cold “.
November 14th, 2024 04:51
Dirt
sorenbarrett said:
An intriguing point that leads one down the dirt road to the dirt fill. I know it is meant as an insult so I won’t pursue the positive side. Great poem.
November 10th, 2024 11:53
sorenbarrett said:
An intriguing point that leads one down the dirt road to the dirt fill. I know it is meant as an insult so I won’t pursue the positive side. Great poem.
November 10th, 2024 11:53
Dirt
Doggerel Dave said:
Sorry, but it does not remain dirt, it is as in the lines above that and probably what is in part keeping you unfulfilled and in this instance angry.
November 10th, 2024 05:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Sorry, but it does not remain dirt, it is as in the lines above that and probably what is in part keeping you unfulfilled and in this instance angry.
November 10th, 2024 05:39
Dirt
Neville said:
Ouch\' .. I trust you have a good aim sir .. an intriguing poem which gives rise to one immediate question .. are muck and dirt the same .. and did you get him presuming it is, or was a he .. Okay, I know that\'s two questions but who\'s counting .. Neville
November 10th, 2024 02:39
Neville said:
Ouch\' .. I trust you have a good aim sir .. an intriguing poem which gives rise to one immediate question .. are muck and dirt the same .. and did you get him presuming it is, or was a he .. Okay, I know that\'s two questions but who\'s counting .. Neville
November 10th, 2024 02:39
She, and Not Me.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I could feel this emote. Love the poem, Dan! Bravo!
November 9th, 2024 07:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I could feel this emote. Love the poem, Dan! Bravo!
November 9th, 2024 07:34
She, and Not Me.
Doggerel Dave said:
Half of me admires the self deprecation, but the other half of me finds it difficult to relate....
(I mean well; you go well...)
November 9th, 2024 05:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Half of me admires the self deprecation, but the other half of me finds it difficult to relate....
(I mean well; you go well...)
November 9th, 2024 05:09
She, and Not Me.
Neville said:
there aint nowt wrong with the topic .. makes my own losses feel so much easier to contend with .. & masterfully crafted too sir .. Neville
November 9th, 2024 04:56
Neville said:
there aint nowt wrong with the topic .. makes my own losses feel so much easier to contend with .. & masterfully crafted too sir .. Neville
November 9th, 2024 04:56
She, and Not Me.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Dan but love will be with you I am sure.
Andy
November 9th, 2024 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Dan but love will be with you I am sure.
Andy
November 9th, 2024 02:50
High School
Doggerel Dave said:
He can have his wing tips - ah am stayin with mah blue suede shoes (just kiddin - read desert boots......).
November 8th, 2024 17:37
Doggerel Dave said:
He can have his wing tips - ah am stayin with mah blue suede shoes (just kiddin - read desert boots......).
November 8th, 2024 17:37
High School
Neville said:
I still wear my old sandals never with socks tho\' & my cowboy boots from time to time ..
November 8th, 2024 11:26
Neville said:
I still wear my old sandals never with socks tho\' & my cowboy boots from time to time ..
November 8th, 2024 11:26
High School
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem of how people are treated for what people see on the outside. I remember having a pair of those wing tip shoes.
November 8th, 2024 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem of how people are treated for what people see on the outside. I remember having a pair of those wing tip shoes.
November 8th, 2024 03:48
Invisible Sword
sorenbarrett said:
Something invisible hidden here but it is hidden too well for my old eyes. An enchanted read
November 3rd, 2024 03:39
sorenbarrett said:
Something invisible hidden here but it is hidden too well for my old eyes. An enchanted read
November 3rd, 2024 03:39
Invisible Sword
Neville said:
Only fools rush in where angels fear to tread .. and remember, when messing about with an invisible sword, always leave it nearby but wrapped in a pretty and swift to remove wrapping .. neville .. with a small N
November 3rd, 2024 01:50
Neville said:
Only fools rush in where angels fear to tread .. and remember, when messing about with an invisible sword, always leave it nearby but wrapped in a pretty and swift to remove wrapping .. neville .. with a small N
November 3rd, 2024 01:50
Trubba Man
sorenbarrett said:
It took me a while to get the neologism then it all made sense. Just a bit slow I guess. A fun read Dan
November 1st, 2024 03:41
sorenbarrett said:
It took me a while to get the neologism then it all made sense. Just a bit slow I guess. A fun read Dan
November 1st, 2024 03:41
Trubba Man
Neville said:
If trubba is a corruption of trouble, then I get it .. if it aint, then I guess it must be a Halloween thingy .. like hubba bubba boil n trubba ... maybe 🦇🦇🎃🐧👍
November 1st, 2024 00:47
Neville said:
If trubba is a corruption of trouble, then I get it .. if it aint, then I guess it must be a Halloween thingy .. like hubba bubba boil n trubba ... maybe 🦇🦇🎃🐧👍
November 1st, 2024 00:47
Invented Confusion
arqios said:
When grace hesitates the author of lies stirs and revs up the confusion. Very compelling read!
October 31st, 2024 05:36
arqios said:
When grace hesitates the author of lies stirs and revs up the confusion. Very compelling read!
October 31st, 2024 05:36
Invented Confusion
sorenbarrett said:
Some very mind provoking lines with deep meaning. (Sincerity, handcuffed to reality\'s layers, honesty made impotent by too many players) (what once was clever, now is mundane, while once respectable now is profane) nicely done
October 31st, 2024 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
Some very mind provoking lines with deep meaning. (Sincerity, handcuffed to reality\'s layers, honesty made impotent by too many players) (what once was clever, now is mundane, while once respectable now is profane) nicely done
October 31st, 2024 04:04
Unrepentant Ventriloquist
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
Hmm... Still poundering on each verses , an ongoing message in process hope it finds it owner(s) 👌
October 28th, 2024 13:24
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
Hmm... Still poundering on each verses , an ongoing message in process hope it finds it owner(s) 👌
October 28th, 2024 13:24
Unrepentant Ventriloquist
sorenbarrett said:
A story all too familiar, upon hearing it I always check my own shadow to see if it is following me. But then having PTSD from past poetry wars I\'m paranoid. Quite the story my friend maybe the ventriloquist will speak sweeter words. Not too sugar sweet though.
October 28th, 2024 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
A story all too familiar, upon hearing it I always check my own shadow to see if it is following me. But then having PTSD from past poetry wars I\'m paranoid. Quite the story my friend maybe the ventriloquist will speak sweeter words. Not too sugar sweet though.
October 28th, 2024 04:45
Unrepentant Ventriloquist
Neville said:
Epic .. with so very many chuckles along the way .. Neville
October 28th, 2024 01:37
Neville said:
Epic .. with so very many chuckles along the way .. Neville
October 28th, 2024 01:37
Slightly Different Views
sorenbarrett said:
I liked this approach. It is full of mind provoking thoughts and pushes against the current of common thought. No Moses never did get to the promised land in this life and we never should either lest we grow in our complacency and stagnate.
October 26th, 2024 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
I liked this approach. It is full of mind provoking thoughts and pushes against the current of common thought. No Moses never did get to the promised land in this life and we never should either lest we grow in our complacency and stagnate.
October 26th, 2024 04:38
Small Ghosts
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, and I like you utilizing it too. This is too perfect and fascinating to boot. Beautifully rendered with a none too subtly haunting poignancy and excellent imagery. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 23rd, 2024 23:56
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, and I like you utilizing it too. This is too perfect and fascinating to boot. Beautifully rendered with a none too subtly haunting poignancy and excellent imagery. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 23rd, 2024 23:56
Small Ghosts
sorenbarrett said:
This reminded me of a philosophy class I had many many years ago. Very small issue but in the third stanza I think it should read Time not Tin but then again I could be wrong. There are so many thoughts branching out of this bush that it fills the space in all directions. I feel some hostility under the surface.
October 23rd, 2024 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
This reminded me of a philosophy class I had many many years ago. Very small issue but in the third stanza I think it should read Time not Tin but then again I could be wrong. There are so many thoughts branching out of this bush that it fills the space in all directions. I feel some hostility under the surface.
October 23rd, 2024 04:54
Illogical Soup
sorenbarrett said:
I know Dave that poems can be taken many different ways by readers and so this is probably not what you intended but what I saw. I heard this as a proclamation against political correctness and having to sheath our swords, the cowardice involved. Softened language all of which leads to compacency lulling us to sleep over what the real issues are (that can not be discussed any longer) We don\'t even know what we can talk about anymore and we end with an illogical soup. Going to Fav this one based on the subject matter and I think you did a politically correct wording to make it cryptic enough to be acceptable
October 22nd, 2024 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
I know Dave that poems can be taken many different ways by readers and so this is probably not what you intended but what I saw. I heard this as a proclamation against political correctness and having to sheath our swords, the cowardice involved. Softened language all of which leads to compacency lulling us to sleep over what the real issues are (that can not be discussed any longer) We don\'t even know what we can talk about anymore and we end with an illogical soup. Going to Fav this one based on the subject matter and I think you did a politically correct wording to make it cryptic enough to be acceptable
October 22nd, 2024 05:16
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