Comments received on poems by Dan Williams
Nothing To Say?
Tom Dylan said:
A perfect poem, Dan, beautiful and sad. A fine write.
September 19th, 2024 07:26
Tom Dylan said:
A perfect poem, Dan, beautiful and sad. A fine write.
September 19th, 2024 07:26
Hard Winter
sorenbarrett said:
This has all the makings of a song with its reoccuring refrain. The repetition of this not only emphasizes the statement but puts an emotional foreboding feeling to it as if a prophecy or curse. a bit haunting
September 19th, 2024 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
This has all the makings of a song with its reoccuring refrain. The repetition of this not only emphasizes the statement but puts an emotional foreboding feeling to it as if a prophecy or curse. a bit haunting
September 19th, 2024 04:45
Hard Winter
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that in those cold and dark places a light will be found to lead you to warmth in your life Dan.
Andy
September 19th, 2024 02:08
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that in those cold and dark places a light will be found to lead you to warmth in your life Dan.
Andy
September 19th, 2024 02:08
Hard Winter
aDarkerMind said:
an outstanding write Dan,
and one I can truely relate to.
worthy of much applause.
September 19th, 2024 01:51
aDarkerMind said:
an outstanding write Dan,
and one I can truely relate to.
worthy of much applause.
September 19th, 2024 01:51
Hard Winter
Neville said:
Just in case you aint wrong .. I plan on stocking up with a decent supply of space blankets, plus extra strong mints and have just arranged the annual service on my nuclear reactor .. A compelling poem about separation (for whatever reason) and the anticipated chill, loneliness and compounded emotions of remorse, possible confusion, or uncertainty and grief .. Well penned, friend ..
Neville
September 19th, 2024 01:48
Neville said:
Just in case you aint wrong .. I plan on stocking up with a decent supply of space blankets, plus extra strong mints and have just arranged the annual service on my nuclear reactor .. A compelling poem about separation (for whatever reason) and the anticipated chill, loneliness and compounded emotions of remorse, possible confusion, or uncertainty and grief .. Well penned, friend ..
Neville
September 19th, 2024 01:48
Hard Winter
Teddy.15 said:
My family member lives in Saskatchewan so I understand about the extreme cold weather , hoping it\'s not so bad for you dear Dan. A beautiful poem.
September 19th, 2024 01:33
Teddy.15 said:
My family member lives in Saskatchewan so I understand about the extreme cold weather , hoping it\'s not so bad for you dear Dan. A beautiful poem.
September 19th, 2024 01:33
Nothing To Say?
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully composed Dan it flowed like honey. Loved the rhyme and meter.
September 18th, 2024 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully composed Dan it flowed like honey. Loved the rhyme and meter.
September 18th, 2024 04:30
Nothing To Say?
Cassie58 said:
You certainly have plenty to say here Dan. A sad goodbye from what I can see. Love never seems to be plain sailing, the wind has a habit of dropping out of the sails. I wish you better days ahead and that joy returns. All good wishes.
September 18th, 2024 03:00
Cassie58 said:
You certainly have plenty to say here Dan. A sad goodbye from what I can see. Love never seems to be plain sailing, the wind has a habit of dropping out of the sails. I wish you better days ahead and that joy returns. All good wishes.
September 18th, 2024 03:00
Eight Thousand Sunrises
AuburnScribbler said:
Though written in a painful and yearning tone, this is a beautiful write about the passage of time Dan.
Also, using the sun as a somewhat happy constant, sure adds to the warmth of the piece.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
September 17th, 2024 08:00
AuburnScribbler said:
Though written in a painful and yearning tone, this is a beautiful write about the passage of time Dan.
Also, using the sun as a somewhat happy constant, sure adds to the warmth of the piece.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
September 17th, 2024 08:00
Eight Thousand Sunrises
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Dan. Really enjoyed this.
September 17th, 2024 07:38
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Dan. Really enjoyed this.
September 17th, 2024 07:38
Eight Thousand Sunrises
sorenbarrett said:
Waiting for those golden years you haven\'t heard we are off the gold standard its all federal reserve notes not worth the paper they are printed on. Loved the write and have felt some of the same feelings.
September 17th, 2024 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Waiting for those golden years you haven\'t heard we are off the gold standard its all federal reserve notes not worth the paper they are printed on. Loved the write and have felt some of the same feelings.
September 17th, 2024 04:25
Eight Thousand Sunrises
Goldfinch60 said:
At least you have seen teh sunrises as I have, each new day in our lives is a blessing Dan.
Andy
September 17th, 2024 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
At least you have seen teh sunrises as I have, each new day in our lives is a blessing Dan.
Andy
September 17th, 2024 01:55
Already Spoken
NafisaSB said:
why is it that one excludes and fails to confide in the one person for whom we feel most deeply - worth thinking about
lovely poem- made me sit and think
September 17th, 2024 01:17
NafisaSB said:
why is it that one excludes and fails to confide in the one person for whom we feel most deeply - worth thinking about
lovely poem- made me sit and think
September 17th, 2024 01:17
Already Spoken
sorenbarrett said:
Misunderstanding the linchpin of many problems and sometimes it is by design. Silent secrets held out of love may result in a martyrdom nicely said Dan
September 16th, 2024 06:15
sorenbarrett said:
Misunderstanding the linchpin of many problems and sometimes it is by design. Silent secrets held out of love may result in a martyrdom nicely said Dan
September 16th, 2024 06:15
Already Spoken
Neville said:
I\'m with Snoopy .. stay in there and it will get better Dan, I promise .. 🤍👍
September 16th, 2024 02:54
Neville said:
I\'m with Snoopy .. stay in there and it will get better Dan, I promise .. 🤍👍
September 16th, 2024 02:54
Already Spoken
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful in any case, relatable and I can honestly tell you one day you will come back to these when you are in a better space i know I did. 🌹
September 16th, 2024 02:27
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful in any case, relatable and I can honestly tell you one day you will come back to these when you are in a better space i know I did. 🌹
September 16th, 2024 02:27
Already Spoken
Charles Kick said:
Excellent word choice and analogies. Appreciated this very much. Thank you 🙏
September 16th, 2024 01:34
Charles Kick said:
Excellent word choice and analogies. Appreciated this very much. Thank you 🙏
September 16th, 2024 01:34
Matrimonial Misfire
sorenbarrett said:
I could see the battle rage before me enemy entrenched on high ground Sun Tzu would predict defeat. A suicide charge like Pickett at Gettysburg trying to hold out like Leonidas and the 300 Spartans at Thermopylae. I felt that I had been there.Well written
September 15th, 2024 05:56
sorenbarrett said:
I could see the battle rage before me enemy entrenched on high ground Sun Tzu would predict defeat. A suicide charge like Pickett at Gettysburg trying to hold out like Leonidas and the 300 Spartans at Thermopylae. I felt that I had been there.Well written
September 15th, 2024 05:56
Cleverer
sorenbarrett said:
This is a very deep well you have dug. You have approached this from a most unique path. I love this approach. You have put in poetic form not only Robert Frost\'s The road less taken but expanded upon it. Very nice now it is my turn to be jealous.
September 14th, 2024 03:17
sorenbarrett said:
This is a very deep well you have dug. You have approached this from a most unique path. I love this approach. You have put in poetic form not only Robert Frost\'s The road less taken but expanded upon it. Very nice now it is my turn to be jealous.
September 14th, 2024 03:17
Almost Enough
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully written a statement of how things are seen as right or wrong and by whom. Full of great metaphor it rings true.
September 13th, 2024 05:34
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully written a statement of how things are seen as right or wrong and by whom. Full of great metaphor it rings true.
September 13th, 2024 05:34
Imaginary Hero
sorenbarrett said:
We allhave some of Walter Mitty in us. The awakening from these daydreams is the most difficult part.
September 12th, 2024 05:09
sorenbarrett said:
We allhave some of Walter Mitty in us. The awakening from these daydreams is the most difficult part.
September 12th, 2024 05:09
The Why Begins to Show
Teddy.15 said:
Walking round in circles my dear mum used to call it, beautiful reflection, I hope you find the start line and the finish line one day soon my friend. 🌹
September 11th, 2024 14:41
Teddy.15 said:
Walking round in circles my dear mum used to call it, beautiful reflection, I hope you find the start line and the finish line one day soon my friend. 🌹
September 11th, 2024 14:41
The Why Begins to Show
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is a quiet small pond that is deceptively deep. Several metaphorical clues are left along the way as guide posts and as it unravels. Reincarnated, resurected call it what you may how does one differ from the other life and what is the purpose. Each belief has its own answer (one eye) no one is certain no on is sure. I\'m not sure my interpretation applies. Never the less very nicely done
September 11th, 2024 05:55
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is a quiet small pond that is deceptively deep. Several metaphorical clues are left along the way as guide posts and as it unravels. Reincarnated, resurected call it what you may how does one differ from the other life and what is the purpose. Each belief has its own answer (one eye) no one is certain no on is sure. I\'m not sure my interpretation applies. Never the less very nicely done
September 11th, 2024 05:55
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