Comments received on poems by Dan Williams
Trubba Man
sorenbarrett said:
It took me a while to get the neologism then it all made sense. Just a bit slow I guess. A fun read Dan
November 1st, 2024 03:41
sorenbarrett said:
It took me a while to get the neologism then it all made sense. Just a bit slow I guess. A fun read Dan
November 1st, 2024 03:41
Trubba Man
Neville said:
If trubba is a corruption of trouble, then I get it .. if it aint, then I guess it must be a Halloween thingy .. like hubba bubba boil n trubba ... maybe 🦇🦇🎃🐧👍
November 1st, 2024 00:47
Neville said:
If trubba is a corruption of trouble, then I get it .. if it aint, then I guess it must be a Halloween thingy .. like hubba bubba boil n trubba ... maybe 🦇🦇🎃🐧👍
November 1st, 2024 00:47
Invented Confusion
arqios said:
When grace hesitates the author of lies stirs and revs up the confusion. Very compelling read!
October 31st, 2024 05:36
arqios said:
When grace hesitates the author of lies stirs and revs up the confusion. Very compelling read!
October 31st, 2024 05:36
Invented Confusion
sorenbarrett said:
Some very mind provoking lines with deep meaning. (Sincerity, handcuffed to reality\'s layers, honesty made impotent by too many players) (what once was clever, now is mundane, while once respectable now is profane) nicely done
October 31st, 2024 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
Some very mind provoking lines with deep meaning. (Sincerity, handcuffed to reality\'s layers, honesty made impotent by too many players) (what once was clever, now is mundane, while once respectable now is profane) nicely done
October 31st, 2024 04:04
Unrepentant Ventriloquist
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
Hmm... Still poundering on each verses , an ongoing message in process hope it finds it owner(s) 👌
October 28th, 2024 13:24
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
Hmm... Still poundering on each verses , an ongoing message in process hope it finds it owner(s) 👌
October 28th, 2024 13:24
Unrepentant Ventriloquist
sorenbarrett said:
A story all too familiar, upon hearing it I always check my own shadow to see if it is following me. But then having PTSD from past poetry wars I\'m paranoid. Quite the story my friend maybe the ventriloquist will speak sweeter words. Not too sugar sweet though.
October 28th, 2024 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
A story all too familiar, upon hearing it I always check my own shadow to see if it is following me. But then having PTSD from past poetry wars I\'m paranoid. Quite the story my friend maybe the ventriloquist will speak sweeter words. Not too sugar sweet though.
October 28th, 2024 04:45
Unrepentant Ventriloquist
Neville said:
Epic .. with so very many chuckles along the way .. Neville
October 28th, 2024 01:37
Neville said:
Epic .. with so very many chuckles along the way .. Neville
October 28th, 2024 01:37
Slightly Different Views
sorenbarrett said:
I liked this approach. It is full of mind provoking thoughts and pushes against the current of common thought. No Moses never did get to the promised land in this life and we never should either lest we grow in our complacency and stagnate.
October 26th, 2024 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
I liked this approach. It is full of mind provoking thoughts and pushes against the current of common thought. No Moses never did get to the promised land in this life and we never should either lest we grow in our complacency and stagnate.
October 26th, 2024 04:38
Small Ghosts
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, and I like you utilizing it too. This is too perfect and fascinating to boot. Beautifully rendered with a none too subtly haunting poignancy and excellent imagery. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 23rd, 2024 23:56
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, and I like you utilizing it too. This is too perfect and fascinating to boot. Beautifully rendered with a none too subtly haunting poignancy and excellent imagery. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 23rd, 2024 23:56
Small Ghosts
sorenbarrett said:
This reminded me of a philosophy class I had many many years ago. Very small issue but in the third stanza I think it should read Time not Tin but then again I could be wrong. There are so many thoughts branching out of this bush that it fills the space in all directions. I feel some hostility under the surface.
October 23rd, 2024 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
This reminded me of a philosophy class I had many many years ago. Very small issue but in the third stanza I think it should read Time not Tin but then again I could be wrong. There are so many thoughts branching out of this bush that it fills the space in all directions. I feel some hostility under the surface.
October 23rd, 2024 04:54
Illogical Soup
sorenbarrett said:
I know Dave that poems can be taken many different ways by readers and so this is probably not what you intended but what I saw. I heard this as a proclamation against political correctness and having to sheath our swords, the cowardice involved. Softened language all of which leads to compacency lulling us to sleep over what the real issues are (that can not be discussed any longer) We don\'t even know what we can talk about anymore and we end with an illogical soup. Going to Fav this one based on the subject matter and I think you did a politically correct wording to make it cryptic enough to be acceptable
October 22nd, 2024 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
I know Dave that poems can be taken many different ways by readers and so this is probably not what you intended but what I saw. I heard this as a proclamation against political correctness and having to sheath our swords, the cowardice involved. Softened language all of which leads to compacency lulling us to sleep over what the real issues are (that can not be discussed any longer) We don\'t even know what we can talk about anymore and we end with an illogical soup. Going to Fav this one based on the subject matter and I think you did a politically correct wording to make it cryptic enough to be acceptable
October 22nd, 2024 05:16
Essay on Excuses
sorenbarrett said:
(First little moths of senility flit more regularly now,) a great line there Dan. I can hear reproach and anger in this poem nicely done
October 22nd, 2024 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
(First little moths of senility flit more regularly now,) a great line there Dan. I can hear reproach and anger in this poem nicely done
October 22nd, 2024 05:05
Essay on Excuses
Neville said:
You have done a fine job of pulling all the threads together and making an excellent job of presenting the bigger picture as a single cohesive whole .. and for that I salute you, Neville
October 22nd, 2024 02:40
Neville said:
You have done a fine job of pulling all the threads together and making an excellent job of presenting the bigger picture as a single cohesive whole .. and for that I salute you, Neville
October 22nd, 2024 02:40
Spiderlace
NafisaSB said:
better luck for the next one - well written though
October 20th, 2024 23:17
NafisaSB said:
better luck for the next one - well written though
October 20th, 2024 23:17
Spiraling Down part two
sorenbarrett said:
A most powerful write full of indignation and anger. I have been there in a rage against the machine so to speak. Yes I feel the anger.
October 17th, 2024 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
A most powerful write full of indignation and anger. I have been there in a rage against the machine so to speak. Yes I feel the anger.
October 17th, 2024 05:10
Spiraling Down part one
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem,
thoughts and
message penned!! 💯
Wonderfully woven
great read my friend!! 😄
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 13th, 2024 13:39
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem,
thoughts and
message penned!! 💯
Wonderfully woven
great read my friend!! 😄
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 13th, 2024 13:39
Spiraling Down part one
sorenbarrett said:
Every generation is the same, we all see things different but the same, it is always worse now than then. We are always the last of the old and the first of the new. A thought provoking write Dan
October 13th, 2024 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Every generation is the same, we all see things different but the same, it is always worse now than then. We are always the last of the old and the first of the new. A thought provoking write Dan
October 13th, 2024 04:59
Illogical Soup
Goldfinch60 said:
We need to see what is happening in our lives Dan and look for a better way to move forward.
Andy
October 11th, 2024 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
We need to see what is happening in our lives Dan and look for a better way to move forward.
Andy
October 11th, 2024 01:57
Things Fell Down
MaxSmith said:
Sometimes the most beautiful writings come from sad places in our hearts.
Nicely written
October 9th, 2024 11:16
MaxSmith said:
Sometimes the most beautiful writings come from sad places in our hearts.
Nicely written
October 9th, 2024 11:16
Things Fell Down
sorenbarrett said:
The feeling that I get from this poem is that neglect contributes to decay and with decay things fall down. Very nicely written with that fifth line reoccuring throughout as an omen of what is to come. Creative and a bit haunting.
October 9th, 2024 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
The feeling that I get from this poem is that neglect contributes to decay and with decay things fall down. Very nicely written with that fifth line reoccuring throughout as an omen of what is to come. Creative and a bit haunting.
October 9th, 2024 04:43
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