Comments received on poems by Dan Williams
Essay on Excuses
sorenbarrett said:
(First little moths of senility flit more regularly now,) a great line there Dan. I can hear reproach and anger in this poem nicely done
October 22nd, 2024 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
(First little moths of senility flit more regularly now,) a great line there Dan. I can hear reproach and anger in this poem nicely done
October 22nd, 2024 05:05
Essay on Excuses
Neville said:
You have done a fine job of pulling all the threads together and making an excellent job of presenting the bigger picture as a single cohesive whole .. and for that I salute you, Neville
October 22nd, 2024 02:40
Neville said:
You have done a fine job of pulling all the threads together and making an excellent job of presenting the bigger picture as a single cohesive whole .. and for that I salute you, Neville
October 22nd, 2024 02:40
Spiderlace
NafisaSB said:
better luck for the next one - well written though
October 20th, 2024 23:17
NafisaSB said:
better luck for the next one - well written though
October 20th, 2024 23:17
Spiraling Down part two
sorenbarrett said:
A most powerful write full of indignation and anger. I have been there in a rage against the machine so to speak. Yes I feel the anger.
October 17th, 2024 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
A most powerful write full of indignation and anger. I have been there in a rage against the machine so to speak. Yes I feel the anger.
October 17th, 2024 05:10
Spiraling Down part one
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem,
thoughts and
message penned!! 💯
Wonderfully woven
great read my friend!! 😄
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 13th, 2024 13:39
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem,
thoughts and
message penned!! 💯
Wonderfully woven
great read my friend!! 😄
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 13th, 2024 13:39
Spiraling Down part one
sorenbarrett said:
Every generation is the same, we all see things different but the same, it is always worse now than then. We are always the last of the old and the first of the new. A thought provoking write Dan
October 13th, 2024 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Every generation is the same, we all see things different but the same, it is always worse now than then. We are always the last of the old and the first of the new. A thought provoking write Dan
October 13th, 2024 04:59
Illogical Soup
Goldfinch60 said:
We need to see what is happening in our lives Dan and look for a better way to move forward.
Andy
October 11th, 2024 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
We need to see what is happening in our lives Dan and look for a better way to move forward.
Andy
October 11th, 2024 01:57
Things Fell Down
MaxSmith said:
Sometimes the most beautiful writings come from sad places in our hearts.
Nicely written
October 9th, 2024 11:16
MaxSmith said:
Sometimes the most beautiful writings come from sad places in our hearts.
Nicely written
October 9th, 2024 11:16
Things Fell Down
sorenbarrett said:
The feeling that I get from this poem is that neglect contributes to decay and with decay things fall down. Very nicely written with that fifth line reoccuring throughout as an omen of what is to come. Creative and a bit haunting.
October 9th, 2024 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
The feeling that I get from this poem is that neglect contributes to decay and with decay things fall down. Very nicely written with that fifth line reoccuring throughout as an omen of what is to come. Creative and a bit haunting.
October 9th, 2024 04:43
Things Fell Down
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a passionate write for a lost love Dan.
Andy
October 9th, 2024 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a passionate write for a lost love Dan.
Andy
October 9th, 2024 01:42
Things Fell Down
Neville said:
At first, until around the middle, I now realise I got hold of the wrong stick .. Funny thing is, you managed to help me grab hold of the right one without even trying .. which just goes to reinforce my pre-existing belief that different eyes may see things differently .. Having now got that off my chest, I must hereby confess, I very much enjoyed the duality of my meandering here today .. Just in case you, or anyone else might be wondering what the hell is this guy waffling on about, I initially thought \'Things Fell Down\' was about some kind of war zone or conflict .. The turning point is when it dawned on me that it referred to the disintegration or failing of a relationship ..
Well penned, friend .. Neville
October 9th, 2024 01:24
Neville said:
At first, until around the middle, I now realise I got hold of the wrong stick .. Funny thing is, you managed to help me grab hold of the right one without even trying .. which just goes to reinforce my pre-existing belief that different eyes may see things differently .. Having now got that off my chest, I must hereby confess, I very much enjoyed the duality of my meandering here today .. Just in case you, or anyone else might be wondering what the hell is this guy waffling on about, I initially thought \'Things Fell Down\' was about some kind of war zone or conflict .. The turning point is when it dawned on me that it referred to the disintegration or failing of a relationship ..
Well penned, friend .. Neville
October 9th, 2024 01:24
Spiderlace
Thad Wilk said:
A mesmerizing, touching
and poignant write!! 😢
There\'s plenty of
fish in the sea, 🐠🐟🐠
don\'t give up the fight!! 💪
Great read, thanks
for sharing
to read a delight! , 💯
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 8th, 2024 21:04
Thad Wilk said:
A mesmerizing, touching
and poignant write!! 😢
There\'s plenty of
fish in the sea, 🐠🐟🐠
don\'t give up the fight!! 💪
Great read, thanks
for sharing
to read a delight! , 💯
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 8th, 2024 21:04
Seeking Revenge
MaxSmith said:
Hmmm the vengeance mentality I am sure everyone has toyed with. Even if it isn\'t followed through, something I\'m sure we can all relate to.
But someone told me once, the best revenge is to succeed.
A great read Dan, thank you for sharing
October 8th, 2024 14:31
MaxSmith said:
Hmmm the vengeance mentality I am sure everyone has toyed with. Even if it isn\'t followed through, something I\'m sure we can all relate to.
But someone told me once, the best revenge is to succeed.
A great read Dan, thank you for sharing
October 8th, 2024 14:31
Spiderlace
sorenbarrett said:
Some great images and lines here. Spiderweb of lace very impactful with underlying possible meanings but my favorite line is \"Betrayal dug the grave while trust retreated\"
October 8th, 2024 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
Some great images and lines here. Spiderweb of lace very impactful with underlying possible meanings but my favorite line is \"Betrayal dug the grave while trust retreated\"
October 8th, 2024 06:30
Spiderlace
Neville said:
Sshh .. it happens but then you clearly know that, don\'t you .. let\'s keep it to ourselves since there\'s no point spreading it around .. and anyway, there\'s always more fish in the sea .. or that\'s what my folks said back in the day .. Neville
October 8th, 2024 00:57
Neville said:
Sshh .. it happens but then you clearly know that, don\'t you .. let\'s keep it to ourselves since there\'s no point spreading it around .. and anyway, there\'s always more fish in the sea .. or that\'s what my folks said back in the day .. Neville
October 8th, 2024 00:57
Seeking Revenge
sorenbarrett said:
I believe in forgiveness for the good of the forgiver but all things have a time and place and revenge can be quite satisfying as anyone that watches movies can attest. Nicely written my friend.
October 7th, 2024 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
I believe in forgiveness for the good of the forgiver but all things have a time and place and revenge can be quite satisfying as anyone that watches movies can attest. Nicely written my friend.
October 7th, 2024 04:45
Seeking Revenge
Neville said:
I congratulate you sir on the construction and content of what amounts to a real eye opener into your psyche .. and I have absolutely no doubt that many will agree with you .. as indeed, I do .. Neville
p.s.
No, don\'t hold your breath but I hope that now others will make their way here in the wake I have created .. Kind Regards
October 7th, 2024 03:40
Neville said:
I congratulate you sir on the construction and content of what amounts to a real eye opener into your psyche .. and I have absolutely no doubt that many will agree with you .. as indeed, I do .. Neville
p.s.
No, don\'t hold your breath but I hope that now others will make their way here in the wake I have created .. Kind Regards
October 7th, 2024 03:40
In the U.S.A.
sorenbarrett said:
Glad to hear that no sheep were harmed but I do love lamb chops. To lie is a prerequisit to being a politition those that can\'t lie don\'t get elected and we can blame ourselves the voters for that. Greed and corruption begins in the bed of voters that elect polititions, we and our self interests. A powerful write
October 6th, 2024 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
Glad to hear that no sheep were harmed but I do love lamb chops. To lie is a prerequisit to being a politition those that can\'t lie don\'t get elected and we can blame ourselves the voters for that. Greed and corruption begins in the bed of voters that elect polititions, we and our self interests. A powerful write
October 6th, 2024 05:23
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