Comments received on poems by Dan Williams
Winds Turning Common Men
Neville said:
I ask myself the same questions .. and always arrive at the self same answer .. because that\'s the name of the game and the world is like that .. we just never signed up to it, did we .. 😎👍Neville
December 11th, 2024 02:10
Neville said:
I ask myself the same questions .. and always arrive at the self same answer .. because that\'s the name of the game and the world is like that .. we just never signed up to it, did we .. 😎👍Neville
December 11th, 2024 02:10
Nightstorm
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dan this is wa masterful poem that deals with unrequited love, change, transformation, illusion, deception, and self-delusion. Truly a wonderful poem! 🌹👏 Love the title too.
December 8th, 2024 06:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dan this is wa masterful poem that deals with unrequited love, change, transformation, illusion, deception, and self-delusion. Truly a wonderful poem! 🌹👏 Love the title too.
December 8th, 2024 06:53
Nightstorm
sorenbarrett said:
Ingenious the wording in this poem, not just of images which were wonderful and spot on. But of the very structure of the poem itself. The rhyme scheme left the reader feeling as if there was more to come. This echoed the theme of the poem itself, as if wishing that something more would have happened. The opening of the poem dives right in. But the second person keeps a bit of distance. The first line of the second stanza feels novel like. I love the line in the third stanza “ignores the growling dog of fate, which he figures to be all bark” A most beautiful poem
December 8th, 2024 05:15
sorenbarrett said:
Ingenious the wording in this poem, not just of images which were wonderful and spot on. But of the very structure of the poem itself. The rhyme scheme left the reader feeling as if there was more to come. This echoed the theme of the poem itself, as if wishing that something more would have happened. The opening of the poem dives right in. But the second person keeps a bit of distance. The first line of the second stanza feels novel like. I love the line in the third stanza “ignores the growling dog of fate, which he figures to be all bark” A most beautiful poem
December 8th, 2024 05:15
Nightstorm
arqios said:
Getting an interlacing of themes of fate, change, and self-reflection; highlighting the constant interplay between fate and self-determination... What an epitome of resilience in the face of fire.
December 8th, 2024 05:09
arqios said:
Getting an interlacing of themes of fate, change, and self-reflection; highlighting the constant interplay between fate and self-determination... What an epitome of resilience in the face of fire.
December 8th, 2024 05:09
Not Escaping
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphors are good in this poem and convey the meaning well. Blocked and frustrated the going is difficult but should not be given up on.
December 7th, 2024 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphors are good in this poem and convey the meaning well. Blocked and frustrated the going is difficult but should not be given up on.
December 7th, 2024 04:18
Not Escaping
TobaniNataiella said:
I can empathise with the sentiment in this poem, writing it out i think does help and you will see other time, the light coming through in your poems. All the best
December 7th, 2024 04:01
TobaniNataiella said:
I can empathise with the sentiment in this poem, writing it out i think does help and you will see other time, the light coming through in your poems. All the best
December 7th, 2024 04:01
Not Escaping
Neville said:
This on its own made an awful lot of sense .. and was seriously good enough not to require an authors note .. but, it served to reinforce an already formed construct .. Nice one Dan & believe me, there\'s no need to knock yourself .. Neville
December 7th, 2024 02:34
Neville said:
This on its own made an awful lot of sense .. and was seriously good enough not to require an authors note .. but, it served to reinforce an already formed construct .. Nice one Dan & believe me, there\'s no need to knock yourself .. Neville
December 7th, 2024 02:34
Not Escaping
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that those new sunrises will bring new light to your life Dan.
Andy
December 7th, 2024 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that those new sunrises will bring new light to your life Dan.
Andy
December 7th, 2024 02:23
The Gardner Walks Off Slowly
arqios said:
May their garden grow that tend them well!
December 6th, 2024 08:59
arqios said:
May their garden grow that tend them well!
December 6th, 2024 08:59
The Gardner Walks Off Slowly
Cassie58 said:
A great use of metaphor here Dan. Nurture is paramount. Without it, all living things will die. A gardener knows that best of all. First class poetry. Much enjoyed.
December 6th, 2024 04:57
Cassie58 said:
A great use of metaphor here Dan. Nurture is paramount. Without it, all living things will die. A gardener knows that best of all. First class poetry. Much enjoyed.
December 6th, 2024 04:57
The Gardner Walks Off Slowly
sorenbarrett said:
This poem as a metaphor contains very deep meaning. It is inspiring haven’t given me an idea for a future poem. I think that alone makes it worthy of being faved.
December 6th, 2024 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
This poem as a metaphor contains very deep meaning. It is inspiring haven’t given me an idea for a future poem. I think that alone makes it worthy of being faved.
December 6th, 2024 04:02
The Gardner Walks Off Slowly
TobaniNataiella said:
A powerful but very enjoyable read, Thank you
December 6th, 2024 03:14
TobaniNataiella said:
A powerful but very enjoyable read, Thank you
December 6th, 2024 03:14
Love Poem
Teddy.15 said:
To know true love is to appreciate every part of it, as you have done so elequently here. 🌹
December 4th, 2024 14:50
Teddy.15 said:
To know true love is to appreciate every part of it, as you have done so elequently here. 🌹
December 4th, 2024 14:50
Love Poem
TobaniNataiella said:
A beautifully written poem, confirming when it is real love, it will last for eternity, Thank you Dan
December 4th, 2024 05:19
TobaniNataiella said:
A beautifully written poem, confirming when it is real love, it will last for eternity, Thank you Dan
December 4th, 2024 05:19
Love Poem
arqios said:
Nice DW, a poem that expresses the timeless and unwavering nature of love, even when faced with disillusionment and despair. The poem\'s vivid imagery and emotional depth highlight the complex interplay between reality and expectation, struggle and resilience. Much enjoyed!
December 4th, 2024 05:18
arqios said:
Nice DW, a poem that expresses the timeless and unwavering nature of love, even when faced with disillusionment and despair. The poem\'s vivid imagery and emotional depth highlight the complex interplay between reality and expectation, struggle and resilience. Much enjoyed!
December 4th, 2024 05:18
Love Poem
sorenbarrett said:
Love that goes beyond this life inscribed in this poem. The first part of this poem, indicate an emotion goes far deeper than reason and lasts much longer. I love the internal rhyming as well. Most lovely poem.
December 4th, 2024 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
Love that goes beyond this life inscribed in this poem. The first part of this poem, indicate an emotion goes far deeper than reason and lasts much longer. I love the internal rhyming as well. Most lovely poem.
December 4th, 2024 04:45
Love Poem
Cassie58 said:
I will always treasure that
brightening smile
There is much love and affection in your words Dan. This reader felt those emotions coming through. Lovely poetry.
December 4th, 2024 03:31
Cassie58 said:
I will always treasure that
brightening smile
There is much love and affection in your words Dan. This reader felt those emotions coming through. Lovely poetry.
December 4th, 2024 03:31
Love Poem
Goldfinch60 said:
That affection and love will never be lost Dan.
Andy
December 4th, 2024 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
That affection and love will never be lost Dan.
Andy
December 4th, 2024 02:11
Time Resigns
sorenbarrett said:
Here I hear the frustration and hopelessness of a situation. This is a poem of darkness. Nicely written, it conveys its feeling well.
December 2nd, 2024 05:56
sorenbarrett said:
Here I hear the frustration and hopelessness of a situation. This is a poem of darkness. Nicely written, it conveys its feeling well.
December 2nd, 2024 05:56
She, and Not Me.
TobaniNataiella said:
I really enjoyed this poem, it touched some raw nerves of my own, Thank you Dan
December 2nd, 2024 05:41
TobaniNataiella said:
I really enjoyed this poem, it touched some raw nerves of my own, Thank you Dan
December 2nd, 2024 05:41
Time Resigns
TobaniNataiella said:
Something i feel has touched us all at some time, enjoyed the read
December 2nd, 2024 02:20
TobaniNataiella said:
Something i feel has touched us all at some time, enjoyed the read
December 2nd, 2024 02:20
Time Resigns
arqios said:
I must agree. Having choked reading through the first half. Letting out the truth let’s me breathe again 👍🏻
December 2nd, 2024 01:41
arqios said:
I must agree. Having choked reading through the first half. Letting out the truth let’s me breathe again 👍🏻
December 2nd, 2024 01:41
Time Resigns
Neville said:
Quite possibly the most written about subject since time began to be counted .. I feel sure I know where you are coming from .. Neville 👍
December 2nd, 2024 01:32
Neville said:
Quite possibly the most written about subject since time began to be counted .. I feel sure I know where you are coming from .. Neville 👍
December 2nd, 2024 01:32
Writer\'s Cramp
arqios said:
Wow DW, that’ a neat encapsulation, eloquently capturing the struggles and perseverance of a writer. Highlighting the constant balance between ambition and self-doubt, and the determination to push through despite challenges. The poem serves as a beautiful reminder that the creative journey, with all its ups and downs, is worth pursuing. 👍🏻👍🏻
November 27th, 2024 06:35
arqios said:
Wow DW, that’ a neat encapsulation, eloquently capturing the struggles and perseverance of a writer. Highlighting the constant balance between ambition and self-doubt, and the determination to push through despite challenges. The poem serves as a beautiful reminder that the creative journey, with all its ups and downs, is worth pursuing. 👍🏻👍🏻
November 27th, 2024 06:35
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