Comments received on poems by LiterateLesbian

Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Great write L
I\'ve vented through Poetry all my life and I made it - you will too
Life is not a race! someone once saif \"If you want to know what God thinks of money, just look at who he gives it to\"
Keep writing and Be You!
You are a miracle...
Oh and happy Birthday by the way

October 8th, 2018 09:40

treasure chest
Quemis said:

This is simple, honest and perfect. Hopeful even.

This is great.

October 4th, 2018 18:50

treasure chest
sylviasearcher said:

A beautiful acknowledgement of a treasured person

October 4th, 2018 07:38

Goldfinch60 said:

Very good emotion laden write. May your dreams become reality.

June 3rd, 2018 00:35

Noah said:

This is beautiful

June 1st, 2018 18:01

Candlewitch said:

I am so sorry that the times are such that you must endure this passing. from your written words, I can tell that you are a loving and very strong woman. may be peace be with you and your nana.

sincerely, Cat

May 31st, 2018 10:18

Michael Edwards said:

You love, you care, and you even question yourself - you are one hell of a lady - Stay strong for your Nan and keep writing.

May 31st, 2018 07:03

Nicholas Browning said:

The end is simply one beginning\'s closure, and the birth of another. I very much hope that you keep your words with you. Be strong, brave, and honest with yourself and your Nan. You can do it. Best regards.

May 31st, 2018 05:53

Goldfinch60 said:

Dementia is a very cruel disease, my wife is suffering from it and each day it gets worse, she still recognises me but last night when I walked into the room where she ws sitting she looked at me and said \"Can we go home now\".

If you look through my poems there are many about the problems that happen with dementia and how I feel about it. I am a religious man, I used to be a Chaplain but my Faith is being severely questioned.

Good write by the way, all you can do is try and be with her and accept all her strange ways, but best of all is to make her laugh, laughter helps a great deal.

May 31st, 2018 03:54

New Chapter.
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, it seems that you have found the right person in your life, may it last for eternity.

May 30th, 2018 13:38

HangingbyaHalo said:

its crazy how in many aspects of life you chase the high. I love this.

May 30th, 2018 13:21


HI FRIEND ~ Love the disjointedness of your Poem ! I my experience (17 years) is just like that ! I\'m in LOVE again but ANGELA is in NEW ZEALAND FOR A YEAR so it\'s CYBER LOVE ~ which is bearable ~ but even more discontinuous ! Pleased check my Poems ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) PS ~ I shop in ALDI ~ great Staff ~ great Choice ~ great VALUE !

May 29th, 2018 05:47

Goldfinch60 said:

May your highs be joyous.

May 29th, 2018 03:46

Six Strings
Goldfinch60 said:

Playing any music is always a way to let go and reform you mind.

May 28th, 2018 00:34

Our Sin
orchidee said:

A fine, nearly birthday write, I see - best wishes!

May 26th, 2018 01:33

Our Sin
Goldfinch60 said:

It is no sin, love in all its forms sees no boundaries or rights or wrongs.
May your love for each other never stop.

May 25th, 2018 23:56

Our Sin
Yorelzinala said:


May 25th, 2018 22:34

Our Sin
LiterateLesbian said:

Thank you! As do i, I don\'t see it as a sin... I know others looking in might but love, like you say, should be celebrated :D

May 25th, 2018 16:08

Our Sin
HangingbyaHalo said:

I do not believe that it is a sin. Love like this should always be celebrated. Great Write.

May 25th, 2018 16:07

Your Presence
LiterateLesbian said:

thank you so much :D your comment is well appreciated :D

May 25th, 2018 15:57

There are Days
dusk arising said:

Enjoyed reading this with your positive message.

May 23rd, 2018 19:48