Comments received on poems by prettylittlepoet

Another Weekender Bender
Nicholas Browning said:

Well, the narrator seems to know why he\'s doing it, and if he prefers that to feeling okay and facing his issues head on then let him.
Best regards.

March 22nd, 2019 23:51

The Darkness
Goldfinch60 said:

The darkness may be around you but the light will soon be with you.

February 26th, 2019 01:55

The Darkness
dusk arising said:

It can be safe in the dark.

February 25th, 2019 19:40

A.H. Browning said:

Very moving and honest.

Thank you for your writing here.

Kindest Regards,
A.H. Browning

February 8th, 2019 23:08

Will I ever be enough?
dusk arising said:

And if you were ever enough, what would be your next \'I want?\'

January 31st, 2019 16:21

Evergreen said:

I felt this. Deeply.

January 25th, 2019 01:30

Missing You
psychofemale said:

i\'ve totally been there, hang in there.

January 9th, 2019 22:02

Missing You
Aislinn Wilson said:

Last line packs a punch. Great effort.

January 9th, 2019 10:42

What do you do?
Joanna Garrido said:

Nice wistful write. You move on and time will heal even though you won’t believe it

December 29th, 2018 09:40

What do you do?
Goldfinch60 said:

It is not easy but you will move on and the right person for you is out there waiting.

December 29th, 2018 01:15

What do you do?
Yorelzinala said:

You ask a question many ask everyday. There\'s only one thing to do. Is let go. The problem is not with you. The one you love just isn\'t enough for themselves, let alone for you. There is no point hanging on to someone that has checked out. I know it\'s easier said than done, but it\'s possible for you to be enough for someone else.

December 28th, 2018 22:39

elimil02 said:

wow you\'ve put it into words

December 12th, 2018 22:50

Out of love
Hidden said:

Never be afraid to step away.

December 9th, 2018 02:42

Hidden said:

Fighting a war with yourself can be real rough. However you control how bright the light is on your path. On it. Not in front to lead the way...nor behind to remind you where you\'ve been. On your feet so you don\'t trip. However, someone is guiding the way.

December 9th, 2018 02:39

Out of love
QuietWords said:


December 1st, 2018 11:25

Debsspot said:

Very eloquent way to put a brute in his place. So sad for you but glad that you are moving forward. His loss. Pleased also that you could share. Not too long ago this was hidden and so allowed to continue. Best wishes.

December 1st, 2018 00:12

Fay Slimm. said:

So sad this tragic happening when fathers abuse all those in the household - - many today have to cope with pasts where Dad is the culprit and their lives are in shreds. A meaningful write and thank you for sharing this heart-wrenching subject with the hard working intention to make a new future.

November 30th, 2018 10:52

lasergraph said:

A good write on an all too familiar event. I suspect a bright future just around the corner.

November 30th, 2018 10:16

I am me!
poetboy5454 said:

A great hopeful piece!

June 9th, 2018 01:30

I am me!
Hidden said:

Image, looks and appearance all shout a first impression. However, personality strikes a persona. Keep your head held high. Your appearance doesn\'t define your character.

June 8th, 2018 20:33

I want you
Hidden said:

Very calm yet direct. Very good peace

June 8th, 2018 20:28

I am me!
GON said:

Right on, we are our worst critics and I think the biggest mistake we make is comparing ourselves to ideals and assuming the gap between our current self and the ideal is too far to bridge. We just have to take things step by step. Great piece.

June 8th, 2018 14:47

I am me!
dusk arising said:

A most uplifting piece. Good reading for those who are down.
So many write about their low times on here, refreshing to see your piece.
Great writing.

June 8th, 2018 14:04

I am me!
Stan Rodriguez said:

nicely done

June 8th, 2018 13:59

I want you
dusk arising said:

Well it\'s nice of you to write about me this way. I had hoped we could keep our secret a little longer, but now its out in the open i suppose all the other poets will write about us.
How lucky is that?

Just smile and take it as a joke. I enjoyed reading your piece. Well written.

June 6th, 2018 18:23

I want you
Sooni A. Clock said:

I like this.

even though it is repetitive it feels like there is a lot of feeling it. and the repetition makes that aspect of it even more pronounced.

June 6th, 2018 15:36

Maura said:

a very powerful poem and structured with care. please keep writing more !!

June 6th, 2018 08:33

Goldfinch60 said:

May the three of you go forward into the world with love and joy. Good strong write.
Welcome to MPS.

June 6th, 2018 01:11

Hidden said:

Grow, forgive and forget who held you up.
You are power. You are strong. Theres no war for you...wherever you are.

June 5th, 2018 16:22


WELCOME PLP ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ very poignant and personal. I have always had a good relationship with my DAD and still do ~ so I can\'t empathise but I can sympathise. However many of my students (aged 17 to 30) have parental problems so I do understand ! This is a very well penned Poem with lots of Rhyme & Rhythm but with a sad content ! Verses 1 & 2 & 3 describe your Dads attitude to Your Mum ~ You and Your Sister and then he left and started a New Family and that really hurt ! I love the optimism in V 4.

\"We\'re happier now my family and me
As we continue on ~ just us three !\"

Every Blessing you will have great Joy in supporting each other ~ Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN MPS works by reading and commenting on each others poems. Please check my SITE ~ Thanks BRIAN !

June 5th, 2018 15:18