Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau



moonrise through the fog
Goldfinch60 said:

Emotive words Jon.

Andy

June 8th, 2022 00:22

one
Goldfinch60 said:

Good thought Jon.

Andy

June 3rd, 2022 00:49

we
Goldfinch60 said:

but
we
met
at
the
end
of
our
journey.

Andy

June 1st, 2022 00:51

never
Goldfinch60 said:

So true Jon.

Andy

May 28th, 2022 23:58

memories
Goldfinch60 said:

So true Jon.

Andy

May 26th, 2022 00:31

memories
jarcher54 said:

Hide and seek in my dreams... what a felicitous way of putting it. Sweet little lyric!

May 25th, 2022 22:30

today
Goldfinch60 said:

Great words Jon, I hope that frown is soon lifted away.

Andy

May 19th, 2022 00:57

that
Goldfinch60 said:

But that day will come.

Andy

May 17th, 2022 00:34

in the clear sky
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Jon.

Andy

May 14th, 2022 00:59

maybe
Goldfinch60 said:

True words Jon.

Andy

May 10th, 2022 01:00

what
Nicholas Browning said:

Having faith in prayer is a misconceived way of treating religion. One should not have faith in their prayers, but they should pray in active faith.

Isn\'t it better to give credence to the God or Gods you worship, than to have faith that your prayer means something out of all the others?

I\'m not sure either. Just a thought.

May 7th, 2022 03:53

on
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Jon.

Andy

May 3rd, 2022 01:07

in
Goldfinch60 said:

So true Jon.

Andy

April 26th, 2022 00:41

in
Nicholas Browning said:

Depends on what they\'re smoking, and how much. A good thought if you ask me. Had to look up what disjunctivism is.

April 25th, 2022 23:28

walking
Goldfinch60 said:

Emotive words Jon.

Andy

April 22nd, 2022 00:49

ghosts
Goldfinch60 said:

God words Jon, us \'oldies\' are full of dreams.

Andy

April 20th, 2022 00:58

that
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes Jon, those memories are still there.

Andy

April 16th, 2022 01:27

that
voices of ghosts said:

cool, yes there are days like that!


April 13th, 2022 18:16

i
Dahlia said:

Yep you got it 👌

April 11th, 2022 17:41

in
dean langmuir said:

yep

April 8th, 2022 18:30

in
Crowns4Christ said:

True, we spend way to much time worrying instead of just living

April 8th, 2022 18:19

Hey ? & The Mysterians
dusk arising said:

Too many teardrops for one heart to stop crying.

A big favourite of mine from way back when.

April 6th, 2022 15:19

when
Goldfinch60 said:

Love is so very strong.

Andy

April 5th, 2022 01:07

i
Goldfinch60 said:

So true Jon.

Andy

April 2nd, 2022 00:26

i
dean langmuir said:

Well said Jon,take care.

April 1st, 2022 16:50

projected violence
Goldfinch60 said:

Clever words Jon.

Andy

March 29th, 2022 01:09

projected violence
Christina8 said:

Very good and clever write!! Spot on!

March 28th, 2022 18:46

projected violence
Crowns4Christ said:

I can understand standing up for what you believe in,being it faith or family,but nothing is worth getting violent over

March 28th, 2022 18:24

projected violence
dusk arising said:

A clever fun write sir. Match point.

March 28th, 2022 17:48

Black Roses with Red Thorns
Dahlia said:

very nice & superb ending 👌
Dahlia Vitalia

March 25th, 2022 17:21

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