Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau
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Crowns4Christ said:
True, we spend way to much time worrying instead of just living
April 8th, 2022 18:19
Crowns4Christ said:
True, we spend way to much time worrying instead of just living
April 8th, 2022 18:19
Hey ? & The Mysterians
dusk arising said:
Too many teardrops for one heart to stop crying.
A big favourite of mine from way back when.
April 6th, 2022 15:19
dusk arising said:
Too many teardrops for one heart to stop crying.
A big favourite of mine from way back when.
April 6th, 2022 15:19
projected violence
Crowns4Christ said:
I can understand standing up for what you believe in,being it faith or family,but nothing is worth getting violent over
March 28th, 2022 18:24
Crowns4Christ said:
I can understand standing up for what you believe in,being it faith or family,but nothing is worth getting violent over
March 28th, 2022 18:24
Black Roses with Red Thorns
Dahlia said:
very nice & superb ending 👌
Dahlia Vitalia
March 25th, 2022 17:21
Dahlia said:
very nice & superb ending 👌
Dahlia Vitalia
March 25th, 2022 17:21
quicksilver clouds
Doggerel Dave said:
Got a surplus here - want some?
A vivid picture though, painted with few words, Jon -thanks.
March 23rd, 2022 19:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Got a surplus here - want some?
A vivid picture though, painted with few words, Jon -thanks.
March 23rd, 2022 19:59
quicksilver clouds
dean langmuir said:
when I read your comment the poem came to life,it must feel wonderful when it rains.amalgamate is now one of my fav words,good one jon,take care.
March 23rd, 2022 17:25
dean langmuir said:
when I read your comment the poem came to life,it must feel wonderful when it rains.amalgamate is now one of my fav words,good one jon,take care.
March 23rd, 2022 17:25
your
dean langmuir said:
Hello new friend,I enjoyed this,with your background I suppose there may be a few more.I myself am really enjoying how clever the fewer the words together can become.I think I just wrote another poem.I see you have written a few poems and I would appreciate your feedback.This sharing of my poetry is kinda new.About all I know is the limerick and sonnet,which I have written two,very challenging,I think they are shakespearian sonnets,that\'s what google has told me.Take care.
March 16th, 2022 16:23
dean langmuir said:
Hello new friend,I enjoyed this,with your background I suppose there may be a few more.I myself am really enjoying how clever the fewer the words together can become.I think I just wrote another poem.I see you have written a few poems and I would appreciate your feedback.This sharing of my poetry is kinda new.About all I know is the limerick and sonnet,which I have written two,very challenging,I think they are shakespearian sonnets,that\'s what google has told me.Take care.
March 16th, 2022 16:23
the king and the idiot
KRWonder said:
I was NOT expecting that ending. Wow, caught me off guard, but hey, lesson learned, right? This was a great story, thanks for sharing it.
March 10th, 2022 22:14
KRWonder said:
I was NOT expecting that ending. Wow, caught me off guard, but hey, lesson learned, right? This was a great story, thanks for sharing it.
March 10th, 2022 22:14
pep talk in the corner while the bell tolls
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Jon, I hope that referee comes soon.
Andy
March 8th, 2022 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Jon, I hope that referee comes soon.
Andy
March 8th, 2022 02:11
the breadbasket of the tsar
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words and tribute Jon.
Andy
February 15th, 2022 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words and tribute Jon.
Andy
February 15th, 2022 01:59
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