Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau
you
jarcher54 said:
It also reads \"sadness at any cost\" which stopped me in my tracks!
September 9th, 2022 01:21
jarcher54 said:
It also reads \"sadness at any cost\" which stopped me in my tracks!
September 9th, 2022 01:21
you
jarcher54 said:
Clever idea to catch the reader\'s attention.
One
word
at
a
time.
Makes each word it\'s own message.
Thanks Jon!
September 6th, 2022 22:16
jarcher54 said:
Clever idea to catch the reader\'s attention.
One
word
at
a
time.
Makes each word it\'s own message.
Thanks Jon!
September 6th, 2022 22:16
tears
dusk arising said:
Could easily be said \"Rise up\" for the same reasons.
Our hearts rule our heads when the storm rages.
June 14th, 2022 14:56
dusk arising said:
Could easily be said \"Rise up\" for the same reasons.
Our hearts rule our heads when the storm rages.
June 14th, 2022 14:56
memories
jarcher54 said:
Hide and seek in my dreams... what a felicitous way of putting it. Sweet little lyric!
May 25th, 2022 22:30
jarcher54 said:
Hide and seek in my dreams... what a felicitous way of putting it. Sweet little lyric!
May 25th, 2022 22:30
today
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Jon, I hope that frown is soon lifted away.
Andy
May 19th, 2022 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Jon, I hope that frown is soon lifted away.
Andy
May 19th, 2022 00:57
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