Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau
looking past it all
sorenbarrett said:
Thought provoking paradox in a poem. Well done
September 17th, 2025 20:04
sorenbarrett said:
Thought provoking paradox in a poem. Well done
September 17th, 2025 20:04
i miss our coffee dates
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful memories from our life Jon are so important.
Andy
September 7th, 2025 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful memories from our life Jon are so important.
Andy
September 7th, 2025 01:17
i miss our coffee dates
sorenbarrett said:
Memories are the glue as time passes. Such an interesting presentation of time. Nicely done
September 6th, 2025 19:00
sorenbarrett said:
Memories are the glue as time passes. Such an interesting presentation of time. Nicely done
September 6th, 2025 19:00
my imaginary sancho panza quotes #28
Poetic Licence said:
If all you do is follow you will never be a general to anyone or thing, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 17:24
Poetic Licence said:
If all you do is follow you will never be a general to anyone or thing, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 17:24
my imaginary sancho panza quotes #28
sorenbarrett said:
Well said and with great wisdom and truth
August 17th, 2025 17:01
sorenbarrett said:
Well said and with great wisdom and truth
August 17th, 2025 17:01
The Archangel Michael defeating Satan by Guido Reni
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that appears prophetic in nature and a warning. Nicely written
July 30th, 2025 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that appears prophetic in nature and a warning. Nicely written
July 30th, 2025 03:53
if
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a very clever write, why have the expensive items when you don\'t have the basics, enjoyed the read
July 28th, 2025 01:37
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a very clever write, why have the expensive items when you don\'t have the basics, enjoyed the read
July 28th, 2025 01:37
martha would talk to her pink flamingos in her backyard
Lorna said:
Loved this........
July 25th, 2025 06:12
Lorna said:
Loved this........
July 25th, 2025 06:12
martha would talk to her pink flamingos in her backyard
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Jon, time does go on.
Andy
July 25th, 2025 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Jon, time does go on.
Andy
July 25th, 2025 01:57
martha would talk to her pink flamingos in her backyard
Poetic Licence said:
As long goes on we fade and people move on and we end up with are memories, nicely expressed and written
July 25th, 2025 00:00
Poetic Licence said:
As long goes on we fade and people move on and we end up with are memories, nicely expressed and written
July 25th, 2025 00:00
martha would talk to her pink flamingos in her backyard
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting format and well done.
July 24th, 2025 17:11
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting format and well done.
July 24th, 2025 17:11
for sister kathrine
Poetic Licence said:
We get wiser as we get older and get to understand things we never realised in the past, enjoyed the read
July 12th, 2025 01:26
Poetic Licence said:
We get wiser as we get older and get to understand things we never realised in the past, enjoyed the read
July 12th, 2025 01:26
for sister kathrine
Goldfinch60 said:
That key will always be available Jon.
Andy
July 12th, 2025 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
That key will always be available Jon.
Andy
July 12th, 2025 01:22
for sister kathrine
sorenbarrett said:
Clever write the ending made perfect logical and mathematical sense tying it together. Well done
July 11th, 2025 20:29
sorenbarrett said:
Clever write the ending made perfect logical and mathematical sense tying it together. Well done
July 11th, 2025 20:29
for césar vallejo
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely and well written write, that in life is ever guaranteed, enjoyed the read
July 7th, 2025 00:09
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely and well written write, that in life is ever guaranteed, enjoyed the read
July 7th, 2025 00:09
for césar vallejo
sorenbarrett said:
So true that nothing is ever guaranteed. Well written
July 6th, 2025 20:32
sorenbarrett said:
So true that nothing is ever guaranteed. Well written
July 6th, 2025 20:32
sometimes
Poetic Licence said:
Thats is a very interesting observation, enjoyed the read
July 4th, 2025 00:43
Poetic Licence said:
Thats is a very interesting observation, enjoyed the read
July 4th, 2025 00:43
sometimes
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting form as well as a metaphor well written
July 3rd, 2025 18:54
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting form as well as a metaphor well written
July 3rd, 2025 18:54
twilight song before stillness
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of free association that falls back to love and one missed. Lovely
June 24th, 2025 18:39
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of free association that falls back to love and one missed. Lovely
June 24th, 2025 18:39
physician, heal thyself
Poetic Licence said:
A few words but stated so much, enjoyed the read
May 10th, 2025 02:24
Poetic Licence said:
A few words but stated so much, enjoyed the read
May 10th, 2025 02:24
physician, heal thyself
sorenbarrett said:
People in positions represent them and should be worthy to do so. So well said in so few words most poetic and a fave.
May 9th, 2025 15:36
sorenbarrett said:
People in positions represent them and should be worthy to do so. So well said in so few words most poetic and a fave.
May 9th, 2025 15:36
three individuals in sartres no exit #22
sorenbarrett said:
A streetcar named desire a classic play that I remember well. Thanks for the memories.
May 7th, 2025 20:05
sorenbarrett said:
A streetcar named desire a classic play that I remember well. Thanks for the memories.
May 7th, 2025 20:05
my imaginary twilight zone introductions #1
sorenbarrett said:
Love this poem well written and surreal it sets its mood.
May 5th, 2025 18:46
sorenbarrett said:
Love this poem well written and surreal it sets its mood.
May 5th, 2025 18:46
it is all going away
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and true entropy takes all. A great write in very few words
April 18th, 2025 14:42
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and true entropy takes all. A great write in very few words
April 18th, 2025 14:42
she told me she felt like a loaf of bread
Poetic Licence said:
I found this a sad and touching write, that is a horrible way to feel, nicely expressed and written
April 17th, 2025 01:29
Poetic Licence said:
I found this a sad and touching write, that is a horrible way to feel, nicely expressed and written
April 17th, 2025 01:29
she told me she felt like a loaf of bread
sorenbarrett said:
A sad waste without gratitude how human. A great metaphor. Very nicely done.
April 16th, 2025 16:54
sorenbarrett said:
A sad waste without gratitude how human. A great metaphor. Very nicely done.
April 16th, 2025 16:54
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