Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau



evening traffic on the highway
Goldfinch60 said:

Been there, done that, got the T-shirt.

February 13th, 2020 03:06

it was not your leaving
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderfully emotive write Jon.

Andy

February 10th, 2020 02:49

doubt
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true.

February 5th, 2020 02:06

doubt
Nicholas Browning said:

The truth if I\'ve ever heard it.

February 4th, 2020 22:07

clouds
Goldfinch60 said:

Memories are so special.

January 26th, 2020 01:23

this was the last time
Goldfinch60 said:

Most times that noose can be untied and all will be well.

January 25th, 2020 01:17

early in the morning
Goldfinch60 said:

Eternity is there for us all - see you there Jon.

January 12th, 2020 02:16

once there was (#3)
Nicholas Browning said:

And they can stay there! We\'ve got enough problems on our little orb as it is. Might be bad if they go absorbing the moon too, though. Hmmm. Quite the conundrum.

January 3rd, 2020 17:03

do you remember the night
Goldfinch60 said:

A memory that will never leave you.

December 30th, 2019 01:46

broken
Goldfinch60 said:

It may not be, as hell is in my garage where there are more than one broken vacuum cleaners

December 27th, 2019 02:56

love
myself and me said:

like you short writing, it says so much.

December 23rd, 2019 11:57

love
Goldfinch60 said:

So true.

December 23rd, 2019 02:01

numbness burns out
Goldfinch60 said:

May that buoyancy be forever with you.

December 22nd, 2019 02:57

Eurydice Brand Sneakers
Goldfinch60 said:

On my feet safe maybe but certainly not fast! LOL

December 19th, 2019 01:38

sometimes
Goldfinch60 said:

or
have
to
smile
for
found
love.

December 18th, 2019 02:00

what
Goldfinch60 said:

Need
to
be
reformed.

December 17th, 2019 02:17

the
Goldfinch60 said:

We need a great cycle repair shop to start mending those spokes.

December 16th, 2019 01:10

lies
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true.

December 14th, 2019 01:46

dont
Goldfinch60 said:

So
True
In
This
Day
And
Age.

December 13th, 2019 02:21

dont
myself and me said:

How could you hide from yourself. Simple but deep.

December 12th, 2019 19:04

dream - 12/11/19
Goldfinch60 said:

May that kiss free all the pain from your dreams.

December 12th, 2019 02:00

all of your time can be spent
Goldfinch60 said:

True words Jon - live for the moment.

December 11th, 2019 01:25

Wildean Quip #39
Goldfinch60 said:

It must have been that second bottle of wine.

December 10th, 2019 01:32

fast
Goldfinch60 said:

Falling
Slowly
Into
Wonder.

December 9th, 2019 01:55

my imaginary oracular statements from delphi #1
Goldfinch60 said:

It could direct the Spirits of those within into a place of light.

December 8th, 2019 02:39

justice
Goldfinch60 said:

If only.....

December 7th, 2019 01:35

done
Goldfinch60 said:

May that trip now be over and life is now innocent.

December 5th, 2019 02:53

done
A said:

Its so simple yet very real. I get it, and honestly I love your style.
its raw.

December 4th, 2019 23:16

looking out my kitchen window
Goldfinch60 said:

So sad Jon.

November 27th, 2019 01:31

my imaginary cicero quotes #6
Goldfinch60 said:

One day maybe - but not yet.

November 26th, 2019 01:00

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