Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau
dream - 12/11/19
Goldfinch60 said:
May that kiss free all the pain from your dreams.
December 12th, 2019 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
May that kiss free all the pain from your dreams.
December 12th, 2019 02:00
all of your time can be spent
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Jon - live for the moment.
December 11th, 2019 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Jon - live for the moment.
December 11th, 2019 01:25
Wildean Quip #39
Goldfinch60 said:
It must have been that second bottle of wine.
December 10th, 2019 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
It must have been that second bottle of wine.
December 10th, 2019 01:32
my imaginary oracular statements from delphi #1
Goldfinch60 said:
It could direct the Spirits of those within into a place of light.
December 8th, 2019 02:39
Goldfinch60 said:
It could direct the Spirits of those within into a place of light.
December 8th, 2019 02:39
done
A said:
Its so simple yet very real. I get it, and honestly I love your style.
its raw.
December 4th, 2019 23:16
A said:
Its so simple yet very real. I get it, and honestly I love your style.
its raw.
December 4th, 2019 23:16
my imaginary cicero quotes #6
Goldfinch60 said:
One day maybe - but not yet.
November 26th, 2019 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
One day maybe - but not yet.
November 26th, 2019 01:00
near the dark stream that flows through all hearts
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, I have so far avoided the hook for many years, it got close once but I managed to throw out the hook.
November 24th, 2019 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, I have so far avoided the hook for many years, it got close once but I managed to throw out the hook.
November 24th, 2019 01:56
near the dark stream that flows through all hearts
FredPeyer said:
Great metaphors and visual design!
November 23rd, 2019 22:56
FredPeyer said:
Great metaphors and visual design!
November 23rd, 2019 22:56
this year i have been a punching bag
FredPeyer said:
There are days when I would love to hear that bell!
Well said, Jon.
November 23rd, 2019 13:56
FredPeyer said:
There are days when I would love to hear that bell!
Well said, Jon.
November 23rd, 2019 13:56
this year i have been a punching bag
Goldfinch60 said:
The round is now over Jon as I have rung the bell.
November 23rd, 2019 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
The round is now over Jon as I have rung the bell.
November 23rd, 2019 01:12
hiding behind a mirror
Goldfinch60 said:
I take it that you won the contest with this incredible write.
November 21st, 2019 02:17
Goldfinch60 said:
I take it that you won the contest with this incredible write.
November 21st, 2019 02:17
happiness
Goldfinch60 said:
Happiness will be there waiting for you when you wake.
November 15th, 2019 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Happiness will be there waiting for you when you wake.
November 15th, 2019 01:52
never
Goldfinch60 said:
I have been working very hard at it for many years, it is nearly complete.
November 14th, 2019 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
I have been working very hard at it for many years, it is nearly complete.
November 14th, 2019 01:22
think
Goldfinch60 said:
Her box is so full of questions that may never be answered.
November 8th, 2019 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Her box is so full of questions that may never be answered.
November 8th, 2019 02:00
my legal ponderings #1
Goldfinch60 said:
So many questions of legality get asked and explained in words that can be misunderstood by many.
November 7th, 2019 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
So many questions of legality get asked and explained in words that can be misunderstood by many.
November 7th, 2019 01:26
[under amplified concern]
Aislinn Wilson said:
The last line really drives your whole poem home.
November 5th, 2019 22:23
Aislinn Wilson said:
The last line really drives your whole poem home.
November 5th, 2019 22:23
which leads me to question
Goldfinch60 said:
Trust is so important in our lives and once that trust is lost it i almost impossible to get back.
November 2nd, 2019 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Trust is so important in our lives and once that trust is lost it i almost impossible to get back.
November 2nd, 2019 02:07
now with virtual grilling
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write. Nobody should be hungry in our world.
October 23rd, 2019 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write. Nobody should be hungry in our world.
October 23rd, 2019 00:43
often
Goldfinch60 said:
Can be very true but that sorrow can be unlocked in time.
October 22nd, 2019 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Can be very true but that sorrow can be unlocked in time.
October 22nd, 2019 00:39
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FredPeyer said:
Jon, here in Hawaii I don\'t have to worry about being an early bird. We live on Hawaiian time....always 30 minutes late!!!
I enjoyed your poem.
October 10th, 2019 20:48
FredPeyer said:
Jon, here in Hawaii I don\'t have to worry about being an early bird. We live on Hawaiian time....always 30 minutes late!!!
I enjoyed your poem.
October 10th, 2019 20:48
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