Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau



which leads me to question
Goldfinch60 said:

Trust is so important in our lives and once that trust is lost it i almost impossible to get back.

November 2nd, 2019 02:07

fear
FredPeyer said:

a very apt description. kudos!

October 29th, 2019 18:05

fear
Goldfinch60 said:

that fear can be conquered.

October 29th, 2019 01:28

now with virtual grilling
Goldfinch60 said:

Such an emotive write. Nobody should be hungry in our world.

October 23rd, 2019 00:43

often
Goldfinch60 said:

Can be very true but that sorrow can be unlocked in time.

October 22nd, 2019 00:39

belief
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true.

October 12th, 2019 00:25

i
FredPeyer said:

Jon, here in Hawaii I don\'t have to worry about being an early bird. We live on Hawaiian time....always 30 minutes late!!!
I enjoyed your poem.

October 10th, 2019 20:48

a
Goldfinch60 said:

Oh yes.

October 10th, 2019 01:00

time
Goldfinch60 said:

....and passing quicker each day.

October 8th, 2019 23:39

tell
Goldfinch60 said:

OK I won\'t.

October 7th, 2019 00:12

love is the kindling
Goldfinch60 said:

So true.

October 4th, 2019 00:41

love is the kindling
FredPeyer said:

A great shortie, Jon. Love it!

October 3rd, 2019 18:10

dont
Goldfinch60 said:

So true.

October 2nd, 2019 01:35

you can see
Laura🌻 said:

Jon,

Listen to the voice!
As Andy said, “Yes
the light is there.”

~Laura~🌻

October 1st, 2019 17:14

you can see
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes the light is there.

October 1st, 2019 00:55

remember
Goldfinch60 said:

Like the butterfly flapping its wings.

September 26th, 2019 00:31

the wall around your heart
FredPeyer said:

Jon you say it well. Too often all we see in another person is that wall and not the beauty inside.

September 24th, 2019 12:18

the wall around your heart
Goldfinch60 said:

Those shattered dreams WERE there, but they will dull and finding the beauty of their heart will come.

September 23rd, 2019 00:07

navigating past the horizon
Goldfinch60 said:

Those memories are so fulfilling Jon.

When you get to the horizon never forget \"Here be Dragons!\"

September 16th, 2019 01:19

never
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Sound
Advice

September 15th, 2019 07:09

never
Goldfinch60 said:

So true.

September 15th, 2019 01:45

my
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Very true even if our own sun blows up it will be a full six minutes before we see it happen
Great write Jon

September 14th, 2019 03:02

my
Goldfinch60 said:

May
those
wishes
still
come
true
in
our
wonderful
lives.

September 14th, 2019 00:25

Un Chien Andalou
Neville said:

surreal and much enjoyed......
........ like the great man himself
that dog was a lobster with a telephone in its hand.......Kinda maybe...

:)


September 12th, 2019 01:23

Un Chien Andalou
Goldfinch60 said:

There is so much out there that people look at but never see.

September 12th, 2019 01:14

Un Chien Andalou
SerenWise said:

Interesting poem about an interesting film!

September 11th, 2019 21:41

embers falling on frost
Goldfinch60 said:

But that embrace will be remembered for eternity.

September 9th, 2019 01:05

crickets
Goldfinch60 said:

Those memories always bring back the good times.

September 2nd, 2019 01:37

sometimes a mask
Goldfinch60 said:

We all wear masks in our different ways in life\'s journey, may your mask be full of happiness.

August 31st, 2019 00:26

bumper tap at the supermarket
Goldfinch60 said:

Kindness into words - wonderful.

August 30th, 2019 01:11

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