Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau
physician, heal thyself
Poetic Licence said:
A few words but stated so much, enjoyed the read
May 10th, 2025 02:24
Poetic Licence said:
A few words but stated so much, enjoyed the read
May 10th, 2025 02:24
physician, heal thyself
sorenbarrett said:
People in positions represent them and should be worthy to do so. So well said in so few words most poetic and a fave.
May 9th, 2025 15:36
sorenbarrett said:
People in positions represent them and should be worthy to do so. So well said in so few words most poetic and a fave.
May 9th, 2025 15:36
three individuals in sartres no exit #22
sorenbarrett said:
A streetcar named desire a classic play that I remember well. Thanks for the memories.
May 7th, 2025 20:05
sorenbarrett said:
A streetcar named desire a classic play that I remember well. Thanks for the memories.
May 7th, 2025 20:05
my imaginary twilight zone introductions #1
sorenbarrett said:
Love this poem well written and surreal it sets its mood.
May 5th, 2025 18:46
sorenbarrett said:
Love this poem well written and surreal it sets its mood.
May 5th, 2025 18:46
it is all going away
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and true entropy takes all. A great write in very few words
April 18th, 2025 14:42
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and true entropy takes all. A great write in very few words
April 18th, 2025 14:42
she told me she felt like a loaf of bread
Poetic Licence said:
I found this a sad and touching write, that is a horrible way to feel, nicely expressed and written
April 17th, 2025 01:29
Poetic Licence said:
I found this a sad and touching write, that is a horrible way to feel, nicely expressed and written
April 17th, 2025 01:29
she told me she felt like a loaf of bread
sorenbarrett said:
A sad waste without gratitude how human. A great metaphor. Very nicely done.
April 16th, 2025 16:54
sorenbarrett said:
A sad waste without gratitude how human. A great metaphor. Very nicely done.
April 16th, 2025 16:54
she told me she felt like a loaf of bread
Cheeky Missy said:
I\'ll bet she verily did. There\'s nothing quite like acquaintances who seem promising, yet fade into the shadows when you\'re not looking, until, if you like to give each your very best, only to be left behind, you begin to realize all that\'s left is...waiting for the conclusive effects of mold as grey manifests itself subtly and reality laughs hollowly. Prettily rendered with excellent imagery and an instructively haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 16th, 2025 15:50
Cheeky Missy said:
I\'ll bet she verily did. There\'s nothing quite like acquaintances who seem promising, yet fade into the shadows when you\'re not looking, until, if you like to give each your very best, only to be left behind, you begin to realize all that\'s left is...waiting for the conclusive effects of mold as grey manifests itself subtly and reality laughs hollowly. Prettily rendered with excellent imagery and an instructively haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 16th, 2025 15:50
for sylvia plath
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and enjoyable write, with some wonderful lines
April 15th, 2025 01:31
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and enjoyable write, with some wonderful lines
April 15th, 2025 01:31
for sylvia plath
sorenbarrett said:
Some fascinating lines in this poem very nice
April 14th, 2025 20:17
sorenbarrett said:
Some fascinating lines in this poem very nice
April 14th, 2025 20:17
for sylvia plath
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating. Guess she\'s a favorite of the modern artists, and this pretty number to the cause is gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 14th, 2025 19:46
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating. Guess she\'s a favorite of the modern artists, and this pretty number to the cause is gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 14th, 2025 19:46
as she was walking out the door
sorenbarrett said:
Well formed this poem was clever in shape to come to the final point in a single finishing word. Lovely
April 8th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
Well formed this poem was clever in shape to come to the final point in a single finishing word. Lovely
April 8th, 2025 04:08
this
Poetic Licence said:
Short and sweet as they say but true, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2025 03:25
Poetic Licence said:
Short and sweet as they say but true, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2025 03:25
this
sorenbarrett said:
Short and to the point. Very nice it seems you have it your way.
March 3rd, 2025 18:30
sorenbarrett said:
Short and to the point. Very nice it seems you have it your way.
March 3rd, 2025 18:30
sadly
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a shame that happiness was not in his life John.
Andy
January 23rd, 2025 02:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a shame that happiness was not in his life John.
Andy
January 23rd, 2025 02:47
alway
Poetic Licence said:
Aren`t we all and is there a place, enjoyed the read
December 14th, 2024 01:15
Poetic Licence said:
Aren`t we all and is there a place, enjoyed the read
December 14th, 2024 01:15
yesterday
Goldfinch60 said:
Today is the tomorrow that you worried about yesterday.
Andy
October 22nd, 2024 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Today is the tomorrow that you worried about yesterday.
Andy
October 22nd, 2024 01:33
yesterday
Cheeky Missy said:
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October 20th, 2024 06:55
Cheeky Missy said:
[https://youtu.be/wXTJBr9tt8Q?si=8YJOr64D18vSF8xo] Since your very title culled this, hopefully you enjoy it likewise. Beautifully rendered in tantalizing brevity. Thank you for sharing.
October 20th, 2024 06:55
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