Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau
my imaginary lao tzu quotes #2
sorenbarrett said:
I love this one and all its implications it rings true. Well done
May 4th, 2026 21:32
sorenbarrett said:
I love this one and all its implications it rings true. Well done
May 4th, 2026 21:32
Summer Afternoons (dedicated to Ernesto Galazar)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful dedication Jon.
Andy
April 23rd, 2026 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful dedication Jon.
Andy
April 23rd, 2026 01:25
Summer Afternoons (dedicated to Ernesto Galazar)
sorenbarrett said:
Sweeping stars into dreams a lovely line. Well done
April 22nd, 2026 19:11
sorenbarrett said:
Sweeping stars into dreams a lovely line. Well done
April 22nd, 2026 19:11
april is the cruelest month
sorenbarrett said:
Most beautiful images that seem dreamlike and visionary. Lovely a fave
April 3rd, 2026 13:57
sorenbarrett said:
Most beautiful images that seem dreamlike and visionary. Lovely a fave
April 3rd, 2026 13:57
Vl. The Circumference of Nullity
sorenbarrett said:
As this poem develops it grows grim and the last few lines speak of beheadings from Marie to the flowers a dark feel to this write. Well done
March 18th, 2026 20:21
sorenbarrett said:
As this poem develops it grows grim and the last few lines speak of beheadings from Marie to the flowers a dark feel to this write. Well done
March 18th, 2026 20:21
box of sea shells
Goldfinch60 said:
I too have a box of sea shells in my garage Jon, and they too bring back fine memories.
Andy
February 6th, 2026 02:47
Goldfinch60 said:
I too have a box of sea shells in my garage Jon, and they too bring back fine memories.
Andy
February 6th, 2026 02:47
box of sea shells
sorenbarrett said:
We tend to keep what ever we are not used to and a trip to the beach provides many opportunities. Nicely written
February 5th, 2026 19:41
sorenbarrett said:
We tend to keep what ever we are not used to and a trip to the beach provides many opportunities. Nicely written
February 5th, 2026 19:41
a hammer comes to the land of nails
Goldfinch60 said:
So many blows are needed to fix our world Jon.
Andy
January 27th, 2026 02:30
Goldfinch60 said:
So many blows are needed to fix our world Jon.
Andy
January 27th, 2026 02:30
a hammer comes to the land of nails
sorenbarrett said:
Force levels the masses and holds the structure in place. It often requires several blows. Well done
January 26th, 2026 19:29
sorenbarrett said:
Force levels the masses and holds the structure in place. It often requires several blows. Well done
January 26th, 2026 19:29
my imaginary kafka quotes #27
sorenbarrett said:
So short but says so much in a most poetic manner. I loved it a fave
December 20th, 2025 03:39
sorenbarrett said:
So short but says so much in a most poetic manner. I loved it a fave
December 20th, 2025 03:39
my imaginary kafka quotes #28
sorenbarrett said:
That is the foundation of capitalism and a free market society. Well written and a fave
December 18th, 2025 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
That is the foundation of capitalism and a free market society. Well written and a fave
December 18th, 2025 03:48
about this time every year
Kevin Hulme said:
It\'s like the Poem by Frost: \'The Road less Taken.\'
I\'m full of \'What Ifs\'. Enjoyed your Poam.
December 15th, 2025 21:15
Kevin Hulme said:
It\'s like the Poem by Frost: \'The Road less Taken.\'
I\'m full of \'What Ifs\'. Enjoyed your Poam.
December 15th, 2025 21:15
about this time every year
sorenbarrett said:
So true it is and how one small thing leads to another and another like a domino that falls. Well written
December 15th, 2025 19:30
sorenbarrett said:
So true it is and how one small thing leads to another and another like a domino that falls. Well written
December 15th, 2025 19:30
a beckettian interpretation of the great pumpkin
sorenbarrett said:
Now that one has me thinking. I wonder if there is a light at the center. a fun read
December 10th, 2025 17:31
sorenbarrett said:
Now that one has me thinking. I wonder if there is a light at the center. a fun read
December 10th, 2025 17:31
my imaginary slavoj žižek quotes #2
sorenbarrett said:
A great write that affirms that greed overrides common sense. A lovely write
December 7th, 2025 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
A great write that affirms that greed overrides common sense. A lovely write
December 7th, 2025 03:44
my imaginary slavoj žižek quotes #2
Demar Desu said:
You forgot the nose wipe
December 6th, 2025 21:34
Demar Desu said:
You forgot the nose wipe
December 6th, 2025 21:34
the marie antoinette bakery
sorenbarrett said:
Whether intended as the form of a coffee cup with steam coming off in asterisks or a cup with a straw it was a great image and as for being open until the flood Noah would agree or just maybe a different type of flood. Loved it was a great short
December 5th, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
Whether intended as the form of a coffee cup with steam coming off in asterisks or a cup with a straw it was a great image and as for being open until the flood Noah would agree or just maybe a different type of flood. Loved it was a great short
December 5th, 2025 04:13
time machine grill
Goldfinch60 said:
Good friends and food sounds good to me Jon.
Andy
November 20th, 2025 03:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Good friends and food sounds good to me Jon.
Andy
November 20th, 2025 03:07
time machine grill
David Welch said:
Who doesn\'t like a good cook-out? Though I admit, upon seeing the title, I thought of the Hot-Tub Time Machine movie!
November 19th, 2025 21:31
David Welch said:
Who doesn\'t like a good cook-out? Though I admit, upon seeing the title, I thought of the Hot-Tub Time Machine movie!
November 19th, 2025 21:31
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