Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau



sometimes good friends can have a conversation in silence
Goldfinch60 said:

Memories bring so much into our lives Jon.

Andy

September 24th, 2025 01:50

sometimes good friends can have a conversation in silence
sorenbarrett said:

Memories bind us all. A lovely write.

September 23rd, 2025 19:23

an imbrication of fallen leaves
Goldfinch60 said:

My favourite time of the year as well Jon, where Nature\'s palette brings such colour to us.

Andy

September 21st, 2025 01:17

an imbrication of fallen leaves
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful image cast in this poem of fall and its beauty.

September 20th, 2025 20:21

looking past it all
Goldfinch60 said:

Thoughtful words Jon.

Andy

September 18th, 2025 01:51

looking past it all
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:

This written piece captures that sharp moment of belated recognition, the pain of missed timing, and a soft, lingering regret.
Nice work

September 17th, 2025 20:34

looking past it all
Fred1794 said:

Really love the circular overthinking feeling here. Great!

September 17th, 2025 20:33

looking past it all
sorenbarrett said:

Thought provoking paradox in a poem. Well done

September 17th, 2025 20:04

i miss our coffee dates
Goldfinch60 said:

Such wonderful memories from our life Jon are so important.

Andy

September 7th, 2025 01:17

i miss our coffee dates
sorenbarrett said:

Memories are the glue as time passes. Such an interesting presentation of time. Nicely done

September 6th, 2025 19:00

my imaginary sancho panza quotes #28
Poetic Licence said:

If all you do is follow you will never be a general to anyone or thing, enjoyed the read

August 17th, 2025 17:24

my imaginary sancho panza quotes #28
sorenbarrett said:

Well said and with great wisdom and truth

August 17th, 2025 17:01

The Archangel Michael defeating Satan by Guido Reni
sorenbarrett said:

A poem that appears prophetic in nature and a warning. Nicely written

July 30th, 2025 03:53

if
sorenbarrett said:

This is a gem! A fave

July 28th, 2025 04:28

if
Poetic Licence said:

That\'s a very clever write, why have the expensive items when you don\'t have the basics, enjoyed the read

July 28th, 2025 01:37

martha would talk to her pink flamingos in her backyard
Lorna said:

Loved this........

July 25th, 2025 06:12

martha would talk to her pink flamingos in her backyard
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words Jon, time does go on.

Andy

July 25th, 2025 01:57

martha would talk to her pink flamingos in her backyard
Poetic Licence said:

As long goes on we fade and people move on and we end up with are memories, nicely expressed and written

July 25th, 2025 00:00

martha would talk to her pink flamingos in her backyard
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting format and well done.

July 24th, 2025 17:11

for sister kathrine
Poetic Licence said:

We get wiser as we get older and get to understand things we never realised in the past, enjoyed the read

July 12th, 2025 01:26

for sister kathrine
Goldfinch60 said:

That key will always be available Jon.

Andy

July 12th, 2025 01:22

for sister kathrine
sorenbarrett said:

Clever write the ending made perfect logical and mathematical sense tying it together. Well done

July 11th, 2025 20:29

for césar vallejo
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely and well written write, that in life is ever guaranteed, enjoyed the read

July 7th, 2025 00:09

for césar vallejo
sorenbarrett said:

So true that nothing is ever guaranteed. Well written

July 6th, 2025 20:32

sometimes
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true Jon.

Andy

July 4th, 2025 01:26

sometimes
Poetic Licence said:

Thats is a very interesting observation, enjoyed the read

July 4th, 2025 00:43

sometimes
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting form as well as a metaphor well written

July 3rd, 2025 18:54

twilight song before stillness
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of free association that falls back to love and one missed. Lovely

June 24th, 2025 18:39

physician, heal thyself
Poetic Licence said:

A few words but stated so much, enjoyed the read

May 10th, 2025 02:24

physician, heal thyself
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Jon and very true.

Andy

May 10th, 2025 01:21

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