Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau
my imaginary slavoj žižek quotes #2
sorenbarrett said:
A great write that affirms that greed overrides common sense. A lovely write
December 7th, 2025 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
A great write that affirms that greed overrides common sense. A lovely write
December 7th, 2025 03:44
my imaginary slavoj žižek quotes #2
Demar Desu said:
You forgot the nose wipe
December 6th, 2025 21:34
Demar Desu said:
You forgot the nose wipe
December 6th, 2025 21:34
the marie antoinette bakery
sorenbarrett said:
Whether intended as the form of a coffee cup with steam coming off in asterisks or a cup with a straw it was a great image and as for being open until the flood Noah would agree or just maybe a different type of flood. Loved it was a great short
December 5th, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
Whether intended as the form of a coffee cup with steam coming off in asterisks or a cup with a straw it was a great image and as for being open until the flood Noah would agree or just maybe a different type of flood. Loved it was a great short
December 5th, 2025 04:13
time machine grill
Goldfinch60 said:
Good friends and food sounds good to me Jon.
Andy
November 20th, 2025 03:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Good friends and food sounds good to me Jon.
Andy
November 20th, 2025 03:07
time machine grill
David Welch said:
Who doesn\'t like a good cook-out? Though I admit, upon seeing the title, I thought of the Hot-Tub Time Machine movie!
November 19th, 2025 21:31
David Welch said:
Who doesn\'t like a good cook-out? Though I admit, upon seeing the title, I thought of the Hot-Tub Time Machine movie!
November 19th, 2025 21:31
time machine grill
sorenbarrett said:
There is nothing like friends to get one through tough times. A lovely write
November 19th, 2025 19:49
sorenbarrett said:
There is nothing like friends to get one through tough times. A lovely write
November 19th, 2025 19:49
my imaginary slavoj žižek quotes #1
sorenbarrett said:
More truth than fiction in a literal sense and metaphorically a wonderful work.
November 12th, 2025 19:59
sorenbarrett said:
More truth than fiction in a literal sense and metaphorically a wonderful work.
November 12th, 2025 19:59
hulks solution to the trolley problem
sorenbarrett said:
Short, powerful, direct, to the point.
November 6th, 2025 20:43
sorenbarrett said:
Short, powerful, direct, to the point.
November 6th, 2025 20:43
that time gary pulled my feet while i was treading water
sorenbarrett said:
Memory snippets from the past put on page as poetic expressions that last in print. Most interesting style
October 30th, 2025 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
Memory snippets from the past put on page as poetic expressions that last in print. Most interesting style
October 30th, 2025 03:45
sometimes good friends can have a conversation in silence
Goldfinch60 said:
Memories bring so much into our lives Jon.
Andy
September 24th, 2025 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Memories bring so much into our lives Jon.
Andy
September 24th, 2025 01:50
sometimes good friends can have a conversation in silence
sorenbarrett said:
Memories bind us all. A lovely write.
September 23rd, 2025 19:23
sorenbarrett said:
Memories bind us all. A lovely write.
September 23rd, 2025 19:23
an imbrication of fallen leaves
Goldfinch60 said:
My favourite time of the year as well Jon, where Nature\'s palette brings such colour to us.
Andy
September 21st, 2025 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
My favourite time of the year as well Jon, where Nature\'s palette brings such colour to us.
Andy
September 21st, 2025 01:17
an imbrication of fallen leaves
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful image cast in this poem of fall and its beauty.
September 20th, 2025 20:21
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful image cast in this poem of fall and its beauty.
September 20th, 2025 20:21
looking past it all
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This written piece captures that sharp moment of belated recognition, the pain of missed timing, and a soft, lingering regret.
Nice work
September 17th, 2025 20:34
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This written piece captures that sharp moment of belated recognition, the pain of missed timing, and a soft, lingering regret.
Nice work
September 17th, 2025 20:34
looking past it all
Fred1794 said:
Really love the circular overthinking feeling here. Great!
September 17th, 2025 20:33
Fred1794 said:
Really love the circular overthinking feeling here. Great!
September 17th, 2025 20:33
looking past it all
sorenbarrett said:
Thought provoking paradox in a poem. Well done
September 17th, 2025 20:04
sorenbarrett said:
Thought provoking paradox in a poem. Well done
September 17th, 2025 20:04
i miss our coffee dates
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful memories from our life Jon are so important.
Andy
September 7th, 2025 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful memories from our life Jon are so important.
Andy
September 7th, 2025 01:17
i miss our coffee dates
sorenbarrett said:
Memories are the glue as time passes. Such an interesting presentation of time. Nicely done
September 6th, 2025 19:00
sorenbarrett said:
Memories are the glue as time passes. Such an interesting presentation of time. Nicely done
September 6th, 2025 19:00
my imaginary sancho panza quotes #28
Poetic Licence said:
If all you do is follow you will never be a general to anyone or thing, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 17:24
Poetic Licence said:
If all you do is follow you will never be a general to anyone or thing, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 17:24
my imaginary sancho panza quotes #28
sorenbarrett said:
Well said and with great wisdom and truth
August 17th, 2025 17:01
sorenbarrett said:
Well said and with great wisdom and truth
August 17th, 2025 17:01
The Archangel Michael defeating Satan by Guido Reni
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that appears prophetic in nature and a warning. Nicely written
July 30th, 2025 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that appears prophetic in nature and a warning. Nicely written
July 30th, 2025 03:53
if
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a very clever write, why have the expensive items when you don\'t have the basics, enjoyed the read
July 28th, 2025 01:37
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a very clever write, why have the expensive items when you don\'t have the basics, enjoyed the read
July 28th, 2025 01:37
martha would talk to her pink flamingos in her backyard
Lorna said:
Loved this........
July 25th, 2025 06:12
Lorna said:
Loved this........
July 25th, 2025 06:12
martha would talk to her pink flamingos in her backyard
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Jon, time does go on.
Andy
July 25th, 2025 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Jon, time does go on.
Andy
July 25th, 2025 01:57
martha would talk to her pink flamingos in her backyard
Poetic Licence said:
As long goes on we fade and people move on and we end up with are memories, nicely expressed and written
July 25th, 2025 00:00
Poetic Licence said:
As long goes on we fade and people move on and we end up with are memories, nicely expressed and written
July 25th, 2025 00:00
martha would talk to her pink flamingos in her backyard
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting format and well done.
July 24th, 2025 17:11
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting format and well done.
July 24th, 2025 17:11
for sister kathrine
Poetic Licence said:
We get wiser as we get older and get to understand things we never realised in the past, enjoyed the read
July 12th, 2025 01:26
Poetic Licence said:
We get wiser as we get older and get to understand things we never realised in the past, enjoyed the read
July 12th, 2025 01:26
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