Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau
The Archangel Michael defeating Satan by Guido Reni
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that appears prophetic in nature and a warning. Nicely written
July 30th, 2025 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that appears prophetic in nature and a warning. Nicely written
July 30th, 2025 03:53
if
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a very clever write, why have the expensive items when you don\'t have the basics, enjoyed the read
July 28th, 2025 01:37
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a very clever write, why have the expensive items when you don\'t have the basics, enjoyed the read
July 28th, 2025 01:37
martha would talk to her pink flamingos in her backyard
Lorna said:
Loved this........
July 25th, 2025 06:12
Lorna said:
Loved this........
July 25th, 2025 06:12
martha would talk to her pink flamingos in her backyard
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Jon, time does go on.
Andy
July 25th, 2025 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Jon, time does go on.
Andy
July 25th, 2025 01:57
martha would talk to her pink flamingos in her backyard
Poetic Licence said:
As long goes on we fade and people move on and we end up with are memories, nicely expressed and written
July 25th, 2025 00:00
Poetic Licence said:
As long goes on we fade and people move on and we end up with are memories, nicely expressed and written
July 25th, 2025 00:00
martha would talk to her pink flamingos in her backyard
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting format and well done.
July 24th, 2025 17:11
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting format and well done.
July 24th, 2025 17:11
for sister kathrine
Poetic Licence said:
We get wiser as we get older and get to understand things we never realised in the past, enjoyed the read
July 12th, 2025 01:26
Poetic Licence said:
We get wiser as we get older and get to understand things we never realised in the past, enjoyed the read
July 12th, 2025 01:26
for sister kathrine
Goldfinch60 said:
That key will always be available Jon.
Andy
July 12th, 2025 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
That key will always be available Jon.
Andy
July 12th, 2025 01:22
for sister kathrine
sorenbarrett said:
Clever write the ending made perfect logical and mathematical sense tying it together. Well done
July 11th, 2025 20:29
sorenbarrett said:
Clever write the ending made perfect logical and mathematical sense tying it together. Well done
July 11th, 2025 20:29
for césar vallejo
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely and well written write, that in life is ever guaranteed, enjoyed the read
July 7th, 2025 00:09
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely and well written write, that in life is ever guaranteed, enjoyed the read
July 7th, 2025 00:09
for césar vallejo
sorenbarrett said:
So true that nothing is ever guaranteed. Well written
July 6th, 2025 20:32
sorenbarrett said:
So true that nothing is ever guaranteed. Well written
July 6th, 2025 20:32
sometimes
Poetic Licence said:
Thats is a very interesting observation, enjoyed the read
July 4th, 2025 00:43
Poetic Licence said:
Thats is a very interesting observation, enjoyed the read
July 4th, 2025 00:43
sometimes
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting form as well as a metaphor well written
July 3rd, 2025 18:54
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting form as well as a metaphor well written
July 3rd, 2025 18:54
twilight song before stillness
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of free association that falls back to love and one missed. Lovely
June 24th, 2025 18:39
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of free association that falls back to love and one missed. Lovely
June 24th, 2025 18:39
physician, heal thyself
Poetic Licence said:
A few words but stated so much, enjoyed the read
May 10th, 2025 02:24
Poetic Licence said:
A few words but stated so much, enjoyed the read
May 10th, 2025 02:24
physician, heal thyself
sorenbarrett said:
People in positions represent them and should be worthy to do so. So well said in so few words most poetic and a fave.
May 9th, 2025 15:36
sorenbarrett said:
People in positions represent them and should be worthy to do so. So well said in so few words most poetic and a fave.
May 9th, 2025 15:36
three individuals in sartres no exit #22
sorenbarrett said:
A streetcar named desire a classic play that I remember well. Thanks for the memories.
May 7th, 2025 20:05
sorenbarrett said:
A streetcar named desire a classic play that I remember well. Thanks for the memories.
May 7th, 2025 20:05
my imaginary twilight zone introductions #1
sorenbarrett said:
Love this poem well written and surreal it sets its mood.
May 5th, 2025 18:46
sorenbarrett said:
Love this poem well written and surreal it sets its mood.
May 5th, 2025 18:46
it is all going away
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and true entropy takes all. A great write in very few words
April 18th, 2025 14:42
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and true entropy takes all. A great write in very few words
April 18th, 2025 14:42
she told me she felt like a loaf of bread
Poetic Licence said:
I found this a sad and touching write, that is a horrible way to feel, nicely expressed and written
April 17th, 2025 01:29
Poetic Licence said:
I found this a sad and touching write, that is a horrible way to feel, nicely expressed and written
April 17th, 2025 01:29
she told me she felt like a loaf of bread
sorenbarrett said:
A sad waste without gratitude how human. A great metaphor. Very nicely done.
April 16th, 2025 16:54
sorenbarrett said:
A sad waste without gratitude how human. A great metaphor. Very nicely done.
April 16th, 2025 16:54
she told me she felt like a loaf of bread
Cheeky Missy said:
I\'ll bet she verily did. There\'s nothing quite like acquaintances who seem promising, yet fade into the shadows when you\'re not looking, until, if you like to give each your very best, only to be left behind, you begin to realize all that\'s left is...waiting for the conclusive effects of mold as grey manifests itself subtly and reality laughs hollowly. Prettily rendered with excellent imagery and an instructively haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 16th, 2025 15:50
Cheeky Missy said:
I\'ll bet she verily did. There\'s nothing quite like acquaintances who seem promising, yet fade into the shadows when you\'re not looking, until, if you like to give each your very best, only to be left behind, you begin to realize all that\'s left is...waiting for the conclusive effects of mold as grey manifests itself subtly and reality laughs hollowly. Prettily rendered with excellent imagery and an instructively haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 16th, 2025 15:50
for sylvia plath
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and enjoyable write, with some wonderful lines
April 15th, 2025 01:31
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting and enjoyable write, with some wonderful lines
April 15th, 2025 01:31
for sylvia plath
sorenbarrett said:
Some fascinating lines in this poem very nice
April 14th, 2025 20:17
sorenbarrett said:
Some fascinating lines in this poem very nice
April 14th, 2025 20:17
for sylvia plath
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating. Guess she\'s a favorite of the modern artists, and this pretty number to the cause is gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 14th, 2025 19:46
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating. Guess she\'s a favorite of the modern artists, and this pretty number to the cause is gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 14th, 2025 19:46
as she was walking out the door
sorenbarrett said:
Well formed this poem was clever in shape to come to the final point in a single finishing word. Lovely
April 8th, 2025 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
Well formed this poem was clever in shape to come to the final point in a single finishing word. Lovely
April 8th, 2025 04:08
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