Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau
it
Goldfinch60 said:
And
then
that
other
brought
us
back
into
knowledge
of
it.
Andy
April 29th, 2023 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
And
then
that
other
brought
us
back
into
knowledge
of
it.
Andy
April 29th, 2023 00:33
those
jarcher54 said:
Your economy to make such an expansive statement is so effective here. You made the haiku form seem wasteful by comparison! A lovely dripping of words.
April 7th, 2023 18:18
jarcher54 said:
Your economy to make such an expansive statement is so effective here. You made the haiku form seem wasteful by comparison! A lovely dripping of words.
April 7th, 2023 18:18
needless
jarcher54 said:
This little puzzle poem is driving me crazy! In a good way of course!
February 12th, 2023 02:07
jarcher54 said:
This little puzzle poem is driving me crazy! In a good way of course!
February 12th, 2023 02:07
do you remember that summer
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Jon .
Andy
https://youtu.be/PSddD6w5SKc
January 11th, 2023 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Jon .
Andy
https://youtu.be/PSddD6w5SKc
January 11th, 2023 01:40
you
jarcher54 said:
It also reads \"sadness at any cost\" which stopped me in my tracks!
September 9th, 2022 01:21
jarcher54 said:
It also reads \"sadness at any cost\" which stopped me in my tracks!
September 9th, 2022 01:21
you
jarcher54 said:
Clever idea to catch the reader\'s attention.
One
word
at
a
time.
Makes each word it\'s own message.
Thanks Jon!
September 6th, 2022 22:16
jarcher54 said:
Clever idea to catch the reader\'s attention.
One
word
at
a
time.
Makes each word it\'s own message.
Thanks Jon!
September 6th, 2022 22:16
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