Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau



[vampire pool parties are fun]
Goldfinch60 said:

Don\'t put any garlic in the sauce to go with the lobsters.🤣

Andy

April 29th, 2021 01:05

sometimes
Goldfinch60 said:

Good to see you back Jon with such a good poem.

Andy

April 27th, 2021 00:17

sometimes
Jon Nakapalau said:

Hello everyone!

April 26th, 2021 16:03

can
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Woah wow clever and witty!! How a lil thing can offset and upset big plans eh. A fab poem indeed. Kudos.

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too. Thanks

July 7th, 2020 05:49

can
Saxon Crow said:

Nicely written Jon. :)

March 14th, 2020 02:54

can
Goldfinch60 said:

Clever write Jon.

March 14th, 2020 02:02

war
Saxon Crow said:

Well said Jon.

March 13th, 2020 04:35

when
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true.

March 8th, 2020 02:32

spring soil is always a canvas
Goldfinch60 said:

May that masterpiece bring colour and delight to us all.

Andy

March 7th, 2020 01:58

as of late
Saxon Crow said:

I like this one JN, especially the last two lines.

March 5th, 2020 04:47

imaginary cowboy quotes #34
Goldfinch60 said:

I see those tumbleweeds in a shopping centre in our town that is gradually dieting.

Andy

March 4th, 2020 02:18

dream - 3/2/20
Goldfinch60 said:

That blank page can have so many messages put onto it.

March 3rd, 2020 01:58

in that still incantatory moment
Goddess of the Mist said:

Nice!

February 29th, 2020 15:50

that love which you leave behind
Goldfinch60 said:

That love can be so hurtful but always remembered.

Andy

February 28th, 2020 02:30

that love which you leave behind
Saxon Crow said:

Very cool poem my friend

February 28th, 2020 01:06

that love which you leave behind
myself and me said:

\"is that your heart can echo beat
for something that is dead\"
that is why the heart ache so much. Well penned.

February 27th, 2020 23:12

that love which you leave behind
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Wowww such an awesomely creative poem on the effect of the ex and jilted love, this is truly highly remarkable, the ending lines were the jewel in the crown if brilliance, this must be of your masterpieces!!

Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest poem here too.

February 27th, 2020 23:10

evening traffic on the highway
Goldfinch60 said:

Been there, done that, got the T-shirt.

February 13th, 2020 03:06

it was not your leaving
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderfully emotive write Jon.

Andy

February 10th, 2020 02:49

doubt
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true.

February 5th, 2020 02:06

doubt
Nicholas Browning said:

The truth if I\'ve ever heard it.

February 4th, 2020 22:07

clouds
Goldfinch60 said:

Memories are so special.

January 26th, 2020 01:23

this was the last time
Goldfinch60 said:

Most times that noose can be untied and all will be well.

January 25th, 2020 01:17

early in the morning
Goldfinch60 said:

Eternity is there for us all - see you there Jon.

January 12th, 2020 02:16

once there was (#3)
Nicholas Browning said:

And they can stay there! We\'ve got enough problems on our little orb as it is. Might be bad if they go absorbing the moon too, though. Hmmm. Quite the conundrum.

January 3rd, 2020 17:03

do you remember the night
Goldfinch60 said:

A memory that will never leave you.

December 30th, 2019 01:46

broken
Goldfinch60 said:

It may not be, as hell is in my garage where there are more than one broken vacuum cleaners

December 27th, 2019 02:56

love
myself and me said:

like you short writing, it says so much.

December 23rd, 2019 11:57

love
Goldfinch60 said:

So true.

December 23rd, 2019 02:01

numbness burns out
Goldfinch60 said:

May that buoyancy be forever with you.

December 22nd, 2019 02:57

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