Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau



my imaginary oracular statements from delphi #32
Goldfinch60 said:

Intriguing words and thoughts Jon.

Andy

June 8th, 2021 23:57

In your eyes
Saxon Crow said:

Beautifully written Jon. I love this

June 3rd, 2021 02:33

random lines [II]
Goldfinch60 said:

Good ones Jon, especially the song on the radio.

Andy

June 3rd, 2021 00:36

In your eyes
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive words Jon.

Andy

June 2nd, 2021 01:00

random lines [I]
jarcher54 said:

Randomly interesting... your sketchbook is intriguing, your phrases are curious enough to be unsettling in a wonderful way. Very evocative. Glad I dropped in on it.

May 31st, 2021 02:20

random lines [I]
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful thoughts put into words Jon.

Andy

May 30th, 2021 00:44

land of vended broken heart
Goldfinch60 said:

In these Strange Times so many small (and large) are losing out and it such a shame.

Andy

May 29th, 2021 02:07

land of vended broken heart
jarcher54 said:

What a portrait! Your little vignette is poignant in its simplicity and specificity. We can hear the crinkle of the bags of chips and jerky, see the sad smile... we love Charlie and we don\'t even know him!

May 29th, 2021 01:58

in the shadow of a shadow
Goldfinch60 said:

That light is within us all and can lead us to the wonder in our lives.

Andy

May 28th, 2021 00:35

it must have been in summers past
Goldfinch60 said:

Looking for perfection will fail, but if you accept hat you have in life all will be well.

Andy

May 27th, 2021 00:44

it must have been in summers past
rosiedm said:

Nice thoughts about the past
Waiting for time but then hunger ate it lol

May 26th, 2021 17:18

how i have looked for that single point
Goldfinch60 said:

We all have such points in our life but if we count them there will be more points of happiness than sadness.

Andy

May 26th, 2021 01:09

To Aiden Leos
Goldfinch60 said:

So very sad that a six year old should lose his life in this way.

Andy

May 25th, 2021 00:57

at
Jon Nakapalau said:

Well said Andy.

May 24th, 2021 16:37

at
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true, you know when to duck.

Andy

May 23rd, 2021 01:01

blue dragonfly
Goldfinch60 said:

They are such beautiful things to see.

Andy

May 18th, 2021 00:17

blue dragonfly
dusk arising said:

Thank you for reminding me of this wonderful spectacle seen beneath bright sunlight. A great natural reward for anyones eye.

May 17th, 2021 17:05

the ghost of a blue rose haunts pierrot this winter evening
rosiedm said:

Is there more please seems unfinished..fall awake into that place 🤔😚

May 6th, 2021 12:52

the ghost of a blue rose haunts pierrot this winter evening
Goldfinch60 said:

Good emotive words Jon.

Andy

May 5th, 2021 23:58

[vampire pool parties are fun]
Jon Nakapalau said:

Now you have made me hungry Andy!

May 5th, 2021 15:57

[vampire pool parties are fun]
Goldfinch60 said:

Don\'t put any garlic in the sauce to go with the lobsters.🤣

Andy

April 29th, 2021 01:05

sometimes
Goldfinch60 said:

Good to see you back Jon with such a good poem.

Andy

April 27th, 2021 00:17

sometimes
Jon Nakapalau said:

Hello everyone!

April 26th, 2021 16:03

can
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Woah wow clever and witty!! How a lil thing can offset and upset big plans eh. A fab poem indeed. Kudos.

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too. Thanks

July 7th, 2020 05:49

can
Saxon Crow said:

Nicely written Jon. :)

March 14th, 2020 02:54

can
Goldfinch60 said:

Clever write Jon.

March 14th, 2020 02:02

war
Saxon Crow said:

Well said Jon.

March 13th, 2020 04:35

when
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true.

March 8th, 2020 02:32

spring soil is always a canvas
Goldfinch60 said:

May that masterpiece bring colour and delight to us all.

Andy

March 7th, 2020 01:58

as of late
Saxon Crow said:

I like this one JN, especially the last two lines.

March 5th, 2020 04:47

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