Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau
rephrased in conclusive direction
Goldfinch60 said:
Today is the tomorrow that you worried about yesterday.
Andy
June 23rd, 2021 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Today is the tomorrow that you worried about yesterday.
Andy
June 23rd, 2021 00:57
100 books you must not read before you die #35
Goldfinch60 said:
Like Dave i ended up in a darkened room after reading about GB.
Andy
June 17th, 2021 23:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Like Dave i ended up in a darkened room after reading about GB.
Andy
June 17th, 2021 23:33
100 books you must not read before you die #35
Doggerel Dave said:
I do not as a general rule take statements of which I have no prior knowledge on face value, but attempt to investigate (in this case, named George Berkeley). This I endeavored to do. Search lasted approx 10 minutes, after which I was forced to lie down with a cold compress over my eyes. Headache eventually reduced to tolerable level.
Thanks for the recommendation - I should\'a taken more notice.
June 17th, 2021 19:36
Doggerel Dave said:
I do not as a general rule take statements of which I have no prior knowledge on face value, but attempt to investigate (in this case, named George Berkeley). This I endeavored to do. Search lasted approx 10 minutes, after which I was forced to lie down with a cold compress over my eyes. Headache eventually reduced to tolerable level.
Thanks for the recommendation - I should\'a taken more notice.
June 17th, 2021 19:36
how often salvation is a strange starkened decoration
Goldfinch60 said:
But hope is forever in our lives.
Andy
June 17th, 2021 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
But hope is forever in our lives.
Andy
June 17th, 2021 00:49
eyelashes shut like venus flytraps
Doggerel Dave said:
Although the experimental form did not make for clear understanding by this literal pedestrian mind, it didn\'t appear sad to me.....
June 15th, 2021 20:20
Doggerel Dave said:
Although the experimental form did not make for clear understanding by this literal pedestrian mind, it didn\'t appear sad to me.....
June 15th, 2021 20:20
the gods serve only humble pie
Goldfinch60 said:
That plum is one of the fruits I eat most days.
Andy
June 10th, 2021 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
That plum is one of the fruits I eat most days.
Andy
June 10th, 2021 00:15
the gods serve only humble pie
Trenz Pruca said:
Thank you. I never really trusted Jack.
June 9th, 2021 17:16
Trenz Pruca said:
Thank you. I never really trusted Jack.
June 9th, 2021 17:16
my imaginary oracular statements from delphi #32
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words and thoughts Jon.
Andy
June 8th, 2021 23:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Intriguing words and thoughts Jon.
Andy
June 8th, 2021 23:57
random lines [II]
Goldfinch60 said:
Good ones Jon, especially the song on the radio.
Andy
June 3rd, 2021 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Good ones Jon, especially the song on the radio.
Andy
June 3rd, 2021 00:36
random lines [I]
jarcher54 said:
Randomly interesting... your sketchbook is intriguing, your phrases are curious enough to be unsettling in a wonderful way. Very evocative. Glad I dropped in on it.
May 31st, 2021 02:20
jarcher54 said:
Randomly interesting... your sketchbook is intriguing, your phrases are curious enough to be unsettling in a wonderful way. Very evocative. Glad I dropped in on it.
May 31st, 2021 02:20
land of vended broken heart
Goldfinch60 said:
In these Strange Times so many small (and large) are losing out and it such a shame.
Andy
May 29th, 2021 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
In these Strange Times so many small (and large) are losing out and it such a shame.
Andy
May 29th, 2021 02:07
land of vended broken heart
jarcher54 said:
What a portrait! Your little vignette is poignant in its simplicity and specificity. We can hear the crinkle of the bags of chips and jerky, see the sad smile... we love Charlie and we don\'t even know him!
May 29th, 2021 01:58
jarcher54 said:
What a portrait! Your little vignette is poignant in its simplicity and specificity. We can hear the crinkle of the bags of chips and jerky, see the sad smile... we love Charlie and we don\'t even know him!
May 29th, 2021 01:58
in the shadow of a shadow
Goldfinch60 said:
That light is within us all and can lead us to the wonder in our lives.
Andy
May 28th, 2021 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
That light is within us all and can lead us to the wonder in our lives.
Andy
May 28th, 2021 00:35
it must have been in summers past
Goldfinch60 said:
Looking for perfection will fail, but if you accept hat you have in life all will be well.
Andy
May 27th, 2021 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Looking for perfection will fail, but if you accept hat you have in life all will be well.
Andy
May 27th, 2021 00:44
it must have been in summers past
rosiedm said:
Nice thoughts about the past
Waiting for time but then hunger ate it lol
May 26th, 2021 17:18
rosiedm said:
Nice thoughts about the past
Waiting for time but then hunger ate it lol
May 26th, 2021 17:18
how i have looked for that single point
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have such points in our life but if we count them there will be more points of happiness than sadness.
Andy
May 26th, 2021 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have such points in our life but if we count them there will be more points of happiness than sadness.
Andy
May 26th, 2021 01:09
To Aiden Leos
Goldfinch60 said:
So very sad that a six year old should lose his life in this way.
Andy
May 25th, 2021 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
So very sad that a six year old should lose his life in this way.
Andy
May 25th, 2021 00:57
blue dragonfly
dusk arising said:
Thank you for reminding me of this wonderful spectacle seen beneath bright sunlight. A great natural reward for anyones eye.
May 17th, 2021 17:05
dusk arising said:
Thank you for reminding me of this wonderful spectacle seen beneath bright sunlight. A great natural reward for anyones eye.
May 17th, 2021 17:05
the ghost of a blue rose haunts pierrot this winter evening
rosiedm said:
Is there more please seems unfinished..fall awake into that place 🤔😚
May 6th, 2021 12:52
rosiedm said:
Is there more please seems unfinished..fall awake into that place 🤔😚
May 6th, 2021 12:52
the ghost of a blue rose haunts pierrot this winter evening
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive words Jon.
Andy
May 5th, 2021 23:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive words Jon.
Andy
May 5th, 2021 23:58
[vampire pool parties are fun]
Jon Nakapalau said:
Now you have made me hungry Andy!
May 5th, 2021 15:57
Jon Nakapalau said:
Now you have made me hungry Andy!
May 5th, 2021 15:57
[vampire pool parties are fun]
Goldfinch60 said:
Don\'t put any garlic in the sauce to go with the lobsters.🤣
Andy
April 29th, 2021 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Don\'t put any garlic in the sauce to go with the lobsters.🤣
Andy
April 29th, 2021 01:05
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