Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau



that
Goldfinch60 said:

But that day will come.

Andy

May 17th, 2022 00:34

in the clear sky
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Jon.

Andy

May 14th, 2022 00:59

maybe
Goldfinch60 said:

True words Jon.

Andy

May 10th, 2022 01:00

what
Nicholas Browning said:

Having faith in prayer is a misconceived way of treating religion. One should not have faith in their prayers, but they should pray in active faith.

Isn\'t it better to give credence to the God or Gods you worship, than to have faith that your prayer means something out of all the others?

I\'m not sure either. Just a thought.

May 7th, 2022 03:53

on
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Jon.

Andy

May 3rd, 2022 01:07

in
Goldfinch60 said:

So true Jon.

Andy

April 26th, 2022 00:41

in
Nicholas Browning said:

Depends on what they\'re smoking, and how much. A good thought if you ask me. Had to look up what disjunctivism is.

April 25th, 2022 23:28

walking
Goldfinch60 said:

Emotive words Jon.

Andy

April 22nd, 2022 00:49

ghosts
Goldfinch60 said:

God words Jon, us \'oldies\' are full of dreams.

Andy

April 20th, 2022 00:58

that
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes Jon, those memories are still there.

Andy

April 16th, 2022 01:27

that
voices of ghosts said:

cool, yes there are days like that!


April 13th, 2022 18:16

i
Dahlia said:

Yep you got it 👌

April 11th, 2022 17:41

in
dean langmuir said:

yep

April 8th, 2022 18:30

in
Crowns4Christ said:

True, we spend way to much time worrying instead of just living

April 8th, 2022 18:19

Hey ? & The Mysterians
dusk arising said:

Too many teardrops for one heart to stop crying.

A big favourite of mine from way back when.

April 6th, 2022 15:19

when
Goldfinch60 said:

Love is so very strong.

Andy

April 5th, 2022 01:07

i
Goldfinch60 said:

So true Jon.

Andy

April 2nd, 2022 00:26

i
dean langmuir said:

Well said Jon,take care.

April 1st, 2022 16:50

projected violence
Goldfinch60 said:

Clever words Jon.

Andy

March 29th, 2022 01:09

projected violence
Christina8 said:

Very good and clever write!! Spot on!

March 28th, 2022 18:46

projected violence
Crowns4Christ said:

I can understand standing up for what you believe in,being it faith or family,but nothing is worth getting violent over

March 28th, 2022 18:24

projected violence
dusk arising said:

A clever fun write sir. Match point.

March 28th, 2022 17:48

Black Roses with Red Thorns
Dahlia said:

very nice & superb ending 👌
Dahlia Vitalia

March 25th, 2022 17:21

quicksilver clouds
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Jon.

Andy

March 24th, 2022 01:50

quicksilver clouds
Doggerel Dave said:

Got a surplus here - want some?

A vivid picture though, painted with few words, Jon -thanks.


March 23rd, 2022 19:59

quicksilver clouds
dean langmuir said:

when I read your comment the poem came to life,it must feel wonderful when it rains.amalgamate is now one of my fav words,good one jon,take care.

March 23rd, 2022 17:25

your
Jon Nakapalau said:

Thank you Andy.

March 23rd, 2022 16:18

your
Goldfinch60 said:

It can but then again it can bear the truth.

Andy

March 17th, 2022 01:36

your
dean langmuir said:

Hello new friend,I enjoyed this,with your background I suppose there may be a few more.I myself am really enjoying how clever the fewer the words together can become.I think I just wrote another poem.I see you have written a few poems and I would appreciate your feedback.This sharing of my poetry is kinda new.About all I know is the limerick and sonnet,which I have written two,very challenging,I think they are shakespearian sonnets,that\'s what google has told me.Take care.

March 16th, 2022 16:23

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dean langmuir said:

I agree,thanks for writing

March 14th, 2022 17:28

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