Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau
you
jarcher54 said:
Clever idea to catch the reader\'s attention.
One
word
at
a
time.
Makes each word it\'s own message.
Thanks Jon!
September 6th, 2022 22:16
jarcher54 said:
Clever idea to catch the reader\'s attention.
One
word
at
a
time.
Makes each word it\'s own message.
Thanks Jon!
September 6th, 2022 22:16
tears
dusk arising said:
Could easily be said \"Rise up\" for the same reasons.
Our hearts rule our heads when the storm rages.
June 14th, 2022 14:56
dusk arising said:
Could easily be said \"Rise up\" for the same reasons.
Our hearts rule our heads when the storm rages.
June 14th, 2022 14:56
memories
jarcher54 said:
Hide and seek in my dreams... what a felicitous way of putting it. Sweet little lyric!
May 25th, 2022 22:30
jarcher54 said:
Hide and seek in my dreams... what a felicitous way of putting it. Sweet little lyric!
May 25th, 2022 22:30
today
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Jon, I hope that frown is soon lifted away.
Andy
May 19th, 2022 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Jon, I hope that frown is soon lifted away.
Andy
May 19th, 2022 00:57
what
Nicholas Browning said:
Having faith in prayer is a misconceived way of treating religion. One should not have faith in their prayers, but they should pray in active faith.
Isn\'t it better to give credence to the God or Gods you worship, than to have faith that your prayer means something out of all the others?
I\'m not sure either. Just a thought.
May 7th, 2022 03:53
Nicholas Browning said:
Having faith in prayer is a misconceived way of treating religion. One should not have faith in their prayers, but they should pray in active faith.
Isn\'t it better to give credence to the God or Gods you worship, than to have faith that your prayer means something out of all the others?
I\'m not sure either. Just a thought.
May 7th, 2022 03:53
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