Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau
projected violence
Crowns4Christ said:
I can understand standing up for what you believe in,being it faith or family,but nothing is worth getting violent over
March 28th, 2022 18:24
Crowns4Christ said:
I can understand standing up for what you believe in,being it faith or family,but nothing is worth getting violent over
March 28th, 2022 18:24
Black Roses with Red Thorns
Dahlia said:
very nice & superb ending 👌
Dahlia Vitalia
March 25th, 2022 17:21
Dahlia said:
very nice & superb ending 👌
Dahlia Vitalia
March 25th, 2022 17:21
quicksilver clouds
Doggerel Dave said:
Got a surplus here - want some?
A vivid picture though, painted with few words, Jon -thanks.
March 23rd, 2022 19:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Got a surplus here - want some?
A vivid picture though, painted with few words, Jon -thanks.
March 23rd, 2022 19:59
quicksilver clouds
dean langmuir said:
when I read your comment the poem came to life,it must feel wonderful when it rains.amalgamate is now one of my fav words,good one jon,take care.
March 23rd, 2022 17:25
dean langmuir said:
when I read your comment the poem came to life,it must feel wonderful when it rains.amalgamate is now one of my fav words,good one jon,take care.
March 23rd, 2022 17:25
your
dean langmuir said:
Hello new friend,I enjoyed this,with your background I suppose there may be a few more.I myself am really enjoying how clever the fewer the words together can become.I think I just wrote another poem.I see you have written a few poems and I would appreciate your feedback.This sharing of my poetry is kinda new.About all I know is the limerick and sonnet,which I have written two,very challenging,I think they are shakespearian sonnets,that\'s what google has told me.Take care.
March 16th, 2022 16:23
dean langmuir said:
Hello new friend,I enjoyed this,with your background I suppose there may be a few more.I myself am really enjoying how clever the fewer the words together can become.I think I just wrote another poem.I see you have written a few poems and I would appreciate your feedback.This sharing of my poetry is kinda new.About all I know is the limerick and sonnet,which I have written two,very challenging,I think they are shakespearian sonnets,that\'s what google has told me.Take care.
March 16th, 2022 16:23
the king and the idiot
KRWonder said:
I was NOT expecting that ending. Wow, caught me off guard, but hey, lesson learned, right? This was a great story, thanks for sharing it.
March 10th, 2022 22:14
KRWonder said:
I was NOT expecting that ending. Wow, caught me off guard, but hey, lesson learned, right? This was a great story, thanks for sharing it.
March 10th, 2022 22:14
pep talk in the corner while the bell tolls
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Jon, I hope that referee comes soon.
Andy
March 8th, 2022 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Jon, I hope that referee comes soon.
Andy
March 8th, 2022 02:11
the breadbasket of the tsar
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words and tribute Jon.
Andy
February 15th, 2022 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words and tribute Jon.
Andy
February 15th, 2022 01:59
goodbye meat loaf
Goldfinch60 said:
RIP Meat Loaf, his bat will now be flying forever.
Andy
January 22nd, 2022 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
RIP Meat Loaf, his bat will now be flying forever.
Andy
January 22nd, 2022 01:54
goodbye meat loaf
jarcher54 said:
Meat Loaf was always true to himself, did not let fame mess him up or chase after hits at the cost of his soul. He sort of knew his strengths and his limits. And bore down on those strengths. He\'d be happy to know you were paying attention!
January 22nd, 2022 01:09
jarcher54 said:
Meat Loaf was always true to himself, did not let fame mess him up or chase after hits at the cost of his soul. He sort of knew his strengths and his limits. And bore down on those strengths. He\'d be happy to know you were paying attention!
January 22nd, 2022 01:09
goodbye meat loaf
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
He crossed into the paradise by the dashboard light. RIP Meat Loaf✨💫 Nice tribute!🌟
January 21st, 2022 23:11
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
He crossed into the paradise by the dashboard light. RIP Meat Loaf✨💫 Nice tribute!🌟
January 21st, 2022 23:11
my imaginary napoléon quotes #2
Goldfinch60 said:
That\'s just a waste of good wine Jon.
Andy
January 8th, 2022 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
That\'s just a waste of good wine Jon.
Andy
January 8th, 2022 01:54
the king and the idiot
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tale Jon, all people are important in life.
Andy
December 30th, 2021 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tale Jon, all people are important in life.
Andy
December 30th, 2021 01:47
The Calmness of Summer Past
Goldfinch60 said:
May your eyes be opened and that love returns.
Andy
December 16th, 2021 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
May your eyes be opened and that love returns.
Andy
December 16th, 2021 02:18
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